Etoile Flumenbolt

Name: Etoile Flumenbolt

Gender: Female

Age: 22

Birthday: September 1st

Sexuality: Straight

Special Characteristics:

Personality: Etoile is a solitary person. Etoile is also like a cloud, wandering freely, not caring about anyone else's matters. Etoile also worries a lot, however Etoile does not expressing her worry in fear that it would make her look weak. However Etoile is very determined when she sets her minds to things. Etoile has a straight-forward sense of justice and feels that all evil is to be annihilated. Etoile is merciful at all times, and she dislikes to use tricks and believes that a battle should be fought fair and square. However, Etoile is also a fanatic about justice and Etoile sometimes goes overboard with 'justice'. Etoile is not shy at all, however she does not like most people and has a hard time trying to get her point to other people. Etoile often thinks that all kinds of evil are like specks of dirt on the planet, thus this thought has made her germ-phobic. Etoile often showers twice a day, after waking up, and before going to sleep. Etoile is a somewhat insomniac and she has a hard time sleeping. Etoile often treats people how they treat her. Etoile is a simple person to those who do not have true evil intentions. Etoile understands people and believes that everyone has a chance to go back to the path they had strayed from. Thus she sometimes appears naive and a little too merciful. However in battle, Etoile is not afraid to kill, and cares little for people around her when she is battling. Etoile is often willing to use tricks in battle and manipulate people if for the sake of eradicating evil.

Likes:Etoile likes to eat ice-cream to reduce stress at times. Etoile also has a passionate love for justice. Etoile has a passionate love for stars and the night sky, since in her mind, they are beautiful and unspoiled by evil and greed.

Dislikes: Etoile dislikes Evil, and compares it to filth. Unnecessary and spoils the beauty of the world. Etoile dislikes also dislikes using tricks, since she thinks that something should always happen fairly.

Motivations: Etoile has a dream of making the world 'clean' and eradicate all evil. Etoile is willing to even break her 'no tricks' rule for that goal.

Fears: Etoile is terrified of dirt, grime, and filth. Etoile is also germ-phobic, meaning she is afraid of germs.

General Appearance


Height: 5'9" feet.

Weight: 53 kilograms.

Hair: Black and it is straight.

Eyes: Red

Skin Tone: Light

Appearance: Etoile is a slim young woman with black hair that reaches her waist, as well as piercing red-purple eyes. Etoile is often seen sporting a white robe that has the mark of The Council on the back. Etoile is rather pale and she is beautiful as well. Etoile sometimes pass on as a ordinary person without her robe.Etoile is very slender as well, her curves are not too small and not too big, so they are in the in-between zone. Etoile is also physically fit and strong as well.

Etoile:

Guild/Council

Guild: Council/Guildless
Tattoo: Indigo colored and on her left hand.
Rank: S

Remove the colors
I believe we don't have an official year so just make its September 1st
You said Etoile if a friendly person, but then you said she doesn't like people.
You said she believes that someone should fight fair and square but your last sentence contradicted a sentence in that paragraph

In like change the since in her mind to
In the night sky. They are beautiful
She dislikes tricks, but she uses them too and is manipulative.

Explain her appearance more, is she in shape? more about the body, does she look pissy all the time etc.


Not sure if I did a good job or not but did what Sei told me, Kyou will prob check this and grammar it up.

Fixed.

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