Miyuki.

Name: Miyuki Timoshii.
Gender: Male 
Age: 18
Birthday: 08/05
Sexuality: straight
Special Characteristics: Scar on top of head.

Personality: Miyuki's personality is very shy, He blushes often when he sees someone approaching him.However,He is also very happy at times. He LOVES ice and everything to do with it,including snow.He is very serious as well not always but in certain situations such as battle. Miyuki can be very passionate about lots of things such as his beliefs and his heritage.Miyuki is a very odd person though he is kindly socially awkward and he always is thinking about magic and what guild he is going to join. Miyuki likes to do things by himself just for getting the satisfaction of doing it himself. That being said he likes to do his missions by himself which makes him stronger than most wizards,due to the fact that most missions are made for multiple people. However,he has to put more time into training than most so in other words he is sometimes tense. He uses his magic a lot of the times in his free time just to make interesting ice figures. He does this just for his own entertainment. However,he sometimes does it at others peoples request.Miyuki Is very positive about peoples dreams and beliefs being that he is passionate about his own. He loves to share his ideas with his friends and the people that he runs into. He loves the magic he uses and loves to see the magic that other people in guilds have. He doesn't know what guild to join,he’s sort of a wanderer,because theres so many guilds he doesn’t want to hurt one guilds feelings for being in a different one. However,he still waits on a guild request that seems perfect for him.His dream is to become one of the greatest ice wizards to have ever been alive.He knows this dream is a little unreasonable but he’s still very passionate about it. Miyuki’s battle style is intriguing as well He like to be the first to fight in the lines. He enjoys training therefore he’s very aggressive when he fights. He uses his icemake magic to make various weapons and sometimes animals to use to fight with. His ice magic is special because he can move the ice objects he makes. Just like Leon. Miyuki is always ready to battle and excited to go on an adventure. However,since he’s so energetic in battle he sometimes gets himself hurt. But he’s never been injured seriously except for a single scar he got on his head.He is very strong when it comes to aggressiveness but not so strong when it comes to defense he’s made for the front lines not the back lines. He can wipe out hoards of enemies but he lacks bulk. He’s very swift on his feet and very agile he uses this to his advantage in battle and also his ability to maneuver is great as well.When he is under somebody else’s command he is lacking because as said before he is better in the lead than in the back.When he is in command he likes to use the other mages to defend his back and help him fight while he does the agressive work. This in summary is Miyuki the ice wielder. And the passionate. Energetic. Boy.
Likes:Miyuki likes ice cream because it tastes good. He also loves positive people because they light up his world. He also likes guildmasters because they teach him lots.
Dislikes: snooty people because they darken the world. Evil people because they're bad. Also,fire users because he doesn't get along with them.
Motivations: The seasons He loves the seasons,they motivate him because it issues change. It's boring to always be the same. The world.Because the world is beautiful it inspires him to do beautiful things with his magic. Positive people.They light up his world. They motivate him to be positive and help people.
Fears: Fire users.because they can beat him.Loud people,they scare him. Popular people because there not as unique.

General Appearance


Height: Miyuki is about 5'11
Weight: 150 pounds
Hair: Miyuki's hair is medium length and silver
Eyes: A light blue.
Skin Tone: Miyuki's skin tone is pale.
Appearance: Miyuki is a medium build he wears a tattered cloak.He has a scar on his head. He wears a neklace with a fairy tail guild symbol under his torn cloak.He wears a cloak because it's one of his favorite pieces of clothing.

Guild/Council

Guild: Blue pegasus.
Tattoo: On back.Very light blue.
Rank: Rank D

Greetings. I'll be your grader.

First of all, you don't necessarily have to put everything in between parentheses. Not very important, but it might make your app look a bit better.

Also, the description of his personality needs to be a tad longer before it can be accepted. Mostly because of regulations. You don't need to add a lot. I would suggest that you add a quick description of how well he does when he is in charge of a group of mages during a fight and how he deals with being put under someone else's command.

An optional improvement is that under motivations you explain how those things motivate him so others have an easier time understanding them.

So far as the description of his physical appearance goes you'll need to be a bit more detailed. Usually people attach a picture of their character under Appearance and add some explanations regarding that appearance (for example somebody wears armguards a lot because they're used to blocking attacks without using magic or weapons, or a person can usually be found wearing red because it's their favourite colour).

Other than that it looks fine except that you'll have to put in what colour his guild tattoo is.