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    Nature's Blessed Gift

    Lily Ambrosia
    Lily Ambrosia

    Player 
    Lineage : Nature's Child
    Position : None
    Posts : 94
    Guild : Rakshasa
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : N/A
    Experience : 2,300

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Nature's Blessed Gift
    Second Magic: Gaia's Duality
    Third Magic:

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    Post by Lily Ambrosia on 24th August 2019, 6:31 pm

    Magic

    Magic Name: Nature's Blessed Gift
    Magic Type: Slayer
    Slayer Benefits:
    • +25% Strength, Speed, HP.
    • Greatly enhanced Hearing, Sight, and Smell.
    • Ability to Consume Magic of same element for MP as well as the Force Ability.
    • Resistance to their slayer element based on strength of spell/ability as follows:
      • 2 Ranks Above Character: 0%
      • 1 Rank Above Character: 10%
      • Same Rank as Character: 25%
      • 1 Rank below Character: 35%
      • 2 Ranks below character: 50%

    Proof of Ownership: The Trading Hub, Page 13, Post n°310

    Description: Nature's Blessed Gift is the magical manifestation of the essence of nature. It entails the controlling of the environment to create the ideal conditions for life to prosper, and then to control that life as well. The owner of this magic is blessed with a strong connection to the world around them, allowing them to move water and soil and plantlife freely. Along with the ability to control those three aspects of the natural world those who obtain this magic almost always also gain a strong affinity for healing and rejuvenation. While this magic excels at protecting and nurturing life those with the aptitude, creativity and will can also turn it into a dreadful weapon against anyone who would harm the wilds. The name Nature's Blessed Gift comes from the fact that this magic, unlike many which can be learned and trained, can only be received as a gift from the world itself.

    As a dryad Lily's usage of this magic is a bit different from that of a human or another civilized species. Being a spirit of nature the lachrima which would bestow this magic upon the owner functions as her heart, and her entire body could be considered an extension of the lachrima. She feels the world around her as if an extension of herself, and moves it with the same level of ease. Within mere seconds she can make a seed grow into a tree following whatever shape she wishes it to possess. The combination of such versatile control of the environment with potent supportive magic makes facing the dryad a challenge of endurance that many would-be opponents would rather avoid. Aside from rearranging the area to the benefit of herself and her allies and the near endless stream of healing Lily can also deliver devastating attacks, unleashing earthquakes and tsunamis and deadly plants which produce clouds of poison or strangle the life out of her enemies.

    Unique Abilities:
    • Adaptation: Lily's powers change depending on what's best suited for the situation. If she firsts casts an offensive spell at the start of her post she gains a 50% buff to spell damage for that round, and if she firsts casts a supportive spell at the start of her post she gains a 50% buff to spell healing for that round. If she doesn't cast any spells during a post the buff from the previous round carries over for ongoing effects.
    • Overheal: Lily's healing abilities are powerful enough that they often overflow. Her spell healing is increased by 50% and if she heals someone for more health than they're missing the excess healing is passed along to the nearest ally within ranked burst range (capped at S-Rank). This effect will repeat itself until there's either no excess healing left or there's no allies within range.

