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    Twin Storms

    Grappa & Jellisha
    Grappa & Jellisha

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    Lineage : Ancient Sealer
    Position : None
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 326
    Cosmic Coins : 200
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Serilda Sinclair
    Experience : 19,341

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Twin Storms
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Completed Twin Storms

    Post by Grappa & Jellisha 31st March 2019, 11:22 am

    Primary Magic: Twin Storms
    Secondary Magic: ---
    Magic Type: Caster

    Description: It is said that in some cultures that a pair of twins was once, before their birth, a single person. This being, during its time in the womb, was split apart into two for a multitude of reasons. Some say that it split itself in two so it would never be alone. Others believed that its power was so great that one single body would be incapable of containing such magic and split itself into equal parts. Regardless of the reason, each pair of twins is born as the exact replicas of the original. With only a few differences to set each apart from one another

    Because of their race, both twins not only have the ability to use their kind's magic, Aera, but have also the ability to use Wind type magic from their birth.[/list]

    Lineage: Ancient Sealer

    Unique Abilities:

    • Joy Ride: Grappa and/or Jellisha grab hold of their target, normally a person but it can be an object as well, and then use their combined Aera magic to hoist it into the air. This grants the target the ability of flight and gliding as long as they are attached to them. This ability lasts for as long as the spell duration of their rank, before they get tired. While this is active, the twins can still cast spells as normal as only one is required to carry something.

      At the maximum of three posts, their grip breaks and they are forced to drop whatever they are carrying at that moment. They must wait two posts before they can attempt to pick up anything else at all. This requires OOC permission to be used on a player or played-based NPC.


    Spells:

    D-Rank Spells:


    Last edited by Grappa & Jellisha on 4th April 2019, 8:33 pm; edited 1 time in total
    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

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    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

    Completed Re: Twin Storms

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 4th April 2019, 3:32 am

    Hey there, Nessa here. Sorry about the wait. I'll be grading this for you, al of my edits will be made in this colour! Once you've made the changes, bump the thread and I'll take a look.

    Edit:: First of all; I have some overarching comments.

    - Strengths, Weakness & Cooldowns are all no longer required in magic. Please remove these.
    -  All of your spells are missing their 'Speed' from their template. Please be sure to include this.
    - Furthermore you have 4x Normal D Rank spells here and No Advanced. At D Rank you get 3x Normal D Rank spells, and 1x D+ Spells, therefore one of these need to be changed to D+.



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    Grappa & Jellisha
    Grappa & Jellisha

    Moderator- Main Account- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Join A Faction!- Player 
    Lineage : Ancient Sealer
    Position : None
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 326
    Cosmic Coins : 200
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Serilda Sinclair
    Experience : 19,341

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Twin Storms
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Completed Re: Twin Storms

    Post by Grappa & Jellisha 4th April 2019, 8:35 pm

    Nessa Cordelia Lux wrote:

    Changes have been made!
    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Custom Slayer- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- EXP Grinder- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Hired Help- Idolize- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Over Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- 2nd Place Event/Contest Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- Have Seijin On Your Friends List- Have Onida On Your Friend's List- Have an Admin as a friend!- Have aeluri On Your Friend's List- Best GFX Artist Award- Player 
    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

    Completed Re: Twin Storms

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 5th April 2019, 2:53 am

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