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    Lilin the Succubus

    Lucifer the Fallen
    Lucifer the Fallen

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Warrior's Heart
    Position : None
    Posts : 26
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Mentor : None
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Requip-Morning Star
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Lilin the Succubus Empty Lilin the Succubus

    Post by Lucifer the Fallen 14th September 2014, 11:40 am

    Name:Lilin
    Rank: Weak
    Species: Succubus
    Type:Exceed
    Description:
    Spoiler:
    She normally takes the form of a 15-16 year old girl. She has a lusty nature but never initiates anything, and is normally teasish. VERY obidient (as strange as that sounds) and basically obeys Lucifer's any and every command. Aside from her lusty nature she is very playful, and doesn't act what age she appears, she acts more like a 9 year old. She is childish, but clever as well. She can exploit other's feelings to her advantage which gets her out of trouble or other prediciments. As the previously stated "obedient" nature entails she is highly loyal to Lucifer like a dog is to its master, treating him like a father figure and doing whatever it takes for him to be proud of her. Lilin also takes high notice to her appearence, and is somewhat narcissistic. But instead of saying "I love myself and I wanna get married with a mirror" she takes it to a low level of noticing "how hot she is" or "how better she looks than the next person."
    Abilities: Can speak english

    Name: Charmkiss
    Rank: D
    Description:User kisses an opponent out if battle, nothing extra-terrestrial it's just a kiss. As she kisses opponent the spell takes effect, and passes a type of "neurotranssmision" through th opponents brain, putting him under an enslavement spell.
    Strengths:Person that has the enchantment on them becomes an ally and will obey Lucifer for 2 turns (duration)
    Strength 1- Opponent does whatever Lucifer says to do, regardless of how rediculous
    Strength2- Opponent can fight for lucifer against oppinents, protecting him
    Strength 3- Afterward, opponent loses all will to fight Lucifer (by this I mean he wont try to fight me unless I provoke him, otherwise "water under the bridge") (at thread at hand of course)
    Weaknesses: Must be done before a battle starts
    Can only be done on straight men or gay women
    Can only be used on pets, NPCs or other people that aren't actual players
    Must be in contact for ability to work so easily avoided by staying away from Lilin
    Cannot be done in battle (although ability can extend into battle)
    Cooldown of 5 posts


    Last edited by Lucifer the Fallen on 23rd September 2014, 1:27 pm; edited 4 times in total


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    Lilin the Succubus Archangel-lucifer

    XP so far- 37.5
    Jobs completed-
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    Felicity
    Felicity

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    Lineage : Evil Angel
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    Posts : 2984
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 25
    Experience : 75987.5

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Toxic Scourge
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    Lilin the Succubus Empty Re: Lilin the Succubus

    Post by Felicity 16th September 2014, 9:25 am

    Lucifer the Fallen wrote:Name:Lilin
    Rank: Weak
    Species: Succubus
    Type:Exceed
    Description:Lilin the Succubus 385752 She normally takes the form of a 15-16 year old girl. She has a lusty nature but basically obeys Lucifer. Aside from her lusty nature she is playful and childish. Please insert the image in a spoiler if possible and expand her personality to a paragraph in the least (Preferably a 100 words minimum)
    Abilities: Can speak english

    Name: Charmkiss
    Rank: D
    Description:User kisses an opponent out if battle, nothing extra-terrestrial it's just a kiss. Describe this in depth if possible.
    Strengths:Person that has the enchantment on them becomes an ally and will obey Lucifer for 5 turns (duration) Too strong for a D Rank spell, in my opinion. You ought to pull it down to 2 posts. Also, you need to have atleast 3 strengths in here.
    Weaknesses: Must be done before a battle starts
    Can only be done on straight men or gay women
    Must be in contact for ability to work so easily avoided by staying away from Lilin
    Cannot be done in battle (although ability can extend into battle)
    Cooldown of 5 posts

    Edits are in THIS color. Bump when done.


