Riza Wind Magic

by **Riza** 10th April 2013, 11:34 am

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Riza Wind Magic

by Riza 10th April 2013, 11:34 am

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Magic

Primary Magic: Wind/Air magic (Wind is a form of air - this the only reason air is stated~)
Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description:
Riza's magic allows her to manipulate and create wind. She's has wonderful control over her magic, but she doesn't always reign it in, as she enjoy little wind spurts to play with her hair and whatnot (plus she thinks she looks a little more dangerous when her wind swirls around her, heh).

Wind can have the capability to slice through things, when given enough force. Or, if needed/wanted, it can be used for blunt attacks - to possibly deflect oncoming attacks (things like Fire are easier to deflect than physical objects). Wind can be used to force opponents back. She can use her wind as solid-like objects, and she can even create tornadoes, oooohhh~

Riza also likes to use fighting fans for close-combat, or even to strengthen her wind abilities. She tucks them in her boots or to her thigh (when attached to her thigh it isn't as well-hidden).

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Strengths:

Can blow objects/people backwards
Blunt force offense
Sharp, piercing offense (if needed)
Long-range capabilities
Some short-range abilities
Lift objects in surroundings
Can slow down/negate some elemental attacks
Strong against earth and ice usually

Weaknesses:

Physical, close-ranged attacks are more difficult for Riza to fend off.
Weak against metal (Iron DS, for example) and lightning
Because of certain holes in her defense (from physical objects and certain elements), she needs to have a stronger offense and be agile enough to move quickly - which her wind helps with.

Abilities/Powers:

Flight
Wind burn (at high speeds, winds can cause wind burn - basically like a fire burn, but from wind)
Naturally lighter weight / movements (for things like swimming/running/sledding/jumping)
Heightened agility (comes with the nature of wind - just a smidge faster than your average mage, and even then she has speed-increasing spells)

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by **Riza** 10th April 2013, 11:35 am

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Re: Riza Wind Magic

by Riza 10th April 2013, 11:35 am

(Forgive me if my distances are weird - I'm used to the, err, non-metric system with feet and miles and whatnot~ xD Plus, ya know, I don't have great depth perception~)

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Spells

D-Rank

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Name: Sprint
Rank: D
Type: Wind/Offense
Description: Riza rolls her shoulders back, and this initiates the spell. A magic circle appears between her shoulder blades, causing magical power to spread through her body and increase her speed. If she wishes to use this on an ally, the magic circle appears between his/her shoulder blades instead.
Strengths:

25% speed increase (applies to the whole body)
Increases affected person's awareness of his/her body and its movements
Increases reaction time / reflexes and agility

Weaknesses:

Does not increase strength or defense (Even if you want it to - you still can't punch through a brick wall)
Can only be used on one person at a time
Cannot be used on a summons

Duration: 5 posts
Cooldown: 3 posts
Magic Circle:

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Name: Flicker
Rank: D
Type: Offense/Wind
Description: This spell allows Riza to conjure a tiny spurt of air from her fingertips/palm. She flicks her fingers/wrist or thrusts her palm in order to have a burst of wind shoot out.
Strengths:

Can potentially surprise opponents
Can push people/objects (depending upon the weight of the object) back 20 meters
Strong against Earth and Ice based magics
Can slow D-rank Fire and Water spells

Weaknesses:

Riza needs to be able to move her hand/fingers in order to use the spell
It's mainly blunt force damage
Weak against metals and Lightening

CD: 2
Dur: Instant
Magic Circle:

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Name: Pinpoint
Rank: D
Type: Offense/Wind
Description: Riza first puts her arms in front of her (elbows bent, hands flat like a blade in front of her chest), then she quickly extends her arms. (They open - now she could look like she's "flying" :P) Two tiny magic circles appear at her fingertips when the spell is activated. (One circle per hand). Razor-sharp wind "shards" come at the opponent from his sides. There are five on each side, and a swirl/slice of wind can be seen as the shards move. Each comes at the opponent like a needle but hurts like a knife.
Effect: they don't do much outside damage. On the inside, however, they hit your nerve cells and cause quite a bit of pain. (Travel at 20mph)
Strengths:

