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    All For One:Prime Ape Evolution

    Tunka1994
    Tunka1994

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    Post by Tunka1994 on 24th September 2019, 8:33 am

    All For One

    Magic Name: All For One
    Magic Type: Take Over
    Description: The power of a Saint could rival even the gods. Only so many will be chosen as a vessel to have such a gift. This power will allow the user to go beyond what he deems necessary might.The take over was created to stop a rampaging God so long ago. A magic that uses the spirit yet has no magic type. This is the power of the strongest creature The Prime Ape.

    Each takeover is upgraded version of the last. Even if he changed looks or not the user will still be a power up version to be a force of might. He is able to use all elements but more or least his soul itself. He is able to use his souls force to obtain even more power in the heat of the moment to slay the darkness away. He will become faster stronger even more malice if need be. Meet All For One. The moon very on creature.

    Benefits: User gains Mp 10% Mp back every post

    Unique Abilities:

    • Ability: Gains 15% Mp and Hp back after Leaving a Takeover-D
    • Ability: Takeover cost 50% to cast-B
    • Ability:


    [u]Spells:

    Name: Super Saint
    Rank: D
    Type: Part Takeover
    Melee Damage:
    Range: 60 meter
    Speed: 60 mps
    Duration: 3
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Using 10% of the user soul.The user transform into his part take over Saint Saint. As his soul unleash his very spirit. His hair will turn pure gold as even lighting will form around him. The user has dubbed this Super Ssint 1. The user will gain 15% buff in magic and melee attacks and a 10% buff in speed.
    Abilities:

    Ability 1:

    Name: Spirit Wave
    Rank: D
    Category: Offense
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 40Hp
    Range: 60 meters
    Speed: 60 mps
    Duration: 3
    Downside: N/A
    Description:  Gathering his magic and spirit energy the user will fire of a beam of pure destruction at his target. Made out of his spirit and magic.

    Ability 2 (Only for Full Take Overs):

    Name: Super Kai Punch
    Rank: D
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Burst
    Damage: 40hp
    Range: 15 meters
    Speed: 15mps
    Duration: 1
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Summoning the Prime Ape might. The user will lunch at his target. Just as his image appears to the target as a great ape of mighty size. The user will try to land a might punch of pure power on his target.

    Buff: The user can gain 10% hp and mp per post and take over forms.

    Spoiler:

    Name: Instant Transmission
    Rank: D
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: N/A
    Range: 60m
    Speed: 60mps + 20% buff
    Duration: 3
    Downside: N/A
    Description: The user will move like he teleported to a new location with in range of 60 meters. This will also give him a 20% buff to speed.


    Name: Moon Light version 1
    Rank: D
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: AOE
    Damage: N/A
    Range: 30 Meters
    Speed: 15 mps
    Duration: 3
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Using his inner prime soul the user will create a small moon. Which stands at 20 feet tall and wide. This moon will then empower the users to his fullest at his current rank. Gaining 10% speed and physical attack buff. This will also trigger his prime take over great ape mode.

    Name: Great Ape
    Rank: D+
    Type: Partial Take Over
    Melee Damage: 60hp
    Range: 90 meters
    Speed: 90 mps
    Duration: 5
    Downside: Tye user tail is cut off
    Description: The user turns into a 100 foot tall Grat ape of legend Prime Ape. Thanks to the power of the moon he will become a near unstoppable force of nature.
    Abilities:

    Ability 1:

    Name: Prime
    Rank: D+
    Category: Auxiliary ( Passive )
    Type: Take Over
    Damage:
    Range: 90m
    Speed: 90mps
    Duration: 5
    Downside: N/A
    Description: The take form of the user becomes more powerful by post. Gaining 5% to both melee and physical attacks. Stopping at post 3 where he will have reached his percentage max.

    Ability 2 (Only for Full Take Overs):

    Name: special beam cannon
    Rank: D+
    Category: Offensive
    Type: AOE
    Damage: 30hp
    Range: 45m
    Speed: 25mps
    Duration: 2
    Downside: N/A
    Description: The user in take over from will fire off a giant energy beam at his targets area. Hoping to strike them I a blind rage.

    Buff: the user gains a 15% range boost and a 5% speed boost.


    Last edited by Tunka1994 on 7th October 2019, 9:57 am; edited 4 times in total
    Tunka1994
    Tunka1994

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    Post by Tunka1994 on 5th October 2019, 10:52 am

    Spoiler:

    Name: Super Saint 2
    Rank: C+
    Type: partial Take Over
    Melee Damage: 30
    Range: 100 meters
    Speed: 120mps
    Duration: 6
    Downside: N/A
    Description: The user unleashes the inner Prime ape spirit even more so. This time becoming a even more powerful form of a creature. The God Warning Super Saint 2. His hair His hair becomes even more so spiky as his muscle made increases. His aura will leash out as will lightening.
    Abilities:

    Ability 1:

    Name: Super Kai Fist X10
    Rank: C+
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Single target
    Damage: N/A
    Range:  120 meters
    Speed: 120 mps
    Duration: 5
    Downside: N/A
    Description: The user gains melee buff by 20% and speed buff by 20%

    Ability 2 (Only for Full Take Overs):

    Name: Super Kai Fist ×10 Assault
    Rank: C
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 40Hp
    Range: 120 meters
    Speed: 120 mps
    Duration: 3
    Downside: N/A
    Description: The user will lunch an assult at his Target. Punching them in the face then upper cut them into the air. Then he will jump up to hit them down with all his might. Using both his hands he will knock the target back down. A 15%

    Buff: gains 5% more in each Passive once ho reaches half.


    Name: Prime
    Rank: C
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Passive
    Description: Increase physical damage by 45%

    b]Name:[/b] Prime
    Rank: C
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Passive
    Description: Increase magical damage by 45%

    b]Name:[/b] Prime Speed
    Rank: C
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Passive
    Description: Increase movement speed by 45%
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    Post by Johann Today at 3:40 am

    Joh here to grade this magic, all edits in this color

    Spoiler:
    @Tunka1994 wrote:All For One

    Magic Name: All For One
    Magic Type: Take Over (Please specify a benefit level for this magic, i.e. Solitary, Primary, or Auxiliary)
    Description: The power of a Saint could rival even the gods. Only so many will be chosen as a vessel to have such a gift. This power will allow the user to go beyond what he deems necessary might.The take over was created to stop a rampaging God so long ago. A magic that uses the spirit yet has no magic type. This is the power of the strongest creature The Prime Ape.

    Each takeover is upgraded version of the last. Even if he changed looks or not the user will still be a power up version to be a force of might. He is able to use all elements but more or least his soul itself. He is able to use his souls force to obtain even more power in the heat of the moment to slay the darkness away. He will become faster stronger even more malice if need be. Meet All For One. The moon very on creature.

    Benefits: User gains Mp 10% Mp back every post (This is not the correct benefit even for a solitary Take Over magic. Please remove this entirely)

    Unique Abilities:

    • Ability: Gains 15% Mp and Hp back after Leaving a Takeover-D (Both MP and HP regen caps at 5% per ability, so I must ask you to lower both from 15% to 5%. Please also specify that this ability can only be activated once per post max)
    • Ability: Takeover cost 50% to cast-B
    • Ability:


    [u]Spells:

    Name: Super Saint
    Rank: D
    Type: Part Takeover
    Melee Damage: (Please specify a value for the take over's melee damage. If you wish for the take over to forfeit it's melee damage specify "N/a")
    Range: 60 meter (Take Overs use burst ranges and speeds for their natural melee attacks. As such, I must ask you to lower this to 15 meters)
    Speed: 60 mps (Please lower this to 15 mps)
    Duration: 3
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Using 10% of the user soul.The user transform into his part take over Saint Saint. As his soul unleash his very spirit. His hair will turn pure gold as even lighting will form around him. The user has dubbed this Super Ssint 1. The user will gain 15% buff in magic and melee attacks and a 10% buff in speed. (You cannot buff stats in the description of a take over. This is reserved for the Take Over's own buff or it's abilities. Please remove this)
    Abilities:

    Ability 1:

    Name: Spirit Wave
    Rank: D
    Category: Offense
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 40Hp
    Range: 60 meters
    Speed: 60 mps
    Duration: 3
    Downside: N/A
    Description:  Gathering his magic and spirit energy the user will fire of a beam of pure destruction at his target. Made out of his spirit and magic.

    (As the spoiler already suggests, only FULL Take Overs get a second ability. As such, I must ask you to remove one of the two abilities)
    Ability 2 (Only for Full Take Overs):

    Name: Super Kai Punch
    Rank: D
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Burst
    Damage: 40hp
    Range: 15 meters
    Speed: 15mps
    Duration: 1
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Summoning the Prime Ape might. The user will lunch at his target. Just as his image appears to the target as a great ape of mighty size. The user will try to land a might punch of pure power on his target.

