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    Stars of Destiny

    Stelar
    Stelar

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    Guild : Rune Knights
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    Age : 24
    Experience : 150

    Completed Stars of Destiny

    Post by Stelar on Sat 7 Sep - 8:44

    Magic




    Stars of Destiny N7UfQOD

    Magic Name: Stars of Destiny
    Magic Type: Caster Magic (Solitary)
    Description:
    Since the ancient times, stars is used as the indicator for phenomenon that is happening around the world. People believed that stars formation contains mystical properties and they started to study about the stars formation. They found out that stars formation does have mystical properties and can cause different phenomenon according to how stars are arranged in a formation. Then they replicate this by using magic energy ball that acts as the substitute to stars, and they are surprised to find that it worked albeit not the same as the real stars, the magic balls that is arranged in formations causes a lot of different things to happen. They named this magic Stars of Destiny. This magic revolves around spawning balls of light that acts as stars, these balls can be used to attack enemies directly or be arranged to a formation to cause various different effects.

    Unique Abilities:

    • Star Force:
      Boost the Mana Regeneration rate of the user of this magic to 5% per post.


    Spells:

    Normal Spell:


    Shield of Aries:

    Name: Shield of Aries
    Rank: D
    Category: Defensive
    Type: Single Target
    Durability: 120HP
    Range: 60m
    Speed: 60m/s
    Duration: Until the Shield HP is gone / 3 Post
    Downside: Can only protect the target from one direction.
    Description:
    The user creates balls of light and then arranged it to make Aries Constellation in front of the target, then a magic circle will appear and a golden shield that resembles the head of a ram will appear in front of target.

    Claws of Cancer:

    Name: Claws of Cancer
    Rank: D
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Single Target
    Debuff: 50% Speed
    Range: 60m
    Speed: 60m/s
    Duration: 3 Post / Until the Target negate the speed debuff
    Description:
    The user creates balls of light and then arranged it to make Cancer Constellation below the Target, then a magic circle will appear below the target and from inside the magic circle two golden crab claws will emerge and both claws will pinch the target slowing down their movement. If the target manages to negate the speed debuff or managed to buff their speed more than the debuff, then they will manage to escape from the clutch of the claws, when the target manages to escape the claw clutch it disintegrates together with the magic circle.

    Charge of Taurus:


    Name: Charge of Taurus
    Rank: D
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 40HP
    Range: 60m
    Speed: 60m/s
    Duration: 1 Post
    Downside: Can only charge into one direction that is the direction which the caster is facing.
    Description:
    The user creates balls of light then arranges it to make Taurus Constellation, then a magical circle will appear and from the inside of the magic circle a golden bull will rush out forward crashing into the target, if it didn't hit anyone it will continue charging forward before disintegrating after it reached maximum range.


    Torrent of Aquarius:


    Name: Torrent of Aquarius
    Rank: C
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 60HP
    Range: 120m
    Speed: 120m/s
    Duration: 1 Post
    Downside: Can only creates a torrent of water towards the direction the magic circle is facing.
    Description:
    The user creates balls of light then arranges it to make Aquarius Constellation Constellation, then a magical circle will appear and from the inside of the magic circle a torrent of water will come smashing towards the direction the magic circle is facing, knocking the target towards opposite direction.


    Bow of Sagittarius:


    Name: Bow of Sagittarius
    Rank: C
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 60HP
    Range: 120m
    Speed: 120m/s
    Duration: 5 Post / Until the non dominant hand is not clenched anymore
    Downside:
    Description: the user have to constantly clench their non dominant fist as if it's holding a bow, if the hand is unclenched, the magic circle will disappear.
    The user creates small balls of light that gathers on the user non dominant hand then arranges it to make Sagittarius Constellation, then a small magical circle will appear in front of the clenched hand and it will behave as a bow. Using the dominant hand, the user makes a motion as if they are pulling an arrow and releasing it, an arrow will launch from the insides of the magical circle towards the target.

    Cloak of Chamaeleon:


    Name: Cloak of Chamaeleon
    Rank: C
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Multiple Target
    Damage: 0HP
    Range: 95m
    Speed: 65m/s
    Duration: 5 Post / Until the cloaked target is hit
    Downside: This spell only provides visual cloaking, thus if someone can detects presence or the sounds the user make, they will still be found out.
    Description:
    The user creates balls of light then arranges it to make Chamaeleon Constellation, then a magical circle will appear and the magical circle will pass through the targets as if it's scanning them once the scanning process is finished, the targets will blend with the background and be invinsible to the eyes. Aside from a person, the cloak also works on spell, so if a spell or magic circle passes through the scanning of this spell it will also gain visual cloaking until it hits the target.



    Advanced Spell:

    Stardust Revolution:

    Name: Stardust Revolution
    Rank: D+
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Multiple Target
    Damage: 45HP
    Range: 68m
    Speed: 45m/s
    Duration: Instant
    Downside: The User needs to charge this move for 1 post.
    Description:
    The user creates 5 balls of light then suspend them around themselves, then the user charges the balls of light while rotating them. After 1 post has passed the user raised their right hand making the balls of light rotates aboves their right hand, then the user swings their right hand forward, making the rotating balls of light shoots out towards multiple enemies, the light balls also have homing properties so it will track the specified target down until it hits something. The ball of lights will explode once it made contact with something.