The pain from the hit is like being stabbed (with a 1 inch knife)
Invisible needle-like shards
Affects the nerves where it hits
Can travel through water and fire

Weaknesses:

Nearly no physical damage, aside from your nerves (no gaping wounds or anything - merely a trickle of blood, if even that)
Cannot pierce armor/metals
Can be dodged (hopefully only a few of them, heh)
Can only close in on the opponent from his sides

CD: 2
Dur: Instant
Magic Circle:

Spoiler:

Name: Lasso
Rank: D
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Description: This spell causes four wind rings (their size varies depending up on the opponent's size) that attempt to attach themselves to the opponents torso, binding his arms to his body - if that doesn't occur (by the opponent moving or so), it can appease itself by attaching itself to the opponent's ankles/wrists. If it attaches itself to the torso, the opponent is rendered immobile for 2 posts (if they move within those two posts, they gain painful lacerations where the rings are touching upon their arms/torso and move about 25% slower than normal) - if they attach to the arms/wrists, the ailed body part become 25% slower than normal and gains painful lacerations where thing rings touch the person as well.

This binds D-Rank mages/creatures readily - C-Ranks are a bit trickier (if they are immobile, it only lasts one post, and the damage done to C-Ranks is less than what a D-Rank would receive. The speed decrease for C-Ranks is only 20%, as well.) Does not affect anything above a C-Rank besides being a mild nuisance.

Strengths:

Cuts through clothing
Cuts 1 - 2 inches deep
Slows and harms the opponent if the opponent moves
Can move around flat shields
There are four initial rings, but in the case that one in dodged/deflected/etc, the other(s) will continue pursuit.

Weaknesses:

The three rings may either enclose around the torso OR the wrists/arms - NOT both. Therefore, either the opponent is immobile for two turns/ is slower than normal (while gaining the three ring cuts) OR their attacks/dodging/defense is slower (Reaction time, I suppose you could also call it) for three turns.
There are no cuts if the opponent remains completely immobile (meaning legs as well as upper body) for 2 posts - the opponent will feel pressure but will not be physically harmed.
Can only affect one opponent at a time

CD: 3
Dur: 3
Magic Circle:

Spoiler:

C-Rank

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Name: Rush
Rank: C
Type: Wind
Description: A magic circle appears behind either Riza or one of her allies, and a jet of air (kind of like an air/wind current) bursts from it. Anything in front of the jet (with the exclusion of the Riza/her ally) is pushed backwards (if the object is stationary, it slides backwards - if it's moving ahead, it's immobilized). The person this was cast upon (Riza/ally) can jump in the wind stream and rush towards the target if they choose, OR this can be used as a momentary defense (kind of like a shield, in a way)
Strengths:

Can deflect C-rank and lower spells/weapons
Gives user (whether it's Riza or otherwise) a 50% speed boost if they jump in the wind stream
Slows B-rank spells/weapons/mages by 25%
Can cause 25% vision impairment to a person facing upstream

Weaknesses:

Wind stream speed boost for people other than Riza is only while moving forward whereas Riza's speed boost is for forward and sideways.
Once in the wind stream, you cannot go backwards
The wind stream causes no actual damage

Duration/Cooldowns 1 / 3

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Name: Heat Stroke
Rank: C
Type: Wind
Description: Pillars of scorching hot air shoot out of the ground in 5 foot by 5 foot cylinders. The first one bursts from directly beneath the target, and the rest follow the target by shooting upwards from wherever the target hits the ground next. Can make 5 pillars before cool down.
Strengths:

Pillars follow target
Will still work if target lands on a building
Can cause MILD burns (Just irritating, really)

Weaknesses:

Does not work if target lands in, say, a tree
Does not work if target is flying

Duration/Cooldowns 1 / 3

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Name: Shredder
Rank: C
Type: Wind
Description: Riza raises her arm (whichever she chooses to wield it with), and a giant wind chainsaw (30 feet long) poofs into existence. Its wind does not harm Riza herself, but everything around her better prepare for a bruising (or, ya know, shredded flesh).
Strengths:

Can demolish trees.
Can rip flesh/clothes/etc (Imagine putting your arm in a blender or garbage disposal)
Does not harm Riza

Weaknesses:

Riza’s movements are limited. She can flail her little arms around to her heart’s content, but she can only take a few steps from where she first activated the spell.
Cannot break bones
Can break a section of a building’s wall but not the entire building or the entire wall

Duration/Cooldowns 2 / 4

B-Rank

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Name: Bullet Barrage
Rank: B
Type: Wind
Description: Riza's magic circle appears on her palms (like the size of a tennis ball), and she can shoot air bullets (6 inches wide and 1 foot long) a distance of 30 feet. Riza has 6 shots total before cooldown. Each shot is of C-rank damage (5 hits can cause the damage to be of B-rank)
Strengths:

Riza can shoot barrages of wind shots out of both palms (6 max total)
Causes intense stinging where contact is made on target
Can shoot from both hands at once for increased chance of impact / more damage
Can cause bone fractures with 5+ hits

Weaknesses:

Only blunt force damage
There's a 1 second delay between shots from the same hand
Impact depends upon Riza's aim, so if she's impaired, tough shit for her
Cannot go through an object (only surface/internal damage from force)

Duration/Cooldowns 1 / 3

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Name: Skating on Thin Air
Rank: B
Type: Wind
Description: Two tiny magic circles appear at Riza's feet, causing two razor sharp blades of wind to form. These blades are 1 foot long and an inch thick and slice through tons of shit on impact. Quite handy for whenever Riza's flying~
Strengths:

Can pierce armor below B-rank (blunt damage done for armor of B-rank)
Can cut 3 inches deep in flesh
Can be used no matter what Riza may or may not have on her feet
Can cut through average-sized trees and into walls/metal
If one blade breaks, the other can still be used for the remaining spell duration (or until it breaks as well)

Weaknesses:

Cannot be removed or the spell canceled
Can hurt Riza if she's not careful
Can be broken by 2 B-ranked spells or any spell of higher rank if they hit the blade
For close-range combat only
Cannot be used on any elemental attacks (to potentially deflect)

Duration/Cooldowns 5 / 8

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Name: Barrier
Rank: B
Type: Wind
Description: Riza crosses her arms in an X formation and a bubble of wind worms around her or an area of her choosing. (10 feet diameter max)
Strengths:

Negates water and fire and weapon attacks of B-rank or lower
Decreases impact of other elemental/weapon attacks of A and B-rank by 25% and 50% respectively (C and lower do not penetrate the barrier at all)
Riza can expand the barrier after it is cast, but only to have a 10 foot diameter
Riza can move inside the bubble/barrier however she likes (she can move around the outside area - like if she were in a gerbil ball thing)
Anything within 10 feet of the outside of the barrier is subject to wind burn (Riza is exception)
Two people can be in the barrier at once

Weaknesses:

Cannot be directly used for offense
Only Riza can see in and out of the barrier
If another person is in the barrier, they cannot move
Two people can only be in the barrier if it is cast on another person and then expanded for Riza to jump in
Two A-rank attacks easily break the barrier (Consider it cracked after one A-rank)

Duration/Cooldowns 2 on Riza and 1 if cast on another person (or Riza +1) / 3

A-Rank

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Name: Dancing Dagger
Rank: A
Type: Wind
Description: Piercing wind daggers (think of it as crystal-like shards made of hardened wind)circle around Riza, and she can control them as she pleases. The daggers move without her having to make any sort of physical gesture. The daggers are visible to the naked eye. (5 daggers total at a range of 100 feet) The daggers each slice/stab with B-rank damage, as the slice harms the body around the cut (the damage from the cut outwards goes for 5 inches on the body). Each cut can be 3 - 5 inches deep. Multiple cuts are what leads to the A-rank damage that may be spread across the body (rather than being A-rank damage isolated to one area).
Strengths:

The daggers inflict damage like real, metal daggers
She can have the daggers move individually or as little groups
She can have different daggers go in different directions at once
Can pierce armors less than A-rank
Has a tiny bit of blunt force damage for A-rank armors

Weaknesses:

The daggers disappear after making impact
There are a limited number of daggers (50)
The daggers can also hurt Riza, just 25% less than outside targets
Daggers can be redirected with an A-rank or higher spell

Duration/Cooldowns 4 posts or until Riza cancels it or runs out of daggers/ 6

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Name: Clinking Chains
Rank: A
Type: Wind
Description: Riza claps her hands together and quickly pulls them apart, and the resulting wind rush expands and hardens into a 50ft long chain.
Strengths:

The chain can still be used after being broken, just not as one strand
Chain can pull targets closer to Riza
Chain can strike with enough force to break any hard surface
Riza can wrap the chain around her arms/wrists/legs/feet and use it to empower her kicks/punches/etc
Weapons don't have much affect on it

Weaknesses:

The chain can be broken by a A-rank spell or higher
S-rank spells cause the chain to disappear completely
Fire at A-rank will actually thrive on the chain and cause it to disappear
Fire at B-rank or lower will slowly eat the chain, so to speak, but Riza can still use it
She cannot break the chain links apart and use them as some sort of ammunition

Duration/Cooldowns 4 or until Riza cancels/it's beaten / 6

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Name: Lasso 2.0
Rank: A
Type: Wind
Description: This spell causes six swirling wind rings (their size varies depending up on the opponent's size) that attempt to attach themselves to the opponents torso, binding his arms to his body - if that doesn't occur (by the opponent moving or so), it can appease itself by attaching itself to the opponent's ankles/wrists. If it attaches itself to the torso, the opponent is rendered immobile for 3 posts (if they move within those two posts, they gain painful lacerations where the rings are touching upon their arms/torso and move about 60% slower than normal) - if they attach to the arms/wrists, the ailed body part become 60% slower than normal and gains excruciating lacerations where thing rings touch the person as well. (Expect a bit of bloodshed here, people)

This binds A-Rank mages/creatures readily - S-Ranks are a bit trickier (if they are immobile, it only lasts two posts, and the damage done to S-Ranks is less than what an A-Rank would receive. The speed decrease for S-Ranks is only 25%, as well.)
Strengths:

Is not affected by wind magic
Cannot harm Riza
The rings can separate and latch onto multiple targets
Cuts through clothing and armors B-rank and below (damages armor of A-rank and up)
Even if defected, it still takes 2 hits of A-rank to break - they'll just come back to a target (like a homing device)

Weaknesses:

Can be broken by 2 A-rank+ spells or 1 A-rank weapon strike, 3 C-rank spells or 2 C-rank weapon hits, and no D-rank
1 A-rank lightning attack can break it/them
Not all rings have to attach (some can be broken before they latch on)
All rings can potentially be broken at once if an S-rank shockwave type attack is cast :O

Duration/Cooldowns 3 or less / 5

S-Rank

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Name: Twister
Rank: S
Type: Wind
Description: A light breeze kicks up and slowly builds power, causing leaves to scatter and trees to sway and whatnot (Differs depending upon what region Riza’s in, heh~)~ After a moment, The wind converges to four areas and BAM! Four tornadoes spiral downwards from the sky~ :O Each tornado is only 10ft x 10ft
These pull people in from as far away as 50 feet, and cause wind burn at a distance of 30 feet. If someone were to get within 10 feet of the tornado, they'll be sucked in, swirled around for a bit, then spit back out randomly from the side with the force of a cannon. While inside, any object is harmed as though it were surrounded by continuously-moving razors. An object that is shot out of the tornado will have 3-5 inch deep cuts everywhere and face potential bone-breakage by a heavy impact on ground/wall/etc.
Strengths:

Can absorb physical objects and spit them back out in the same direction they came from
Can shoot certain elements back at the user if they hit the tornado (Lightning, Water, Ice, Light, Shadow). Earth elemental attacks merely break apart (negated)
Can destroy terrain
Starts to pull heavier targets towards each tornado, depending upon which is closer (They’ll basically slide a few inches every 2 seconds or so)
It’s like a super-charged vacuum
Riza can cast 2 spells in the 2 posts of its remaining duration after she’s cast this spell (1 spell per post), but they have to be B-rank or less
Anything within 5 feet of a tornado is subject to wind burn, excluding Riza

