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    Corset Of Asmodeus

    Lilynette
    Lilynette

    Player 
    Lineage : Knight of Swords
    Position : None
    Posts : 65
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Cosmic Coins : 50
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : -
    Experience : 2,080

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    Post by Lilynette 5th September 2020, 11:49 am

    Corset Of Asmodeus  400px-FEH_Camilla_Bewitching_Beauty_01
    Name:
    Corset of Asmodeus
    Grade:
    Weak
    Type:
    Armor
    Proof of Acquisition: 
    -
    Description:
    Long ago, when the demons of the underworld had greater access to the world of the living, a demon fell in love with a human girl. This demon was none other than Asmodeus, the keeper of lust. It was his first time ever falling in love; normally he only wished to fornicate with the beautiful and scratch his filthy itch, but this women was different. And with Asmodeus's advances, the woman grew to love him back. They were happy together, but he wasn't enough for her. The human woman eventually wanted more out of life, and set off to become a soldier. Asmodeus did not wish to prohibit her from following her lust for combat, but he couldn't stand to see the love of his eternal life die. So, he crafted her a suit of armor. Each piece baring a small portion of Asmodeus's lust for his lover, giving it magic power for the wearer to yield.

    Abilities:
    ❣ Durability of 50hp
    ❣ Asmodeus' Revenge

    Asmodeus' Revenge:

    Name:  Asmodeus' Revenge
    Rank: D
    MP Cost: -
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Burst
    Damage: 40hp.
    Range: 15 m
    Speed: 15 mps
    Duration: 1 post
    Downside: The wearer of the corset still takes full damage.
    Description: "Asmodeus' Revenge" is an offensive ability that can only be activated by the wearer once she has taken damage. After they have been struck by an enemies attack, the corset will begin to glow, allowing the user to send out a tennis ball sized orb in a straight line towards their attacker.  It isn't horribly accurate, and is pretty easy to dodge. It is mostly useful against melee attackers, and can only be done every so often (once per post at a max)


    Last edited by Lilynette on 6th September 2020, 10:11 am; edited 2 times in total
    Johann
    Johann

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    Second Magic: Consecration of War - Einherjar
    Third Magic: Maledict of War - Berserkir

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    Post by Johann 6th September 2020, 9:37 am

    Hello Lilynette, Joh here to grade your equipment. You will be able to find all of my edits in this color. If you have any questions, feel free to ask them in this thread and I will get back to you as soon as possible. Once the requested edits have been made, simply give me a bump and I will review this armor once more. That said, let's jump right into the grading.

    Spoiler:

    @Lilynette wrote:
    Corset Of Asmodeus  400px-FEH_Camilla_Bewitching_Beauty_01
    Name:
    Corset of Asmodeus
    Grade:
    Weak
    Type:
    Armor
    Proof of Acquisition: 
    -
    Description:
    Long ago, when the demons of the underworld had greater access to the world of the living, a demon fell in love with a human girl. This demon was none other than Asmodeus, the keeper of lust. It was his first time ever falling in love; normally he only wished to fornicate with the beautiful and scratch his filthy itch, but this women was different. And with Asmodeus's advances, the woman grew to love him back. They were happy together, but he wasn't enough for her. The human woman eventually wanted more out of life, and set off to become a soldier. Asmodeus did not wish to prohibit her from following her lust for combat, but he couldn't stand to see the love of his eternal life die. So, he crafted her a suit of armor. Each piece baring a small portion of Asmodeus's lust for his lover, giving it magic power for the wearer to yield.

