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    Ian's Wind magic Empty Ian's Wind magic

    Post by iannabben 22nd January 2014, 11:14 am

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Wind magic,
    Secondary Magic: none
    Caster or Holder:none
    Description:
    The magic what Ian uses is just wind magic,This variation of Air Magic enables its users to generate wind, as well as to manipulate the wind around them at their will. This can also mke the user fly by using wind beneath him to levitate and manipulate the wind on his right and on his left to control where he is going.

    Wind Magic grants them high offensive power, allowing them to assault enemies in different ways: the most prominent aspect of such Magic lies in the ability to give the wind cutting properties, manifesting it in the form of fast-moving air blades which are employed at mid-to-long range they can also generate powerful gusts of wind to inflict blunt damage upon enemies and send them flying away, and even form hurricanes of various scales, which, in addition to their rotational power, seem to retain his wind's signature sharpness. Many of this Magic's spells seem to require special gestures which are performed with one or both hands, depending on the attack's power and magnitude. However, users also seems capable of producing minor, yet accurate, blasts without the need of moving their hands. Users can also employ the wind on themselves, using it to levitate and traverse over long distances as well as to cover themselves in an armor of wind, boosting both their offense and defense.

    Strengths:
    - The strenght of the magic is that it can have huge destructive force
    - it can allow the peron to levitate which can help the user defense himself
    - It can defense the user by blowing the user away.
    - This magic is strong against water, it can blow it away and/or dissipate it
    Weaknesses:
    - One elemets can break through wind fire. and thunder/electricity. (Fire is able to heat up the winds making them dissapear )
    - There must be air around him, when he is in an airless room he is not able to use any of his magic
    - When the foe is holding his hands he cant do much
    - the user must be far away and the opponent has to be away for a bit

    Abilities/Powers:
    Uhm his abilities are flight, he is ably to fly due to controlling the wind fully around him, He is able to fly at a 20 to 25 meter hight with a speed of 25 km/per hour

    Name: Magic wind Palm
    Rank: D
    Type: Wind element, offensive
    Description:
    The user claps both their hands together, releasing a highly destructive tornado. its speed is 2 on a scale of 5 and it has a medium to wide range about to 15 - 20 meters depending on the blow of the wind around him, when there is no wind the magic will be 20 kmh but when there is wind it can fgo up to 23 kmph. The strenght of the tornade is very high, when it hits the ground it can send rubble and rocks flying everywhere. T

    Strengths:
    - The magic has a far range
    - The magic is easily used
    - The magic is strong against ice magic, when it comes in contact with it in battle it will win when the spells are of the same rank
    Weaknesses:
    - it does not have much power
    - the spell doesn't keep going it just works for a few second and send a small hurricane
    - it has a cooldown period of 2 posts
    Move in the anime:


    Name: Storm Mail
    Rank: D
    Type: Wind element, Defensive
    Description:
    The user puts their arms in an "X" pattern in front of themselves, manipulating wind to spin around them until they are covered by an armor of wind. This armor does not only increase their defenses, but also augments their destructive power. This armor of wind constantly blows wind inside out. In the anime, the user creates a Magic Seal from a spinning object and covers their body in an armor of wind. It magic isnt very far, it is very short, and the speed allways go in winds. This spell stays on as long as a type it is weak against (fire or electricity) can stop it, when there is a level C spell or higher is used against it or until the user deactivates it, or three posts
    Strengths:
    - it is a very good defense, it can protect u against two D or one C
    - it can change the course of the wind that is blowing along you
    Weaknesses:
    - when you change the wind flow the mail breaks away
    - Fire can warm up the wind and break through the storm mail and disperse it. while dealing damage to the user.
    - cooldown 4 posts

    Anime:

    Name: Storm Shred
    Rank: D
    Type: Wind element, offensive
    Description: While using Storm Mail, the user swings their arms in front of him, creating sharp blades of wind that attack the target with a lot of speed. The speed is 20m/s and the and the range is medium and far 25 meters
    Strengths:
    - its strong
    - it can reach very far distances
    - the blades that are summoned are very sharp
    Weaknesses:
    - you have to have the storm mail active before you are able to use it
    - when you can stay in a far enough distance they will evaporate and you only feel a soft wind.
    - The cooldown if 4 posts

    Move in the anime:

    Name: Flight
    Rank: D
    Type: Wind Element supportive
    Description: Due to managing the winds all around he user he is able to levitate and even fly in a certain way. He controls the winds beneath him and around him to lift himself up and then fly by steering the winds to the left and right, it can range through very long distance, as far as the user wants too. He can use this spell for 2 posts
    Strengths:
    - makes it easier to dodge attacks
    - lets the user get more speed a 40 kmh
    - the user can travel very far without depleting much magic energy (sorry this was a typo)
    Weaknesses:
    - when someone can get higher then him he can bring the user down
    - the flying can be easy avoided when the foe can control gravity


    Last edited by iannabben on 26th January 2014, 6:16 am; edited 4 times in total
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    Ian's Wind magic Empty Re: Ian's Wind magic

    Post by Grizzly 23rd January 2014, 2:50 pm

    iannabben wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Wind magic,
    Secondary Magic: none
    Caster or Holder:none
    Description:
    The magic what Ian uses is just wind magic,This variation of Air Magic enables its users to generate wind, as well as to manipulate the wind around them at their will. This can also mke the user fly by using wind beneath him to levitate and manipulate the wind on his right and on his left to control where he is going.

    Wind Magic grants them high offensive power, allowing them to assault enemies in different ways: the most prominent aspect of such Magic lies in the ability to give the wind cutting properties, manifesting it in the form of fast-moving air blades which are employed at mid-to-long range they can also generate powerful gusts of wind to inflict blunt damage upon enemies and send them flying away, and even form hurricanes of various scales, which, in addition to their rotational power, seem to retain his wind's signature sharpness. Many of this Magic's spells seem to require special gestures which are performed with one or both hands, depending on the attack's power and magnitude. However, users also seems capable of producing minor, yet accurate, blasts without the need of moving their hands. Users can also employ the wind on themselves, using it to levitate and traverse over long distances as well as to cover themselves in an armor of wind, boosting both their offense and defense.

    Strengths:
    - The strenght of the magic is that i <<< When rping always write in third person can have huge destructive force
    - it can allow the peron to levitate which can help the user defense himself
    - It can defense the user by blowing the user away.

    <<< I wouldn't give functions of the magic. Try to answer WHEN and HOW this magic is strong. For example, it might have a healing factor. Then you add HOW that healing factor plays out. Or that the element can be summoned in massive amounts as it is all around you.

    Weaknesses:
    - A few elements like Ice can break through his wind. <<< List ALL the elements. State that if a spell of an element that this magic is weak to goes up against a spell of yours of the same rank, the spell of the other element wins out.
    - There must be air around him, when he is in an airless room he is not able to use any of his magic
    - When the foe is holding his hands he cant do much
    - the user must be far away and the opponent has to be away for a bit

    Abilities/Powers:
    Uhm his abilities are flight, he is ably to fly due to controlling the wind fully around him. <<< How fast and how high can you fly?

    Name: Magic wind Palm
    Rank: D
    Type: Wind element, offensive
    Description:
    The user claps both their hands together, releasing a highly destructive tornado. its speed is 2 on a scale of 5 and it has a medium to wide range about to 20 - 25 meters depending on the blow of the wind around him. <<< Use normal units of measurement. Either mph or kmh. And make the range have 15-20 meters. Additionally, elaborate on its "destructiveness".

    Strengths:
    - The magic has a far range
    - The magic is easily used
    Weaknesses:
    - it does not have much power
    - the spell doesn't keep going it just works for a few second and send a small hurricane <<< Give elemental weaknesses.

    <<< You need to give a cooldown. How many posts does it take until you are able to use this spell again? I would suggest 3 posts.
    Move in the anime:


    Name: Storm Mail
    Rank: D
    Type: Wind element, Defensive
    Description:
    The user puts their arms in an "X" pattern in front of themselves, manipulating wind to spin around them until they are covered by an armor of wind. This armor does not only increase their defenses, but also augments their destructive power. This armor of wind constantly blows wind inside out. In the anime, the user creates a Magic Seal from a spinning object and covers their body in an armor of wind. It magic isnt very far, it is very short, and the speed allways go in winds. <<< How many posts does this spell stay active? I would suggest 3 posts.

    Strengths:
    - it is a very good defense <<< State that this spell can defend you "against two spells of D Rank or one C Rank spell.
    - it can change the course of the wind that is blowing along you
    Weaknesses:
    - when you change the wind flow the mail breaks away
    - When something of electricity hits it, it can still break through it.
    - Fire can warm up the wind, and disperse it.

    <<< You must give this spell a cooldown. How many posts until you can use this spell again AFTER the end of this spell? I would suggest 4 posts.

    Anime:

    Name: Storm Shred
    Rank: D
    Type: Wind element, offensive
    Description: While using Storm Mail, the user swings their arms in front of him, creating sharp blades of wind that attack the target with a lot of speed. The speed is a lot and the and the range is medium and far 30 - 40 meters <<< Lower the range to 25 meters. Also give an exact number to how fast this spell is. Preferably m/s or mph/kmh.
    Strengths:
    - its strong
    - it can reach very far distances
    - the blades that are summoned are very sharp
    Weaknesses:
    - you have to have the storm mail active before you are able to use it
    - when you can stay in a far enough distance they will evaporate and you only feel a soft wind.

    <<< You must once more, give a cooldown. I would suggest 4 posts.

    Move in the anime:

    Name: Flight
    Rank: D
    Type: Wind Element supportive
    Description: Due to managing the winds all around he user he is able to levitate and even fly in a certain way. He controls the winds beneath him and around him to lift himself up and then fly by steering the winds to the left and right, it can range through very long distance, as far as the user wants too. <<< How long can you use this spell? I would suggest 2 posts. Also, how much faster do you get?
    Strengths:
    - makes it easier to dodge attacks
    - lets the user get more speed a
    - the user can travel very far without depleting magic energy <<< This spell costs magical energy, therefore you can't really right this :c Sowwy.
    Weaknesses:
    - when someone can get higher then him he can bring the user down
    - the flying can be easy avoided when the foe can control gravity


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    Ian's Wind magic Empty Re: Ian's Wind magic

    Post by Grizzly 26th January 2014, 6:06 am

    Much better! There are still some things you need to tweak, but it's almost only stuff to make the magic adapt a little to the site. You did a great job on making your magic better though c: Just give yourself a bit of time and you'll make a decently strong magic at a higher rank C;

    iannabben wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Wind magic,
    Secondary Magic: none
    Caster or Holder:none
    Description:
    The magic what Ian uses is just wind magic,This variation of Air Magic enables its users to generate wind, as well as to manipulate the wind around them at their will. This can also mke the user fly by using wind beneath him to levitate and manipulate the wind on his right and on his left to control where he is going.

    Wind Magic grants them high offensive power, allowing them to assault enemies in different ways: the most prominent aspect of such Magic lies in the ability to give the wind cutting properties, manifesting it in the form of fast-moving air blades which are employed at mid-to-long range they can also generate powerful gusts of wind to inflict blunt damage upon enemies and send them flying away, and even form hurricanes of various scales, which, in addition to their rotational power, seem to retain his wind's signature sharpness. Many of this Magic's spells seem to require special gestures which are performed with one or both hands, depending on the attack's power and magnitude. However, users also seems capable of producing minor, yet accurate, blasts without the need of moving their hands. Users can also employ the wind on themselves, using it to levitate and traverse over long distances as well as to cover themselves in an armor of wind, boosting both their offense and defense.

    Strengths:
    - The strenght of the magic is that it can have huge destructive force
    - it can allow the peron to levitate which can help the user defense himself
    - It can defense the user by blowing the user away.