    Passive Abilities:
    • B-Rank: Mana Cost -50%
    • B-Rank: Spell Damage +50%


    Spells:
    Signature Spells:
    Life Surge:
    Name: Life Surge
    Rank: B
    Category: Supportive
    Type: Single Target
    Healing: 80 HP
    Range: 200 Meters
    Speed: 200 m/s
    Duration: 1 Round
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily rejuvenates one ally with a surge of life force, healing them for the spell's healing.
    D-Rank Spells:
    C-Rank Spells:
    B-Rank Spells:
    Entangle:
    Name: Entangle
    Rank: D
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Area of Effect
    Damage: 40 HP
    Range: 60 Meters
    Radius: 40 Meters
    Speed: 50 m/s
    Duration: 6 Rounds
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily sends waves of life force and magic throughout the ground to give rise to a tangle of vines which will try to latch onto all enemies within the area. The vines deal the spell's damage to all enemies hit that round and slow them by 60%. Once the tangle is fully grown touching it is enough to be hit.
    Gardener:
    Name: Gardener
    Rank: B
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Burst
    Damage: N/A
    Range: 30 Meters
    Speed: 30 m/s
    Duration: 6 Rounds
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily is a defender of nature and to accomplish that she needs to reach places both hidden and far away. Each round she can teleport up to the spell's range at the spell's speed, and both she and allies within the spell's range gain a 60% increase to spell range.
    Healing Stream:
    Name: Healing Stream
    Rank: B
    Category: Supportive
    Type: Multi Target
    Healing: 60 HP
    Range: 150 Meters
    Speed: 110 m/s
    Duration: 6 Rounds
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily produces a stream of water which she can freely control. Letting the stream wash over an ally heals that ally. She can heal up to six allies (including herself) every round for as long as the spell lasts. The water can freely be moved through both ground and air. Upon healing an ally Lily can choose to expend additional mana to wash away impurities, effectively negating debuffs (following the rules of negating effects).
    Invigorate:
    Name: Invigorate
    Rank: B
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Area of Effect
    Damage: N/A
    Range: 100 Meters
    Speed: 50 m/s
    Duration: 6 Rounds
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily releases waves of magic every round that energize herself and her allies, causing their spell damage to increase by 60% and reducing the potency of debuffs applied to allies by 50%.
    Nature Blade:
    Name: Nature Blade
    Rank: B
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 80 HP
    Range: 200 Meters
    Speed: 200 m/s
    Duration: 6 Rounds
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily combines earth, water and flora to create a highly effective cutting attack. Water forms the base, sand acts as the abrasive agent and a gooey substance formed from plant matter holds the blade together. The result is a very sharp blade which the dryad can use to accurately strike at enemies from afar once every round. As long as this spell is active Lily's spell speed is increased by 60%
    Rock Spike:
    Name: Rock Spike
    Rank: B
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 40 HP
    Range: 200 Meters
    Speed: 200 m/s
    Duration: 6 Rounds
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily uses her magic to gather stone and dirt, then tightly packs it all together to create a very dense and hard spike-shaped rock. She then launches this spike towards the target at high speed. This spike pierces most defences with little resistance, and Lily can launch one spike every round that this spell lasts.
    Sleeping Powder:
    Name: Sleeping Powder
    Rank: B
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Area of Effect
    Damage: N/A
    Radius: 100 Meters
    Speed: 50 m/s
    Duration: 6 Rounds
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily begins to release a pollen meant to weaken and slow down enemies rather than harm them. Enemies who are exposed to the pollen will feel themselves beginning to feel very sleepy and lethargic, reducing their speed by 60% and causing them to lose 5% of their MP.
    D-Rank Advanced Spells:
    C-Rank Advanced Spells:
    Mystical Fountain:
    Name: Mystical Fountain
    Rank: C+
    Category: Supportive
    Type: Multi Target
    Healing: 68 HP
    Range: 135 Meters
    Speed: 100 m/s
    Duration: 6 Rounds
    Downside: N/a
    Description: Lily creates a sphere of enchanted water that hovers and follows her around. Every round streams of water shoot out of the sphere towards up to six allies, healing them for the spell's healing and restoring 5% of their HP and MP (limited by regen caps). Allies healed by this spell also have their spell damage increased by 85%.
    B-Rank Advanced Spells:
    Roar of Gaia:
    Name: Roar of Gaia
    Rank: B+
    Category: Offensive/Supportive
    Type: Area of Effect
    Damage/Healing: 42 HP
    Radius: 120 Meters
    Cone: 72°
    Speed: 90 m/s
    Duration: 8 Rounds
    Downside: +40% damage for -80% area, +20% speed for -20% radius.
    Description: Gathering an immense amount of mana Lily releases nature's fury from her core. This manifests itself as a roaring geyser of green water originating from the dryad, blasting away everything in its path. The water is heavily saturated with minerals, making it smash into any obstacles and enemies as if made of solid rock. The water leaves behind a cloud of fumes which heals allies and harms enemies for the remainder of the spell's duration. Taking damage from this spell reduces speed by 45% while being healed by it increases speed by 45%. Taking damage also drains 5% MP.
    Toxic Bloom:
    Name: Toxic Bloom
    Rank: B+
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Area of Effect
    Damage/Healing: 60 HP
    Radius: 150 Meters
    Speed: 75 m/s
    Duration: 8 Rounds
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily spreads seeds throughout the area and greatly enhances their growth, quickly giving rise to a field of large, vividly coloured flowers. These flowers continuously release poisonous spores for the duration of the spell, dealing damage to unprotected enemies who come into contact with the spores every round and reducing their physical and magical resistance by 45%. Enemies damaged by this spell also lose 5% of their HP and MP.


    Last edited by Lily Ambrosia on 31st January 2020, 12:38 pm; edited 10 times in total


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    MarkusEldridge
    MarkusEldridge

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    Guild : Dies Irae
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    Experience : 2,150,635

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Primordial Chaos Slayer
    Second Magic: Chaotic Darkness
    Third Magic: Chaos Soul - Primordial Warrior

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    Post by MarkusEldridge on 19th September 2019, 1:41 pm

    Hey there! Markus here once more, I will be grading your magic this time around. All of my comments will be in this color!
    Let me start with saying I am sorry for the super late grading, being sick and super unexpectedly busy.


    Note, I need to see proof of your slayer within your magic, before I can approve this.
    Spoiler:

    @Lily Ambrosia wrote:Magic

    Magic Name: Nature's Blessed Gift
    Magic Type: Slayer {I need proof of your slayer position, or your lacrima.}
    Slayer Benefits:

    • +25% Strength, Speed, HP.
    • Greatly enhanced Hearing, Sight, and Smell.
    • Ability to Consume Magic of same element for MP as well as the Force Ability.
    • Resistance to their slayer element based on strength of spell/ability as follows:

      • 2 Ranks Above Character: 0%
      • 1 Rank Above Character: 10%
      • Same Rank as Character: 25%
      • 1 Rank below Character: 35%
      • 2 Ranks below character: 50%




    Description: Nature's Blessed Gift is the magical manifestation of the essence of nature. It entails the controlling of the environment to create the ideal conditions for life to prosper, and then to control that life as well. The owner of this magic is blessed with a strong connection to the world around them, allowing them to move water and soil and plantlife freely. Along with the ability to control those three aspects of the natural world those who obtain this magic almost always also gain a strong affinity for healing and rejuvenation. While this magic excels at protecting and nurturing life those with the aptitude, creativity and will can also turn it into a dreadful weapon against anyone who would harm the wilds. The name Nature's Blessed Gift comes from the fact that this magic, unlike many which can be learned and trained, can only be received as a gift from the world itself.

    As a dryad Lily's usage of this magic is a bit different from that of a human or another civilized species. Being a spirit of nature the lachrima which would bestow this magic upon the owner functions as her heart, and her entire body could be considered an extension of the lachrima. She feels the world around her as if an extension of herself, and moves it with the same level of ease. Within mere seconds she can make a seed grow into a tree following whatever shape she wishes it to possess. The combination of such versatile control of the environment with potent supportive magic makes facing the dryad a challenge of endurance that many would-be opponents would rather avoid. Aside from rearranging the area to the benefit of herself and her allies and the near endless stream of healing Lily can also deliver devastating attacks, unleashing earthquakes and tsunamis and deadly plants which produce clouds of poison or strangle the life out of her enemies.

    Unique Abilities:

    • Life Exchange: Lily controls the flow of life with her magic, draining it from her enemies and bolstering her allies with it. All her healing abilities harm enemies within the area of effect for 60% of the ability's potency and all damaging abilities heal allies within the area of effect for 60% of the ability's potency. {This is far above the 60% generally allowed for a unique ability, as this stands this is a 120%, you will have to reduce these to the maximum of 30%}


    Spells:
    D-Rank:

    Entangle:
    Name: Entangle
    Rank: D
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Area of Effect
    Damage: 20 HP
    Range: 20 Meters
    Radius: 10 Meters
    Speed: 15 m/s
    Duration: 3 Rounds
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily sends waves of life force and magic throughout the ground to give rise to a tangle of vines which latch onto all enemies within the area. For the duration of the spell the vines deal 50% of the spell's damage per round to all enemies hit and slow them by 50%. Once an enemy is latched onto they'll automatically be hit again for the remainder of the spell's duration unless they destroy the vines or leave the area. The vines can be destroyed by any spell of the same rank but single target spells can only free a single target. Once a target has been freed or escapes they're immune to the effects of Entangle until the next round when any destroyed vines regenerate (if they're hit again).
    Healing Stream:
    Name: Healing Stream
    Rank: D
    Category: Supportive
    Type: Multi Target
    Healing: 30 HP
    Range: 45 Meters
    Speed: 30 m/s
    Duration: 3 Rounds
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily produces a stream of water which she can freely control. Letting the stream wash over an ally heals that ally. She can heal up to six allies (including herself) every round for as long as the spell lasts. The water can freely be moved through both ground and air. Upon healing an ally Lily can choose to expend additional mana to wash away impurities, effectively negating debuffs (following the rules of negating effects).
    Rock Spike:
    Name: Rock Spike
    Rank: D
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 20 HP
    Range: 60 Meters
    Speed: 60 m/s
    Duration: 3 Rounds
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily uses her magic to gather stone and dirt, then tightly packs it all together to create a very dense and hard spike-shaped rock. She then launches this spike towards the target at high speed. This spike pierces most defences with little resistance, and Lily can launch one spike every round that this spell lasts.
    D+-Rank:
    Roar of Gaia:
    Name: Roar of Gaia
    Rank: D+
    Category: Offensive/Supportive
    Type: Area of Effect
    Damage/Healing: 40 HP
    Range: 30 Meters
    Speed: 30 m/s
    Duration: 5 Rounds
    Downside: Range reduced by 33%
    Description: Gathering an immense amount of mana Lily releases nature's fury from her core. This manifests itself as a roaring geyser of green water originating from the dryad, blasting away everything in its path. The water is heavily saturated with minerals, making it smash into any obstacles and enemies as if made of solid rock. The water leaves behind a cloud of spores which heals allies and harms enemies for the remainder of the spell's duration.


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    Lily Ambrosia
    Lily Ambrosia

    Player 
    Lineage : Nature's Child
    Position : None
    Posts : 94
    Guild : Rakshasa
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : N/A
    Experience : 2,300

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Nature's Blessed Gift
    Second Magic: Gaia's Duality
    Third Magic:

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    Post by Lily Ambrosia on 27th September 2019, 4:06 am

    Edits made.

    Proof of ownership: Post #310, purchased IOTM lachrima with main account and transferred to this one.


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    Lily Ambrosia
    Lily Ambrosia

    Player 
    Lineage : Nature's Child
    Position : None
    Posts : 94
    Guild : Rakshasa
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : N/A
    Experience : 2,300

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Nature's Blessed Gift
    Second Magic: Gaia's Duality
    Third Magic:

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    Post by Lily Ambrosia on 25th December 2019, 3:39 pm

    Beep boop


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    Nature's Blessed Gift Lily-a10
    MarkusEldridge
    MarkusEldridge

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    Position : None
    Posts : 1327
    Guild : Dies Irae
    Cosmic Coins : 10
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 2,150,635

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Primordial Chaos Slayer
    Second Magic: Chaotic Darkness
    Third Magic: Chaos Soul - Primordial Warrior

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    Post by MarkusEldridge on 31st December 2019, 12:28 pm

    Hey There, I am so sorry about this taking so long to be graded. I had asked everyone to resubmit their magic if they desired, so I was not looking at old gradings. That being said, lets get started.
    As a quick note. I am grading this fresh, with new rule changes, and fresh eyes. As such my old grading is no longer valid.

