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    Takumi Yoshino
    Takumi Yoshino

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    Post by Takumi Yoshino 9th May 2016, 7:51 am

    Magic

    Primary Magic:Ice make
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: caster
    Description: Takumi's ice make magic allows him to create almost any objct, mobile or immobile, from ice. Ice make magic can do many things, such as make a dragon that really flies, or a shield that protects you. Ice make magic has infinite possibilities. Anything can be made by this magic(with some limits)

    Takumi uses this magic to create a weapon, a shield, or perhaps a dragon wih which he fights against his enemies. He both attacks and defends with this magic, protecting both himself and his comrades. This magic does have some limits, though Takumi chooses to play them as strengths, such as when he uses ice make floor and it gets melted by fire. The ice would only become more slippery as it would begin to melt.
    Strengths: -Long range attack
    -hitting multiple targets if need be
    -defense
    -close range attack

    Weaknesses: -Fire
    -can be shattered
    -able to hit self or allies
    -requires one or both hands to use
    -some spells have a large cooldown time, such as ice make dragon
    Lineage: Necromancer's Passion
    Unique Abilities:
    -one unique ability of Takumi's magic is that he can create small icestorms about 15 metres in size . It increases by about 10 metres for every rank after D, and deals about 50% rank damage originally, with 25% later on for 3-4 posts. can be used 1 time per thread at D rank, use increasing by one at each rank.
    -Takumi's next unique ability is that he can withstand much lower tempuratures for much longer than any normal person would be able to(eg he could sleep outside in a blizzard in only a t-shirt and jeans and be fine in the morning)  he is able to withstand spells of cold/ice/snow nature by having a natural affinity/defense of 25% (+5% for every rank after D).

    -takumi's third ua is by far the most powerful. It allows him to create an icy aura about himself in the shape of a lion, with a function of shielding the user from all harm for two posts. The aura is about 10 feet tall. The aura will deflect all harm, and will not allow anything to get within a range of 10 feet of the user for two posts. This aura protects Takumi, but has the downside of disabling his ability to attack while it is active. This aura could potentially be destroyed by a hot enough fire, for it is made of ice energy.
    The aura has a Cooldown of about 8 posts.

    Name: Ice make dragon
    Rank:  D
    Type: Ice, offensive
    Duration: 3 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: This spell requires the user to put both hands together and call out the name of the spell. The dragon for D rank is usually about 10 feet long and 2 feet wide, though it may be bigger depending on the user. It is very fast, and appears the moment the user puts their hands together and calls out Ice make: dragon! the dragon is capable of moving and acting by itself. The range of this spell is about 15 metres before it gets out of control, and moves at speeds of 20 m/s
    Strengths: -makes a good distraction
    -capable of movement
    -big enough to carry an ally to safety if necessary
    Weaknesses: -can easily be melted by a fire mage
    -can easily be shattered by a large enough force.
    -heat in general
    -may attack allies as well as enemies if your control isn't strong

    List of Spell Fusions:(Locked until B rank)(List your Spell Fusions here, name them, category them, have them make sense, and most importantly make them shiny!)

    Name Name of the Spell )
    Rank: (What rank is your spell? H, S, A, B, C, or D)
    Type:
    Fused Spells(What Spells Went into the Fusion and their Ranks?)
    Description:
    Duration:
    Cooldown:
    Strengths:
    Weaknesses:

    b]Name:[/b]Ice make sword
    Rank:  D
    Type: Ice, offensive, close range
    Duration:  3 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: the spell requires the user to have one or both hands available. The sword will appear in their hands the moment they call out the name of the spell. the sword is normally about 3 feet long no matter what rank the user is, and has no area of effect. It lasts for the equivalent of 2 D rank spells or 1 C in terms of durability.
    Strengths: -close range combat
    -sharper than a normal weapon
    -allows user to have a weapon that they control
    Weaknesses: -can easily be melted by a fire mage
    -can easily be shattered by a large enough force.
    -heat in general
    -may be destroyed by a sharp enough sword

