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    Betrayer of the Kamigawa

    Suijin Azurestorm
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    Post by Suijin Azurestorm on 31st January 2019, 7:06 pm

    Betrayer of the Kamigawa

    Betrayer of the Kamigawa NqmL805


    Wielder: Suijin Azurestorm
    Purchase Proof: VIP shop purchase

    Description
    The school of Kamigawa-- an honored and respected school unique to magic users in Midi, were tasked to train and bolster magic users of their nation to harness their unique magic powers to work and commune with nature, spirits and the gods. Their school harbored many secrets and arts coveted even to the samurai who dominated the nation's authority. They specialize in natural magics, those closely related to nature or the spirit world.

    Through meditation, training, study and dedication-- many have become shining stars in Midian. Mages attuned to nature and the spirit world seeking to bring peace to their lands and beyond. A noble calling even to rival the samurai that claim authority in Midi.

    Those who have trained there, even when raised their as abandoned or orphaned children, have developed great connections to the natural world. However, not all of those who have trained here have become noble souls or heroes. Some have taken its teachings in the wrong way and become changed in ways unintended. Nature is not always noble or kind-- as is the story of Suijin.

    While possessing a grand amount of hubris, self-superiority and a dark lineage from his unknown family... his path from the Kamigawa diverged upon him stealing the ancient secrets of the clan and school to become a Water God Slayer. Now he is branded a wanted target by the school and Midi, forsaking the nobler path the school represented in the search to become a god among men.


    Cosmetic Skills:
    Plot Abilities:

    Roguish Charm of the Water Deity: Suijin possesses a natural, elegant and sexy charm. Visually he is gorgeous to many (even men, unfortunately), but as if he wasn't enough, his ascendancy as a 'demi-god' made him an Adonis. He radiates a natural, magic allure that is equivalent to what many know as a 'charm spell', luring admirers and lovers to him like moths to a flame. Charm/Allure requires OOC permission to effect people.


    Abilities:

    Stolen Secrets of the Kamigawa: Thirsty for more power and techniques, Suijin sought to earn them but failed due to his hubris and ego in the face of his other students and teachers. As a result, he took matters into his own hands and stole the ancient scroll his clan held dear-- showing him the place to learn Water Slayer magic-- and stronger spells.  The lineage holder gains two, advance spell that can be applied to 1 magic. One is at S rank, one as H rank.

    Way of the Waterbender: The Kamigawa clan trained specifically in the arts of nature, combining magic with martial arts to work with the elements on fundamental levels. Training in the art of water magic and martial arts, Suijin'sability to adapt, endure and flow like water becomes second-nature to him. Suijin has a permanent boost to Melee damage by  55% (Max at 60% for S). When using defensive spells , such as water defensive magic, the durability of these spells increase by 55% (Max at 60% for S) -- of the max damage they can protect against.

    Arts of the Spirits : The mage who had worked with the Kamigawa commune with the spirits far easier than others. They shared their power and wisdom with them without reservation, both good or bad. As such, their capacity for secret arts have expanded beyond most. For each magic the user gains, they gain an additional signature for that magic that caps at A-Rank.

    Born to Be Wild: The Kamigawa had taught its students to value and honor nature. For Suijin, he believes nature and its beasts have the true idea of life. As such, he is more connected to animals. This Lineage allows the owner to have 1 extra combat pet to buy & use.

    Undersea Treasures: The sea is bountiful of lost or natural treasures. Gods of the Seas were known of the collection of these treasures and lavash their thrones with it. As such, Suijin's wealth became as bountiful as the sea. When completion of a mission, you gain 100% more jewel from completed missions. However, when working with another person-- he may freely divide his earnings from 50% to give his partner 50% more jewel as well.


    Last edited by Suijin Azurestorm on 22nd July 2019, 8:08 am; edited 14 times in total


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    Second Magic: Consecration of War - Einherjar
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    Post by Johann on 25th April 2019, 10:16 am

    Hello Zaber, you know me and what I do so let's get started on the grading right away. All my edits will be in this color

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    Descendant Of the Storm Gods

    Betrayer of the Kamigawa TqX8voL


    Wielder: Indra Tenzoku
    Purchase Proof: VIP shop purchase

    Description
    In the ancient times of Midi, two gods held dominion over wind and storm. Brother gods who wreaked havoc and dismay with their antics as they caused thunder and lightning with glee and abandon. Many legends were spread about the two as how they were trouble makers, plunderers, spirits of nature-- all of which agree of their violent, unpredictable and devastating nature. While they have ill natures, as destroyers or even demons, they were responcible for using their force over nature to protect the land from invaders and as benefits to the people in ancient times.

    It was said they bore children throughout the ages, blessed with slivers of their former glory. Those who inherit this power are prone to be as destructive and powerful as these two gods were, with the same command over lightning and wind. Bad weather brews wherever they go and are considered avatars for their ancient power. They are often seen as gods of war for their ferocity.

    A majority of these were said to reside in the Tenzoku clan of Midi, who was known as master assassins and ninjutsu. However, the enforcement of the samurai of that region had led to their seemingly extinct lineage, but a few are known to survive-- working to regain their glory and rebuild their clan.

    Cosmetic Skills:
    Plot Abilities:

    Voice of The Rebellious Duo: The voices of Fujin, Raijin, or Both are present to those who awakened the powers of this Lineage. As such they are plagued or blessed to have them possess the wielders as non-combative pets for their wisdom or advice... or just to plague them. Any physical manifestation of them is an aura of their vision that comes out of the lineage wielder.



    Abilities:
    The Storm Palace: The two gods brought bad omens in the form of powerful thunderstorms. Those who share their bloodline also bring forth bad weather wherever they go. When engaged in combat, stormclouds brew overhead, producing lightning, wind, and rain. These effects can be consumed by all manner of slayer and are equal to the legacy holders rank-- though MP regained is 1/2 of their normal value. If a slayer consumes this element, they must wait for one post each before feeding on it again. Enemy slayers of the corresponding elements may feed off this too. [This effect is passive and cannot be negated. Wandering Storm is separate from this effect.] (Please specify that the limit on slayer MP consumption for naturally occurring elements cannot be exceeded through this effect, capping at 1/4th of the mana of a spell of your rank)

    Fast as Lightning: Members of this clan and lineage are graced with speed akin to thunder and lightning itself.  Despite any condition or a form he takes, he will be able to match anyone's speed within burst range of his rank-- plus 10% additional speed to it. Whenever he is the fastest person around, or when he uses a speed enhancing spell, he will gain an additional 60% increase to his speed on top of it. (Gaining an additional 60% speed whenever you use a "speed-enhancing" spell is not allowed sicne it would, by far, exceed buff caps. Also, since you are currently A rank, the max for a passive buff of your rank would be 55%)

    Embodiment of the Warring Gods: Certain members of this lineage are blessed/or cursed to hear the voices of the gods now dwelling in their body. They rage to take form again, and would use their descendants to do so! Whether they cooperate or not, the result of this possession allows the bearer of this lineage to have 5 additional spell slots (standalone and separate from magics, one of each rank up to S.) for Takeover spells only. These spells may take an affiliation based off God-Slayer corruption if decided on.

    Storm Samsara/Storm Incarnate: The possessed members of the Tenzoku clan to manifest their evil gods into a full transformation, their bodies taking on new shape and powers to manifest the Fujin and Raijin's full fury. This allows them to take on 3 additional signatures (One caps at B, A, & S) / 2 additional signature max of S class. (You must decide on either one, you cannot have both. 3 additional signature spells for a single magic OR 2 signature additional spells for a single magic)

    Imperial Plunder: The Tenzoku clan have chosen the art of assassination, and the art of the shadows. The gods that influence their clan both drive their greed and their desire for battle and the spoils of war that follow. When completion of a mission, Jewel Rewards are doubled. (The wording of this ability is too vague. If you enhance the jewel reward for yourself and only yourself, please specify that for classification purposes)

    Rulers of the Heavens Fujin and Raijin had dominion over the heavens since ancient times, which has become their playground and dominion that they would tolerate no other to rule it. Those with their blood in their veins can not easily be harmed by those same forces. By paying 50% of the enemy spell cost, one can redirect any wind based or lightning based spell that is equal to their rank ( S Rank Max). The owner of this ability also gains 25% damage reduction of all lightning and wind-based spells. (You may not redirect spells for half cost. Please specify that full MP cost must be paid in order to redirect a spell. Additionally, this ability lacks both range and speed, so I must ask you to specify a value for both)

    Redirection has a 3 post cooldown. The rest are passive


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    Betrayer of the Kamigawa Johannsiggies
    Suijin Azurestorm
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    Post by Suijin Azurestorm on 27th April 2019, 9:20 am

    Made some changes overall. But i fixed w hat i could.

    Put the two signatures into the previous ability as one catagory . One thing i forgot to add-- can the lineage have the corrupted element a god slayer have for attacks-- so long no other god slayer benefits?

    Anyway, please let me know if any more changes . Thank you.


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    Second Magic: Consecration of War - Einherjar
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    Post by Johann on 28th April 2019, 7:00 am

    Betrayer of the Kamigawa FbVA7uB

    Spoiler:
    Zabertooth wrote:
    Descendant Of the Storm Gods

    Betrayer of the Kamigawa TqX8voL


    Wielder: Indra Tenzoku
    Purchase Proof: VIP shop purchase

    Description
    In the ancient times of Midi, two gods held dominion over wind and storm. Brother gods who wreaked havoc and dismay with their antics as they caused thunder and lightning with glee and abandon. Many legends were spread about the two as how they were trouble makers, plunderers, spirits of nature-- all of which agree of their violent, unpredictable and devastating nature. While they have ill natures, as destroyers or even demons, they were responcible for using their force over nature to protect the land from invaders and as benefits to the people in ancient times.

    It was said they bore children throughout the ages, blessed with slivers of their former glory. Those who inherit this power are prone to be as destructive and powerful as these two gods were, with the same command over lightning and wind. Bad weather brews wherever they go and are considered avatars for their ancient power. They are often seen as gods of war for their ferocity.

    A majority of these were said to reside in the Tenzoku clan of Midi, who was known as master assassins and ninjutsu. However, the enforcement of the samurai of that region had led to their seemingly extinct lineage, but a few are known to survive-- working to regain their glory and rebuild their clan.

    Cosmetic Skills:
    Plot Abilities:

    Voice of The Rebellious Duo: The voices of Fujin, Raijin, or Both are present to those who awakened the powers of this Lineage. As such they are plagued or blessed to have them possess the wielders as non-combative pets for their wisdom or advice... or just to plague them. Any physical manifestation of them is an aura of their vision that comes out of the lineage wielder.



    Abilities:
    Blessing of the Twin Gods: The two gods brought bad omens to the land. Storms and powerful weather conditions. Those of the Tenzoku clan inherit these mighty techniques, regardless of their magic or training to bring disaster upon their foes. The lineage holder gains two, advance spell that can be applied to 1 magic. One is at S rank, one as H rank.

    Fast as Lightning: Members of this clan and lineage are graced with speed akin to thunder and lightning itself.  Despite any condition or a form he takes, he will be able to match anyone's speed within burst range of his rank-- plus 10% additional speed to it. Whenever he is the fastest person around, or when he uses a speed enhancing spell, he will gain an additional 55% (60% capping at S Rank) increase to his speed on top of it.

    Embodiment of the Warring Gods: Certain members of this lineage are blessed/or cursed to hear the voices of the gods now dwelling in their body. They rage to take form again, and would use their descendants to do so! Whether they cooperate or not, the result of this possession allows the bearer of this lineage to have 5 additional spell slots (standalone and separate from magics, one of each rank up to S.) for Takeover spells only. These spells may take an affiliation based off God-Slayer corruption if decided on. In addition to these, the caster can gain two additional S rank signature spells that stand alone from the magic, these signatures must be takeovers.

    Imperial Plunder: The Tenzoku clan have chosen the art of assassination, and the art of the shadows. The gods that influence their clan both drive their greed and their desire for battle and the spoils of war that follow. When completion of a mission, you gain 100% more jewel from completed missions.

    Rulers of the Heavens Fujin and Raijin had dominion over the heavens since ancient times, which has become their playground and dominion that they would tolerate no other to rule it. Those with their blood in their veins can not easily be harmed by those same forces. By paying an enemy spell original cost, one can redirect any wind based or lightning based spell that is equal to their rank ( S Rank Max). The owner of this ability also gains 25% damage reduction of all lightning and wind-based spells. This ability works to the maximum range and speed of Burst rank present rank (Cap at S).  

    Redirection has a 3 post cooldown. The rest are passive


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    Nessa Cordelia Lux
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    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux on 2nd July 2019, 1:36 pm

    Moved and Unlocked at the User's Request~

    Spoiler:

    @Suijin Azurestorm wrote:
    Descendant Of the Storm Gods

    Betrayer of the Kamigawa TqX8voL


    Wielder: Indra Tenzoku
    Purchase Proof: VIP shop purchase

    Description
    In the ancient times of Midi, two gods held dominion over wind and storm. Brother gods who wreaked havoc and dismay with their antics as they caused thunder and lightning with glee and abandon. Many legends were spread about the two as how they were trouble makers, plunderers, spirits of nature-- all of which agree of their violent, unpredictable and devastating nature. While they have ill natures, as destroyers or even demons, they were responcible for using their force over nature to protect the land from invaders and as benefits to the people in ancient times.

    It was said they bore children throughout the ages, blessed with slivers of their former glory. Those who inherit this power are prone to be as destructive and powerful as these two gods were, with the same command over lightning and wind. Bad weather brews wherever they go and are considered avatars for their ancient power. They are often seen as gods of war for their ferocity.

    A majority of these were said to reside in the Tenzoku clan of Midi, who was known as master assassins and ninjutsu. However, the enforcement of the samurai of that region had led to their seemingly extinct lineage, but a few are known to survive-- working to regain their glory and rebuild their clan.

    Cosmetic Skills:
    Plot Abilities:

    Voice of The Rebellious Duo: The voices of Fujin, Raijin, or Both are present to those who awakened the powers of this Lineage. As such they are plagued or blessed to have them possess the wielders as non-combative pets for their wisdom or advice... or just to plague them. Any physical manifestation of them is an aura of their vision that comes out of the lineage wielder.



    Abilities:
    Blessing of the Twin Gods: The two gods brought bad omens to the land. Storms and powerful weather conditions. Those of the Tenzoku clan inherit these mighty techniques, regardless of their magic or training to bring disaster upon their foes. The lineage holder gains two, advance spell that can be applied to 1 magic. One is at S rank, one as H rank.

    Fast as Lightning: Members of this clan and lineage are graced with speed akin to thunder and lightning itself.  Despite any condition or a form he takes, he will be able to match anyone's speed within burst range of his rank-- plus 10% additional speed to it. Whenever he is the fastest person around, or when he uses a speed enhancing spell, he will gain an additional 55% (60% capping at S Rank) increase to his speed on top of it.

    Embodiment of the Warring Gods: Certain members of this lineage are blessed/or cursed to hear the voices of the gods now dwelling in their body. They rage to take form again, and would use their descendants to do so! Whether they cooperate or not, the result of this possession allows the bearer of this lineage to have 5 additional spell slots (standalone and separate from magics, one of each rank up to S.) for Takeover spells only. These spells may take an affiliation based off God-Slayer corruption if decided on. In addition to these, the caster can gain two additional S rank signature spells that stand alone from the magic, these signatures must be takeovers.

    Imperial Plunder: The Tenzoku clan have chosen the art of assassination, and the art of the shadows. The gods that influence their clan both drive their greed and their desire for battle and the spoils of war that follow. When completion of a mission, you gain 100% more jewel from completed missions.

    Rulers of the Heavens Fujin and Raijin had dominion over the heavens since ancient times, which has become their playground and dominion that they would tolerate no other to rule it. Those with their blood in their veins can not easily be harmed by those same forces. By paying an enemy spell original cost, one can redirect any wind based or lightning based spell that is equal to their rank ( S Rank Max). The owner of this ability also gains 25% damage reduction of all lightning and wind-based spells. This ability works to the maximum range and speed of Burst rank present rank (Cap at S).  

    Redirection has a 3 post cooldown. The rest are passive


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    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Saga of War - Ragnarök
    Second Magic: Consecration of War - Einherjar
    Third Magic: Maledict of War - Berserkir

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    Post by Johann on 21st July 2019, 6:24 am

    Hello Suijin, Joh here to grade this magic. You know me and what I do, so let's go right ahead. All of my edits will be in this color

    Spoiler:
    @Suijin Azurestorm wrote:
    Betrayer of the Kamigawa

    Betrayer of the Kamigawa NqmL805


    Wielder: Suijin Azurestorm
    Purchase Proof: VIP shop purchase

    Description
    The school of Kamigawa-- an honored and respected school unique to magic users in Midi, were tasked to train and bolster magic users of their nation to harness their unique magic powers to work and commune with nature, spirits and the gods. Their school harbored many secrets and arts coveted even to the samurai who dominated the nation's authority. They specialize in natural magics, those closely related to nature or the spirit world.

    Through meditation, training, study and dedication-- many have become shining stars in Midian. Mages attuned to nature and the spirit world seeking to bring peace to their lands and beyond. A noble calling even to rival the samurai that claim authority in Midi.

    Those who have trained there, even when raised their as abandoned or orphaned children, have developed great connections to the natural world. However, not all of those who have trained here have become noble souls or heroes. Some have taken its teachings in the wrong way and become changed in ways unintended. Nature is not always noble or kind-- as is the story of Suijin.

    While possessing a grand amount of hubris, self-superiority and a dark lineage from his unknown family... his path from the Kamigawa diverged upon him stealing the ancient secrets of the clan and school to become a Water God Slayer. Now he is branded a wanted target by the school and Midi, forsaking the nobler path the school represented in the search to become a god among men.


    Cosmetic Skills:
    Plot Abilities:

    Roguish Charm of the Water Deity: Suijin possesses a natural, elegant and sexy charm. Visually he is gorgeous to many (even men, unfortunately), but as if he wasn't enough, his ascendancy as a 'demi-god' made him an Adonis. He radiates a natural, magic allure that is equivalent to what many know as a 'charm spell', luring admirers and lovers to him like moths to a flame. Charm/Allure requires OOC permission to effect people.


    Abilities:

    Stolen Secrets of the Kamigawa: Thirsty for more power and techniques, Suijin sought to earn them but failed due to his hubris and ego in the face of his other students and teachers. As a result, he took matters into his own hands and stole the ancient scroll his clan held dear-- showing him the place to learn Water Slayer magic-- and stronger spells.  The lineage holder gains two, advance spell that can be applied to 1 magic. One is at S rank, one as H rank.

    Ebb and Flow: Training in the art of water magic and martial arts, his ability to adapt, endure and flow like water becomes second-nature to him. When using defensive spells , such as water defensive magic, the durability of these spells increase by 55% (Max at 60% for S) -- of the max damage they can produce. When negation and reflection spells are used, the caster may pay half the normal amount to activate them (Negations cost 50%, Reflections cost the same value. (I need you to clarify this ability. Is the cost of spells containing these effects cut in half or the cost for the effects themselves? The latter, unfortunately, is not allowed, as negations, redirections, copies, and reflections are always based on the original cost of a spell)

    Arts of the Spirits : The mage who had worked with the Kamigawa commune with the spirits far easier than others. They shared their power and wisdom with them without reservation, both good or bad. As such, their capacity for secret arts have expanded beyond most. For each magic the user gains, they gain 2 additional signatures for that magic.

    Born to Be Wild: The Kamigawa had taught its students to value and honor nature. For Suijin, he believes nature and its beasts have the true idea of life. As such, he is more connected to animals. This Lineage allows the owner to have 1 extra combat pet to use. However, only one can be used of either kind per thread.

    Maritine Salvage: The sea is bountiful of lost or natural treasures. Gods of the Seas were known of the collection of these treasures and lavash their thrones with it. As such, Suijin's wealth became as bountiful as the sea. When completion of a mission, you gain 100% more jewel from completed missions.


    Additionally, you are only utilizing 8 of 10 effects in this lineage, meaning you can add 2 more. Please give me a bump when you're done


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    Betrayer of the Kamigawa Johannsiggies
    Suijin Azurestorm
    Suijin Azurestorm

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    Lineage : Betrayer of the Kamigawa
    Position : None
    Posts : 470
    Guild : Rakshasa
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 17,062

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Water God Slayer Magic
    Second Magic:
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    Betrayer of the Kamigawa Empty Re: Betrayer of the Kamigawa

    Post by Suijin Azurestorm on 21st July 2019, 3:12 pm

    Updated and details added. Thank you


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    Johann

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    Position : God of Justice
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    Age : 28
    Mentor : Ruvel
    Experience : 3,601,669
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    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Saga of War - Ragnarök
    Second Magic: Consecration of War - Einherjar
    Third Magic: Maledict of War - Berserkir

    Betrayer of the Kamigawa Empty Re: Betrayer of the Kamigawa

    Post by Johann on 22nd July 2019, 4:16 am

    One more edit I had previously missed, same color

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    @Suijin Azurestorm wrote:
    Betrayer of the Kamigawa

    Betrayer of the Kamigawa NqmL805


    Wielder: Suijin Azurestorm
    Purchase Proof: VIP shop purchase

    Description
    The school of Kamigawa-- an honored and respected school unique to magic users in Midi, were tasked to train and bolster magic users of their nation to harness their unique magic powers to work and commune with nature, spirits and the gods. Their school harbored many secrets and arts coveted even to the samurai who dominated the nation's authority. They specialize in natural magics, those closely related to nature or the spirit world.

    Through meditation, training, study and dedication-- many have become shining stars in Midian. Mages attuned to nature and the spirit world seeking to bring peace to their lands and beyond. A noble calling even to rival the samurai that claim authority in Midi.

    Those who have trained there, even when raised their as abandoned or orphaned children, have developed great connections to the natural world. However, not all of those who have trained here have become noble souls or heroes. Some have taken its teachings in the wrong way and become changed in ways unintended. Nature is not always noble or kind-- as is the story of Suijin.

    While possessing a grand amount of hubris, self-superiority and a dark lineage from his unknown family... his path from the Kamigawa diverged upon him stealing the ancient secrets of the clan and school to become a Water God Slayer. Now he is branded a wanted target by the school and Midi, forsaking the nobler path the school represented in the search to become a god among men.


