☽ Mars Gungrave ☾

by **Mars** 23rd July 2020, 4:27 pm

Mars

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Post n°1

☽ Mars Gungrave ☾

by Mars 23rd July 2020, 4:27 pm

Mars Gungrave

"I HAVE ENOUGH OF AN INNER LIGHT TO THRIVE IN THE DARK"

Name: Mars Gungrave
Gender: Female
Age: 20
Birthday: Dec 30
Sexuality: Pan
Special Characteristics:

personality;;

mars is a passionate individual with a selfish desire to keep herself and her loved ones safe. willing to do almost anything to achieve her goals of security and a lavish lifestyle, her morals are ambiguous and questionable. at the same time, she is extremely caring and responsible when it comes to managing her own "family." that could consist of her team at work, her immediate blood relations, or her adopted brethren. either way, she is determined to protect and support those she loves.

in the end, she puts herself before strangers and would never put herself down to help a complete unknown. very slow to trust, mars does not believe in love at first sight. she trusts her instincts when it comes to dealings with others, but she is able to reserve judgement for a very long time. her opinions of other people are subject to change, and mars is not a particularly stubborn person. however, she will not bend or compromise on what is truly important to her.

mars is a decisive leader for the most part. she plays with tough love and rarely regrets her choices. reversing her former declarations can happen, but mars usually thinks through all of her options carefully before making her selection.

mars can take fights in various ways. usually she prefers to finish a conflict off as soon as possible, lest it turn into something bigger and more disruptive. she is accustomed to getting her way, but may not put up a fight if things go badly. instead, she will hide her true feelings until a later date. mars can be in it for the long con and has the patience to wait for the perfect moment to strike. it is possible for her to change her mind on an issue, however, she is not easily convinced. always mindful of the consequences of her actions, mars does not really act on impulse.

likes;;

> astronomy - not to be confused with astrology, mars trusts in the stars
> night - when it's dark outside, she feels more comfortable and secure
> anonymity - mars would prefer not to be recognized or remembered when possible

dislikes;;

> sweltering heat - when it's a mixture of hot and humid, mars is uncomfortable
> freezing cold - the opposite is unpleasant too, with icicles dripping off her nose
> sleeping - a waste of time and an unfortunate necessity

motivations;;

> comfort - not interested in roughing it, mars prefers a life of luxury
> influence - the spotlight is unnecessary but she wants control behind the scenes
> failure - mars is motivated by a desire to avoid it and improve from it

fears;;

> starvation - she can handle going hungry, but such a death would be painful
> drowning - another slow, agonizing method of death, mars hates the idea
> humiliation - prideful, mars is rarely embarrassed, but rare occasions of shame hurt

Height: 165cm 5'5"
Weight: 55kg 122 lbs
Hair Color: Blue-Black
Eye Color: Dark Brown-Blue
Skin Tone: Slightly Tanned
Appearance:

mars' general appearance is striking, but average. roughly normal weight proportionate to her height, she does not have an unusual body type. not muscular nor skinny. mars has a day to day appearance involving a cropped red jacket over a mid length bodycon dress. she has deep blue-black hair that is long in length. with bangs and a widow's peak, her hair has plenty of personality and volume.

she also has a magical girl form that she rarely shows in public. that outfit consists of a tiara, along with a sailor type uniform, red heels, and white gloves. her eyes are dark brown normally, but they become blue in her second form. her hair is also longer while she takes on this look. her normally slightly tanned skin can become paler.

guild;;

Guild: Silver Wolf
Tattoo: Center Back
Tattoo Color: Sapphire Blue

deltra of gangnam style

Last edited by Mars on 23rd July 2020, 7:18 pm; edited 4 times in total

by **Nessa Cordelia Lux** 23rd July 2020, 5:06 pm

Nessa Cordelia Lux

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Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

Post n°2

Re: ☽ Mars Gungrave ☾

by Nessa Cordelia Lux 23rd July 2020, 5:06 pm

@Mars Whilst we are happy for members to put applications into template, we request that the template itself not deviate too much from the original. Your design of character app is not compliant to this requirement, therefore I'm going to have to ask you to change it. Additionally, your template doesn't fit the information in it completely making it difficult to read and check it's entirely. Bump the thread when this has been amended.

Spoiler:

Mars wrote:

Mars Gungrave

TWENTY, FEMALE, DEC 30, PAN, 165 CM, 5'5", 55 KG, 122 LBS

mars is a passionate individual with a selfish desire to keep herself and her loved ones safe. willing to do almost anything to achieve her goals of security and a lavish lifestyle, her morals are ambiguous and questionable. at the same time, she is extremely caring and responsible when it comes to managing her own "family." that could consist of her team at work, her immediate blood relations, or her adopted brethren. either way, she is determined to protect and support those she loves.

in the end, she puts herself before strangers and would never put herself down to help a complete unknown. very slow to trust, mars does not believe in love at first sight. she trusts her instincts when it comes to dealings with others, but she is able to reserve judgement for a very long time. her opinions of other people are subject to change, and mars is not a particularly stubborn person. however, she will not bend or compromise on what is truly important to her.