    Spoiler:

    @Lily Ambrosia wrote:Magic

    Magic Name: Nature's Blessed Gift
    Magic Type: Slayer
    Slayer Benefits:

    • +25% Strength, Speed, HP.
    • Greatly enhanced Hearing, Sight, and Smell.
    • Ability to Consume Magic of same element for MP as well as the Force Ability.
    • Resistance to their slayer element based on strength of spell/ability as follows:

      • 2 Ranks Above Character: 0%
      • 1 Rank Above Character: 10%
      • Same Rank as Character: 25%
      • 1 Rank below Character: 35%
      • 2 Ranks below character: 50%



    Proof of Ownership: The Trading Hub, Page 13, Post n°310

    Description: Nature's Blessed Gift is the magical manifestation of the essence of nature. It entails the controlling of the environment to create the ideal conditions for life to prosper, and then to control that life as well. The owner of this magic is blessed with a strong connection to the world around them, allowing them to move water and soil and plantlife freely. Along with the ability to control those three aspects of the natural world those who obtain this magic almost always also gain a strong affinity for healing and rejuvenation. While this magic excels at protecting and nurturing life those with the aptitude, creativity and will can also turn it into a dreadful weapon against anyone who would harm the wilds. The name Nature's Blessed Gift comes from the fact that this magic, unlike many which can be learned and trained, can only be received as a gift from the world itself.

    As a dryad Lily's usage of this magic is a bit different from that of a human or another civilized species. Being a spirit of nature the lachrima which would bestow this magic upon the owner functions as her heart, and her entire body could be considered an extension of the lachrima. She feels the world around her as if an extension of herself, and moves it with the same level of ease. Within mere seconds she can make a seed grow into a tree following whatever shape she wishes it to possess. The combination of such versatile control of the environment with potent supportive magic makes facing the dryad a challenge of endurance that many would-be opponents would rather avoid. Aside from rearranging the area to the benefit of herself and her allies and the near endless stream of healing Lily can also deliver devastating attacks, unleashing earthquakes and tsunamis and deadly plants which produce clouds of poison or strangle the life out of her enemies.

    Unique Abilities:

    • Life Exchange: Lily controls the flow of life with her magic, draining it from her enemies and bolstering her allies with it. All her healing abilities harm enemies within the area of effect for 60% of the ability's potency. ((Alright, so looking at this now I realized i graded this improperly. You are not allowed to do this kind of effect with a UA, as this would effectively make all your healing effects dualtype, which makes this effectivly a new effect for every spell for free. In addition to that the total damage/healing would equal above what is allowed for a dual type. As such I have to ask that you change this effect.))


    Spells:
    D-Rank:

    Entangle:
    Name: Entangle
    Rank: D
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Area of Effect
    Damage: 20 HP
    Range: 20 Meters
    Radius: 10 Meters
    Speed: 15 m/s
    Duration: 3 Rounds
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily sends waves of life force and magic throughout the ground to give rise to a tangle of vines which latch onto all enemies within the area. For the duration of the spell the vines deal 50% of the spell's damage per round to all enemies hit and slow them by 50%. Once an enemy is latched onto they'll automatically be hit again for the remainder of the spell's duration unless they destroy the vines or leave the area (( If this is automatically does damage once the first hit is landed, that makes this a damage over time spell. As such, this would count as an additional effect and the damage would have to be reduced to 50% of its ranks category, in this case 10HP per round.
    Otherwise if it just does base damage each round, the opponent must get hit every round.))
    . The vines can be destroyed by any spell of the same rank but single target spells can only free a single target. Once a target has been freed or escapes they're immune to the effects of Entangle until the next round when any destroyed vines regenerate (if they're hit again).
    Healing Stream:
    Name: Healing Stream
    Rank: D
    Category: Supportive
    Type: Multi Target
    Healing: 30 HP
    Range: 45 Meters
    Speed: 30 m/s
    Duration: 3 Rounds
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily produces a stream of water which she can freely control. Letting the stream wash over an ally heals that ally. She can heal up to six allies (including herself) every round for as long as the spell lasts. The water can freely be moved through both ground and air. Upon healing an ally Lily can choose to expend additional mana to wash away impurities, effectively negating debuffs (following the rules of negating effects).
    Rock Spike:
    Name: Rock Spike
    Rank: D
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 20 HP
    Range: 60 Meters
    Speed: 60 m/s
    Duration: 3 Rounds
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily uses her magic to gather stone and dirt, then tightly packs it all together to create a very dense and hard spike-shaped rock. She then launches this spike towards the target at high speed. This spike pierces most defences with little resistance, and Lily can launch one spike every round that this spell lasts.
    D+-Rank:
    Roar of Gaia:
    Name: Roar of Gaia
    Rank: D+
    Category: Offensive/Supportive
    Type: Area of Effect
    Damage/Healing: 40 HP (( Adv. Area effect damage is 30HP, unless being increased by downside, if so specify below. ))
    Range: 30 Meters
    Speed: 30 m/s
    Duration: 5 Rounds
    Downside: Range reduced by 33% (( What is the tradeoff/what is being increased? If it is damage, specify. ))
    Description: Gathering an immense amount of mana Lily releases nature's fury from her core. This manifests itself as a roaring geyser of green water originating from the dryad, blasting away everything in its path. The water is heavily saturated with minerals, making it smash into any obstacles and enemies as if made of solid rock. The water leaves behind a cloud of fumes which heals allies and harms enemies for the remainder of the spell's duration. (( As a dual cat of Healing and Damage if it is doing both in the same round the total can not exceed the table cap, as such if this is healing and damaging it would do 20 to everyone effected, if it is one OR the other the amount can be max. ))


