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    Takeover: Forge Soul

    newwaterz
    newwaterz

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    Post by newwaterz on Sat 13 Apr 2019 - 15:09

    Magic

    Magic Name: Divine Forge Soul
    Magic Type: Holder Takeover
    Description: The Mask of the Forge started as a skeletal mask made of steel that Janine found during an archeological dig with her friend. It became her connection to the Goddess Illyria and eventually she made contact with the Spirit of the Forge, Meltan. After a boring Afternoon, Janine explored the mask and met the Spirit within. Now, in exchange for tea once a weak, Janine gained access to the Spirit’s Magic instead of being taken over by him. Instead of a relationship of domination, the two recognize the benefits each bring to the body.

    The Slag spells bring a unique element into the word as well as a different set of tactics. If they near the maximum range of the spell, its a solid hunk of iron flying at your face. Get too close and molten metal coats and burns your body until it cools down.
    Benefits: Primary Item Benefit: Holder Item receives 2 additional abilities which are equal to the characters rank (up to S). Auxiliary Benefit: +15% to HP and MP.
    Unique Abilities:

    • Forge Soul: Forge Soul utilizes a combination of Metal and Fire Magic to create slag. In the first 75% of the spell’s range, with the exception of Burst Spells, the slag is molten metal and does it’s damage over time at 50% for five post. The slag becomes solid iron in the last quarter of the spells range and remains after the spell duration. It still can not be eaten by Janine. But it can be used to produce metal items.  


    Last edited by newwaterz on Tue 23 Apr 2019 - 14:49; edited 1 time in total


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    Takeover: Forge Soul Wsb8ROK
    Janine Kirrity Lolligo von Minstrel ✝ D-Rank Mage ✝ Dies Irae
    Metallic God Slayer
    Bank


    Health PointsMagic PowerSpeedMelee DamageMagic SensoryDamage ReductionDamage Reduction (Metal)
    450 HP300MP30 m/s45 HP150 Meters25%25%, 35%, 50%, 50%, 50%

    newwaterz
    newwaterz

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    Post by newwaterz on Sat 13 Apr 2019 - 15:10

    Spells:

    • C-Rank

      • Name: Molten Hammer
        Rank: C
        Type: Area of Effect
        Damage: 30
        Range: 60 m
        Speed: 30 m/s
        Duration: 1
        Description: Taking a deep breath, Janine/Meltan will unleash a cone of Slag from their mouth. This cone goe out 60 meters and goes out 30 meters wide, coating and striking everyone within the cone.

      • Name: Molten Buster
        Rank: C
        Type: Burst and Area of Effect
        Damage: 60 (If the orb hits a target) 30 to those in the splash zone
        Range: 30/60 m
        Speed: 30 m/s
        Duration: 1
        Description: After creating a orb of molten metal in their hand Janine/Meltan will throw it up to 30 m. On impact the orb will burst out splashing the slag everywhere in a 60 m radius.

      • Name: Molten Tongs
        Rank: C
        Type: Single Target
        Damage: 60
        Range: 120
        Speed: 120 m/s
        Duration: 1
        Description: Forming two curved bands of slag from their arm, Janine/Meltan can launch them forward to slam into two opposing side of an opponent.


    • D-Rank

      • Name: Forge Soul: Molten Core
        Rank: D
        Type: Burst (Partial Take Over)
        Melee Damage: N/A
        Range: Self
        Speed: Self
        Duration: 3
        Description: Molten Core swaps her stomach and digestive system with one that can handle and store molten metal.
        Abilities:
        Ability 1:

        Name: Core of the Forge
        Type: Burst
        Damage: N/A
        Range: Self
        Speed: Self
        Duration: Passive
        Description: Having an internal body of molten steel gives Janine/Meltan a resistance from Heat and fire, reducing the damage they are dealt by 40%
        Buff: Spell Damage 25%

      • Name: Forge Soul: Iron Will
        Rank: D
        Type: Burst (Partial Takeover)
        Melee Damage: N/A
        Range: Self
        Speed: Self
        Duration: 3
        Description: The Iron Soul takes the form of the white cape draped across their shoulders.
        Abilities:
        Ability 1:

        Name: Can’t Stand the Heat
        Type: Burst
        Damage: N/A
        Range: Self
        Speed: Self
        Duration: 3
        Description: Janine/Meltan’s Cloak can be used as a shield, capable of deflecting up to two spells at a time.
        Buff: HP 25%

      • Name: Forge Soul: Firey Eyes
        Rank: D
        Type: Burst (Partial Takeover)
        Melee Damage: N/A
        Range: Self
        Speed: Self
        Duration: 3
        Description: A white featureless mask forms over Janine/Meltan’s face becoming firey eyes.
        Abilities:
        Ability 1:

        Name: Flowing Steel
        Type: Burst
        Damage: None
        Range: Self
        Speed: Slef
        Duration: Passive
        Description: Possessing knowledge of the art of Slag, Firey eyes makes it easier to fire off Molten Spells, reducing the cost to them by 40%.
        Buff: MP 25%


    • Signature

      • Name: Let me Take over
        Rank: User’s Rank
        Type: Burst
        Damage: N/A
        Range: Self
        Speed: Self
        Duration: Passive
        Description: This spell changes who is in control of the body while the mask is worn. Meltan’s Firey Soul allows their spells to go further, increasing the range of all spells they use. When Janine’s elegant refined spirit takes over in her own body, her strength increases instead. It is not possible to receive both effects as the body can only be controlled by one spirit. Janine’s rank determines the increase of this effect. C - 45%. B - 50%. A - 55%. S - 60%


    • Advanced

      • Name: Forge Soul: Full Body
        Rank: C+
        Type: Burst Full Body
        Melee Damage: 12
        Range: Self
        Speed: Self
        Duration: 6
        Description: Combining the Firey Eyes, Iron Soul, Edgelord, and Molten Core Partial Takeovers, this full take over may seem like a simple costume change. Janine’s body has changed from the inside out. First her stomach and digestive system have altered to contain and manipulate molten iron. Her face was replaced by a white featureless mask. Her torso is covered in a white blouse with a white cloak over her shoulders. A dark blue body suit covers the rest of her body until white gloves and boots protect her extremities. More notably, Meltan, the Spirit of the Forge, joins her in spirit.
        Abilities:
        Ability 1:

        Name: Spring in the Step
        Type: Burst
        Damage: None
        Range: 45 m
        Speed: 45 m/s
        Duration: Passive
        Description: With an extra spring in their step, Janine/Meltan can leap the spell range with a single step. This can be useful for quick get aways or tracking foes.
        Ability 2:

        Name: Full Throttle
        Type: Single Target
        Damage: 90
        Range: 180 m
        Speed: 180 m/s
        Duration: 1
        Description: After heating up thier foot, Janine/Meltan launches forward in a dive kick on the intended target, leaving behind the Dies Irae Cross where they impact.
        Buff: Speed 85%

      • Name: Forge Soul: Edgelord
        Rank: D+
        Type: Burst Partial Take Over
        Melee Damage: 7
        Range: Self
        Speed: Self
        Duration: 5
        Description: Edgelord appears as a blue body suit covering Janine’s body. This covering is actually a razor sharp skin that allows every part of her body to slice like a long sword.
        Abilities:
        Ability 1:

        Name: Cut from Source
        Type: Single Target
        Damage: 60
        Range: Melee
        Speed: 90 m/s
        Duration: 1
        Description: Janine/Meltan’s body can strike at a spell  cutting it off from its source of magic and causing it to dissipate. It can nullify a single spell of D rank. If it is used against a higher level spell, the attacks damage is done to the mana cost of the spell. If the damage is more than double the mana used to cast the spell, it is nullified. This does not do dmaage to opponents.
        Buff: Melee Damage 37.5%




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    Takeover: Forge Soul Wsb8ROK
    Janine Kirrity Lolligo von Minstrel ✝ D-Rank Mage ✝ Dies Irae
    Metallic God Slayer
    Bank


    Health PointsMagic PowerSpeedMelee DamageMagic SensoryDamage ReductionDamage Reduction (Metal)
    450 HP300MP30 m/s45 HP150 Meters25%25%, 35%, 50%, 50%, 50%

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    Post by MarkusEldridge on Wed 24 Apr 2019 - 19:24

    Hey there, I am so sorry about the delay in grading, but let us get this done. I am Markus, and there are just a few things to not. All of my grading will be in This lovely color.

