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    Heart Of Darkness

    Raviel Rune
    Raviel Rune

    Player 
    Lineage : Reaping Darkness
    Position : None
    Posts : 83
    Guild : Onyx Moon
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Sol
    Experience : ‭1,893.75

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Dance of Steel
    Second Magic:
    Third Magic:

    Completed Heart Of Darkness

    Post by Raviel Rune on 27th September 2019, 2:36 pm

    Solitary Bond Magic


    Magic Name: Heart of Darkness
    Magic Type: Solitary Bond
    Pet: https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t39420-ahmiraav
    Description: This magic is the direct result of Raviel sharing his soul with his companion, to prevent his death. Through their deep connection, both Ahmirav and Raviel are capable of sharing abilities with eachoter and empower themselves to face and overcome any hurdle set on their path. Through the unity between the shadow and void elements a much stronger magic is produced.


    Lineage Benefits:
    https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t39106-reaping-darkness

    This magic gains:

    • Five additional spells independent of their magic (One for each rank capping at S).
    • Two additional signature spells that cap at S rank.
    • two additional advanced spells one capping at S+ and the other to H+.
    • No ability to heal himself or others by any magical means. As a trade off he gains 25 base damage to both his melee and magical damages.




    Unique abilities:

    Tough Hide:

    Controlling shadows is no easy feat. If done correctly though, can lead to incredible power.

    Passive Spell Damage Ability

    • User's pet's HP pool is raised by 25%, and is instead increased by 30% at A rank.



    Shadow Control:

    It's possible to bolster one's constitution with the appropriate training.

    Passive Buff Ability

    • User's pet's HP pool is raised by 25%, and is instead increased by 30% at A rank.



    Meld:

    Through their bond, Ahmirav and Raviel meld together shadow and void into a much powerful element!

    Passive Buff Ability (Locked until S-Rank)

    • Spells cast deal 30% extra Damage.
    • Spells cast have 30% increased Spell Speed.



    Last edited by Raviel Rune on 27th September 2019, 4:20 pm; edited 2 times in total


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    Heart Of Darkness TDx7Coh
    Raviel Rune
    Raviel Rune

    Player 
    Lineage : Reaping Darkness
    Position : None
    Posts : 83
    Guild : Onyx Moon
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Sol
    Experience : ‭1,893.75

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Dance of Steel
    Second Magic:
    Third Magic:

    Completed Re: Heart Of Darkness

    Post by Raviel Rune on 27th September 2019, 3:34 pm

    Signature Spells


    Name: Void Release
    Type: Passive Buff || Self
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: N/A
    Description: User's melee damage is increased by 45%. Value increases by 5% per rank up to 60% at S rank.

    Name: Shadow Release
    Type: Passive Buff || Self
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: N/A
    Description: User's pet's melee damage is increased by 45%. Value increases by 5% per rank up to 60% at S rank.

    Name: Darkness Release
    Type: Passive Buff || Self
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: N/A
    Description: User's speed and spell speed is increased by 22.5%. Value increases by 2.5% per rank up to 60% at S rank.

    Name: Power Up (A-Rank Lock)
    Type: Passive Buff || Self
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: N/A
    Description: User's spell damage is increased by 55%. Value increases by 5% per rank up to 60% at S rank.


    Name: Master's Finesse (H-Rank Lock)
    Type: Passive Buff || Self
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: N/A
    Description: User's pet's melee damage is increased by 60%.


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    Heart Of Darkness TDx7Coh
    Raviel Rune
    Raviel Rune

    Player 
    Lineage : Reaping Darkness
    Position : None
    Posts : 83
    Guild : Onyx Moon
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Sol
    Experience : ‭1,893.75

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Dance of Steel
    Second Magic:
    Third Magic:

    Completed Re: Heart Of Darkness

    Post by Raviel Rune on 27th September 2019, 3:57 pm

    D-Rank Spells

    Name: Mana Steal
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 40 HP
    Range: 60 m
    Speed: 60 m/s
    Duration: 3 Turns
    Description: After being hit, target loses 5% MP for the duration.



    C-Rank Spells

    Name: Life Steal
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 60 HP
    Range: 120 m
    Speed: 120 m/s
    Duration: 5 Turns
    Description: After being hit, target loses 5% HP for the duration.