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    Lily Ambrosia
    Lily Ambrosia

    Player 
    Lineage : Nature's Child
    Position : None
    Posts : 94
    Guild : Rakshasa
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : N/A
    Experience : 2,300

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Nature's Blessed Gift
    Second Magic: Gaia's Duality
    Third Magic:

    Nature's Blessed Gift Empty Re: Nature's Blessed Gift

    Post by Lily Ambrosia on 20th January 2020, 10:58 am

    Edits made.


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    Nature's Blessed Gift Lily-a10
    MarkusEldridge
    MarkusEldridge

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    Lineage : Progeny of Chaos
    Position : None
    Posts : 1327
    Guild : Dies Irae
    Cosmic Coins : 10
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 2,150,635

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Primordial Chaos Slayer
    Second Magic: Chaotic Darkness
    Third Magic: Chaos Soul - Primordial Warrior

    Nature's Blessed Gift Empty Re: Nature's Blessed Gift

    Post by MarkusEldridge on 30th January 2020, 11:03 am

    Hey there, Markus once more. There is only a minor issue with your last spell and this is ready to be approved. All of my comments will be in This lovely color.
    Spoiler:
    Magic

    Magic Name: Nature's Blessed Gift
    Magic Type: Slayer
    Slayer Benefits:

    • +25% Strength, Speed, HP.
    • Greatly enhanced Hearing, Sight, and Smell.
    • Ability to Consume Magic of same element for MP as well as the Force Ability.
    • Resistance to their slayer element based on strength of spell/ability as follows:

      • 2 Ranks Above Character: 0%
      • 1 Rank Above Character: 10%
      • Same Rank as Character: 25%
      • 1 Rank below Character: 35%
      • 2 Ranks below character: 50%



    Proof of Ownership: The Trading Hub, Page 13, Post n°310

    Description: Nature's Blessed Gift is the magical manifestation of the essence of nature. It entails the controlling of the environment to create the ideal conditions for life to prosper, and then to control that life as well. The owner of this magic is blessed with a strong connection to the world around them, allowing them to move water and soil and plantlife freely. Along with the ability to control those three aspects of the natural world those who obtain this magic almost always also gain a strong affinity for healing and rejuvenation. While this magic excels at protecting and nurturing life those with the aptitude, creativity and will can also turn it into a dreadful weapon against anyone who would harm the wilds. The name Nature's Blessed Gift comes from the fact that this magic, unlike many which can be learned and trained, can only be received as a gift from the world itself.

    As a dryad Lily's usage of this magic is a bit different from that of a human or another civilized species. Being a spirit of nature the lachrima which would bestow this magic upon the owner functions as her heart, and her entire body could be considered an extension of the lachrima. She feels the world around her as if an extension of herself, and moves it with the same level of ease. Within mere seconds she can make a seed grow into a tree following whatever shape she wishes it to possess. The combination of such versatile control of the environment with potent supportive magic makes facing the dryad a challenge of endurance that many would-be opponents would rather avoid. Aside from rearranging the area to the benefit of herself and her allies and the near endless stream of healing Lily can also deliver devastating attacks, unleashing earthquakes and tsunamis and deadly plants which produce clouds of poison or strangle the life out of her enemies.

    Unique Abilities:

    • Adaptation: Lily's powers change depending on what's best suited for the situation. If she firsts casts an offensive spell at the start of her post she gains a 50% buff to spell damage for that round, and if she firsts casts a supportive spell at the start of her post she gains a 50% buff to spell healing for that round. If she doesn't cast any spells during a post the buff from the previous round carries over for ongoing effects.
    • Overheal: Lily's healing abilities are powerful enough that they often overflow. Her spell healing is increased by 50% and if she heals someone for more health than they're missing the excess healing is passed along to the nearest ally within ranked burst range (capped at S-Rank). This effect will repeat itself until there's either no excess healing left or there's no allies within range.

    Passive Abilities:

    • B-Rank: Mana Cost -50%
    • B-Rank: Spell Damage +50%


    Spells:
    Signature Spells:
    Life Surge:
    Name: Life Surge
    Rank: B
    Category: Supportive
    Type: Single Target
    Healing: 80 HP
    Range: 200 Meters
    Speed: 200 m/s
    Duration: 1 Round
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily rejuvenates one ally with a surge of life force, healing them for the spell's healing.
    D-Rank Spells:
    C-Rank Spells:
    B-Rank Spells:
    Entangle:
    Name: Entangle
    Rank: D
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Area of Effect
    Damage: 40 HP
    Range: 60 Meters
    Radius: 40 Meters
    Speed: 50 m/s
    Duration: 6 Rounds
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily sends waves of life force and magic throughout the ground to give rise to a tangle of vines which will try to latch onto all enemies within the area. The vines deal the spell's damage to all enemies hit that round and slow them by 60%. Once the tangle is fully grown touching it is enough to be hit.
    Gardener:
    Name: Gardener
    Rank: B
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Burst
    Damage: N/A
    Range: 30 Meters
    Speed: 30 m/s
    Duration: 6 Rounds
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily is a defender of nature and to accomplish that she needs to reach places both hidden and far away. Each round she can teleport up to the spell's range at the spell's speed, and both she and allies within the spell's range gain a 60% increase to spell range.
    Healing Stream:
    Name: Healing Stream
    Rank: B
    Category: Supportive
    Type: Multi Target
    Healing: 60 HP
    Range: 150 Meters
    Speed: 110 m/s
    Duration: 6 Rounds
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily produces a stream of water which she can freely control. Letting the stream wash over an ally heals that ally. She can heal up to six allies (including herself) every round for as long as the spell lasts. The water can freely be moved through both ground and air. Upon healing an ally Lily can choose to expend additional mana to wash away impurities, effectively negating debuffs (following the rules of negating effects).
    Invigorate:
    Name: Invigorate
    Rank: B
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Area of Effect
    Damage: N/A
    Range: 100 Meters
    Speed: 50 m/s
    Duration: 6 Rounds
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily releases waves of magic every round that energize herself and her allies, causing their spell damage to increase by 60% and reducing the potency of debuffs applied to allies by 50%.
    Nature Blade:
    Name: Nature Blade
    Rank: B
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 80 HP
    Range: 200 Meters
    Speed: 200 m/s
    Duration: 6 Rounds
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily combines earth, water and flora to create a highly effective cutting attack. Water forms the base, sand acts as the abrasive agent and a gooey substance formed from plant matter holds the blade together. The result is a very sharp blade which the dryad can use to accurately strike at enemies from afar once every round. As long as this spell is active Lily's spell speed is increased by 60%
    Rock Spike:
    Name: Rock Spike
    Rank: B
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 40 HP
    Range: 200 Meters
    Speed: 200 m/s
    Duration: 6 Rounds
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily uses her magic to gather stone and dirt, then tightly packs it all together to create a very dense and hard spike-shaped rock. She then launches this spike towards the target at high speed. This spike pierces most defences with little resistance, and Lily can launch one spike every round that this spell lasts.
    Sleeping Powder:
    Name: Sleeping Powder
    Rank: B
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Area of Effect
    Damage: N/A
    Radius: 100 Meters
    Speed: 50 m/s
    Duration: 6 Rounds
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily begins to release a pollen meant to weaken and slow down enemies rather than harm them. Enemies who are exposed to the pollen will feel themselves beginning to feel very sleepy and lethargic, reducing their speed by 60% and causing them to lose 5% of their MP.
    D-Rank Advanced Spells:
    C-Rank Advanced Spells:
    Mystical Fountain:
    Name: Mystical Fountain
    Rank: C+
    Category: Supportive
    Type: Multi Target
    Healing: 68 HP
    Range: 135 Meters
    Speed: 100 m/s
    Duration: 6 Rounds
    Downside: N/a
    Description: Lily creates a sphere of enchanted water that hovers and follows her around. Every round streams of water shoot out of the sphere towards up to six allies, healing them for the spell's healing and restoring 5% of their HP and MP (limited by regen caps). Allies healed by this spell also have their spell damage increased by 85%.
    B-Rank Advanced Spells:
    Roar of Gaia:
    Name: Roar of Gaia
    Rank: B+
    Category: Offensive/Supportive
    Type: Area of Effect
    Damage/Healing: 42 HP
    Radius: 120 Meters
    Cone: 72°
    Speed: 90 m/s
    Duration: 8 Rounds
    Downside: +40% damage for -80% area, +20% speed for -20% radius.
    Description: Gathering an immense amount of mana Lily releases nature's fury from her core. This manifests itself as a roaring geyser of green water originating from the dryad, blasting away everything in its path. The water is heavily saturated with minerals, making it smash into any obstacles and enemies as if made of solid rock. The water leaves behind a cloud of fumes which heals allies and harms enemies for the remainder of the spell's duration. Taking damage from this spell reduces speed by 45% while being healed by it increases speed by 45%. Taking damage also drains 5% MP.
    Toxic Bloom:
    Name: Toxic Bloom
    Rank: B+
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Area of Effect
    Damage/Healing: 60 HP
    Radius: 150 Meters
    Speed: 75 m/s
    Duration: 8 Rounds
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily spreads seeds throughout the area and greatly enhances their growth, quickly giving rise to a field of large, vividle coloured flowers. Every round these flowers release poisonous spores that fill the area. Exposure to the spores stings enemies for 10% of the spell's damage and then poisons them for 80% of the spell's damage for three rounds. Remaining in the spore cloud will reapply the initial damage every round and refresh the poison (but not stack the poison damage). Enemies damaged by this spell also lose 5% of their HP and MP. { Alright, so there is a lot wrong with this spell. Lets go ahead and adress them.
    - First, your duration is currently allowing for the possibility of doing dot damage every round over 8 rounds. As such, I must request that you modify the duration to be correct and that the damage over time is adjusted to be the exact damage a person can take every round. For right now, with your values that means you should be doing 10% round 1, and 34.3% each round for the remaining 7.
    - Second, your last statement saying that the spell will reapply the initial damage every round means you are doing an addition 70% damage in addition to the initial and it ALL counts as initial damage for DOT, which is not allowed and goes over the cap.
    - Third, you are reapply and extending the DOT over more than the 3 rounds, since as it is 'reapplied' it is reset. Meaning, this is also not allowed.
    - Finally, I was giving you the benifit of a doubt that you will not use this ability to overrule how DoT work, however that seems to not be the case. As such remembers dots must do the initial damamge once, then the remaining damage divided over the entire duration. As such, please adjust this spell to not do a total of 640% damage. }



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    Lily Ambrosia
    Lily Ambrosia

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    Experience : 2,300

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Nature's Blessed Gift
    Second Magic: Gaia's Duality
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    Nature's Blessed Gift Empty Re: Nature's Blessed Gift

    Post by Lily Ambrosia on 31st January 2020, 12:39 pm

    Edits made.


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    MarkusEldridge
    MarkusEldridge

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    Second Magic: Chaotic Darkness
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    Nature's Blessed Gift Empty Re: Nature's Blessed Gift

    Post by MarkusEldridge on 18th February 2020, 10:09 am

    Nature's Blessed Gift 0k8BW6j
    Apologies for the delay here, it has been a bit chaotic. Looks good!
    Spoiler:

    @Lily Ambrosia wrote:Magic

    Magic Name: Nature's Blessed Gift
    Magic Type: Slayer
    Slayer Benefits:

    • +25% Strength, Speed, HP.
    • Greatly enhanced Hearing, Sight, and Smell.
    • Ability to Consume Magic of same element for MP as well as the Force Ability.
    • Resistance to their slayer element based on strength of spell/ability as follows:

      • 2 Ranks Above Character: 0%
      • 1 Rank Above Character: 10%
      • Same Rank as Character: 25%
      • 1 Rank below Character: 35%
      • 2 Ranks below character: 50%



    Proof of Ownership: The Trading Hub, Page 13, Post n°310

    Description: Nature's Blessed Gift is the magical manifestation of the essence of nature. It entails the controlling of the environment to create the ideal conditions for life to prosper, and then to control that life as well. The owner of this magic is blessed with a strong connection to the world around them, allowing them to move water and soil and plantlife freely. Along with the ability to control those three aspects of the natural world those who obtain this magic almost always also gain a strong affinity for healing and rejuvenation. While this magic excels at protecting and nurturing life those with the aptitude, creativity and will can also turn it into a dreadful weapon against anyone who would harm the wilds. The name Nature's Blessed Gift comes from the fact that this magic, unlike many which can be learned and trained, can only be received as a gift from the world itself.

    As a dryad Lily's usage of this magic is a bit different from that of a human or another civilized species. Being a spirit of nature the lachrima which would bestow this magic upon the owner functions as her heart, and her entire body could be considered an extension of the lachrima. She feels the world around her as if an extension of herself, and moves it with the same level of ease. Within mere seconds she can make a seed grow into a tree following whatever shape she wishes it to possess. The combination of such versatile control of the environment with potent supportive magic makes facing the dryad a challenge of endurance that many would-be opponents would rather avoid. Aside from rearranging the area to the benefit of herself and her allies and the near endless stream of healing Lily can also deliver devastating attacks, unleashing earthquakes and tsunamis and deadly plants which produce clouds of poison or strangle the life out of her enemies.

    Unique Abilities:

    • Adaptation: Lily's powers change depending on what's best suited for the situation. If she firsts casts an offensive spell at the start of her post she gains a 50% buff to spell damage for that round, and if she firsts casts a supportive spell at the start of her post she gains a 50% buff to spell healing for that round. If she doesn't cast any spells during a post the buff from the previous round carries over for ongoing effects.
    • Overheal: Lily's healing abilities are powerful enough that they often overflow. Her spell healing is increased by 50% and if she heals someone for more health than they're missing the excess healing is passed along to the nearest ally within ranked burst range (capped at S-Rank). This effect will repeat itself until there's either no excess healing left or there's no allies within range.