    Name: Ice make shield
    Rank: D
    Type: Ice, defensive,
    Duration: 3 posts if not melted or shattered
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: the spell requires the user to have one or both hands available. The shield will be just big enough to cover the user at d rank(about 6 feet tall and 2-3 wide) and has no area of effect. This spell is used only for defense, and merely makes a sheet of ice in front of the user that protects them from an enemy attack. Lasts for about 2 d rank spells or 1 c rank before it shatters.
    Strengths: -defense
    -is a 5 inchs thick
    -covers entire user in the front
    Weaknesses: -can easily be melted by a fire mage
    -can easily be shattered by a large enough force.
    -cannot protect the user's back
    -may be destroyed by a sharp enough sword or other weapon

    Name:Ice make floor
    Rank: D
    Type: Ice, offensive/defensive
    Duration: Max duration of 3 posts
    Cooldown: 5 posts
    Description: the spell requires the user to have one or both hands available. This spell atd rank has an area of effect of about 10 square metres, and covers that area within about 5 seconds of being cast. it does not deal damage, though it slows by up to 30%
    Strengths:
    -defense
    -offense
    -forces the enemy  to pay attention more to thier feet
    Weaknesses: -can easily be melted by a fire mage
    -may trip up the user as well
    -cannot be used without a hand available
    - able to hit allies as well

    Name: ice make: lions
    Rank: D
    type:ice, offensive
    Duration:2 posts Max
    Cool down:2 posts
    Description: this spell is one that gives th e user a bit of a physical transformation as well as creating a huge ice lion. The physical transformation gives the user icy claws and sharp fangs, as wellas an icy mane like a lion's. The ice lion itself is about the size of a horse, it's purpose being to attack the enemy. It has a range of about 15 meters and a speed of about 15m/s.
    Strengths:
    -gives the user the physical properties of a lion as well as creating an ice lion.
    -has a large size and incredible speed, making it hard to dodge.
    Weaknesses:
    -can be melted
    -larger size makes it difficult to manouever.
    -can be shattered by earth magic fairly easily


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    Post by Guest 10th May 2016, 9:06 am

    You can have three unique abilities, and could you please remove the parenthesis? It's hard to see what is what.
    Takumi Yoshino
    Takumi Yoshino

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    Age : 23
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    Post by Takumi Yoshino 10th May 2016, 11:00 am

    edited marcy


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    Post by Guest 10th May 2016, 11:24 am

    All right, so I was previously at school when I was grading this; thus, that was the reason why my post was so abrupt and harsh-sounding. Anyway, here is the full-on grading of your magic. Anything in this color is a suggested change.
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    Takumi Yoshino
    Takumi Yoshino

    Guardian of Storms


    Guardian of Storms

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    Age : 23
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    Experience : 675

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    Second Magic:
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    Post by Takumi Yoshino 11th May 2016, 7:41 am

    edited again marcy


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    Post by Guest 11th May 2016, 8:39 am

    Just some minor things you missed. ^.^
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    Takumi Yoshino
    Takumi Yoshino

    Guardian of Storms


    Guardian of Storms

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Player 
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    Cosmic Coins : 0
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    Age : 23
    Mentor : Iris, Goddess of Rainbows
    Experience : 675

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    Second Magic:
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    Post by Takumi Yoshino 11th May 2016, 10:57 am

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    Post by Guest 11th May 2016, 10:58 am

    Takumi's ice make magic finished QbJa7GR
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    Post by Mistress Venir 30th June 2016, 11:52 am

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    Post by That Adopted Kid 30th June 2016, 5:11 pm

    Hello this is that adopted kid and I will be grading your magic, requested changes will be in this color. Let's get it started.

