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    Crystal-Ice

    ffpoke
    ffpoke

    Player 
    Lineage : Dragon's Blood
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    Posts : 32
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 36
    Experience : 50

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Crystal-Ice
    Second Magic:
    Third Magic:

    Completed Crystal-Ice

    Post by ffpoke 18th April 2018, 6:57 am

    Magic

    Magic Name: Cryistal-Ice
    Magic Type: Holder: Primary Benefit + 20% to magic damage Bond: Auxiliary Benefit
    Description: Crystal-ice is a combo magic of cold ice that can be turned into strong, durable, and sometimes sharp crystal. Crystal can also be into sharp shards. The crystal is what makes the bond. It allows sharing of the ice magic that is stored inside of me and allow it to be transferred to the pet. This melts into water before using.
    Unique Abilities: (List the abilities it provides, make sure to separate each ability! Abilities are like passive traits, or a hidden power that can be activated for a very limited amount of time. These abilities are Unique to your characters specific use of the magic! As a starting D rank character, you can have 1 unique ability.

    • Ability: Concentrate

    Spells:

    Name: Shards
    Rank: D
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 40
    Range: 45 meters from character.
    Speed: 40 meters per second.
    Duration: 2 posts
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Spell cast from his rod. It uses long narrow, pointy cold ice at a time to target a single enemy, like a barrage. They kind of look like arrows from the front because of the speed.

    Name: Ice Shield
    Rank: D
    Type: Single target
    Damage: Only Absorbs 5% of damage done at character.
    Range: 15 meters or less
    Speed: 15 meters per second
    Duration: 3 posts
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Puts ice barrier in front of the character that has some effect but is easily broken. Another spell can be started when it starts to where off.

    Name: Night Wing
    Rank: D
    Type: Area of Effect
    Damage: Puts enemies in area of effect asleep.
    Range: 30 meters for effect.
    Speed: 15 meters per second.
    Duration: 3 posts
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Just puts people to asleep for a short period of time, using my crystal dust. The crystal dust is like stealth element. (Only effective for the first post it's applied and every other post afterward.)


    Advanced Spells:

    Name: Scathe
    Rank: D+
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 40
    Range: 75 meters  from character.
    Speed: 60 meters per second.
    Duration: 5
    Downside: If double potency can not use again for 25 posts, normally 10.
    Description: This Attack has the ability to randomly double its potency, 20% chance. It also speeds up to 90 meters per second. If double potency, give 25% self damage, and slows next magic by 50%.

    Ability Name: Concentrate
    Type: Burst range
    Duration: 3
    Speed: 15 meters  per second.
    Downside: Attacks can get through during setup of ability.
    Description: This creates a beerier that lowers effect of Stun, Sleep, Bind, Heavy, Slow, and Silence by 7.5%.


    Last edited by ffpoke on 27th February 2019, 11:03 pm; edited 8 times in total
    Ahote
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    Completed Re: Crystal-Ice

    Post by Ahote 26th February 2019, 6:51 pm

    Allo there! You might've seen me around, but I'm Ahote, and I'll be grading your magic. All edits will be in this spicy color. Bump when edited.

    ffpoke wrote:Magic

    Magic Name: Cryistal-Ice
    Magic Type: Holder Specify which benefit you are utilizing and any other information regarding benefits as given in the rules. Refer to the rules for Holder Magic for more information.
    Description: Crystal-ice is a combo magic of cold ice that can be turned into strong, durable, and sometimes sharp crystal. Crystal can also be into sharp shards.
    Unique Abilities: (List the abilities it provides, make sure to separate each ability! Abilities are like passive traits, or a hidden power that can be activated for a very limited amount of time. These abilities are Unique to your characters specific use of the magic! As a starting D rank character, you can have 1 unique ability.

    • Ability: Concentrate

    Spells:

    Name: Shards
    Rank: D
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 40
    Range: 45 meters from character.
    Speed: 40 meters per second.
    Duration: 2 posts
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Spell cast from his rod. It uses multiple long narrow and pointy cold ice at a time. Multiple arrows at a time? This seems like a multiple target spell, so please clarify if that's your intention! They kind of look like arrows from the front because of the speed.

    Name: Ice Shield
    Rank: D
    Type: Defensive Defensive isn't a type. Pick between Single Target, Multiple Target, Area of Effect, or Burst.
    Damage: Only saves 35% of damage done at character. Absorption effects may not go over 5% for one ability or spell. Additionally, provide how much damage this barrier absorbs here.
    Range: 15 meters or less
    Speed: 15 meters per second
    Duration: 3 posts
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Puts ice barrier in front of the character that has some effect but is easily broken. Another spell can be started when it starts to where off.

    Name: Night Wing
    Rank: D
    Type: Area of Effect
    Damage: Puts Enemies in area of effect asleep.
    Range: 30 meters for effect.
    Speed: 15 meters per second.
    Duration: 3 posts
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Just puts people to asleep for a short period of time. Keep in mind that this effect is only effective for the first post it's applied and every other post afterward.

    Advanced Spells:

    Name: Scathe
    Rank: D+
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: ?
    Range: 75 meters  from character.
    Speed: 60 meters per second.
    Duration: 5
    Downside: If double potency can not use again for 25 posts, normally 10.
    Description: This Attack has the ability to randomly double its potency, 20% chance. It also speeds up to 1.5x to increase stats like speed beyond what's normally acceptable, downsides of equal or greater value or needed. Decrease another stat by the same or greater amount. and 1.5x in size, if double potency with knockback. You will have to explain this a bit more. Doubling the potency of what? Knockback how far?

    Ability Name: Concentrate
    Type: Area of effect All abilities use burst ranges. Be mindful of that.
    Duration: Lasts 5 or 4 posts based on dice roll for effect percent. (Odd means 5 posts and even is 4 posts). Duration must be a set value and a D-rank spell or ability caps at 3 posts. It must be 3 or less.

    Speed: 2 posts Speed is not measured in posts and can be found in the "Table and FAQ's" provided in the rules section.
    Downside: Attacks can get through during setup of ability.
    Description: This creates a beerier that lowers effect of Stun, Sleep, Bind, Heavy, Slow, Silence, and knockback effects, of 30 or 40%. (Dice roll required odd roll is 30% and even is 40%.). The debuff must be divided equally among all effects being debuffed. So it wouldn't be 30-40%, but 5.7% or 4.2% each.


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    ffpoke
    ffpoke

    Player 
    Lineage : Dragon's Blood
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    Posts : 32
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    Age : 36
    Experience : 50

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Crystal-Ice
    Second Magic:
    Third Magic:

    Completed Re: Crystal-Ice

    Post by ffpoke 27th February 2019, 12:12 am

    Fixed and edited.
    Ahote
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    Completed Re: Crystal-Ice

    Post by Ahote 27th February 2019, 9:43 am

    ffpoke wrote:Magic

    Magic Name: Cryistal-Ice
    Magic Type: Holder: Primary Benefit +20% to physical or magic damage? Bond: Auxiliary Benefit
    Description: Crystal-ice is a combo magic of cold ice that can be turned into strong, durable, and sometimes sharp crystal. Crystal can also be into sharp shards. What part of this magic is Bond? Include it in the description.
    Unique Abilities: (List the abilities it provides, make sure to separate each ability! Abilities are like passive traits, or a hidden power that can be activated for a very limited amount of time. These abilities are Unique to your characters specific use of the magic! As a starting D rank character, you can have 1 unique ability.

    • Ability: Concentrate

    Spells:

    Name: Shards
    Rank: D
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 40
    Range: 45 meters from character.
    Speed: 40 meters per second.
    Duration: 2 posts
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Spell cast from his rod. It uses long narrow, pointy cold ice at a time to target a single enemy, like a barrage. They kind of look like arrows from the front because of the speed.

    Name: Ice Shield
    Rank: D
    Type: Single target
    Damage: Only Absorbs 5% of damage done at character.
    Range: 15 meters or less
    Speed: 15 meters per second
    Duration: 3 posts
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Puts ice barrier in front of the character that has some effect but is easily broken. Another spell can be started when it starts to where off.

    Name: Night Wing
    Rank: D
    Type: Area of Effect
    Damage: Puts enemies in area of effect asleep.
    Range: 30 meters for effect.
    Speed: 15 meters per second.
    Duration: 3 posts
    Downside: N/A
    Description: Just puts people to asleep for a short period of time, using my crystal dust. The crystal dust is like stealth element. (Only effective for the first post it's applied and every other post afterward.)


    Advanced Spells:

    Name: Scathe
    Rank: D+
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 40
    Range: 75 meters  from character.
    Speed: 60 meters per second.
    Duration: 5
    Downside: If double potency can not use again for 25 posts, normally 10.
    Description: This Attack has the ability to randomly double its potency, 20% chance. It also speeds up to 90 meters per second. If double potency, give 25% self damage, and slows next magic by 50%.

    Ability Name: Concentrate
    Type: Burst range
    Duration: 3
    Speed: 15 meters  per second.
    Downside: Attacks can get through during setup of ability.
    Description: This creates a beerier that lowers effect of Stun, Sleep, Bind, Heavy, Slow, and Silence by 7.5%.


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    ffpoke
    ffpoke

    Player 
    Lineage : Dragon's Blood
    Position : None
    Posts : 32
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 36
    Experience : 50

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Crystal-Ice
    Second Magic:
    Third Magic:

    Completed Re: Crystal-Ice

    Post by ffpoke 27th February 2019, 11:03 pm

    Fixed and updated again.
    Ahote
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    Second Magic:
    Third Magic:

    Completed Re: Crystal-Ice

    Post by Ahote 28th February 2019, 4:24 pm

    Crystal-Ice Ahote_approval

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