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    Zero's Bike

    Zero Drake
    Zero Drake

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    Quality Badge Level 1- Player 
    Lineage : Malefic Illusions
    Position : None
    Posts : 126
    Guild : Nox Animus
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Hattori Hanzo
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Knife Scale
    Second Magic:
    Third Magic:

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    Post by Zero Drake 25th April 2014, 10:55 pm

    (This is a magic item, not a weapon)

    Name: Bike Designation: ALEX
    Rank: Legendary
    Type: Bike
    Description:
    Appearance:
    The bike's max speed is 100 MPH, unless traveling, then it is 150. The bike can accelerate from 0-60 in 4 seconds, afterwards it gains speed at a rate of 10 MPH per second.

    Backstory:

    Name: Wall
    Rank: Equal to user
    Description: User can create a wall behind wherever the bike drives, it can block three hits of damage equal to its rank before a 15 foot long section breaks. The wall created itself is either 4 or 12 feet high, and glows blue. The choice of how high the wall is is determined by the user when activated.
    Strengths:
    Defensive
    Allows control over the battlefield
    Powerful
    Weaknesses:
    Ability Lasts 4 posts
    The actual wall made only lasts 5 posts
    Cool down is 5 posts
    Can be broken with three hits of equal rank
    Can be bypassed, such as flying or climbed over

    Sync: The bike has an holographic eyepiece/earpiece that fits behind the ear and allows syncing information between registered devices. The bike is intelligent, and can be commanded to do tasks, it also fluently speaks English.


    Last edited by Zero Drake on 26th April 2014, 8:59 am; edited 4 times in total
    Nykyrian
    Nykyrian

    Guild Master- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Necromancer's Passion
    Position : None
    Posts : 295
    Guild : Basilisk Fang Guildmaster
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 29
    Mentor : Self-Taught
    Experience : 900

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Territory Magic
    Second Magic: Reaper Magic ( not acquired yet )
    Third Magic:

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    Post by Nykyrian 25th April 2014, 11:06 pm

    Zero Drake wrote:Name: Bike Designation: ALEX
    Rank: Legendary
    Type: Bike
    Description:
    Appearance:
    The bike's max speed is 100 MPH, unless traveling, then it is 150. The bike can accelerate from 0-60 in 4 seconds, after wards it gains speed at a rate of 10 MPH per second.

    Name: Wall
    Rank: Scales<--- Scales is not a rank
    Description: User can create a wall behind wherever the bike drives, it can block three hits of damage equal to its rank before a 15 foot long section breaks. The wall created itself is either 4 or 12 feet high, and glows blue.< --- You said either 4 or 12? What determines this?
    Strengths:
    Defensive
    Control<--- Okay, it has controlling properties, but explain how this ties in as a strength
    Powerful
    Weaknesses:
    Lasts 4 posts
    The actual wall made only lasts 3 posts
    Can be broken< --- what kind of damage can it take before breaking?
    Can be bypassed<--- bypassed? Meaning?

    Sync: The bike has an holographic eyepiece/earpiece that fits behind the ear and allows syncing information between registered devices. The bike is intelligent, and can be commanded to do tasks, it also fluently speaks English.

    Also, you need to fix your image, its cut by the board.
    Nykyrian
    Nykyrian

    Guild Master- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Necromancer's Passion
    Position : None
    Posts : 295
    Guild : Basilisk Fang Guildmaster
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 29
    Mentor : Self-Taught
    Experience : 900

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Territory Magic
    Second Magic: Reaper Magic ( not acquired yet )
    Third Magic:

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    Post by Nykyrian 26th April 2014, 8:18 am

    Zero Drake wrote:(This is a magic item, not a weapon)

    Name: Bike Designation: ALEX
    Rank: Legendary
    Type: Bike
    Description:
    Appearance:
    The bike's max speed is 100 MPH, unless traveling, then it is 150. The bike can accelerate from 0-60 in 4 seconds, afterwards it gains speed at a rate of 10 MPH per second.

    Backstory:

    Name: Wall
    Rank: Equal to user
    Description: User can create a wall behind wherever the bike drives, it can block three hits of damage equal to its rank before a 15 foot long section breaks. The wall created itself is either 4 or 12 feet high, and glows blue. The choice of how high the wall is is determined by the user when activated.
    Strengths:
    Defensive
    Allows control over the battlefield
    Powerful
    Weaknesses:
    Ability Lasts 4 posts
    The actual wall made only lasts 5 posts
    Cool down is 5 posts
    Can be broken with three hits of equal rank
    Can be bypassed, such as flying or climbed over

    Sync: The bike has an holographic eyepiece/earpiece that fits behind the ear and allows syncing information between registered devices. The bike is intelligent, and can be commanded to do tasks, it also fluently speaks English.

    Okay ^^ This is looking alot better, in both apps, instead of saying the same stuff for both app, ill just put it in this one since its the same issue.
    Okay, so it may be stolen tech from Bosco, but can you put a mini story in about HOW it was stolen from Bosco ( that is what i originally wanted )
    Also, You can either put this in description, or under Sync, but think about how this would work in a magical world. I was thinking Archive Magic. Which is similar to a shared Network between the world and the user.
    So if you want to use Sync, put it into a Magic Template for both the bike and Wolf. With 3 strengths 4 weaknesses and a good description.
    Nykyrian
    Nykyrian

    Guild Master- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Necromancer's Passion
    Position : None
    Posts : 295
    Guild : Basilisk Fang Guildmaster
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 29
    Mentor : Self-Taught
    Experience : 900

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Territory Magic
    Second Magic: Reaper Magic ( not acquired yet )
    Third Magic:

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    Post by Nykyrian 26th April 2014, 9:11 am

    Okay, you have made appropriate changed for this time.

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