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    Heart Of Darkness TDx7Coh
    Raviel Rune
    Raviel Rune

    Player 
    Lineage : Reaping Darkness
    Position : None
    Posts : 83
    Guild : Onyx Moon
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Sol
    Experience : ‭1,893.75

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Dance of Steel
    Second Magic:
    Third Magic:

    Completed Re: Heart Of Darkness

    Post by Raviel Rune on 27th September 2019, 4:03 pm

    B-Rank Spells

    Name: Attack Boost
    Type: Buff || Passive
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: N/A
    Description: User's melee damage is increased by 50%

    Name: Mana Pool Boost
    Type: Buff || Passive
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: N/A
    Description: MP is increased by 50%

    Name: Speed Boost
    Type: Buff || Passive
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: N/A
    Description: User's speed is increased by 50%

    Name: Pet Damage Boost
    Type: Buff || Passive
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: N/A
    Description: User's Pet Melee damage is increased by 50%

    Name: Pet Speed Boost
    Type: Buff || Passive
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: N/A
    Description: User's Pet spell speed is increased by 50%

    Name: Damage Up
    Type: Buff || Passive
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: N/A
    Description: User's melee damage is increased by 50%

    Name: Pet Power Up
    Type: Buff || Passive
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: N/A
    Description: User's Pet Melee damage is increased by 50%

    Name: Pet Strenght Up
    Type: Buff || Passive
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: N/A
    Description: User's Pet Melee damage is increased by 50%

    Name: Spellslinging
    Type: Buff || Passive
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: N/A
    Description: User's spell speed is increased by 50%

    Name: Spell Boost
    Type: Buff || Passive
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: N/A
    Description: User's spell damage is increased by 50%



    B-Rank Advanced Spells

    Name: Empowering Rift
    Type: Buff || Active
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: 8
    Description: User's melee damage is increased by 90%

    Name: Strength Invigoration
    Type: Buff || Active
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: 8
    Description: User's melee damage is increased by 90%

    Name: Inspire
    Type: Buff || Active
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: 8
    Description: User's pet's melee damage is increased by 90%

    Name: Cheer
    Type: Buff || Active
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: 8
    Description: User's pet's melee damage is increased by 90%

    Name: Spell Boost
    Type: Mobility Spell
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: 75 m/s
    Duration: 8
    Description: Target moves at burst spell speed for the duration.


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    Heart Of Darkness TDx7Coh
    Saraphina
    Saraphina

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    Lineage : Blizzard's Frostburn
    Position : None
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    Guild : Errings Rising - GM
    Cosmic Coins : 5
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 1,103,399

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Aspect of Divinity
    Second Magic:
    Third Magic:

    Completed Re: Heart Of Darkness

    Post by Saraphina on 9th October 2019, 11:37 am

    Hey Raviel! Sorry for the delay! You know me, I'll be your grader today. Please look out for this color for any edits and bump the thread when done. If you have any questions, you can dm me or ask in the thread ^^

    I'll start off with may you include the spell Category: section in your spells as per the Magic and Spells Template please ^^

    Spoiler:

    @Raviel Rune wrote:
    Solitary Bond Magic


    Magic Name: Heart of Darkness
    Magic Type: Solitary Bond
    Pet: https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t39420-ahmiraav
    Description: This magic is the direct result of Raviel sharing his soul with his companion, to prevent his death. Through their deep connection, both Ahmirav and Raviel are capable of sharing abilities with eachoter and empower themselves to face and overcome any hurdle set on their path. Through the unity between the shadow and void elements a much stronger magic is produced.


    Lineage Benefits:
    https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t39106-reaping-darkness

    This magic gains:

    • Five additional spells independent of their magic (One for each rank capping at S).
    • Two additional signature spells that cap at S rank.
    • two additional advanced spells one capping at S+ and the other to H+.
    • No ability to heal himself or others by any magical means. As a trade off he gains 25 base damage to both his melee and magical damages.




    Unique abilities:

    Tough Hide:

    Controlling shadows is no easy feat. If done correctly though, can lead to incredible power.

    Passive Spell Damage Ability

    • User's pet's HP pool is raised by 25%, and is instead increased by 30% at A rank.



    Shadow Control:

    It's possible to bolster one's constitution with the appropriate training.

    Passive Buff Ability

    • User's pet's HP pool is raised by 25%, and is instead increased by 30% at A rank.



    Meld:

    Through their bond, Ahmirav and Raviel meld together shadow and void into a much powerful element!

    Passive Buff Ability (Locked until S-Rank)

    • Spells cast deal 30% extra Damage.
    • Spells cast have 30% increased Spell Speed.