    Takumi Yoshino. wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic:Ice make
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: caster
    Description: Takumi's ice make magic allows him to create almost any object, mobile or immobile, from ice. Ice make magic can do many things, such as make a dragon that really flies, or a shield that protects you. Ice make magic has infinite possibilities. Anything can be made by this magic(with some limits)

    Takumi uses this magic to create a weapon, a shield, or perhaps a dragon wih which he fights against his enemies. He both attacks and defends with this magic, protecting both himself and his comrades. This magic does have some limits, though Takumi chooses to play them as strengths, such as when he uses ice make floor and it gets melted by fire. The ice would only become more slippery as it would begin to melt.
    Strengths: -Long range attack
    -hitting multiple targets if need be
    -defense
    -close range attack

    Weaknesses: -Fire
    -can be shattered
    -able to hit self or allies
    -requires one or both hands to use
    -some spells have a large cooldown time, such as ice make dragon
    Lineage: Necromancer's Passion
    Unique Abilities:
    -one unique ability of Takumi's magic is that he can create small icestorms about 15 metres in size . It increases by about 10 metres for every rank after D, and deals about 50% rank damage, with 25% later on for 3-4 posts. can be used 1 time per thread at D rank, use increasing by one ateach rank. Only want a bit of clarification here, what do you mean by 25% afterward? Does that mean the first post does 50% of spells rank in damage, and then the next few posts only do 25%? if that's the case it is fine, though there should be a bit of a cooldown, or if you don't want a cooldown a cost, I only say cooldown because then it will be easier when you rank up to already have it in =D
    -Takumi's next unique ability is that he can withstand much lower tempuratures for much longer than any normal person would be able to(eg he could sleep outside in a blizzard in only a t-shirt and jeans and be fine in the morning)  he is able to withstand spells of cold/ice/snow nature by having a natural affinity/defense of 25% (+5% for every rank after D).

    -takumi's third ua is by far the most powerful. It allows him to create an icy aura about himself in the shape of a lion, with a function of shielding the user from all harm for two posts. The aura is about 10 feet tall. The aura will deflect all harm, and will not allow anyone to get within a range of 10 feet of the user for two posts. So you got a few options with this ability, you can make it so that while this is active you can't harm anyone/anything, you could make it so that it provides a full rank defense of your rank (so able to absorb like 2 ranks worth of spell damage for you) in which case you could make the cooldown just like 3 posts, but be able to use it more often, or you could make it give you a flat damage resistence of like 25% to physical and magical, also protecting you. Full imminity is pushing it without some form of downside unfortunately.


    Name: Ice make dragon
    Rank:  D
    Type: Ice, offensive
    Duration: 3 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: This spell requires the user to put both hands together and call out the name of the spell. The dragon for D rank is usually about 10 feet long and 2 feet wide, though it may be bigger depending on the user. It is very fast, and appears the moment the user puts their hands together and calls out Ice make: dragon! the dragon is capable of moving and acting by itself. The range of this spell is about 15 metres before it gets out of control, and moves at speeds of 20 m/s
    Strengths: -makes a good distraction
    -capable of movement
    -big enough to carry an ally to safety if necessary
    Weaknesses: -can easily be melted by a fire mage
    -can easily be shattered by a large enough force.
    -heat in general
    -may attack allies as well as enemies if your control isn't strong

    List of Spell Fusions:(Locked until B rank)(List your Spell Fusions here, name them, category them, have them make sense, and most importantly make them shiny!)