    Signature Spell:

    Galaxian Explosion:

    Name: Galaxian Explosion
    Rank: User Ranked
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Burst
    Damage: User Ranked
    Range: User Ranked
    Speed: User Ranked
    Duration: Once per post
    Downside: Due to the sheer force of this spell, it's hardly impossible to leave the environment unscathed.
    Description:
    Stelar spreads his arms and gathers the balls of light to form the 12 major constellations behind him, then the stars of each constellation will merge and forms a small sun totalling on 12 small sun then detonates them, sending the influx of destructive power at his intended targets. Upon impact the blast explodes, engulfing anyone within the radius in the explosion. Although the spell reaches further cosmetically, opponents will only get damage when within burst range of the user's rank. They can however be sent flying until the very edges of said range. Visually the spell looks like suns came crashing down towards the target.


    Last edited by Stelar on Sun 22 Sep - 1:47; edited 1 time in total
    MarkusEldridge
    MarkusEldridge

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    Completed Re: Stars of Destiny

    Post by MarkusEldridge on Thu 19 Sep - 16:41

    Hey there! Markus here once more, I will be grading your magic this time around. All of my comments will be in this color!
    Let me start with saying I am sorry for the super late grading, being sick and super unexpectedly busy.

    Spoiler:

    @Stelar wrote:
    Magic




    Stars of Destiny N7UfQOD

    Magic Name: Stars of Destiny
    Magic Type: Caster Magic (Solitary)
    Description:
    Since the ancient times, stars is used as the indicator for phenomenon that is happening around the world. People believed that stars formation contains mystical properties and they started to study about the stars formation. They found out that stars formation does have mystical properties and can cause different phenomenon according to how stars are arranged in a formation. Then they replicate this by using magic energy ball that acts as the substitute to stars, and they are surprised to find that it worked albeit not the same as the real stars, the magic balls that is arranged in formations causes a lot of different things to happen. They named this magic Stars of Destiny. This magic revolves around spawning balls of light that acts as stars, these balls can be used to attack enemies directly or be arranged to a formation to cause various different effects.

    Unique Abilities:

    • Star Force:
      Boost the Mana Regeneration rate of the user of this magic to 5% per post.


    Spells:

    Normal Spell:


    Shield of Aries:

    Name: Shield of Aries
    Rank: D
    Category: Defensive
    Type: Single Target
    Durability: 40HP {Durability is 3x so this would be 120}
    Range: 60m
    Speed: 60m/s
    Duration: Until the Shield HP is gone / 3 Post
    Downside: Can only protect the target from one direction.
    Description:
    The user creates balls of light and then arranged it to make Aries Constellation in front of the target, then a magic circle will appear and a golden shield that resembles the head of a ram will appear in front of target.

    Claws of Cancer:

    Name: Claws of Cancer
    Rank: D
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Single Target
    Debuff: 50% Speed
    Range: 60m
    Speed: 60m/s
    Duration: 3 Post / Until the Target negate the speed debuff
    Description:
    The user creates balls of light and then arranged it to make Cancer Constellation below the Target, then a magic circle will appear below the target and from inside the magic circle two golden crab claws will emerge and both claws will pinch the target slowing down their movement. If the target manages to negate the speed debuff or managed to buff their speed more than the debuff, then they will manage to escape from the clutch of the claws, when the target manages to escape the claw clutch it disintegrates together with the magic circle.

    Charge of Taurus:


    Name: Charge of Taurus
    Rank: D
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 40HP
    Range: 60m
    Speed: 60m/s
    Duration: Instant {only burst effects can be instant, this would be 1}
    Downside: Can only charge into one direction that is the direction which the caster is facing.
    Description:
    The user creates balls of light then arranges it to make Taurus Constellation, then a magical circle will appear and from the inside of the magic circle a golden bull will rush out forward crashing into the target, if it didn't hit anyone it will continue charging forward before disintegrating after it reached maximum range.



    Advanced Spell:

    Stardust Revolution:

    Name: Stardust Revolution
    Rank: D+
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Multiple Target
    Damage: 45HP
    Range: 68m
    Speed: 45m/s
    Duration: Instant
    Downside: The User needs to charge this move for 1 post.
    Description:
    The user creates 5 balls of light then suspend them around themselves, then the user charges the balls of light while rotating them. After 1 post has passed the user raised their right hand making the balls of light rotates aboves their right hand, then the user swings their right hand forward, making the rotating balls of light shoots out towards multiple enemies, the light balls also have homing properties so it will track the specified target down until it hits something. The ball of lights will explode once it made contact with something.


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    Stelar
    Stelar

    Player 
    Lineage : Gold Rush
    Position : None
    Posts : 22
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 24
    Experience : 150

    Completed Re: Stars of Destiny

    Post by Stelar on Sun 22 Sep - 1:49

    Poke @MarkusEldridge, Fixed the Durability of the Shield and the Duration of the Charge of Taurus

    I also added 3 C Rank spells and 1 Signature, I don't know if it's allowed but if it isn't you can grade it later. Thank you very much!


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