Weaknesses:

Riza cannot control their flight pattern
They’re not that fast-moving, so they can be avoided if a person barrel rolls out of the way (or, ya know, runs a bit)
Fire cannot be taken in , merely extinguished
Fire magic users CAN still use fire, of course, but their range and power is decreased by 25%

Duration/Cooldowns 4 / 8

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Name: Cyclone
Rank: S
Type: Wind
Description: A magic circle appears beneath Riza, and a cyclone/tornado-thing begins to form. It begins as an air swirl that starts from the ground and makes its way up. Depending upon the diameter of it, it will be either narrow or wide (the wider it is, the shorter it is and vise-versa. Once inside, you cannot see through the cyclone, nor can those outside see in. The outer wall is 3 feet thick, and its denseness also depends upon its size. The smaller it is, the more dense and harder to break it is. Riza is able to move in and out of the wall as she pleases - she can maneuver around inside it and pop out at various locations to potentially attack her prey. The wind inside the cyclone lifts anything inside to the midpoint of the cyclone's height on most
Strengths:

Riza can choose how large or small the cyclone is
If a target decides to try and jump out of the cyclone, Riza can simply increase its borders. While in the cyclone, fire is cancelled (unless it is of S-rank) and weapons/armor are difficult to manage.
If a person touches the cyclone wall, they will experience intense pain and potential limb removal
Riza's speed inside the cyclone is increased by 80%
All objects in the cyclone with the exception of Riza are subject to wind burn

Weaknesses:

S-rank light or shadow attacks can penetrate the wind and still harm Riza
Can only be 100feet diameter max
Heavier people and objects aren't affected by the anti-gravity-ish deal and can move around only 25% slower than normal
Lighter-weight people can maneuver fairly easily, but the wind will push them around a smidge.

Duration/Cooldowns 3 / 6

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Re: Riza Wind Magic

by Rosetta Crawford 11th April 2013, 4:38 pm

Riza wrote:Permission for two posts: "Permission granted by: Ωmega "

Magic

Primary Magic: Wind/Air magic (Wind is a form of air - tis the only reason air is stated~)
Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description:
Riza's magic allows her to manipulate and create wind. Once at a higher rank, she'll be able to create mini tornadoes and whatnot~ For now, though, she's stuck with blow-drying her hair and annoying people with random wind gusts (sometimes when she's agitated, a light breeze will play with her hair/clothing or swirl around her, affecting those within two-three yards of her).

Wind can have the capability to slice through things, when given enough force. Or, if needed/wanted, it can be used for blunt attacks - to possibly deflect oncoming attacks (things like Fire are easier to deflect than physical objects). Wind can be used to force opponents back.

Riza also likes to use fighting fans for close-combat, or even to strengthen her wind abilities. (Will create and pay for the weapon - hope to upgrade it as her rank also increases!) She tucks them into the pink strap at her waist, to conceal them from view.

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Strengths:
Riza can easily attack at a distance with either sharp, piercing offense or a more blunt-force type deal. It can allow Riza to hover/fly/float, if needed, and it can possibly shield her. Wind is mainly used for long-ranged offense, but she could potentially cover her body (or parts of her body) in a piercing, rotating wind force that could be used for closer combat/defense. (Not that she would do so lightly - she'd rather use her fans, as things like that would potentially mess up her hair.)

Weaknesses: Physical, close-ranged attacks are more difficult for Riza to fend off. Physical objects are also trickier, as are certain elements (lightning, water, earth, etc). Because of these holes in her defense (from physical objects and certain elements), she needs to have a stronger offense and be agile enough to move quickly - which her wind helps with.

Abilities/Powers:

Can blow objects/people backwards
Blunt force offense
Sharp, piercing offense (if needed)
Long-range capabilities
Speed increase at times (depending upon spell used)
Flight
Wind burn
Lift objects in surroundings
Can slow down some elemental attacks (with blunt force)
Can negate/ push backwards fire
Strong against earth and ice
Weak against metal (Iron DS, for example) and lightening

Abilities are more passive abilities of your magic. Strengths such as strong against earth should be the strengths section and weaknesses in the weakness section.

Flight is however allowed as a passive ability for wind magic

Also please divide strengths and weaknesses into a list like with your spells. Makes it easier for me

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Re: Riza Wind Magic

by Rosetta Crawford 11th April 2013, 4:44 pm

Riza wrote:(Forgive me if my distances are weird - I'm used to the, err, non-metric system with feet and miles and whatnot~ xD)

Spells

Name: Sprint
Rank: D
Type: Wind/Offense
Description: Riza rolls her shoulders back, and this initiates the spell. A magic circle appears between her shoulder blades, causing magical power to spread through her body and increase her speed. If she wishes to use this on an ally, the magic circle appears between his/her shoulder blades instead.
Strengths:

25% speed increase (applies to the whole body)
Increases affected person's awareness of his/her body and its movements
Increases reaction time / reflexes and agility

Weaknesses:

Does not increase strength or defense (Even if you want it to - you still can't punch through a brick wall)
Can only be used on one person at a time
Cannot be used on a summons

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Spoiler:
You are missing duration and cooldown for this spell

Name: Flicker
Rank: D
Type: Offense/Wind
Description: This spell allows Riza to conjure a tiny spurt of air from her fingertips/palm. She flicks her fingers/wrist or thrusts her palm in order to have a burst of wind shoot out.
Strengths:

Can potentially surprise opponents
Can push people/objects (depending upon the weight of the object) back 20 meters [color=teal]This is far two powerful for a D rank spell. I'd say 6 meters at most (20ft)
Strong against Earth and Ice based magics
Can slow D-rank Fire and Water spells

Weaknesses:

Riza needs to be able to move her hand/fingers in order to use the spell
It's mainly blunt force damage
Weak against metals and Lightening

CD: 1 Minimum CD of 2 for D rank spells
Dur: Instant
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Name: Pinpoint
Rank: D
Type: Offense/Wind
Description: Riza first puts her arms in front of her (elbows bent, hands flat like a blade in front of her chest), then she quickly extends her arms. (They open - now she could look like she's "flying" :P) Two tiny magic circles appear at her fingertips when the spell is activated. (One circle per hand). Razor-sharp wind "shards" come at the opponent from his sides. There are five on each side, but they're invisible (as wind isn't visible, ya know?) Each comes at the opponent like a needle but hurts like a knife. I disagree with invisibility i think you should be able to see the swirl of wind. Afterall you can see all of Wendy's attacks for instance and you can see a tornado XD
Effect: they don't do much outside damage. On the inside, however, they hit your nerve cells and cause quite a bit of pain. (Travel at 50mph) A bit too strong for D rank. I'd say 20mph
Strengths:

The pain from the hit is like being stabbed (with a 1 inch knife)
Invisible needle-like shards
Affects the nerves where it hits
Can travel through water and fire

Weaknesses:

Nearly no physical damage, aside from your nerves (no gaping wounds or anything - merely a trickle of blood, if even that)
Cannot pierce armor/metals
Can be dodged (hopefully only a few of them, heh)
Can only close in on the opponent from his sides

CD: 2
Dur: Instant
Magic Circle:
Spoiler:

Name: Lasso
Rank: D
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Description: This spell causes four wind rings (their size varies depending up on the opponent's size) that attempt to attach themselves to the opponents torso, binding his arms to his body - if that doesn't occur (by the opponent moving or so), it can appease itself by attaching itself to the opponent's ankles/wrists. If it attaches itself to the torso, the opponent is rendered immobile for 2 posts (if they move within those two posts, they gain painful lacerations where the rings are touching upon their arms/torso and move about 25% slower than normal) - if they attach to the arms/wrists, the ailed body part become 25% slower than normal and gains painful lacerations where thing rings touch the person as well. Please put some rank dependancies on this. You won't be able to effectively bind anyone above C rank and even C ranks should be able to break it quite easily. However, I agree minor damage can be caused even if they do succeed

Strengths:

Cuts through clothing
Cuts 1 - 2 inches deep
Slows and harms the opponent if the opponent moves
Can move around flat shields
There are four initial rings, but in the case that one in dodged/deflected/etc, the other(s) will continue pursuit.