    Buff: The user can gain 10% hp and mp per post and take over forms. (This is not a buff, but a regeneration effect. The buff benefit for take over spells is exclusively limited to conventional stat increases, and as such I must ask you to change this to an actual buff)

    Spoiler:

    (All of these spells appear like caster-type spells. Since your magic type appears to be Solitary take over, I must ask you to either rework these spells into take over spells, remove them entirely, or add a magic type that allows for the use of caster-type spells (Caster, Ancient, Lost, Holder, Bond) to your magic in at least an Auxiliary benefit)

    Name: Instant Transmission
    Rank: D
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: N/A
    Range: 60m
    Speed: 60mps + 20% buff (Speed increases do not increase the speed of spells. Please remove the +20%)
    Duration: 3
    Downside: N/A
    Description: The user will move like he teleported to a new location with in range of 60 meters. This will also give him a 20% buff to speed. (Only Burst type spells may possess teleport efrects. Subsequently, I must ask you to change this spell and all associated values to a "Burst" type spell if you wish to retain the teleport effect)


    Name: Moon Light version 1
    Rank: D
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: AOE
    Damage: N/A
    Range: 30 Meters
    Speed: 15 mps
    Duration: 3
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Using his inner prime soul the user will create a small moon. Which stands at 20 feet tall and wide. This moon will then empower the users to his fullest at his current rank. Gaining 10% speed and physical attack buff. This will also trigger his prime take over great ape mode.

    Name: Great Ape
    Rank: D+
    Type: Partial Take Over
    Melee Damage: 60hp (The max damage for a D+ partial take over is 7 HP, so I must ask you to lower this accordingly)
    Range: 90 meters (Please lower this to 25 meters)
    Speed: 90 mps (Please lower this to 25 mps)
    Duration: 5
    Downside: Tye user tail is cut off
    Description: The user turns into a 100 foot tall Grat ape of legend Prime Ape. Thanks to the power of the moon he will become a near unstoppable force of nature.
    Abilities:

    Ability 1:

    Name: Prime
    Rank: D+
    Category: Auxiliary ( Passive )
    Type: Take Over (This ability still requires a valid spell type, i.e Single Target, Multi Target, AoE or Burst. Passive abilities are, in general, Burst type spells)
    Damage:
    Range: 90m
    Speed: 90mps
    Duration: 5 (If this ability is passive it shouldn't possess a duration and simply last as long as the take over is active)
    Downside: N/A
    Description: The take form of the user becomes more powerful by post. Gaining 5% to both melee and physical attacks. Stopping at post 3 where he will have reached his percentage max.

    (Only FULL Take Overs get a second ability. As such, I must ask you to remove one of the two abilities)
    Ability 2 (Only for Full Take Overs):

    Name: special beam cannon
    Rank: D+
    Category: Offensive
    Type: AOE
    Damage: 30hp
    Range: 45m
    Speed: 25mps
    Duration: 2
    Downside: N/A
    Description: The user in take over from will fire off a giant energy beam at his targets area. Hoping to strike them I a blind rage.

    Buff: the user gains a 15% range boost and a 5% speed boost.

    @Tunka1994 wrote:
    Spoiler:

    Name: Super Saint 2
    Rank: C+
    Type: partial Take Over
    Melee Damage: 30 (The max damage for a C+ partial take over is 18 HP, so I must ask you to lower this accordingly)
    Range: 100 meters (Please lower this to 45 meters)
    Speed: 120mps (Please lower this to 45 mps)
    Duration: 6
    Downside: N/A
    Description: The user unleashes the inner Prime ape spirit even more so. This time becoming a even more powerful form of a creature. The God Warning Super Saint 2. His hair His hair becomes even more so spiky as his muscle made increases. His aura will leash out as will lightening.
    Abilities:

    Ability 1:

    Name: Super Kai Fist X10
    Rank: C+
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Single target
    Damage: N/A
    Range:  120 meters
    Speed: 120 mps
    Duration: 5
    Downside: N/A
    Description: The user gains melee buff by 20% and speed buff by 20%

    (Only FULL Take Overs get a second ability. As such, I must ask you to remove one of the two abilities)
    Ability 2 (Only for Full Take Overs):

    Name: Super Kai Fist ×10 Assault
    Rank: C
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 40Hp
    Range: 120 meters
    Speed: 120 mps
    Duration: 3
    Downside: N/A
    Description: The user will lunch an assult at his Target. Punching them in the face then upper cut them into the air. Then he will jump up to hit them down with all his might. Using both his hands he will knock the target back down. A 15% (The description seems to cut off here, please clarify this for me. Further, please also clarify the damage in relation to the amount of attacks in this description. Does every hit deal the abilities damage? If this is the case, I must ask you to lower the damage for each strike so that all strikes combined do not exceed a maximum of 90 HP in damage)

    Buff: gains 5% more in each Passive once ho reaches half. (You cannot increase the potency of other buffs through a buff. Please change this to a definitive stat increase to one or more stats)

    (At current you possess 6 regular spell slots, meaning you can only make 1/4th of these spell slots passives. At current, the maximum number of spells you could turn into passives would be 1, so I must ask you to rework two of the passive spells below into active spells)

    Name: Prime
    Rank: C
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Passive
    Description: Increase physical damage by 45%

    b]Name:[/b] Prime
    Rank: C
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Passive
    Description: Increase magical damage by 45%

    b]Name:[/b] Prime Speed
    Rank: C
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Passive
    Description: Increase movement speed by 45%


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