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    Lunar Frost

    Lumine Fennec
    Lumine Fennec

    Player 
    Lineage : Seductor’s Touch
    Position : None
    Posts : 119
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 31
    Mentor : Masha
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Lunar Frost
    Second Magic:
    Third Magic:

    Lunar Frost Empty Lunar Frost

    Post by Lumine Fennec 16th April 2019, 7:21 pm

    Lunar Frost

    Magic Name: Lunar Frost
    Magic Type: Caster
    Description: Luna grew up in a frozen fortress, where she learned Ice Make magic along with her sister. However, as the years went on, her sister grew I'll, eventually going into a comatose state, and being encased in an ice prism in order to preserve her life. Luna continued to learn, in the hopes of one day saving her sister, and when she came of age, she was sent to Capitol Crocus, to join the Rune Knights, but not before copying a page from a certain book of forbidden spells. Her sister, Lumine, now uses this same magic as a way to honor her.

    Lumine uses this magic in a manner that comes naturally to her. Every spell starts with visualization, picturing the end result in her mind, before going through the basic ice molding rituals. It requires intense focus for each spell, and can be easily disrupted via distractions, especially physical ones, during the casting time. Any spell that creates a weapon does just that, and the weapons essentially fade away once Lumine is finished with them.

    Unique Abilities: 

    • Ability: +25% to damage under the light of a full moon.
    • Ability:
    • Ability:


    Solitary Benefit: +25% to cost reduction.
     
    Spells:

    Name: Ice Make: Arrows
    Rank: A
    Category: Offensive
    MP Cost: 50
    Type: Burst
    Damage: 100
    Range: 150 meters
    Speed: 150 mps
    Duration: 5 posts
    Downside: n/a
    Description: Lumine holds up both hands, sending a torrent of ice shards flying towards her target.

    Name: Ice Make: Aurora Borealis
    Rank: A
    Category: Defensive
    MP Cost: 50
    Type: Burst
    HP: 300
    Range: 150
    Speed: 150 mps
    Duration: 5 posts
    Downside: n/a
    Description: Lumine raises her hands high above her head, creating a shimmering wall of Ice and Light, which can absorb damage up to three same rank single target or burst spells before it dissipates.

    Name: Ice Make: Cage
    Rank: A
    Category: Defensive
    MP Cost: 50
    Type: Single Target
    HP: 150
    Range: 300
    Speed: 300 mps
    Duration: 5 posts
    Downside: n/a
    Description: Lumine aims her open palm at her target, firing a glowing shard of Ice toward them, which is easy to notice and avoid, then, if it makes contact, she slowly closes her fist, as a cage of Ice bars encloses them. This is meant to be an arrest method, not to cause harm. If the target does enough damage to the cage, they can escape it.

    Name: Ice Make: Spear
    Rank: A
    Category: Offensive
    MP Cost: 50
    Type: Multi-Target
    Damage: 75
    Range: 225
    Speed: 165 mps
    Duration: 5 posts
    Downside: n/a
    Description: Lumine claps her hands together, and, as she pulls them apart, a Spear forms in the space between them. This one spear is used as a melee weapon, and dissolves once Lumine is finished with it.

    Name: Ice Make: Fist
    Rank: A
    Category: Offensive
    MP Cost: 50
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 100
    Range: 300
    Speed: 300 mps
    Duration: 1 post
    Downside: n/a
    Description: Lumine focuses magic into her fist, and punches the air, in the direction of her target, creating a large fist of Ice near the target, which launches towards them.

    Name: Ice Make: Dagger
    Rank: A
    Category: Offensive
    MP Cost: 50
    Type: Multi-Target
    Damage: 75
    Range: 225
    Speed: 165 mps
    Duration: 5 posts
    Downside: n/a
    Description: Lumine snaps her fingers, and a dagger appears in her hand. This is used as a weapon, to stab or slash with.

    Name: Ice Make: Armor
    Category: Defensive
    MP Cost: 75
    Rank: A+
    Type: Single Target
    HP: 450
    Range:  0
    Speed: 0
    Duration: 9 posts
    Downside: does not cover tails, damage to tails done in full.
    Description: Lumine covers her face with her hand, then waves it over her frame, encasing herself in a suit of armor, made of Ice, with individual tail holes. This armor can absorb up to 450 damage.

    Name: Ice Make: Floor
    Rank: A+
    Category: Offensive
    MP Cost: 75
    Type: Area of Effect
    Damage: 75
    Range: 225 meters
    Speed: 110 mps
    Duration: 9 posts
    Downside: can potentially effect allies negatively
    Description: Lumine kneels down, and places her hand on the floor, causing a coat of Ice to spread from the point of contact, lowering the temperature around herself, and potentially causing damage to anyone who is unfortunate enough to not jump over the edge of the approaching coat of ice.