mars is a decisive leader for the most part. she plays with tough love and rarely regrets her choices. reversing her former declarations can happen, but mars usually thinks through all of her options carefully before making her selection.

mars can take fights in various ways. usually she prefers to finish a conflict off as soon as possible, lest it turn into something bigger and more disruptive. she is accustomed to getting her way, but may not put up a fight if things go badly. instead, she will hide her true feelings until a later date. mars can be in it for the long con and has the patience to wait for the perfect moment to strike. it is possible for her to change her mind on an issue, however, she is not easily convinced. always mindful of the consequences of her actions, mars does not really act on impulse.

likes;;

> astronomy - not to be confused with astrology, mars trusts in the stars
> night - when it's dark outside, she feels more comfortable and secure
> anonymity - mars would prefer not to be recognized or remembered when possible

dislikes;;

> sweltering heat - when it's a mixture of hot and humid, mars is uncomfortable
> freezing cold - the opposite is unpleasant too, with icicles dripping off her nose
> sleeping - a waste of time and an unfortunate necessity

motivations;;

> comfort - not interested in roughing it, mars prefers a life of luxury
> influence - the spotlight is unnecessary but she wants control behind the scenes
> failure - mars is motivated by a desire to avoid it and improve from it

fears;;

> starvation - she can handle going hungry, but such a death would be painful
> drowning - another slow, agonizing method of death, mars hates the idea
> humiliation - prideful, mars is rarely embarrassed, but rare occasions of shame hurt

mars has a day to day appearance involving a cropped red jacket over a mid length bodycon dress. she has deep blue-black hair that is long in length. with bangs and a widow's peak, her hair has plenty of personality and volume.

she also has a magical girl form that she rarely shows in public. that outfit consists of a tiara, along with a sailor type uniform, red heels, and white gloves. her eyes are dark brown normally, but they become blue in her second form. her hair is also longer while she takes on this look.

Hidden Blades Center Back Sapphire Blue
deltra of gangnam style

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Golden Lacrima :: Until 27/12/2020

by **Mars** 23rd July 2020, 5:43 pm

Mars

Mars: Lineage : Aspect of Terra
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Post n°3

Re: ☽ Mars Gungrave ☾

by Mars 23rd July 2020, 5:43 pm

Yo! I'm not certain which portions were missing, but I've written out the information to include every word from the character template aside from the "name" field in the hopes this covers it.

This is what it looked like for me, but I'm guessing part was broken for you. Understandable that it needs to be readable for all users.

Former:

It should look like the following now. If not, or if it is still not up to the standards for acceptable deviation, then I'm happy to remove the template in its entirety. I'm sure it may show up differently on different screens, and if that renders it unreadable it's only fair that is unacceptable.

New:

by **Nessa Cordelia Lux** 23rd July 2020, 7:01 pm

Nessa Cordelia Lux

Nessa Cordelia Lux: Starlight Maiden; - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
Position : None
Posts : 6990
Guild : Fairy Tail
Cosmic Coins : 145
Dungeon Tokens : 0
Experience : 26,209

Character Sheet
First Skill: Starlight Maiden
Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

Post n°4

Re: ☽ Mars Gungrave ☾

by Nessa Cordelia Lux 23rd July 2020, 7:01 pm

@Mars I can read all of the text now, however by following the template I mean that the requested piece of information must be presented in the same manner as the provided template. I.e.

Name:
Gender:
Age:
Birthday:
Sexuality:
Special Characteristics:

Summarising the information into paragraphs deviates too much from the provided template. Bump when amended and I will take a look.

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Golden Lacrima :: Until 27/12/2020

by **Mars** 23rd July 2020, 7:13 pm

Mars

Mars: Lineage : Aspect of Terra
Position : None
Posts : 12
Cosmic Coins : 0
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Experience : 0

Post n°5

Re: ☽ Mars Gungrave ☾

by Mars 23rd July 2020, 7:13 pm

Understood! I'm guessing some of the approved applications are out of date or there's another thing I'm missing, as I was estimating what was allowed template wise from just the first examples I grabbed. Should be good to go now.

by **Nessa Cordelia Lux** 23rd July 2020, 7:22 pm

Nessa Cordelia Lux

Nessa Cordelia Lux: Starlight Maiden; - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
Position : None
Posts : 6990
Guild : Fairy Tail
Cosmic Coins : 145
Dungeon Tokens : 0
Experience : 26,209

Character Sheet
First Skill: Starlight Maiden
Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

Post n°6

Re: ☽ Mars Gungrave ☾

by Nessa Cordelia Lux 23rd July 2020, 7:22 pm

Spoiler:

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CHARACTER | STARLIGHT | VALKYRIES | MOON - WIP | PLOT BANK

Golden Lacrima :: Until 27/12/2020

by **Nessa Cordelia Lux** 25th August 2020, 7:08 am

Nessa Cordelia Lux

Nessa Cordelia Lux: Starlight Maiden; - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
Position : None
Posts : 6990
Guild : Fairy Tail
Cosmic Coins : 145
Dungeon Tokens : 0
Experience : 26,209

Character Sheet
First Skill: Starlight Maiden
Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer