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    Wind Fleuret (ウインドフルーレ, Uindo Furūre)

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    Wind Fleuret (ウインドフルーレ, Uindo Furūre)

    Post by Yoshino on Tue 21 May - 20:50

    Name: Wind Fleuret (ウインドフルーレ, Uindo Furūre)
    Rank: Legendary (+)
    Type: Rapier
    Description:
    Wind Fleuret:
    The Wind Fleuret is described as a thin sword with a length of 41'' and it consists of a dark-green, dome-shaped guard. Upon activation of a skill, her sword will release a bright glow which will disappear as the execution of the skill has been finished.

    Strengths:
    • A very light weapon.
    • Very easy to handle and wield.
    • Versatility. It can be used to thrust, to slice, to jab, and to slash.
    • It increases the accuracy, and agility of the holder.
    • Allows the holder to parry easily and create a counterattack.

    Weaknesses:
    • Despite of it's lightness and speed, it doesn't deal much damage.
    • Easy to destroy.
    • Magics with Metallic or Earth-based properties will acquire a huge advantage with defending against the sword.
    • Can be easily blocked.
    • Can also be parried by other swords.


    Abilities:
    Star Splash:
    Name: Star Splash (スター・スプラッシュ, Sutā Supurasshu)
    Rank: C
    Description: The skill begins with 3 short thrusts at the targets chest, provoking the target to raise its guard up. Although the first 3 thrusts do not deal much damage, the number of hits and their speed is overwhelming. Afterwards, the 3 thrusts are followed by 2 slashes at the target’s now undefended legs. The user then performs 2 strong jabs high and low, followed by a final strong stab at the target’s chest.

    Strengths:
    • During the execution of this skill, her speed increases to overwhelm the target's initial speed. (Only to mages with equal or lower rank)
    • Her movement cannot be followed easily by eyes.
    • She can also charge at the opponent maximum of 5 ft. away from her.


    Weaknesses:
    • By having superhuman eyes, the movement can be followed and can be easily intercepted.
    • By being blocked forcefully during the execution, the skill can be cancelled depending on how strong the block was. If her movement after the block got delayed, the skill will then be cancelled.
    • Can only affect a single target.


    Duration and Cooldown
    • 1 post duration and 4 posts cooldown.

    Linear:
    Name: «Linear» (リニアー, Riniā)
    Rank: C
    Description: Linear consists of a single thrust straight forward by first holding the rapier in front of the body and then putting in a twist from there. The skill has a remarkably short post-motion delay after usage, allowing multiple Linear to be chained in together at a very short amount of time.

    Strengths:
    • A single thrust can deal huge amounts of damage.
    • Can destroy shields, barriers, or weaken them depending on rank. (Can only destroy defenses equal or lower to holder's rank)
    • Can also intercept the execution and channeling of spells. (Can only destroy offenses equal or lower to holder's rank)


    Weaknesses:
    • Can only create dents in metallic properties.
    • Requires to have a close-range with the target.
    • Contains a post-motion effect after use. Her movement will be delayed for 1 post.


    Duration and Cooldown
    • Instantly cast with a cooldown of 4 posts.



    Last edited by Yoshino on Tue 8 Jul - 7:53; edited 15 times in total


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    Re: Wind Fleuret (ウインドフルーレ, Uindo Furūre)

    Post by Soleice-kun on Tue 21 May - 21:36

    Approved


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    Re: Wind Fleuret (ウインドフルーレ, Uindo Furūre)

    Post by Emilia Hawke on Tue 11 Jun - 21:51

    Approved


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    Re: Wind Fleuret (ウインドフルーレ, Uindo Furūre)

    Post by Hera-senpai on Mon 15 Jul - 1:05

    ~Approved


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    Re: Wind Fleuret (ウインドフルーレ, Uindo Furūre)

    Post by Guest on Mon 7 Jul - 6:55

    Your text is blue D= I have to use different text colour for edits now! WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?!

    ...er-hem. Outburst aside, any edits will be written below in red. If you've any questions or concerns then feel free to PM me and I'll happily talk about them =]

    Post a bump when changes are made and I'll happily re-review and, hopefully, approve the weapon =D

    Weapon:

    Name: Wind Fleuret (ウインドフルーレ, Uindo Furūre)
    Rank: Legendary
    Type: Rapier
    Description:
    Wind Fleuret:
    The Wind Fleuret is described as a thin sword with a length of 41'' and it consists of a dark-green, dome-shaped guard. Upon activation of a skill, her sword will release a bright glow which will disappear as the execution of the skill has been finished.

    Strengths:


    • A very light weapon.
    • Very easy to handle and wield.
    • Versatility. It can be used to thrust, to slice, to jab, and to slash.
    • It increases the accuracy, and agility of the holder/


    Weaknesses:


    • Despite of it's lightness and speed, it doesn't deal much damage.
    • Easy to destroy.
      (You need another two weaknesses here. As it's not a '+' weapon you could mention that it's not of the highest quality and thus doesn't grant you 5% bonus MP.)


    Abilities:
    Star Splash:
    Name: Star Splash (スター・スプラッシュ, Sutā Supurasshu)
    Rank: C
    Description: The skill begins with 3 short thrusts at the targets chest, provoking the target to raise its guard up. Although the first 3 thrusts do not deal much damage, the number of hits and their speed is overwhelming. Afterwards, the 3 thrusts are followed by 2 slashes at the target’s now undefended legs. The user then performs 2 strong jabs high and low, followed by a final strong stab at the target’s chest.

    Strengths:


    • During the execution of this skill, her speed increases to overwhelm the target's initial speed. (Only to mages with equal or lower rank)
    • Her movement cannot be followed easily by eyes.
    • She can also perform this skill against more targets (max is 3).
    • Her movement can change in her favor as long as she follows the procedure of the skill
    • She can also charge at the opponent maximum of 5 ft. away from her.



    Weaknesses:


    • By having superhuman eyes, the movement can be followed and can be easily intercepted.
    • By being blocked forcefully during the execution, the skill can be cancelled depending on how strong the block was. If her movement after the block got delayed, the skill will then be cancelled.
      (You need another 3 weaknesses here. Weapon abilities like this should be treated in the same way as spells =] )



    Duration and Cooldown


    • 1 post duration and 4 posts cooldown.


    Linear:
    Name: «Linear» (リニアー, Riniā)
    Rank: C
    Description: Linear consists of a single thrust straight forward by first holding the rapier in front of the body and then putting in a twist from there. The skill has a remarkably short post-motion delay after usage, allowing multiple Linear to be chained in together at a very short amount of time.

    Strengths:


    • A single thrust can deal huge amounts of damage.
    • Can destroy shields, barriers, or weaken them depending on rank. (Can only destroy defenses equal or lower to holder's rank)
    • Can also intercept the execution and channeling of spells. (Can only destroy offenses equal or lower to holder's rank)



    Weaknesses:


    • Can only create dents in metallic properties.
    • Requires to have a close-range with the target.
    • Contains a post-motion effect after use. Her movement will be delayed for 1 post.



    Duration and Cooldown


    • Instantly cast with a cooldown of 4 posts.

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    Re: Wind Fleuret (ウインドフルーレ, Uindo Furūre)

    Post by Yoshino on Tue 8 Jul - 8:11

    BUMP!


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    Re: Wind Fleuret (ウインドフルーレ, Uindo Furūre)

    Post by Yoshino on Thu 10 Jul - 7:32

    2nd Bump!


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    Re: Wind Fleuret (ウインドフルーレ, Uindo Furūre)

    Post by Indiana Jones on Fri 11 Jul - 9:42

    As the edits requested by Legacy are done and i can't see any problems with this weapon either.



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