Clarity

RainCalamity wrote:

Name: Clarity
Rank: Strong(+)
Type: Key
Description:

Appearance:

Strengths:
♢ Clarity's effects will only work for Althea due to it being bound to her being
Weaknesses:
♢ It's the size of any regular key, so it doesn't really shield its carrier from attacks all too often
♢ A key is pretty easy to lose through theft or simply dropping it

Abilities:
Atonal - This passively buffs the carrier's spell cost reduction by 50%, although this means it can increase no further.

Reprise - Once every post the carrier can absorb half the MP used to cast a spell that affected them as long as it is B-rank or lower.

RainCalamity wrote:

Name: Clarity
Rank: Strong(+)
Type: Key
Description:

Appearance:

Strengths:
♢ Clarity's effects will only work for Althea due to it being bound to her being
Weaknesses:
♢ It's the size of any regular key, so it doesn't really shield its carrier from attacks all too often
♢ A key is pretty easy to lose through theft or simply dropping it

Abilities:
Atonal - This passively buffs the carrier's spell cost reduction by 50%, although this means it can increase no further.

Reprise - Once every post the carrier can absorb half the MP used to cast a spell that affected them as long as it is B-rank or lower.

RainCalamity wrote:

Name: Clarity
Rank: Legendary(+)
Type: Aether-Based Cardiac Function
Description:
Aether is known under many names including quinta essentia, the fifth element, and others, but the specific form of it Althea possesses is simply dubbed "Clarity".  Aether is the emptiness that fills in the space beyond the heavens, the void that makes up the clear blue sky.  But the thing that seperates Clarity and typical aether is the aspect of "hunger" inside that emptiness, the desire to fill itself up.  But due to its nature never getting anywhere, simply going on consumption in an endless cycle of overwhelming desire met by no relief.  Technically, it works as Althea's heart, providing her with human emotions and understanding, but the fact that it is essentially filled with "nothing" is a bit contradictory.  In the same way that there is a way to refer to nothing when it is in fact nothing to refer to in the first place.  This along with the natural disconnect between Althea's heart and Althea's soul that comes with that fact that Clarity was not originally hers and she never had a heart in the first place, Clarity is prone to "malfunctioning".  This at times means it causes its own hunger to completely invade her mind and possibly override her consciousness.  At times it throws Althea into shifted states of mind without her even knowing anything was off in the first place or even changes parts of her being without her knowledge in hopes to better accommodate the heart.

Appearance:

Abilities:
Konukame - Clarity can be seen as a completely different entity to Althea, producing emotions despite its emptiness.  And yet, an entirely normal human was born with such a heart until they passed it onto her.  They could perfectly utilize the strengths of Clarity while almost completely ignoring the downsides seeing as it is theirs, but Althea only inherited part of this.  Yet Clarity still halves the negative effect duration of a spell, such as poison or burn, and just halfs the actual effect if it only lasts for one post.  This happens when Clarity takes on part of the effect itself before just sending it into oblivion.  And seeing as Althea and that person are very much different, the way Clarity could reside in them both was because each of their souls had been placed inside it.  So, the heart passively buffs Althea's spell cost reduction by 50%, although this means it can increase no further. I'm afraid that the two effects you have in this ability are far too strong, and overall it's sounding like you tried to put two abilities in one. Please choose just one of the effects you have in this ability and remove the other.
Amagumori - Aether is often referred to as the fifth element or "void", acting as the empty expanse in the heavens.  Nothing about Clarity is necessarily dark, simply empty.  But Clarity also has the aspect of "hunger" to add to the emptiness.  This alone grants Althea a passive 5% MP regen every post as Clarity draws in energy from her surroundings, yet it never actually gets anywhere.  But on the more active side, it can absorb more when being directly affected by something.  And thus once every post Althea can absorb half the MP used to cast a spell that affected her as long as it is A-rank or lower. See the previous ability. This sounds like you're trying to put two abilities into one, so please choose either passive mp regen or the A rank or lower effect.