Weaknesses:

The three rings may either enclose around the torso OR the wrists/arms - NOT both. Therefore, either the opponent is immobile for two turns/ is slower than normal (while gaining the three ring cuts) OR their attacks/dodging/defense is slower (Reaction time, I suppose you could also call it) for three turns.
There are no cuts if the opponent remains completely immobile (meaning legs as well as upper body) for 2 posts - the opponent will feel pressure but will not be physically harmed.
Can only affect one opponent at a time

CD: 5
Dur: 3
Magic Circle:
Spoiler:

My comments are in teal. There may be more, but these are the ones that need fixing first.

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Lineage : Embodiment of the 13th
Position : None
Posts : 3499
Guild : Blue Pegasus
Cosmic Coins : 0
Dungeon Tokens : 0
Mentor : Sky Emperor Shangdi
Experience : 367,824.5

Character Sheet
First Skill: Ten No Kichi
Second Skill:
Third Skill:

Post n°5

Re: Riza Wind Magic

by Rosetta Crawford 12th April 2013, 10:33 am

Riza wrote:Permission for two posts: "Permission granted by: Ωmega "

Magic

Primary Magic: Wind/Air magic (Wind is a form of air - tis the only reason air is stated~)
Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description:
Riza's magic allows her to manipulate and create wind. Once at a higher rank, she'll be able to create mini tornadoes and whatnot~ For now, though, she's stuck with blow-drying her hair and annoying people with random wind gusts (sometimes when she's agitated, a light breeze will play with her hair/clothing or swirl around her, affecting those within two-three yards of her).

Wind can have the capability to slice through things, when given enough force. Or, if needed/wanted, it can be used for blunt attacks - to possibly deflect oncoming attacks (things like Fire are easier to deflect than physical objects). Wind can be used to force opponents back.

Riza also likes to use fighting fans for close-combat, or even to strengthen her wind abilities. (Will create and pay for the weapon - hope to upgrade it as her rank also increases!) She tucks them into the pink strap at her waist, to conceal them from view.

Spoiler:
Strengths:

Can blow objects/people backwards
Blunt force offense
Sharp, piercing offense (if needed)
Long-range capabilities
Can cover her body (or parts of her body) in a piercing, rotating wind force that could be used for closer combat/defense. (Not that she would do so lightly - she'd rather use her fans, as things like that would potentially mess up her hair.)
Lift objects in surroundings
Can slow down some elemental attacks (with blunt force)
Can negate/ push backwards fire
Strong against earth and ice

Weaknesses:

Physical, close-ranged attacks are more difficult for Riza to fend off.
Weak against metal (Iron DS, for example) and lightning
Because of these holes in her defense (from physical objects and certain elements), she needs to have a stronger offense and be agile enough to move quickly - which her wind helps with.

Abilities/Powers:

Flight
Wind burn Please explain this
Naturally lighter weight / movements (for things like swimming/running/sledding/jumping)
Not as versatile (unless my mind just isn't being creative enough xD)
Generally agile (comes with the nature of wind) Change this to heightened agility

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Current missions(4/6): get the squid A, King of Fighters(S), Village Protection(A), Repair the House(D)

by **Rosetta Crawford** 13th April 2013, 5:16 am

Rosetta Crawford

Rosetta Crawford: - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
Lineage : Embodiment of the 13th
Position : None
Posts : 3499
Guild : Blue Pegasus
Cosmic Coins : 0
Dungeon Tokens : 0
Mentor : Sky Emperor Shangdi
Experience : 367,824.5

Character Sheet
First Skill: Ten No Kichi
Second Skill:
Third Skill:

Post n°6

Re: Riza Wind Magic

by Rosetta Crawford 13th April 2013, 5:16 am

Approved. Go kick some butt.

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Current missions(4/6): get the squid A, King of Fighters(S), Village Protection(A), Repair the House(D)

by **Rosetta Crawford** 11th July 2013, 10:39 am

Rosetta Crawford

Rosetta Crawford: - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
Lineage : Embodiment of the 13th
Position : None
Posts : 3499
Guild : Blue Pegasus
Cosmic Coins : 0
Dungeon Tokens : 0
Mentor : Sky Emperor Shangdi
Experience : 367,824.5

Character Sheet
First Skill: Ten No Kichi
Second Skill:
Third Skill:

Post n°7

Re: Riza Wind Magic

by Rosetta Crawford 11th July 2013, 10:39 am

Riza wrote:(Forgive me if my distances are weird - I'm used to the, err, non-metric system with feet and miles and whatnot~ xD Plus, ya know, I don't have great depth perception~)

Magic Circle:
Spoiler:

Spells

D-Rank
Spoiler:

C-Rank
Spoiler:

B-Rank
Spoiler:

A-Rank
Spoiler:

S-Rank
Spoiler:

[*]

This is fine. Go through it and fix everything in this colour. Also you may have a slight coding issue as you have * tags in places without list tags.

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Current missions(4/6): get the squid A, King of Fighters(S), Village Protection(A), Repair the House(D)

by **Rosetta Crawford** 11th July 2013, 11:15 am

Rosetta Crawford

Rosetta Crawford: - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
Lineage : Embodiment of the 13th
Position : None
Posts : 3499
Guild : Blue Pegasus
Cosmic Coins : 0
Dungeon Tokens : 0
Mentor : Sky Emperor Shangdi
Experience : 367,824.5

Character Sheet
First Skill: Ten No Kichi
Second Skill:
Third Skill:

Post n°8

Re: Riza Wind Magic

by Rosetta Crawford 11th July 2013, 11:15 am

Riza wrote:(Forgive me if my distances are weird - I'm used to the, err, non-metric system with feet and miles and whatnot~ xD Plus, ya know, I don't have great depth perception~)

Magic Circle:
Spoiler:

Spells

D-Rank
Spoiler:

C-Rank
Spoiler:

B-Rank
Spoiler:

A-Rank
Spoiler:

S-Rank
Spoiler:

[*]

Few last modifications to do

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Current missions(4/6): get the squid A, King of Fighters(S), Village Protection(A), Repair the House(D)

by **Rosetta Crawford** 11th July 2013, 2:18 pm

Rosetta Crawford

Rosetta Crawford: - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
Lineage : Embodiment of the 13th
Position : None
Posts : 3499
Guild : Blue Pegasus
Cosmic Coins : 0
Dungeon Tokens : 0
Mentor : Sky Emperor Shangdi
Experience : 367,824.5

Character Sheet
First Skill: Ten No Kichi
Second Skill:
Third Skill:

Post n°9

Re: Riza Wind Magic

by Rosetta Crawford 11th July 2013, 2:18 pm

I can't let you do an attack which essentially spams 50 B ranks or 40 C ranks. That's ridiculously overpowered. If you want your bullets to do C rank the best you're gonna get is like 10 and even that is pushing it.

As for the B ranks....probably only like 5.

You just don't have the magic energy to launch that many.

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Current missions(4/6): get the squid A, King of Fighters(S), Village Protection(A), Repair the House(D)

by **Rosetta Crawford** 11th July 2013, 2:35 pm

Rosetta Crawford

Rosetta Crawford: - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
Lineage : Embodiment of the 13th
Position : None
Posts : 3499
Guild : Blue Pegasus
Cosmic Coins : 0
Dungeon Tokens : 0
Mentor : Sky Emperor Shangdi
Experience : 367,824.5

Character Sheet
First Skill: Ten No Kichi
Second Skill:
Third Skill:

Post n°10

Re: Riza Wind Magic

by Rosetta Crawford 11th July 2013, 2:35 pm

Ok that will do

Riza Wind Magic GhqjI28

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Current missions(4/6): get the squid A, King of Fighters(S), Village Protection(A), Repair the House(D)

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