    Abilities:
    ❣ Durability of 50hp
    ❣ Asmodeus' Revenge

    Asmodeus' Revenge:

    Name:  Asmodeus' Revenge
    Rank: D
    MP Cost: -
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Burst
    Damage: 10% of damage inflicted upon the user up to 2hp. (You cannot deal a set percentage of damage you received as damage to any would be attacker, as the damage you would be dealing would be scaling off of damage received, which makes this precedent potentially imbalanced. I must ask you to either rework this into a set amount of damage, following spell rules, or rework this into a drain effect that can burn 5% of a target's max HP once per post)
    Range: 15 m
    Speed: 15 mps
    Duration: Passive (As this is an Offensive ability, it cannot be passive, meaning that I must ask you to rework this into an active ability)
    Downside: The wearer of the corset still takes full damage.
    Description: Lovers Revenge" is a passive, offensive ability that works off of damage done to the wearer (See edit above). When ever something harms the user (takes away hp), a faint blue glow roughly the size of a marble will shoot out of the corset and fly a straight line in the direction that the hit came from. It isn't horribly accurate, and pretty easy to dodge. It is mostly useful against melee attackers.


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    Corset Of Asmodeus  Johannsiggies
    Lilynette
    Lilynette

    Player 
    Lineage : Knight of Swords
    Position : None
    Posts : 65
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Cosmic Coins : 50
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : -
    Experience : 2,080

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    Post by Lilynette 6th September 2020, 10:00 am

    Bump


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                                                                                                                           source credit to Kirinismywaifu
    Lilynette M. Drakus Her Closet
    Ruler of the 9 Rings
    Johann
    Johann

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- Mythical VIP Status- Demon VIP Status- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Mythical- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishval- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Custom Slayer- God Slayer- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- Eevee- EXP Grinder- Jewel Grinder- Job Creator- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Idolize- Unknown Powerhouse- Unknown Legend- The Completionist- Guild Creator- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Fan Art Contest Participant- Haiku Contest Participant- Lineage Making Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 6- Veteran Level 5- Veteran Level 4- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character Application Approved!- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Tertiary Magic- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 3rd Place Event/Contest Winner- Christmas Event Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Advertisement Achievement Badge- Tournament Participation Badge- Cookie Achievement- Cupcake Achievement- Rainbow Hero- Summer Special Tier 4- Summer Special Tier 3- Summer Special Tier 2- Summer Special Tier 1- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- 1 Year Anniversary- Player-
    Lineage : Herald of Destruction
    Position : God of Justice
    Posts : 9758
    Guild : Dies Irae - GM
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 29
    Experience : 3,108,432
    Brownie Points : ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Saga of War - Ragnarök
    Second Magic: Consecration of War - Einherjar
    Third Magic: Maledict of War - Berserkir

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    Post by Johann 6th September 2020, 10:06 am

    Just a couple more small tweaks and you'll be good to go! Same color

    Spoiler:
    @Lilynette wrote:
    Corset Of Asmodeus  400px-FEH_Camilla_Bewitching_Beauty_01
    Name:
    Corset of Asmodeus
    Grade:
    Weak
    Type:
    Armor
    Proof of Acquisition: 
    -
    Description:
    Long ago, when the demons of the underworld had greater access to the world of the living, a demon fell in love with a human girl. This demon was none other than Asmodeus, the keeper of lust. It was his first time ever falling in love; normally he only wished to fornicate with the beautiful and scratch his filthy itch, but this women was different. And with Asmodeus's advances, the woman grew to love him back. They were happy together, but he wasn't enough for her. The human woman eventually wanted more out of life, and set off to become a soldier. Asmodeus did not wish to prohibit her from following her lust for combat, but he couldn't stand to see the love of his eternal life die. So, he crafted her a suit of armor. Each piece baring a small portion of Asmodeus's lust for his lover, giving it magic power for the wearer to yield.

