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    Flame Empress Magic

    Coco Winters
    Coco Winters

    Player 
    Lineage : Magician's Spirit
    Position : None
    Posts : 130
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 2,212

    Character Sheet
    First Magic:
    Second Magic:
    Third Magic:

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    Post by Coco Winters 10th October 2021, 6:15 pm

    Magic

    Magic Name: Flame Empress Magic
    Magic Type: Faith Primary 6 extra spell abilities) / Take-Over Auxiliary (15% more MP/HP)
    Description:
    Aurora wants to be an Imposing force on the battlefield.  She want people to know she is there and not to necessarily fear her but to make it known that this battlefield is hers.  She wants to use her power to bolster her allies morale and will. To her powers to light a fire in there souls so they can have faith in there selves and can push past there limits.  She will often push past her limits and fight to the end to keep everyone safe in body and mind.

    Aurora Constien uses her her magic in a very brawler like fashion while also burning the mana in thearea of her enemies to make herself more effective, she wants to get in and hit hard if possible.  She will use most her arsenal at point blank to make sure her effectiveness is maximized and to make sure her attacks hit. She used her takeover magic to get in close and deal damage but will launcher she spells while swinging. She is likely to press the attack as much as she can, while not being dumb about it.

    Unique Abilities:

    • Ability 1: All Fire based moves do 25% more Spell Damage/Durability
    • Ability 2:
    • Ability 3:


    Spells

    Signature Spells:
    Normal Spells :

    Advanced Spells :


    Last edited by Aurora Constein on 20th October 2021, 1:57 pm; edited 3 times in total
    Medeia
    Medeia

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    Faction : The Ironheart Pact
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    Guild : Errings Rising (Co-GM)
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    Experience : 5,869,392

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Lost Pharaoh's Curse God Slayer
    Second Magic: Medea's Fury God Slayer
    Third Magic: Fallen Angel Takeover

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    Post by Medeia 16th October 2021, 2:11 am

    Hey there, Med here to grade your magic. Before I get started with the smaller edits, there's one overarching comment that I need to make.

    You have one too many abilities in each of your takeover spells. The faith magic benefits allow you to have an extra effect in your abilities but they don't allow you to have extra abilities or spells like you have at the moment. It's one ability for partials and two for your full. Please remove one from each TO part and then edit the MP cost accordingly if necessary.

    With that out the way, you'll my find my other edits in blue.

    Magic:


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    Coco Winters
    Coco Winters

    Player 
    Lineage : Magician's Spirit
    Position : None
    Posts : 130
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 2,212

    Character Sheet
    First Magic:
    Second Magic:
    Third Magic:

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    Post by Coco Winters 20th October 2021, 1:58 pm

    bump
    Medeia
    Medeia

    Administrator- Moderator- Main Account- Mythical- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- 11 Sinner- Guild Master- Custom Slayer- God Slayer- Demon Slayer- Dark Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- Jewel Grinder- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Idolize- Unknown Powerhouse- Unknown Legend- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Over Achiever- Obligatory Beach Episode- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Taskmaster- Halloween job event participant - Rich- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Tertiary Magic- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- X-Mas Event Participant- Summer Special Participant- Have an Admin as a friend!- Player 
    Lineage : Sage of Transformation
    Position : Warlord of Lust
    Faction : The Ironheart Pact
    Posts : 4201
    Guild : Errings Rising (Co-GM)
    Cosmic Coins : 460
    Experience : 5,869,392

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Lost Pharaoh's Curse God Slayer
    Second Magic: Medea's Fury God Slayer
    Third Magic: Fallen Angel Takeover

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    Post by Medeia 24th October 2021, 3:55 am

    Round 2 of edits. Same colour as before.

    Magic:


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