    Cosmetic Skills:
    Plot Abilities:

    Roguish Charm of the Water Deity: Suijin possesses a natural, elegant and sexy charm. Visually he is gorgeous to many (even men, unfortunately), but as if he wasn't enough, his ascendancy as a 'demi-god' made him an Adonis. He radiates a natural, magic allure that is equivalent to what many know as a 'charm spell', luring admirers and lovers to him like moths to a flame. Charm/Allure requires OOC permission to effect people.


    Abilities:

    Stolen Secrets of the Kamigawa: Thirsty for more power and techniques, Suijin sought to earn them but failed due to his hubris and ego in the face of his other students and teachers. As a result, he took matters into his own hands and stole the ancient scroll his clan held dear-- showing him the place to learn Water Slayer magic-- and stronger spells.  The lineage holder gains two, advance spell that can be applied to 1 magic. One is at S rank, one as H rank.

    Way of the Waterbender: The Kamigawa clan trained specifically in the arts of nature, combining magic with martial arts to work with the elements on fundamental levels. Training in the art of water magic and martial arts, Suijin'sability to adapt, endure and flow like water becomes second-nature to him. Suijin has a permanent boost to Melee damage by  55% (Max at 60% for S). When using defensive spells , such as water defensive magic, the durability of these spells increase by 55% (Max at 60% for S) -- of the max damage they can protect against.

    Arts of the Spirits : The mage who had worked with the Kamigawa commune with the spirits far easier than others. They shared their power and wisdom with them without reservation, both good or bad. As such, their capacity for secret arts have expanded beyond most. For each magic the user gains, they gain 2 additional signatures for that magic. (This ability cannot give 2 additional user rank signature spells for every magic. You may have two sig spells for a single magic, both of which rank to S, or one sig spell for every magic you gain that ranks up to A)

    Born to Be Wild: The Kamigawa had taught its students to value and honor nature. For Suijin, he believes nature and its beasts have the true idea of life. As such, he is more connected to animals. This Lineage allows the owner to have 1 extra combat pet to buy & use.

    Undersea Treasures: The sea is bountiful of lost or natural treasures. Gods of the Seas were known of the collection of these treasures and lavash their thrones with it. As such, Suijin's wealth became as bountiful as the sea. When completion of a mission, you gain 100% more jewel from completed missions. However, when working with another person-- he may freely divide his earnings from 50% to give his partner 50% more jewel as well.


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    Betrayer of the Kamigawa Johannsiggies
    Suijin Azurestorm
    Suijin Azurestorm

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Dragon Slayer- Character Application Approved!- Magic Application Approved!- Player 
    Lineage : Betrayer of the Kamigawa
    Position : None
    Posts : 470
    Guild : Rakshasa
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 17,062

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Water God Slayer Magic
    Second Magic:
    Third Magic:

    Betrayer of the Kamigawa Empty Re: Betrayer of the Kamigawa

    Post by Suijin Azurestorm on 22nd July 2019, 8:08 am

    Fixed and Updated. Thank you


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    Johann
    Johann

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Demon VIP Status- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishval- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Custom Slayer- God Slayer- Demon Slayer- Neutral Guild Ace- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Shipped- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Fan Art Contest Participant- Haiku Contest Participant- Lineage Making Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 6- Veteran Level 5- Veteran Level 4- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character Application Approved!- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Tertiary Magic- Ship- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 3rd Place Event/Contest Winner- Christmas Event Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Advertisement Achievement Badge- Tournament Participation Badge- Cookie Achievement- Cupcake Achievement- Rainbow Hero- Summer Special Tier 4- Summer Special Tier 3- Summer Special Tier 2- Summer Special Tier 1- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- Have Onida On Your Friend's List- 1 Year Anniversary- Player-
    Lineage : Herald of Destruction
    Position : God of Justice
    Posts : 6060
    Guild : Dies Irae - GM
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 28
    Mentor : Ruvel
    Experience : 3,601,669
    Brownie Points : Kebab∞

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Saga of War - Ragnarök
    Second Magic: Consecration of War - Einherjar
    Third Magic: Maledict of War - Berserkir

    Betrayer of the Kamigawa Empty Re: Betrayer of the Kamigawa

    Post by Johann on 22nd July 2019, 8:12 am

    Betrayer of the Kamigawa FbVA7uB

    Spoiler:
    @Suijin Azurestorm wrote:
    Betrayer of the Kamigawa

    Betrayer of the Kamigawa NqmL805


    Wielder: Suijin Azurestorm
    Purchase Proof: VIP shop purchase

    Description
    The school of Kamigawa-- an honored and respected school unique to magic users in Midi, were tasked to train and bolster magic users of their nation to harness their unique magic powers to work and commune with nature, spirits and the gods. Their school harbored many secrets and arts coveted even to the samurai who dominated the nation's authority. They specialize in natural magics, those closely related to nature or the spirit world.

    Through meditation, training, study and dedication-- many have become shining stars in Midian. Mages attuned to nature and the spirit world seeking to bring peace to their lands and beyond. A noble calling even to rival the samurai that claim authority in Midi.

    Those who have trained there, even when raised their as abandoned or orphaned children, have developed great connections to the natural world. However, not all of those who have trained here have become noble souls or heroes. Some have taken its teachings in the wrong way and become changed in ways unintended. Nature is not always noble or kind-- as is the story of Suijin.

    While possessing a grand amount of hubris, self-superiority and a dark lineage from his unknown family... his path from the Kamigawa diverged upon him stealing the ancient secrets of the clan and school to become a Water God Slayer. Now he is branded a wanted target by the school and Midi, forsaking the nobler path the school represented in the search to become a god among men.


    Cosmetic Skills:
    Plot Abilities:

    Roguish Charm of the Water Deity: Suijin possesses a natural, elegant and sexy charm. Visually he is gorgeous to many (even men, unfortunately), but as if he wasn't enough, his ascendancy as a 'demi-god' made him an Adonis. He radiates a natural, magic allure that is equivalent to what many know as a 'charm spell', luring admirers and lovers to him like moths to a flame. Charm/Allure requires OOC permission to effect people.


    Abilities:

    Stolen Secrets of the Kamigawa: Thirsty for more power and techniques, Suijin sought to earn them but failed due to his hubris and ego in the face of his other students and teachers. As a result, he took matters into his own hands and stole the ancient scroll his clan held dear-- showing him the place to learn Water Slayer magic-- and stronger spells.  The lineage holder gains two, advance spell that can be applied to 1 magic. One is at S rank, one as H rank.

    Way of the Waterbender: The Kamigawa clan trained specifically in the arts of nature, combining magic with martial arts to work with the elements on fundamental levels. Training in the art of water magic and martial arts, Suijin'sability to adapt, endure and flow like water becomes second-nature to him. Suijin has a permanent boost to Melee damage by  55% (Max at 60% for S). When using defensive spells , such as water defensive magic, the durability of these spells increase by 55% (Max at 60% for S) -- of the max damage they can protect against.

    Arts of the Spirits : The mage who had worked with the Kamigawa commune with the spirits far easier than others. They shared their power and wisdom with them without reservation, both good or bad. As such, their capacity for secret arts have expanded beyond most. For each magic the user gains, they gain an additional signature for that magic that caps at A-Rank.

    Born to Be Wild: The Kamigawa had taught its students to value and honor nature. For Suijin, he believes nature and its beasts have the true idea of life. As such, he is more connected to animals. This Lineage allows the owner to have 1 extra combat pet to buy & use.

    Undersea Treasures: The sea is bountiful of lost or natural treasures. Gods of the Seas were known of the collection of these treasures and lavash their thrones with it. As such, Suijin's wealth became as bountiful as the sea. When completion of a mission, you gain 100% more jewel from completed missions. However, when working with another person-- he may freely divide his earnings from 50% to give his partner 50% more jewel as well.


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    Betrayer of the Kamigawa Johannsiggies

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