    Abilities:
    ❣ Durability of 50hp
    ❣ Asmodeus' Revenge

    Asmodeus' Revenge:

    Name:  Asmodeus' Revenge
    Rank: D
    MP Cost: -
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Burst
    Damage: 20hp. (You may increase this to 40 HP)
    Range: 15 m
    Speed: 15 mps
    Duration: Active (I must ask you to specify a duration in a given number of posts anywhere from 1 to 3 posts, as this is a D Rank ability)
    Downside: The wearer of the corset still takes full damage.
    Description: "Asmodeus' Revenge" is an offensive ability that can only be activated by the wearer once she has taken damage. After they have been struck by an enemies attack, the corset will begin to glow, allowing the user to send out a tennis ball sized orb in a straight line towards their attacker.  It isn't horribly accurate, and is pretty easy to dodge. It is mostly useful against melee attackers. (As this is a "Burst" type spell, please additionally clarify that this may only occur once per post max)


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    Corset Of Asmodeus  Johannsiggies
    Lilynette
    Lilynette

    Player 
    Lineage : Knight of Swords
    Position : None
    Posts : 65
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Cosmic Coins : 50
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : -
    Experience : 2,080

    Corset Of Asmodeus  Empty Re: Corset Of Asmodeus

    Post by Lilynette 6th September 2020, 10:12 am

    edited :)


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    Corset Of Asmodeus  6d1n2ap
                                                                                                                           source credit to Kirinismywaifu
    Lilynette M. Drakus Her Closet
    Ruler of the 9 Rings
    Johann
    Johann

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- Mythical VIP Status- Demon VIP Status- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Mythical- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishval- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Custom Slayer- God Slayer- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- Eevee- EXP Grinder- Jewel Grinder- Job Creator- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Idolize- Unknown Powerhouse- Unknown Legend- The Completionist- Guild Creator- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Fan Art Contest Participant- Haiku Contest Participant- Lineage Making Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 6- Veteran Level 5- Veteran Level 4- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character Application Approved!- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Tertiary Magic- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 3rd Place Event/Contest Winner- Christmas Event Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Advertisement Achievement Badge- Tournament Participation Badge- Cookie Achievement- Cupcake Achievement- Rainbow Hero- Summer Special Tier 4- Summer Special Tier 3- Summer Special Tier 2- Summer Special Tier 1- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- 1 Year Anniversary- Player-
    Lineage : Herald of Destruction
    Position : God of Justice
    Posts : 9758
    Guild : Dies Irae - GM
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 29
    Experience : 3,108,432
    Brownie Points : ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Saga of War - Ragnarök
    Second Magic: Consecration of War - Einherjar
    Third Magic: Maledict of War - Berserkir

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    Post by Johann 6th September 2020, 10:15 am

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    Spoiler:
    @Lilynette wrote:
    Corset Of Asmodeus  400px-FEH_Camilla_Bewitching_Beauty_01
    Name:
    Corset of Asmodeus
    Grade:
    Weak
    Type:
    Armor
    Proof of Acquisition: 
    -
    Description:
    Long ago, when the demons of the underworld had greater access to the world of the living, a demon fell in love with a human girl. This demon was none other than Asmodeus, the keeper of lust. It was his first time ever falling in love; normally he only wished to fornicate with the beautiful and scratch his filthy itch, but this women was different. And with Asmodeus's advances, the woman grew to love him back. They were happy together, but he wasn't enough for her. The human woman eventually wanted more out of life, and set off to become a soldier. Asmodeus did not wish to prohibit her from following her lust for combat, but he couldn't stand to see the love of his eternal life die. So, he crafted her a suit of armor. Each piece baring a small portion of Asmodeus's lust for his lover, giving it magic power for the wearer to yield.

    Abilities:
    ❣ Durability of 50hp
    ❣ Asmodeus' Revenge

    Asmodeus' Revenge:

    Name:  Asmodeus' Revenge
    Rank: D
    MP Cost: -
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Burst
    Damage: 40hp.
    Range: 15 m
    Speed: 15 mps
    Duration: 1 post
    Downside: The wearer of the corset still takes full damage.
    Description: "Asmodeus' Revenge" is an offensive ability that can only be activated by the wearer once she has taken damage. After they have been struck by an enemies attack, the corset will begin to glow, allowing the user to send out a tennis ball sized orb in a straight line towards their attacker.  It isn't horribly accurate, and is pretty easy to dodge. It is mostly useful against melee attackers, and can only be done every so often (once per post at a max)


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