    Can you change this please? ^^ Buffs have to apply to a character and cannot be applied to single spells directly

    @Raviel Rune wrote:
    Signature Spells

    Passive Buff is not a spell Type. Please change these spell types accordingly to Single Target, Multiple Target, Area of Effect, or Burst.

    Name: Void Release
    Type: Passive Buff || Self
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: N/A
    Description: User's melee damage is increased by 45%. Value increases by 5% per rank up to 60% at S rank.

    Name: Shadow Release
    Type: Passive Buff || Self
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: N/A
    Description: User's pet's melee damage is increased by 45%. Value increases by 5% per rank up to 60% at S rank.

    Name: Darkness Release
    Type: Passive Buff || Self
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: N/A
    Description: User's speed and spell speed is increased by 22.5%. Value increases by 2.5% per rank up to 60% at S rank. Please round down the buff. When you have a decimal in your calculations, you round down to the closest number ^^

    Name: Power Up (A-Rank Lock)
    Type: Passive Buff || Self
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: N/A
    Description: User's spell damage is increased by 55%. Value increases by 5% per rank up to 60% at S rank.


    Name: Master's Finesse (H-Rank Lock)
    Type: Passive Buff || Self
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: N/A
    Description: User's pet's melee damage is increased by 60%.

    @Raviel Rune wrote:
    D-Rank Spells

    Name: Mana Steal
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 40 HP
    Range: 60 m
    Speed: 60 m/s
    Duration: 3 Turns
    Description: After being hit, target loses 5% MP for the duration. Please include a way that this spell is casted and how it's inflicted on opponents.



    C-Rank Spells

    Name: Life Steal
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 60 HP
    Range: 120 m
    Speed: 120 m/s
    Duration: 5 Turns
    Description: After being hit, target loses 5% HP for the duration. See previous note.

    @Raviel Rune wrote:
    B-Rank Spells
    With the amount of normal spells you have, you are only permitted 3 Passive normal spells at current as per the 1/4 Passive Spells allowed. Please rework 7 of the normal B rank spells. Buffs are also not a spell Type again. Please fix this accordingly to the appropriate spell Types.

    Name: Attack Boost
    Type: Buff || Passive
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: N/A
    Description: User's melee damage is increased by 50%

    Name: Mana Pool Boost
    Type: Buff || Passive
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: N/A
    Description: MP is increased by 50%

    Name: Speed Boost
    Type: Buff || Passive
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: N/A
    Description: User's speed is increased by 50%

    Name: Pet Damage Boost
    Type: Buff || Passive
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: N/A
    Description: User's Pet Melee damage is increased by 50%

    Name: Pet Speed Boost
    Type: Buff || Passive
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: N/A
    Description: User's Pet spell speed is increased by 50%

    Name: Damage Up
    Type: Buff || Passive
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: N/A
    Description: User's melee damage is increased by 50%

    Name: Pet Power Up
    Type: Buff || Passive
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: N/A
    Description: User's Pet Melee damage is increased by 50%

    Name: Pet Strenght Up
    Type: Buff || Passive
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: N/A
    Description: User's Pet Melee damage is increased by 50%

    Name: Spellslinging
    Type: Buff || Passive
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: N/A
    Description: User's spell speed is increased by 50%

    Name: Spell Boost
    Type: Buff || Passive
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: N/A
    Description: User's spell damage is increased by 50%



    B-Rank Advanced Spells

    Please still include a range and speed for the buffs. Also see previous note on buffs and spell Types. You also have one too many B+ spells. You can have two max from normal magic, and the two from your lineage, which leaves an extra one. Please make one a C+ spell.

    Name: Empowering Rift
    Type: Buff || Active
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: 8
    Description: User's melee damage is increased by 90%

    Name: Strength Invigoration
    Type: Buff || Active
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: 8
    Description: User's melee damage is increased by 90%

    Name: Inspire
    Type: Buff || Active
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: 8
    Description: User's pet's melee damage is increased by 90%

    Name: Cheer
    Type: Buff || Active
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: 8
    Description: User's pet's melee damage is increased by 90%

    Name: Spell Boost
    Type: Mobility Spell Please also state that this is a Burst type spell.
    Damage: N/A
    Range: N/A Please include burst rank range.
    Speed: 75 m/s
    Duration: 8
    Description: Target moves at burst spell speed for the duration. Please specify that the target can only move a distance of 75 meters at the spell speed per post max.


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