RainCalamity wrote:

Name: Clarity
Rank: Legendary(+)
Type: Aether-Based Cardiac Function
Description:
Aether is known under many names including quinta essentia, the fifth element, and others, but the specific form of it Althea possesses is simply dubbed "Clarity".  Aether is the emptiness that fills in the space beyond the heavens, the void that makes up the clear blue sky.  But the thing that seperates Clarity and typical aether is the aspect of "hunger" inside that emptiness, the desire to fill itself up.  But due to its nature never getting anywhere, simply going on consumption in an endless cycle of overwhelming desire met by no relief.  Technically, it works as Althea's heart, providing her with human emotions and understanding, but the fact that it is essentially filled with "nothing" is a bit contradictory.  In the same way that there is a way to refer to nothing when it is in fact nothing to refer to in the first place.  This along with the natural disconnect between Althea's heart and Althea's soul that comes with that fact that Clarity was not originally hers and she never had a heart in the first place, Clarity is prone to "malfunctioning".  This at times means it causes its own hunger to completely invade her mind and possibly override her consciousness.  At times it throws Althea into shifted states of mind without her even knowing anything was off in the first place or even changes parts of her being without her knowledge in hopes to better accommodate the heart.

Appearance:

Abilities:
Konukame - Clarity can be seen as a completely different entity to Althea, producing emotions despite its emptiness.  And yet, an entirely normal human was born with such a heart until they passed it onto her.  They could perfectly utilize the strengths of Clarity while almost completely ignoring the downsides seeing as it is theirs, but Althea only inherited part of this.  Yet Clarity still halves the negative effect duration of a spell, such as poison or burn, and just halves the actual effect if it only lasts for one post.
Amagumori - Aether is often referred to as the fifth element or "void", acting as the empty expanse in the heavens.  Nothing about Clarity is necessarily dark, simply empty.  But Clarity also has the aspect of "hunger" to add to the emptiness.  This means once every post Althea can absorb half the MP used to cast a spell that affected her as long as it is A-rank or lower.

RainCalamity wrote:

Name: Clarity
Rank: Legendary(+)
Type: Aether-Based Cardiac Function
Description:
Aether is known under many names including quinta essentia, the fifth element, and others, but the specific form of it Althea possesses is simply dubbed "Clarity".  Aether is the emptiness that fills in the space beyond the heavens, the void that makes up the clear blue sky.  But the thing that seperates Clarity and typical aether is the aspect of "hunger" inside that emptiness, the desire to fill itself up.  But due to its nature never getting anywhere, simply going on consumption in an endless cycle of overwhelming desire met by no relief.  Technically, it works as Althea's heart, providing her with human emotions and understanding, but the fact that it is essentially filled with "nothing" is a bit contradictory.  In the same way that there is a way to refer to nothing when it is in fact nothing to refer to in the first place.  This along with the natural disconnect between Althea's heart and Althea's soul that comes with that fact that Clarity was not originally hers and she never had a heart in the first place, Clarity is prone to "malfunctioning".  This at times means it causes its own hunger to completely invade her mind and possibly override her consciousness.  At times it throws Althea into shifted states of mind without her even knowing anything was off in the first place or even changes parts of her being without her knowledge in hopes to better accommodate the heart.

Appearance:

Abilities:
Konukame - Clarity can be seen as a completely different entity to Althea, producing emotions despite its emptiness.  And yet, an entirely normal human was born with such a heart until they passed it onto her.  They could perfectly utilize the strengths of Clarity while almost completely ignoring the downsides seeing as it is theirs, but Althea only inherited part of this.  Yet Clarity still halves the negative effect duration of a spell, such as poison or burn, and just halves the actual effect if it only lasts for one post.
Amagumori - Aether is often referred to as the fifth element or "void", acting as the empty expanse in the heavens.  Nothing about Clarity is necessarily dark, simply empty.  But Clarity also has the aspect of "hunger" to add to the emptiness.  This means once every post Althea can absorb half the MP used to cast a spell that affected her as long as it is A-rank or lower.