    Name Name of the Spell )
    Rank: (What rank is your spell? H, S, A, B, C, or D)
    Type:
    Fused Spells(What Spells Went into the Fusion and their Ranks?)
    Description:
    Duration:
    Cooldown:
    Strengths:
    Weaknesses:

    b]Name:[/b]Ice make sword
    Rank:  D
    Type: Ice, offensive, close range
    Duration:  3 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: the spell requires the user to have one or both hands available. The sword will appear in their hands the moment they call out the name of the spell. the sword is normally about 3 feet long no matter what rank the user is, and has no area of effect. It lasts for the equivalent of 2 D rank spells or 1 C in terms of durability.
    Strengths: -close range combat
    -sharper than a normal weapon
    -allows user to have a weapon that they control
    Weaknesses: -can easily be melted by a fire mage
    -can easily be shattered by a large enough force.
    -heat in general
    -may be destroyed by a sharp enough sword

    Name: Ice make shield
    Rank: D
    Type: Ice, defensive,
    Duration: 3 posts if not melted or shattered
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: the spell requires the user to have one or both hands available. The shield will be just big enough to cover the user at d rank(about 6 feet tall and 2-3 wide) and has no area of effect. This spell is used only for defense, and merely makes a sheet of ice in front of the user that protects them from an enemy attack. Lasts for about 2 d rank spells or 1 c rank before it shatters.
    Strengths: -defense
    -is a 5 inchs thick
    -covers entire user in the front
    Weaknesses: -can easily be melted by a fire mage
    -can easily be shattered by a large enough force.
    -cannot protect the user's back
    -may be destroyed by a sharp enough sword or other weapon

    Name:Ice make floor
    Rank: D
    Type: Ice, offensive/defensive
    Duration: Max duration of 3 posts
    Cooldown: 5 posts
    Description: the spell requires the user to have one or both hands available. This spell atd rank has an area of effect of about 10 square metres, and covers that area within about 5 seconds of being cast. it does not deal damage, though it slows by up to 30%
    Strengths:
    -defense
    -offense
    -forces the enemy  to pay attention more to thier feet
    Weaknesses: -can easily be melted by a fire mage
    -may trip up the user as well
    -cannot be used without a hand available
    - able to hit allies as well

    Name: ice make: lions
    Rank: D
    type:ice, offensive
    Duration:2 posts Max
    Cool down:2 posts
    Description: this spell is one that gives th e user a bit of a physical transformation as well as creating a huge ice lion. The physical transformation gives the user icy claws and sharp fangs, as wellas an icy mane like a lion's. The ice lion itself is about the size of a horse, it's purpose being to attack the enemy. It has a range of about 15 meters and a speed of about 15m/s.
    Strengths:
    -gives the user the physical properties of a lion as well as creating an ice lion.
    -has a large size and incredible speed, making it hard to dodge.
    Weaknesses:
    -can be melted
    -larger size makes it difficult to manouever.
    -can be shattered by earth magic fairly easily


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    Takumi Yoshino
    Takumi Yoshino

    Guardian of Storms


    Guardian of Storms

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Player 
    Lineage : Blessing of the Gods
    Position : None
    Posts : 1142
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 23
    Mentor : Iris, Goddess of Rainbows
    Experience : 675

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Infinite Ice
    Second Magic:
    Third Magic:

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    Post by Takumi Yoshino 1st July 2016, 4:12 am

    Edited.


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    Post by That Adopted Kid 1st July 2016, 1:29 pm

    -takumi's third ua is by far the most powerful. It allows him to create an icy aura about himself in the shape of a lion, with a function of shielding the user from all harm for two posts. The aura is about 10 feet tall. The aura will deflect all harm, and will not allow anything to get within a range of 10 feet of the user for two posts. The aura also does not harm anyone, though it will deflect attacks and objects.No I meant that Takumi himself can't harm anyone for the time that it is up, not the aura


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    Takumi Yoshino
    Takumi Yoshino

    Guardian of Storms


    Guardian of Storms

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Player 
    Lineage : Blessing of the Gods
    Position : None
    Posts : 1142
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 23
    Mentor : Iris, Goddess of Rainbows
    Experience : 675

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Infinite Ice
    Second Magic:
    Third Magic:

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    Post by Takumi Yoshino 3rd July 2016, 7:19 am

    Edited again


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    Post by That Adopted Kid 5th July 2016, 7:27 pm

    Approved.


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