    Passive Abilities:

    • B-Rank: Mana Cost -50%
    • B-Rank: Spell Damage +50%


    Spells:
    Signature Spells:
    Life Surge:
    Name: Life Surge
    Rank: B
    Category: Supportive
    Type: Single Target
    Healing: 80 HP
    Range: 200 Meters
    Speed: 200 m/s
    Duration: 1 Round
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily rejuvenates one ally with a surge of life force, healing them for the spell's healing.
    D-Rank Spells:
    C-Rank Spells:
    B-Rank Spells:
    Entangle:
    Name: Entangle
    Rank: D
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Area of Effect
    Damage: 40 HP
    Range: 60 Meters
    Radius: 40 Meters
    Speed: 50 m/s
    Duration: 6 Rounds
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily sends waves of life force and magic throughout the ground to give rise to a tangle of vines which will try to latch onto all enemies within the area. The vines deal the spell's damage to all enemies hit that round and slow them by 60%. Once the tangle is fully grown touching it is enough to be hit.
    Gardener:
    Name: Gardener
    Rank: B
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Burst
    Damage: N/A
    Range: 30 Meters
    Speed: 30 m/s
    Duration: 6 Rounds
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily is a defender of nature and to accomplish that she needs to reach places both hidden and far away. Each round she can teleport up to the spell's range at the spell's speed, and both she and allies within the spell's range gain a 60% increase to spell range.
    Healing Stream:
    Name: Healing Stream
    Rank: B
    Category: Supportive
    Type: Multi Target
    Healing: 60 HP
    Range: 150 Meters
    Speed: 110 m/s
    Duration: 6 Rounds
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily produces a stream of water which she can freely control. Letting the stream wash over an ally heals that ally. She can heal up to six allies (including herself) every round for as long as the spell lasts. The water can freely be moved through both ground and air. Upon healing an ally Lily can choose to expend additional mana to wash away impurities, effectively negating debuffs (following the rules of negating effects).
    Invigorate:
    Name: Invigorate
    Rank: B
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Area of Effect
    Damage: N/A
    Range: 100 Meters
    Speed: 50 m/s
    Duration: 6 Rounds
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily releases waves of magic every round that energize herself and her allies, causing their spell damage to increase by 60% and reducing the potency of debuffs applied to allies by 50%.
    Nature Blade:
    Name: Nature Blade
    Rank: B
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 80 HP
    Range: 200 Meters
    Speed: 200 m/s
    Duration: 6 Rounds
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily combines earth, water and flora to create a highly effective cutting attack. Water forms the base, sand acts as the abrasive agent and a gooey substance formed from plant matter holds the blade together. The result is a very sharp blade which the dryad can use to accurately strike at enemies from afar once every round. As long as this spell is active Lily's spell speed is increased by 60%
    Rock Spike:
    Name: Rock Spike
    Rank: B
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 40 HP
    Range: 200 Meters
    Speed: 200 m/s
    Duration: 6 Rounds
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily uses her magic to gather stone and dirt, then tightly packs it all together to create a very dense and hard spike-shaped rock. She then launches this spike towards the target at high speed. This spike pierces most defences with little resistance, and Lily can launch one spike every round that this spell lasts.
    Sleeping Powder:
    Name: Sleeping Powder
    Rank: B
    Category: Auxiliary
    Type: Area of Effect
    Damage: N/A
    Radius: 100 Meters
    Speed: 50 m/s
    Duration: 6 Rounds
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily begins to release a pollen meant to weaken and slow down enemies rather than harm them. Enemies who are exposed to the pollen will feel themselves beginning to feel very sleepy and lethargic, reducing their speed by 60% and causing them to lose 5% of their MP.
    D-Rank Advanced Spells:
    C-Rank Advanced Spells:
    Mystical Fountain:
    Name: Mystical Fountain
    Rank: C+
    Category: Supportive
    Type: Multi Target
    Healing: 68 HP
    Range: 135 Meters
    Speed: 100 m/s
    Duration: 6 Rounds
    Downside: N/a
    Description: Lily creates a sphere of enchanted water that hovers and follows her around. Every round streams of water shoot out of the sphere towards up to six allies, healing them for the spell's healing and restoring 5% of their HP and MP (limited by regen caps). Allies healed by this spell also have their spell damage increased by 85%.
    B-Rank Advanced Spells:
    Roar of Gaia:
    Name: Roar of Gaia
    Rank: B+
    Category: Offensive/Supportive
    Type: Area of Effect
    Damage/Healing: 42 HP
    Radius: 120 Meters
    Cone: 72°
    Speed: 90 m/s
    Duration: 8 Rounds
    Downside: +40% damage for -80% area, +20% speed for -20% radius.
    Description: Gathering an immense amount of mana Lily releases nature's fury from her core. This manifests itself as a roaring geyser of green water originating from the dryad, blasting away everything in its path. The water is heavily saturated with minerals, making it smash into any obstacles and enemies as if made of solid rock. The water leaves behind a cloud of fumes which heals allies and harms enemies for the remainder of the spell's duration. Taking damage from this spell reduces speed by 45% while being healed by it increases speed by 45%. Taking damage also drains 5% MP.
    Toxic Bloom:
    Name: Toxic Bloom
    Rank: B+
    Category: Offensive
    Type: Area of Effect
    Damage/Healing: 60 HP
    Radius: 150 Meters
    Speed: 75 m/s
    Duration: 8 Rounds
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Lily spreads seeds throughout the area and greatly enhances their growth, quickly giving rise to a field of large, vividly coloured flowers. These flowers continuously release poisonous spores for the duration of the spell, dealing damage to unprotected enemies who come into contact with the spores every round and reducing their physical and magical resistance by 45%. Enemies damaged by this spell also lose 5% of their HP and MP.


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