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    WE'LL HELP TONIGHT TO SPLIT ITS SEAMS
    GIVE THE BRUISES OUT LIKE GIFTS, YOU'LL GET THE PICTURE OF YOUR DREAMS
    Lilin the Succubus ObrztW

    Lucifer the Fallen
    Lucifer the Fallen

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Warrior's Heart
    Position : None
    Posts : 26
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Mentor : None
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Requip-Morning Star
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Lilin the Succubus Empty Re: Lilin the Succubus

    Post by Lucifer the Fallen 16th September 2014, 4:24 pm

    I have edited, although I gotta do the paragraph 2 morrow (phone about to die)
    I'll bump afterward.


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    Lilin the Succubus Archangel-lucifer

    XP so far- 37.5
    Jobs completed-
    1 D-Rank
    Lucifer the Fallen
    Lucifer the Fallen

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Warrior's Heart
    Position : None
    Posts : 26
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Mentor : None
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Requip-Morning Star
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Lilin the Succubus Empty Re: Lilin the Succubus

    Post by Lucifer the Fallen 20th September 2014, 2:35 pm

    The edits have been made


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    Lilin the Succubus Archangel-lucifer

    XP so far- 37.5
    Jobs completed-
    1 D-Rank
    Tuna
    Tuna

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Armored Beast
    Position : None
    Posts : 631
    Guild : Tartarus
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 28
    Experience : 300

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Hihiirogane (日色金) - Sun-Colored Metal
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Lilin the Succubus Empty Re: Lilin the Succubus

    Post by Tuna 23rd September 2014, 5:47 am

    I'm gonna take this over. But before that, please make sure your avatar doesn't exceed the 200 width x 300 height border that ensures avatars DON'T cut into forum text.


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    Lucifer the Fallen
    Lucifer the Fallen

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Warrior's Heart
    Position : None
    Posts : 26
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Mentor : None
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Requip-Morning Star
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Lilin the Succubus Empty Re: Lilin the Succubus

    Post by Lucifer the Fallen 23rd September 2014, 1:21 pm

    Stuff is happening XD


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    Lilin the Succubus Archangel-lucifer

    XP so far- 37.5
    Jobs completed-
    1 D-Rank
    Tuna
    Tuna

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Armored Beast
    Position : None
    Posts : 631
    Guild : Tartarus
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 28
    Experience : 300

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Hihiirogane (日色金) - Sun-Colored Metal
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Lilin the Succubus Empty Re: Lilin the Succubus

    Post by Tuna 23rd September 2014, 1:23 pm

    Your spell will only work on NPC's, pets or summons, not on PC's. That would be overpowered, you could kill a ton of characters, it incorporates godmodding and a lot of other stuff. So, add in that it only works against NPC's or change the spell.


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    Lucifer the Fallen
    Lucifer the Fallen

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Warrior's Heart
    Position : None
    Posts : 26
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Mentor : None
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Requip-Morning Star
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Lilin the Succubus Empty Re: Lilin the Succubus

    Post by Lucifer the Fallen 23rd September 2014, 1:29 pm

    *yawn* edits have been made

    Just a little ps
    1- You made the spell not fun anymore
    2- I knew how OP it seemed when I first made it, in which case I wouldn't use it like that. Don't think I'm not smart, I can tell something that can't be use a certain way when I see it.


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    Lilin the Succubus Archangel-lucifer

    XP so far- 37.5
    Jobs completed-
    1 D-Rank
    Tuna
    Tuna

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Armored Beast
    Position : None
    Posts : 631
    Guild : Tartarus
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 28
    Experience : 300

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Hihiirogane (日色金) - Sun-Colored Metal
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Lilin the Succubus Empty Re: Lilin the Succubus

    Post by Tuna 23rd September 2014, 1:52 pm

    If you have a spell only to troll around in duels, then conclude yourself why that wouldn't get approved. Also, if you wouldn't have used it in that way, then why apply it that way in the first place?

    Anywho, approved. Have fun.


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