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    Red Abyss

    Mr. Anderson
    Mr. Anderson

    Monarch of Destruction


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    Approved Red Abyss

    Post by Mr. Anderson 10th July 2014, 9:04 am

    Name: Red Abyss
    Rank: Legendary
    Species: Demon
    Type: Combat Pet
    Description: When Becky died Marik looked for a new partner to replace her with, even if he was sad and mad, he knew she was free now. In desperation, the masked man went to the old library where he found the book of destruction, there he found a seal, a seal that opened a door to a different dimension, and form there, he tamed the Red Abyss, one of the demons of destruction.
    Red Abyss is a 3 meters tall red demon that doesn't speak, he can't communicate with humans but he can communicate with demon slayer and demon related people, he is able to communicate with Marik because of the mages seal, but he anyway tries not to speak to him.
    As Marik, Red Abyss has the power of destruction, but the difference is that he has the power of time destruction, not space destruction. He has no feeling, he won't feel any pain of any kind, but his body will be damaged, meaning that he can die. He doesn't care if someone attacks Marik, but he will protect him, he has the seal of one of the most powerful demons and he doesn't want it to return to it's dimension.
    Red abyss has the power to destroy time, destroying the past and the future, he is able to destroy the people's memories and even destroy the time of something in particular, deleting it from the universe.
    Being a demon gives abyss a give disadvantage, demon slayers. He will feel pain from demon slayer spells, and even if he doesn't feel any pain against any other attack, he can have his body damaged, he can get sick, and he can die, even if he doesn't feel it, he is receiving damage.
    Red Abyss:

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    Last edited by MarikAnderson on 13th March 2015, 1:00 pm; edited 12 times in total


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    Indiana Jones
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    Lineage : Caine's Descent
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    Age : 27
    Experience : 350

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Ragnarök
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    Approved Re: Red Abyss

    Post by Indiana Jones 10th July 2014, 10:13 pm

    MarikAnderson wrote:Name: Red Baby Dragon (Becky)
    Rank: Weak
    Species: Dragon
    Type: Combat Pet
    Description: Very kind, likes to play, but she cries for anything and she likes a lot to flirt. While in human mode, she loses all her power, but her attitude doesn't change at all. (I need a longer description at minimum 100 words more.)
    Abilities: She basically has fire based attacks, she uses the fire energy of the sun. She can also turn into a human form. She can fight and fly too, but since she is quite little, she can’t carry almost anything when she flies.(Could i get a few more words for the abilites and weight and height for both of the forms.)
    Dragon Form:



    Human Form:




    Attacks:

    Okay, sorry if i was too strict. But edits are in this color. Bump the thread when the edits are made. ;3


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    Approved Re: Red Abyss

    Post by Mr. Anderson 15th July 2014, 12:42 am

    Ready, i forgot to tell yah haha sorry


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    Lineage : Caine's Descent
    Position : None
    Posts : 1380
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 1
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 350

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    First Magic: Ragnarök
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    Approved Re: Red Abyss

    Post by Indiana Jones 15th July 2014, 1:35 am

    Only one thing more. On your first spell, it needs another weakness. Add that and your good to go. ;3


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    Lineage : Chaos Eye
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    Experience : 1,431

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    First Magic: Arc of Dreams
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    Approved Re: Red Abyss

    Post by Mr. Anderson 16th July 2014, 11:18 am

    Okokok:3 I Finish, I hope that one is ok (:


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    Lineage : Caine's Descent
    Position : None
    Posts : 1380
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 1
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 350

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Ragnarök
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    Approved Re: Red Abyss

    Post by Indiana Jones 16th July 2014, 4:01 pm

    Red Abyss Andd1f


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    Red Abyss 18jWfhn


    Character
    Main Theme Battle Theme 1 Battle Theme 2
    Mr. Anderson
    Mr. Anderson

    Monarch of Destruction


    Monarch of Destruction

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Coming Storms- Dragon Slayer- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Chaos Eye
    Position : None
    Posts : 988
    Guild : Elysium
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 1,431

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Arc of Dreams
    Second Magic:
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    Approved Re: Red Abyss

    Post by Mr. Anderson 15th August 2014, 5:27 pm

    Finished Upgrading


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    Mr. Anderson
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    Monarch of Destruction


    Monarch of Destruction

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Coming Storms- Dragon Slayer- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Chaos Eye
    Position : None
    Posts : 988
    Guild : Elysium
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 1,431

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Arc of Dreams
    Second Magic:
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    Approved Re: Red Abyss