RainCalamity wrote:

Name: Clarity
Rank: Legendary(+)
Type: Aether-Based Cardiac Function
Description:
Aether is known under many names including quinta essentia, the fifth element, and others, but the specific form of it Althea possesses is simply dubbed "Clarity".  Aether is the emptiness that fills in the space beyond the heavens, the void that makes up the clear blue sky.  But the thing that seperates Clarity and typical aether is the aspect of "hunger" inside that emptiness, the desire to fill itself up.  But due to its nature that never goes anywhere, simply continuing on consuming in an endless cycle of overwhelming desire met by no relief.  Technically, it works as Althea's heart, providing her with human emotions and understanding, but the fact that it is essentially filled with "nothing" is a bit contradictory.  In the same way that there is a way to refer to nothing when it is in fact nothing to refer to in the first place.  This along with the natural disconnect between Althea's heart and Althea's soul that comes with that fact that Clarity was not originally hers and she never had a heart in the first place, so Clarity is prone to "malfunctioning".  This at times means it causes its own hunger to completely invade her mind and possibly override her actual will.  At times it throws Althea into shifted states of mind without her even knowing anything was off in the first place.  Parts of her being can even be altered without her knowledge in hopes to better accommodate the heart, doing so by making her more similar to Clarity's original owner.

Appearance:

Abilities:

B+:

A:

RainCalamity wrote:

Name: Clarity
Rank: Legendary(+)
Type: Aether-Based Cardiac Function
Description:
Aether is known under many names including quinta essentia, the fifth element, and others, but the specific form of it Althea possesses is simply dubbed "Clarity".  Aether is the emptiness that fills in the space beyond the heavens, the void that makes up the clear blue sky.  But the thing that seperates Clarity and typical aether is the aspect of "hunger" inside that emptiness, the desire to fill itself up.  But due to its nature that never goes anywhere, simply continuing on consuming in an endless cycle of overwhelming desire met by no relief.  Technically, it works as Althea's heart, providing her with human emotions and understanding, but the fact that it is essentially filled with "nothing" is a bit contradictory.  In the same way that there is a way to refer to nothing when it is in fact nothing to refer to in the first place.  This along with the natural disconnect between Althea's heart and Althea's soul that comes with that fact that Clarity was not originally hers and she never had a heart in the first place, so Clarity is prone to "malfunctioning".  This at times means it causes its own hunger to completely invade her mind and possibly override her actual will.  At times it throws Althea into shifted states of mind without her even knowing anything was off in the first place.  Parts of her being can even be altered without her knowledge in hopes to better accommodate the heart, doing so by making her more similar to Clarity's original owner.

Appearance:

Abilities:

A+:

S:

Althea wrote:

Name: Clarity
Rank: Legendary(+)
Type: Aether-Based Cardiac Function
Description:
Aether is known under many names including quinta essentia, the fifth element, and others, but the specific form of it Althea possesses is simply dubbed "Clarity".  Aether is the emptiness that fills in the space beyond the heavens, the void that makes up the clear blue sky.  But the thing that seperates Clarity and typical aether is the aspect of "hunger" inside that emptiness, the desire to fill itself up.  But due to its nature that never goes anywhere, simply continuing on consuming in an endless cycle of overwhelming desire met by no relief.  Technically, it works as Althea's heart, providing her with human emotions and understanding, but the fact that it is essentially filled with "nothing" is a bit contradictory.  In the same way that there is a way to refer to nothing when it is in fact nothing to refer to in the first place.  This along with the natural disconnect between Althea's heart and Althea's soul that comes with that fact that Clarity was not originally hers and she never had a heart in the first place, so Clarity is prone to "malfunctioning".  This at times means it causes its own hunger to completely invade her mind and possibly override her actual will.  At times it throws Althea into shifted states of mind without her even knowing anything was off in the first place.  Parts of her being can even be altered without her knowledge in hopes to better accommodate the heart, doing so by making her more similar to Clarity's original owner.

Appearance:

Abilities:

A+:

S: