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    Scouting Ring

    Janet Cinderfeild
    Janet Cinderfeild

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    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Ancient Dragon Takeover
    Second Magic: Nightshade Slayer
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    Post by Janet Cinderfeild on 3rd March 2019, 12:33 pm

    Name: Scouting Ring
    Rank: Artifact
    Type: Ring
    Description:
    Scouting Ring:
    Scouting Ring 636284759713966326
    Abilities: summons a small spirit bird out of her ring and and sends it out to look around.

    Ability 1:  Elise can see and hear out of her small spirit bird up to 200 meters at B rank, 300 meters at A rank, and 400 meters at S rank.  She has full control of her bird at any point as long as she has the ring.

    Ability 2:  Elises spirit bird has one attack function which functions as a self destruct function.  When triggered a explosion of harmful raw magic that stings and hurts severely is let out in a large blast.  Anyone within 100 meters at B rank 150 at A rank or 200 at S rank takes 40 damage at B rank, 50 at A rank and 60 at S rank as the bird explodes in a blue essence explosion.


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    MarkusEldridge
    MarkusEldridge

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    Scouting Ring Empty Re: Scouting Ring

    Post by MarkusEldridge on 4th March 2019, 10:00 am

    Hey there, Markus here and I will once more be grading your item! My edits will be in This lovely Color.

    There are a few overarching things that are stopping this item from being approved, those are listed below:

    • First, I need you to put proof of possession, such as a link to where you purchased the item.
    • I have no issues with the item or its abilities, however I need you to put a range and speed for the bird, as it stands this allows the bird to go infinite distance from you, meaning you can have it explode at a range outside of spell range.


    Spoiler:

    Elise LaFlur wrote:Name: Scouting Ring
    Rank: Artifact
    Type: Ring
    Description:
    Scouting Ring:
    Scouting Ring 636284759713966326
    Abilities: summons a small spirit bird out of her ring and and sends it out to look around.

    Ability 1:  Elise can see and hear out of her small spirit bird up to 200 meters at B rank, 300 meters at A rank, and 400 meters at S rank.  She has full control of her bird at any point as long as she has the ring.

    Ability 2:  Elises spirit bird has one attack function which functions as a self destruct function.  When triggered a explosion of harmful raw magic that stings and hurts severely is let out in a large blast.  Anyone within 100 meters at B rank 150 at A rank or 200 at S rank takes 40 damage at B rank, 50 at A rank and 60 at S rank as the bird explodes in a blue essence explosion.


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