    Name: Ice Make: Emblem
    Rank: A
    Category: Auxiliary
    MP Cost: 50
    Type: Signature
    Damage: 0
    Range: 0
    Speed: 75 mps
    Duration: 1 post
    Downside: This spell is more of a morale booster, and not meant for combat.
    Description: Lumine slams her right fist into her left palm, and forms a small floating ice sculpture of the Rune Knights emblem. Purely cosmetic.


    Last edited by Lumine Fennec on 14th December 2021, 7:08 pm; edited 5 times in total
    ivyleaf33
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    Mentor : Speculo (former)
    Experience : 779,415

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Advanced Solid Script
    Second Magic: Aura Manipulation
    Third Magic: N/A

    Lunar Frost Empty Re: Lunar Frost

    Post by ivyleaf33 16th April 2019, 11:00 pm

    Spoiler:

    Hi Luna! My name is Ivy and I'll be grading your magic today. All edits will be made in this lovely color - please don't hesitate to contact me with any questions!


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    Lunar Frost B2WXv4aK_o
    sorano granon | solid script | aura manipulation | bank | armory
    i pretend i really liked it this way-- you see, my heart won't die, though i've really tried.


    Lumine Fennec
    Lumine Fennec

    Player 
    Lineage : Seductor’s Touch
    Position : None
    Posts : 119
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 31
    Mentor : Masha
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Lunar Frost
    Second Magic:
    Third Magic:

    Lunar Frost Empty Re: Lunar Frost

    Post by Lumine Fennec 17th April 2019, 4:58 am

    I think I got it all.
    ivyleaf33
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    Age : 21
    Mentor : Speculo (former)
    Experience : 779,415

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Advanced Solid Script
    Second Magic: Aura Manipulation
    Third Magic: N/A

    Lunar Frost Empty Re: Lunar Frost

    Post by ivyleaf33 17th April 2019, 6:32 am

    Spoiler:

    My biggest apologies for missing things in there. Hopefully it won't be too much work to make those few edits.


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    Lunar Frost B2WXv4aK_o
    sorano granon | solid script | aura manipulation | bank | armory
    i pretend i really liked it this way-- you see, my heart won't die, though i've really tried.


    Lumine Fennec
    Lumine Fennec

    Player 
    Lineage : Seductor’s Touch
    Position : None
    Posts : 119
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 31
    Mentor : Masha
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Lunar Frost
    Second Magic:
    Third Magic:

    Lunar Frost Empty Re: Lunar Frost

    Post by Lumine Fennec 17th April 2019, 6:45 am

    Okay, fixed for now.
    ivyleaf33
    ivyleaf33

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    Guild : Fairy Tail
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    Age : 21
    Mentor : Speculo (former)
    Experience : 779,415

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Advanced Solid Script
    Second Magic: Aura Manipulation
    Third Magic: N/A

    Lunar Frost Empty Re: Lunar Frost

    Post by ivyleaf33 18th April 2019, 5:06 am

    Spoiler:

    Lunar Frost KhyzeRtP_o


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    Lunar Frost B2WXv4aK_o
    sorano granon | solid script | aura manipulation | bank | armory
    i pretend i really liked it this way-- you see, my heart won't die, though i've really tried.


    Shen Kadokawa
    Shen Kadokawa

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    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Infinite Arcana
    Second Magic: Vox Universum
    Third Magic: Disciple of War

    Lunar Frost Empty Re: Lunar Frost

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 25th August 2020, 7:42 am

    Archived due to player inactivity

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    Saraphina
    Saraphina

    The White Queen


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    Post by Saraphina 20th November 2021, 3:42 pm

    ♕♕:

    Lunar Frost J8Nltax


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    Shen Kadokawa

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    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11937
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 505
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 26
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Infinite Arcana
    Second Magic: Vox Universum
    Third Magic: Disciple of War

    Lunar Frost Empty Re: Lunar Frost

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 27th November 2021, 2:45 pm

    Nero here to grade this magic. As an overarching edit, all of your spells are not following the official spell templates for caster-type spells and are specifically missing sections for both categories and MP cost, which I must ask you to adjust accordingly. You will be able to find all of my edits in this color in your grading below:

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    Lumine Fennec
    Lumine Fennec

    Player 
    Lineage : Seductor’s Touch
    Position : None
    Posts : 119
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 31
    Mentor : Masha
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Lunar Frost
    Second Magic:
    Third Magic:

    Lunar Frost Empty Re: Lunar Frost

    Post by Lumine Fennec 14th December 2021, 7:10 pm

    did the requested updates, or equivalent to the best of my ability. some of it might be wrong, but i did my best to explain the intended use of certain spells.

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