    One overarching comment.

    • Your Holder Item must be linked in your magic.

    Spoiler:

    @newwaterz wrote:Magic

    Magic Name: Divine Forge Soul
    Magic Type: Holder Takeover
    Description: The Mask of the Forge started as a skeletal mask made of steel that Janine found during an archeological dig with her friend. It became her connection to the Goddess Illyria and eventually she made contact with the Spirit of the Forge, Meltan. After a boring Afternoon, Janine explored the mask and met the Spirit within. Now, in exchange for tea once a weak, Janine gained access to the Spirit’s Magic instead of being taken over by him. Instead of a relationship of domination, the two recognize the benefits each bring to the body.

    The Slag spells bring a unique element into the word as well as a different set of tactics. If they near the maximum range of the spell, its a solid hunk of iron flying at your face. Get too close and molten metal coats and burns your body until it cools down.
    Benefits: Primary Item Benefit: Holder Item receives 2 additional abilities which are equal to the characters rank (up to S). Auxiliary Benefit: +15% to HP and MP.
    Unique Abilities:

    • Forge Soul: Forge Soul utilizes a combination of Metal and Fire Magic to create slag. In the first 75% of the spell’s range, with the exception of Burst Spells, the slag is molten metal and does it’s damage over time at 50% for five post. The slag becomes solid iron in the last quarter of the spells range and remains after the spell duration. It still can not be eaten by Janine. But it can be used to produce metal items. From how it sounds this is attempting to change the effect of the spell based on range, so up to 75% it is a DoT effect, and after just solid damage? If this is the case, that is now allowed as it counts as reclassifying spells. DoT is a heavy effect that generally needs to be included in the spell itself, in addition to that this would change the spells duration, which is also not allowed.


    @newwaterz wrote:Spells:

    • C-Rank

      • Name: Molten Hammer
        Rank: C
        Type: Area of Effect
        Damage: 30
        Range: 60 m
        Speed: 30 m/s
        Duration: 1
        Description: Taking a deep breath, Janine/Meltan will unleash a cone of Slag from their mouth. This cone goe out 60 meters and goes out 30 meters wide, coating and striking everyone within the cone.

      • Name: Molten Buster
        Rank: C
        Type: Burst and Area of Effect This would actually be single target AoE, due to the fact that it only damages the one person hit directly then explodes.
        Damage: 60 (If the orb hits a target) 30 to those in the splash zone
        Range: 30/60 m
        Speed: 30 m/s
        Duration: 1
        Description: After creating a orb of molten metal in their hand Janine/Meltan will throw it up to 30 m. On impact the orb will burst out splashing the slag everywhere in a 60 m radius.

      • Name: Molten Tongs
        Rank: C
        Type: Single Target
        Damage: 60
        Range: 120
        Speed: 120 m/s
        Duration: 1
        Description: Forming two curved bands of slag from their arm, Janine/Meltan can launch them forward to slam into two opposing side of an opponent.


    • D-Rank

      • Name: Forge Soul: Molten Core
        Rank: D
        Type: Burst (Partial Take Over)
        Melee Damage: N/A
        Range: Self
        Speed: Self
        Duration: 3
        Description: Molten Core swaps her stomach and digestive system with one that can handle and store molten metal.
        Abilities:
        Ability 1:

        Name: Core of the Forge
        Type: Burst
        Damage: N/A
        Range: Self
        Speed: Self
        Duration: Passive
        Description: Having an internal body of molten steel gives Janine/Meltan a resistance from Heat and fire, reducing the damage they are dealt by 40%
        Buff: Spell Damage 25%

      • Name: Forge Soul: Iron Will
        Rank: D
        Type: Burst (Partial Takeover)
        Melee Damage: N/A
        Range: Self
        Speed: Self
        Duration: 3
        Description: The Iron Soul takes the form of the white cape draped across their shoulders.
        Abilities:
        Ability 1:

        Name: Can’t Stand the Heat
        Type: Burst
        Damage: N/A
        Range: Self
        Speed: Self
        Duration: 3
        Description: Janine/Meltan’s Cloak can be used as a shield, capable of deflecting up to two spells at a time. i assume this means that it has the durability of 2x D rank spells, if so please specify. If this is actually a deflection it caps at D rank, and costs 2x time spell being deflected.
        Buff: HP 25%

      • Name: Forge Soul: Firey Eyes
        Rank: D
        Type: Burst (Partial Takeover)
        Melee Damage: N/A
        Range: Self
        Speed: Self
        Duration: 3
        Description: A white featureless mask forms over Janine/Meltan’s face becoming firey eyes.
        Abilities:
        Ability 1:

        Name: Flowing Steel
        Type: Burst
        Damage: None
        Range: Self
        Speed: Slef
        Duration: Passive
        Description: Possessing knowledge of the art of Slag, Firey eyes makes it easier to fire off Molten Spells, reducing the cost to them by 40%.
        Buff: MP 25%


    • Signature

      • Name: Let me Take over
        Rank: User’s Rank
        Type: Burst
        Damage: N/A
        Range: Self
        Speed: Self
        Duration: Passive
        Description: This spell changes who is in control of the body while the mask is worn. Meltan’s Firey Soul allows their spells to go further, increasing the range of all spells they use. When Janine’s elegant refined spirit takes over in her own body, her strength increases instead. It is not possible to receive both effects as the body can only be controlled by one spirit. Janine’s rank determines the increase of this effect. C - 45%. B - 50%. A - 55%. S - 60%


    • Advanced

      • Name: Forge Soul: Full Body
        Rank: C+
        Type: Burst Full Body
        Melee Damage: 12
        Range: Self
        Speed: Self
        Duration: 6
        Description: Combining the Firey Eyes, Iron Soul, Edgelord, and Molten Core Partial Takeovers, this full take over may seem like a simple costume change. Janine’s body has changed from the inside out. First her stomach and digestive system have altered to contain and manipulate molten iron. Her face was replaced by a white featureless mask. Her torso is covered in a white blouse with a white cloak over her shoulders. A dark blue body suit covers the rest of her body until white gloves and boots protect her extremities. More notably, Meltan, the Spirit of the Forge, joins her in spirit.
        Abilities:
        Ability 1:

        Name: Spring in the Step
        Type: Burst
        Damage: None
        Range: 45 m
        Speed: 45 m/s
        Duration: Passive
        Description: With an extra spring in their step, Janine/Meltan can leap the spell range with a single step. This can be useful for quick get aways or tracking foes.
        Ability 2:

        Name: Full Throttle
        Type: Single Target
        Damage: 90
        Range: 180 m
        Speed: 180 m/s
        Duration: 1
        Description: After heating up thier foot, Janine/Meltan launches forward in a dive kick on the intended target, leaving behind the Dies Irae Cross where they impact.
        Buff: Speed 85%

      • Name: Forge Soul: Edgelord
        Rank: D+
        Type: Burst Partial Take Over
        Melee Damage: 7
        Range: Self
        Speed: Self
        Duration: 5
        Description: Edgelord appears as a blue body suit covering Janine’s body. This covering is actually a razor sharp skin that allows every part of her body to slice like a long sword.
        Abilities:
        Ability 1:

        Name: Cut from Source
        Type: Single Target
        Damage: 60
        Range: Melee
        Speed: 90 m/s
        Duration: 1
        Description: Janine/Meltan’s body can strike at a spell  cutting it off from its source of magic and causing it to dissipate. It can nullify a single spell of D rank. If it is used against a higher level spell, the attacks damage is done to the mana cost of the spell. If the damage is more than double the mana used to cast the spell, it is nullified. This does not do dmaage to opponents.I am sorry, but this is not allowed. No matter what, you must pay rank mana of the spell being cast in order to negate a spell.
        Buff: Melee Damage 37.5%





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