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    Art of War

    Brushogun
    Brushogun

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Arm of Destiny
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    Guild : Eclipse Soul (Aelyst Crux Member)
    Cosmic Coins : 0
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    Mentor : Kichiro Yukine
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Art of War
    Second Magic: Ramen Slayer
    Third Magic:

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    Post by Brushogun 1st July 2014, 1:57 pm

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Art of War
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: Holder
    Description: Brushogun had be trained in swordsmanship since he was a child, however, he preferred the arts of painting rather than combat. Years after his family's tragic death he had infused his family skills and his own art, creating the Art Of War. Brushgun uses his magic just as a regular swordsman. The difference is that he enchants his weapon with various spells of color, known as Paints, to give the weapon more advanced elemental properties. In more advanced forms, Brushogun uses the power to not only boost his weapon, but his own armor.

    The magic itself is based on activating certain runes in the body. Because of this, the magic relies on something other than Magic Power (MP), but Action Power (AP).
    Strengths:
    - Has a variety of elemental powers
    - Very unique to Brushogun
    - Can also create beautiful art
    Weaknesses:
    - Because it is holder, it cannot be eaten
    - Overall, it is less powerful than other elemental spells
    - Spells have little to no range
    - All spells rely on his sword
    Abilities/Powers:
    Chameleon: Brushogun glows an aura corresponding to the element.
    Fire: Red
    Water/Ice : Blue
    Earth/Nature: Green
    Air/Wind: Light Blue
    Lightning: Yellow
    Metal: Gray
    Venom/Poison: Purple
    Light/Angelic: White
    Dark/Demonic: Black

    Action Power Value: As Brushogun increases in Rank, so does his available AP values.
    D Rank: 20
    C Rank: 30
    B Rank: 50
    A Rank: 75
    S Rank: 80
    SS Rank: 90
    H Rank: 100

    Runes: The power of the rune varies based on spells. Brushogun aquires new techniques and powers based on his rank. He can activate the runes at any given time.  As he ranks up he learns additional elements corresponding to his rank. Runes remain active during an entire post. So all spells cast within that post are of the same element. (Able to use Runes of his rank and lower.)
    D Rank: Fire & Water/Ice
    C Rank: Air/Wind & Earth
    B Rank: Lightning & Metal
    A Rank: Venom/Poison
    S Rank: Light/Angelic
    SS Rank: Dark/Demonic
    H Rank: Able to activate one rune per spell.

    AP Costs:
    At D Rank: D;2AP
    At C Rank: D;1AP C;2AP  
    At B Rank: D;1AP C;2AP B;5AP
    At A Rank: D;1AP C;2AP B;4AP A;10AP
    At S Rank: D;0AP C;3AP B;3AP A;8AP S;20AP
    At SS Rank: D;0AP C;1AP B;3AP A;7AP S;20AP
    At H Rank: D;0AP C;0AP B;3AP A;5AP S;10AP H;20AP

    Natural Enchantment: Brushogun restores AP after a certain amount of posts. The power of his restoration varies upon rank.
    D Rank: 5AP Per 5 Post(s)
    C Rank: 7AP Per 5 Post(s)
    B Rank: 7AP Per 3 Post(s)
    A Rank: 5AP Per 2 Post(s)
    S Rank: 7AP Per 2 Post(s)
    SS Rank: 7AP Per 1 Post(s)
    H Rank: 10AP Per 1 Post(s)

    SPELLS:
    D Rank Spells:


    Last edited by Brushogun on 20th July 2014, 9:30 am; edited 14 times in total


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    NightDrivenEn7
    NightDrivenEn7

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    Post by NightDrivenEn7 5th July 2014, 11:10 am

    Your main description does not cover what your magic actually is: more of a backstory of your character. This does not need to be here, so you need to change it entirely to explain what your magic is. Not once while reading your main description did I understand your magic or its details.

    You are D rank, mastery is no where near in your hand period. You can keep your spells as they are; but you need to lower down how much your mastery over the elements are.

    Please be more specific in your spell descriptions to label them what they actually are. You are just saying you paint it this color and then stuff happens. That's not really doing anything; you need to be as descriptive as possible.

    Your strengths should not all be the exact same thing with 5% changes of what elements they are strong against. You need to get more in depth with what this style of magic actually does to figure out more strengths and weaknesses.

    bump when done.


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    Brushogun
    Brushogun

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Arm of Destiny
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    Mentor : Kichiro Yukine
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Art of War
    Second Magic: Ramen Slayer
    Third Magic:

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    Post by Brushogun 7th July 2014, 11:43 am

    I changed the description.

    I don't know exactly what you mean about the spells, but I changed those a little too.


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    Post by Guest 8th July 2014, 5:59 am

    Brushogun wrote:I changed the description.

    I don't know exactly what you mean about the spells, but I changed those a little too.

    You've still not edited your strengths and weaknesses. At the moment they are all literally the same, just copied and pasted. Just reword them so that each strength and weakness is obviously relevant to that particular spell (I.E. with red brush, state which slayers can absorb the magic etc.)
    Brushogun
    Brushogun

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Arm of Destiny
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    Guild : Eclipse Soul (Aelyst Crux Member)
    Cosmic Coins : 0
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    Mentor : Kichiro Yukine
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Art of War
    Second Magic: Ramen Slayer
    Third Magic:

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    Post by Brushogun 8th July 2014, 7:16 am

    Bump.

    I kinda don't know what else to change.


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    Brushogun
    Brushogun

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Arm of Destiny
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    Cosmic Coins : 0
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    Mentor : Kichiro Yukine
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Art of War
    Second Magic: Ramen Slayer
    Third Magic:

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    Post by Brushogun 10th July 2014, 9:58 am

    Two days.

    Bump?


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    Brushogun
    Brushogun

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Arm of Destiny
    Position : None
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    Guild : Eclipse Soul (Aelyst Crux Member)
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Kichiro Yukine
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Art of War
    Second Magic: Ramen Slayer
    Third Magic:

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    Post by Brushogun 16th July 2014, 9:40 am

    Bump,

    Can someone please help me with my spells? I deleted them and now I don't know what to do.


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    Brushogun
    Brushogun

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Arm of Destiny
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    Guild : Eclipse Soul (Aelyst Crux Member)
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Kichiro Yukine
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Art of War
    Second Magic: Ramen Slayer
    Third Magic:

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    Post by Brushogun 17th July 2014, 7:27 am

    o.o


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    Samus Aran
    Samus Aran

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    Post by Samus Aran 17th July 2014, 9:47 am

    For Body of the samurai, lower the amount it can defend from 3 C-rank spells to 3 D-ranked spells, up to 2 C-ranked if the conditions are met.


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