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    Second Wind

    Brynn
    Brynn

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    Lineage : Knight of Frostfire
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    Post by Brynn on 20th April 2019, 4:28 pm


    Second Wind

    Second Wind 7fa

    Wielder:
    Jeanette Estoria

    Proof:
    Proof(Account used to be called Akily)

    Description:
    Jeanette has always loved the art of dancing, even as a little child she loved to dance. However, there was a moment in time where dancing got away from her. Instead, what had come around was the act of crime. She would always do the most illegal things ever, and somehow get away with them. This rush has completely over taken her at one point, to the point where she was even given a nick name. And yet, no one ever did catch her as that criminal. However, something in the back of her mind told her that she could do both. So, when her dancing career came back to her, it was as good as it could ever be. With that, her dancing reached a whole new form of power. She was able to use it with magic. She combined her skills as a takeover artist, and dance artist, to create deadly combos. As of right now, she even has in the works a new magic that will help her combine dance with the elements. But either way, that is her second wind. The strength she had found in both of her passions. The adrenaline that courses through her veins whenever she does both.

    Abilities:

    Dancer's Wealth  
    Having the charm and technique of a dancer, Jeanette has the ability to persuade her employers to give her double the money, she would originally get. So, she gets a 100% increase in all gold gains from jobs.

    Dancer's Technique  
    Jeanette has finally mastered the ways of the dance. After taking a break from it, she has regained this new sort of sense of dance, that allowed her to become stronger and stronger as she went on in the world. Now, with this lineage, she has the ability to gain one spell slot for each rank up to S(5 spells in total). The spell slots can only be distributed among one of her magics.

    Defensive Leap  
    Learning how to dance properly, Jeanette has been able to attach certain dance moves with magic. So, whenever Jeanette does a split leap anywhere, her magic enhances the jump once each post, to max user rank burst range at max user rank burst speed. After this, she gains a barrier around herself that blocks for max user rank damage at max user rank burst speed. This shield can stack to up to 3x spell rank damage. However, she can only use this ability once per post, and if she doesn't use this ability, the shield will lose all of its strength(the shield has a duration of 1 post, that can be extended by 1 every time Jeanette uses this ability. However, the duration cannot surpass the max duration permitted for ranks ability.)

    Dancer's Recovery  
    Jeanette's dancing has incredibly increased her bodies systems, meaning that she has the ability to recover back her health insanely quickly. What this means is, is that every time Jeanette get's hit with a damaging ability, she gets healed back 25% of the spell's or autoattack's base damage, without buffs. This caps at the 25% of player's maximum rank spell damage up to S rank.

    Dancer's Resilience  
    Jeanette's  expertise in dancing has upped her body extremely, making it way more resilient then it ever has been. What this means for her, is that she is allowed to remove all status effects from her own person, whether it be things like stuns/debuffs, for half the mana need to remove the effects. As well as this, if she actually negates an effect, she gains a 40% movement speed buff(increases by 5% for each rank above D, up to S) for one post.


    Last edited by Jeanette on 21st April 2019, 4:25 pm; edited 3 times in total


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    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Starlight Maiden
    Second Magic: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Magic: Moon Goddess Slayer

    Second Wind Empty Re: Second Wind

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux on 21st April 2019, 11:56 am

    Hey, Nessa here, So I'll be grading this lineage for you. All my edits will be done in this colour! Once you made the edits, bump the thread and I'll take a look. Also you need to remove the open Div coding at the base of your lineage.

    Spoiler:

    Jeanette wrote:

    Second Wind

    Second Wind 7fa

    Wielder:
    Jeanette Estoria

    Proof:
    Proof(Account used to be called Akily)

    Description:
    Jeanette has always loved the art of dancing, even as a little child she loved to dance. However, there was a moment in time where dancing got away from her. Instead, what had come around was the act of crime. She would always do the most illegal things ever, and somehow get away with them. This rush has completely over taken her at one point, to the point where she was even given a nick name. And yet, no one ever did catch her as that criminal. However, something in the back of her mind told her that she could do both. So, when her dancing career came back to her, it was as good as it could ever be. With that, her dancing reached a whole new form of power. She was able to use it with magic. She combined her skills as a takeover artist, and dance artist, to create deadly combos. As of right now, she even has in the works a new magic that will help her combine dance with the elements. But either way, that is her second wind. The strength she had found in both of her passions. The adrenaline that courses through her veins whenever she does both.

    Abilities:

    Dancer's Wealth  
    Having the charm and technique of a dancer, Jeanette has the ability to persuade her employers to give her double the money, she would originally get. So, she gets a 100% increase in all gold gains from jobs.

    Dancer's Technique  
    Jeanette has finally mastered the ways of the dance. After taking a break from it, she has regained this new sort of sense of dance, that allowed her to become stronger and stronger as she went on in the world. Now, with this lineage, she has the ability to gain one spell slot for each rank up to S. The spell slots can be distributed among all her magics. Edit:: Please clarify that this is five spells total, also you can only place them in a single magic of your choosing.