    <<< You may add that this magic is strong against water as it can make it dissipate and/or blow it away.
    Weaknesses:
    - Two elemets can break through wind, those are fire, and thunder/electricity. (Fire is able to heat up the winds making them dissapear while electricty can travel through them and hit the user, however this can also be an advantage when used by the user himself. <<< You may take the lightning weakness out of your magic.
    - There must be air around him, when he is in an airless room he is not able to use any of his magic
    - When the foe is holding his hands he cant do much
    - the user must be far away and the opponent has to be away for a bit

    Abilities/Powers:
    Uhm his abilities are flight, he is ably to fly due to controlling the wind fully around him, He is able to fly at a 20 to 25 meter hight with a speed of 25 km/per hour

    Name: Magic wind Palm
    Rank: D
    Type: Wind element, offensive
    Description:
    The user claps both their hands together, releasing a highly destructive tornado. its speed is 2 on a scale of 5 and it has a medium to wide range about to 15 - 20 meters depending on the blow of the wind around him, when there is no wind the magic will be 20 kmh but when there is wind it can fgo up to 23 kmph. The strenght of the tornade is very high, when it hits the ground it can send rubble and rocks flying everywhere. T

    Strengths:
    - The magic has a far range
    - The magic is easily used
    - The magic is strong against ice magic, when it comes in contact with it in battle it will win when the spells are of the same rank and if they ice spell is one rank above it <<< Just when it is of the same rank. It will not win if the ice spell is one rank above.
    Weaknesses:
    - it does not have much power
    - the spell doesn't keep going it just works for a few second and send a small hurricane
    - it has a cooldown period of 2 posts
    Move in the anime:


    Name: Storm Mail
    Rank: D
    Type: Wind element, Defensive
    Description:
    The user puts their arms in an "X" pattern in front of themselves, manipulating wind to spin around them until they are covered by an armor of wind. This armor does not only increase their defenses, but also augments their destructive power. This armor of wind constantly blows wind inside out. In the anime, the user creates a Magic Seal from a spinning object and covers their body in an armor of wind. It magic isnt very far, it is very short, and the speed allways go in winds. This spell stays on as long as a type it is weak against (fire or electricity) can stop it, when there is a level B <<< C spell spell or higher is used against it or until the user deactivates it, or three posts
    Strengths:
    - it is a very good defense, it can protect u against two D or one C
    - it can change the course of the wind that is blowing along you
    Weaknesses:
    - when you change the wind flow the mail breaks away
    - When something of electricity hits it, it can still break through it. <<< You may remove this
    - Fire can warm up the wind, and disperse it. <<< Add that fire spells may break through the Wind Mail and deal damage NEXT to dispersing it.
    - cooldown 4 posts

    Anime:

    Name: Storm Shred
    Rank: D
    Type: Wind element, offensive
    Description: While using Storm Mail, the user swings their arms in front of him, creating sharp blades of wind that attack the target with a lot of speed. The speed is a lot <<< It may move at around 20m/s (20 meters per second) and the and the range is medium and far 25 meters
    Strengths:
    - its strong
    - it can reach very far distances
    - the blades that are summoned are very sharp
    Weaknesses:
    - you have to have the storm mail active before you are able to use it
    - when you can stay in a far enough distance they will evaporate and you only feel a soft wind.
    - The cooldown if 4 posts

    Move in the anime:

    Name: Flight
    Rank: D
    Type: Wind Element supportive
    Description: Due to managing the winds all around he user he is able to levitate and even fly in a certain way. He controls the winds beneath him and around him to lift himself up and then fly by steering the winds to the left and right, it can range through very long distance, as far as the user wants too. He can use this spell for 2 posts
    Strengths:
    - makes it easier to dodge attacks
    - lets the user get more speed a <<< Add that this can make you move up to 40 kmh
    - the user can travel very far without depleting much magic energy (sorry this was a typo)
    Weaknesses:
    - when someone can get higher then him he can bring the user down
    - the flying can be easy avoided when the foe can control gravity


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    Ian's Wind magic Empty Re: Ian's Wind magic

    Post by Grizzly 26th January 2014, 6:37 am

    Approved


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