    Post by Mr. Anderson 23rd August 2014, 9:29 am

    Bump


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    Felicity
    Felicity

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    Approved Re: Red Abyss

    Post by Felicity 26th August 2014, 10:08 am

    Covering up for Indy~

    MarikAnderson wrote:Name: Red Baby Dragon (Becky)
    Rank: Strong
    Species: Dragon
    Type: Combat Pet
    Description: She is a very kind person, she likes to help anyone and specially to play with them. She loves to play hide an sick, but her favorite game is tag. She loves to run and also likes to race other people. She prefers the day than the night because, for no good reason, she feels more comfortable in the sunlight, and she being afraid of the dark doesn’t help either. She actually acts like a little girl and can also be kind of dumb some times. But even if she is like that, she still pays a lot attention at men, she loves to flirt and to have their attention. She is also very smart about no basic knowledge. For example, she may know the answer to the most complicated of the equations, but if you ask her if she had gone to the zoo, she won’t even know what is it, she isn’t very familiar with human world. And whenever she changes form, her attitude won't change at all except for the battle dragon form, when she changes to the battle form she becomes more violent and thinks a bit less but she can still talk in dragon form.
    Abilities: She basically has fire based attacks, she uses the fire energy of the sun since it is basically where he comes from. She can also turn into a human form where she loses all her power in battle as a dragon, and as she isn't a mage, she really can't do much. She can fight and fly too in dragon mode, but since she is quite little, she can’t carry almost anything when she flies, thats why she uses her Dragon Battle form in battles, it gets stronger and bigger. She is half a meeter in dragon mode and 1.65 meters in human mode and she also has her battle dragon form, she isn't very tall. The Dragon battle form isn't as big as a dragon, she is 1.70 meters tall and 2 meters long.

    Dragon Form:



    Human Form:



    Battle Form:


    Ability:

    Edits are in THIS color. Bump when done.


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    Red Abyss ObrztW

    Mr. Anderson
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    Monarch of Destruction


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    Lineage : Chaos Eye
    Position : None
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    Cosmic Coins : 0
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    Experience : 1,431

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Arc of Dreams
    Second Magic:
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    Approved Re: Red Abyss

    Post by Mr. Anderson 8th September 2014, 2:38 pm

    I think I finished :D I hope its correct


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    Felicity
    Felicity

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    Age : 24
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    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Toxic Scourge
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    Approved Re: Red Abyss

    Post by Felicity 10th September 2014, 5:56 am

    Just make a note that you can't use the B Ranked ability until you're B Rank yourself. Otherwise...

    Red Abyss 4ptemh


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    WE'LL HELP TONIGHT TO SPLIT ITS SEAMS
    GIVE THE BRUISES OUT LIKE GIFTS, YOU'LL GET THE PICTURE OF YOUR DREAMS
    Red Abyss ObrztW

    Mr. Anderson
    Mr. Anderson

    Monarch of Destruction


    Monarch of Destruction

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Coming Storms- Dragon Slayer- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Chaos Eye
    Position : None
    Posts : 988
    Guild : Elysium
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 1,431

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Arc of Dreams
    Second Magic:
    Third Magic:

    Approved Re: Red Abyss

    Post by Mr. Anderson 10th March 2015, 7:59 pm

    Finished!... I'm not sure about many things in the spell... So I will completely understand any "This is OP" or "I don't like it do it again"


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    Character Sheet
    First Magic: ❅ ᴀʀᴄᴛɪᴄ ɴᴇᴍᴇsɪs
    Second Magic: ヽ(*≧ω≦)ノ
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    Approved Re: Red Abyss

    Post by Hikachu 11th March 2015, 11:30 pm

    For Time Destruction, I'll only allow you to increase the opponent's spell by 1 post. By the way, how is your pet going to be attacked if Abyss doesn't feel any pain? Is he able to die? On a side note, your spells look decent and fair despite that it may seem a bit OP. Good job.


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    Monarch of Destruction

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Coming Storms- Dragon Slayer- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Chaos Eye
    Position : None
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    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 1,431

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Arc of Dreams
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    Approved Re: Red Abyss

    Post by Mr. Anderson 13th March 2015, 12:59 pm

    Thanks Hikari! Edited! Not sure if I should do something to make them a bit less OP or something.


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    Hikachu
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    Grand Duelist


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    Age : 25
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    Character Sheet
    First Magic: ❅ ᴀʀᴄᴛɪᴄ ɴᴇᴍᴇsɪs
    Second Magic: ヽ(*≧ω≦)ノ
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    Approved Re: Red Abyss

    Post by Hikachu 16th March 2015, 3:39 am

    Looks really good. I deemed this as ....

    Red Abyss XqohA8F


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