    Defensive Leap  
    Learning how to dance properly, Jeanette has been able to attach certain dance moves with magic. So, whenever Jeanette does a split leap anywhere, her magic enhances the jump once each post, to max user rank burst range at max user rank burst speed. After this, she gains a shield that blocks for max user rank damage. This shield can stack to up to 3x spell rank damage. However, she can only use this ability once per post.  Edit:: Both of these abilities needs a duration, and the shield needs a range and speed.

    Dancer's Recovery  
    Jeanette's dancing has incredibly increased her bodies systems, meaning that she has the ability to recover back her health insanely quickly. What this means is, is that every time Jeanette get's hit with a damaging ability, she gets healed back 25% of the spell's or autoattack's base damage, without buffs. Edit:: This needs to cap at player rank, maximum S rank, and you need to state that this can only be done once per post.

    Dancer's Resilience  
    Jeanette's  expertise in dancing has upped her body extremely, making it way more resilient then it ever has been. What this means for her, is that she is allowed to remove 2 status effects from her own person, whether it be things like stuns/debuffs, once each post.Edit:: This is essentially negation, which can only be done if you pay the mana cost. I need you to state that the mana paid is the equivalent to the rank of the effect, capping at S. Please reduce the status effects to one and state that this can only be done once per post.



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    Second Wind 60582_s

    Brynn
    Brynn

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Player 
    Lineage : Knight of Frostfire
    Position : None
    Posts : 147
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 1,243.75

    Second Wind Empty Re: Second Wind

    Post by Brynn on 21st April 2019, 12:32 pm

    Bump
    -Fixed most things
    -Changed up wording on the bottom 3
    -added new effect on dancer's resilience
    -Had a question about my dancer's resilience ability though. I knew that 2 would be a lot. But, the reason for the ability, was to negate the need to use mana to negate an effect. If I needed mana to use that ability to negate a spell effect, then I wouldn't need the ability. So, I honestly don't see a problem with it just negating one effect mana free each post.
    -Also, for "Dancer's Recovery", can I have it be that she can use it multiple times in one post, but just have it where the amount she can heal from it each post is 25% of user rank spell damage?


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    Second Wind 3UHCyoD

    Active Jobs:
    2 jobs(you do not deserve link)
    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Chatbox Moderator- Main Account- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishval- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Custom Slayer- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- EXP Grinder- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Hired Help- Idolize- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Over Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character Application Approved!- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- 2nd Place Event/Contest Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- Have Seijin On Your Friends List- Have Onida On Your Friend's List- Have an Admin as a friend!- Have aeluri On Your Friend's List- Best GFX Artist Award- Player 
    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : Saint of Virtue
    Posts : 6967
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 70
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Starlight Maiden
    Second Magic: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Magic: Moon Goddess Slayer

    Second Wind Empty Re: Second Wind

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux on 21st April 2019, 1:48 pm

    Same again, bump when edits have been made.

    Spoiler:
    Jeanette wrote:

    Second Wind

    Second Wind 7fa

    Wielder:
    Jeanette Estoria

    Proof:
    Proof(Account used to be called Akily)

    Description:
    Jeanette has always loved the art of dancing, even as a little child she loved to dance. However, there was a moment in time where dancing got away from her. Instead, what had come around was the act of crime. She would always do the most illegal things ever, and somehow get away with them. This rush has completely over taken her at one point, to the point where she was even given a nick name. And yet, no one ever did catch her as that criminal. However, something in the back of her mind told her that she could do both. So, when her dancing career came back to her, it was as good as it could ever be. With that, her dancing reached a whole new form of power. She was able to use it with magic. She combined her skills as a takeover artist, and dance artist, to create deadly combos. As of right now, she even has in the works a new magic that will help her combine dance with the elements. But either way, that is her second wind. The strength she had found in both of her passions. The adrenaline that courses through her veins whenever she does both.

    Abilities:

    Dancer's Wealth  
    Having the charm and technique of a dancer, Jeanette has the ability to persuade her employers to give her double the money, she would originally get. So, she gets a 100% increase in all gold gains from jobs.

    Dancer's Technique  
    Jeanette has finally mastered the ways of the dance. After taking a break from it, she has regained this new sort of sense of dance, that allowed her to become stronger and stronger as she went on in the world. Now, with this lineage, she has the ability to gain one spell slot for each rank up to S(5 spells in total). The spell slots can be distributed among all her magics. Edit:: These spells cannot be distributed amongst all her magics, you need to state that you can only place them in a single magic of your choosing.

    Defensive Leap  
    Learning how to dance properly, Jeanette has been able to attach certain dance moves with magic. So, whenever Jeanette does a split leap anywhere, her magic enhances the jump once each post, to max user rank burst range at max user rank burst speed. After this, she gains a barrier around herself that blocks for max user rank damage. This shield can stack to up to 3x spell rank damage. However, she can only use this ability once per post, and if she doesn't use this ability, the shield will lose all of its strength(the shield has a duration of 1 post, that can be extended by 1 every time Jeanette uses this ability.) Edit:: You still need to state a speed for the shield, and also please clarify that the duration cannot surpass the max duration permitted for ranks ability.

    Dancer's Recovery  
    Jeanette's dancing has incredibly increased her bodies systems, meaning that she has the ability to recover back her health insanely quickly. What this means is, is that every time Jeanette get's hit with a damaging ability, she gets healed back 25% of the spell's or autoattack's base damage, without buffs. This caps at the 25% of player's maximum rank spell damage up to S rank. Edit:: You may use this multiple times, but you need to state that the total healing caps at rank maximum HP.

    Dancer's Resilience  
    Jeanette's  expertise in dancing has upped her body extremely, making it way more resilient then it ever has been. What this means for her, is that she is allowed to remove 1 status effects from her own person, whether it be things like stuns/debuffs, once each post. As well as this, if she actually negates an effect, she gains a 40% movement speed buff(increases by 5% for each rank above D, up to S) Edit:: Negations without paying mana cost as not allowed, please add the mana cost or rework the ability. Also for the speed buff, you need state a duration.


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Second Wind 60582_s

    Brynn
    Brynn

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Player 
    Lineage : Knight of Frostfire
    Position : None
    Posts : 147
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 1,243.75

    Second Wind Empty Re: Second Wind

    Post by Brynn on 21st April 2019, 4:26 pm

    Fixed
    -reworked Dancer's resilience
    -Also, small note, I added a cap to the dancer's recovery already. It's the last line.


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Second Wind 3UHCyoD

    Active Jobs:
    2 jobs(you do not deserve link)
    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Chatbox Moderator- Main Account- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishval- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Custom Slayer- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- EXP Grinder- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Hired Help- Idolize- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Over Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character Application Approved!- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- 2nd Place Event/Contest Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- Have Seijin On Your Friends List- Have Onida On Your Friend's List- Have an Admin as a friend!- Have aeluri On Your Friend's List- Best GFX Artist Award- Player 
    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : Saint of Virtue
    Posts : 6967
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 70
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Starlight Maiden
    Second Magic: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Magic: Moon Goddess Slayer

    Second Wind Empty Re: Second Wind

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux on 25th April 2019, 12:27 pm

    Same again, bump when done.

    Spoiler:

    Jeanette wrote:

    Second Wind

    Second Wind 7fa

    Wielder:
    Jeanette Estoria

    Proof:
    Proof(Account used to be called Akily)

    Description:
    Jeanette has always loved the art of dancing, even as a little child she loved to dance. However, there was a moment in time where dancing got away from her. Instead, what had come around was the act of crime. She would always do the most illegal things ever, and somehow get away with them. This rush has completely over taken her at one point, to the point where she was even given a nick name. And yet, no one ever did catch her as that criminal. However, something in the back of her mind told her that she could do both. So, when her dancing career came back to her, it was as good as it could ever be. With that, her dancing reached a whole new form of power. She was able to use it with magic. She combined her skills as a takeover artist, and dance artist, to create deadly combos. As of right now, she even has in the works a new magic that will help her combine dance with the elements. But either way, that is her second wind. The strength she had found in both of her passions. The adrenaline that courses through her veins whenever she does both.

    Abilities:

    Dancer's Wealth  
    Having the charm and technique of a dancer, Jeanette has the ability to persuade her employers to give her double the money, she would originally get. So, she gets a 100% increase in all gold gains from jobs.

    Dancer's Technique  
    Jeanette has finally mastered the ways of the dance. After taking a break from it, she has regained this new sort of sense of dance, that allowed her to become stronger and stronger as she went on in the world. Now, with this lineage, she has the ability to gain one spell slot for each rank up to S(5 spells in total). The spell slots can only be distributed among one of her magics.

    Defensive Leap  
    Learning how to dance properly, Jeanette has been able to attach certain dance moves with magic. So, whenever Jeanette does a split leap anywhere, her magic enhances the jump once each post, to max user rank burst range at max user rank burst speed. After this, she gains a barrier around herself that blocks for max user rank damage at max user rank burst speed. This shield can stack to up to 3x spell rank damage. However, she can only use this ability once per post, and if she doesn't use this ability, the shield will lose all of its strength(the shield has a duration of 1 post, that can be extended by 1 every time Jeanette uses this ability. However, the duration cannot surpass the max duration permitted for ranks ability.) Edit:: This shield also needs a range.

    Dancer's Recovery  
    Jeanette's dancing has incredibly increased her bodies systems, meaning that she has the ability to recover back her health insanely quickly. What this means is, is that every time Jeanette get's hit with a damaging ability, she gets healed back 25% of the spell's or autoattack's base damage, without buffs. This caps at the 25% of player's maximum rank spell damage up to S rank.

    Dancer's Resilience  
    Jeanette's  expertise in dancing has upped her body extremely, making it way more resilient then it ever has been. What this means for her, is that she is allowed to remove all  status effects from her own person, whether it be things like stuns/debuffs, for half the mana need to remove the effects. Edit:: Paying Half Mana isn't allowed either, please pay the full mana or rework this. As well as this, if she actually negates an effect, she gains a 40% movement speed buff(increases by 5% for each rank above D, up to S) for one post.


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    Second Wind 60582_s


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