Melon
Rank:
Ethereal
Species:
Wolf
Type:
Combat pet
Proof of ownership:
Obtained in this job, approved here
Description & Appearance: Melon is a young female wolf who was found by Leila on the Floating Continent. When she was found, the cub was gravely injured and required immediate medical attention. Ever since being helped, the wolf cub seemed to have become emotionally attached to Leila and followed her back into the camp, refusing to leave no matter what was said or done. From that point onward, this creature became the witch's loyal companion who does not think ill of her master no matter her actions. Just like all other creatures from the floating continent, Melon's body naturally gathers ethernano in a very similar way to that of a regular mage, meaning she is perfectly capable of using magic. Growing attuned to Leila's own element and being connected to the nature around her allows Melon to cast nature-based spells that can be even more powerful than abilities of the more seasoned mages. |  |
Abilities
- Combat:
- Name: Free-forming
Rank: S
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 8 posts
Description: An ability that allows Melon to free-form the element of nature, creating trees, roots and all other flora in order to deal damage to the enemy in combat. The range of what the wolf can actually do in terms of creation is not restricted as long as the maximal spell range and speed are not exceeded. These are the range of 200 m and speed of 150 m/s. All opponents affected by this ability will receive S-ranked (100) damage.
Strengths:- Very versatile, as attack for any range can be formed as long as the maximal range is not exceeded
Weaknesses:- Can not be used for defense in any way
- Despite the freedom of forming, the spell is still locked to a single element that is generall weak to fire
Name: Flower field
Rank: A
Duration: 4 posts
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: Melon can howl to activate a special spell of hers, making a number of beautiful flowers instantly grow in the area of 150 meters all around her. These melon-colored flowers will start eminating a pleasant reddish dust that can be absorbed through skin in order to invoke certain healing properties. Those in range of this spell will be instantly healed for 50% of A-ranked (40) damage and will continue getting healed by another 50% of that same damage for the entire spell duration.
Strengths:- Powerful gradual healing that affects everyone who is in the required range
Weaknesses:- The initial heal is not as powerful and cannot save an ally who is on the verge of death
- If an enemy gets close enough, they can absorb the dust themselves for the healing effect
- Plot:
- Name: Soar
Description: For greater mobility, especially during long-distance travels, Melon can use her magic to grow wings on top of her back that have a very similar shape to two giant rose petals. These do not add any speed to her movement when flying and can be instantly destroyed in combat.
Name: Flourish
Description: As a creature greatly connected to the nature itself,
Melong constantly generates a pleasant and warm aura of magic. This aura makes it so that flowers and general greenery grows everywhere the wolf goes. She can even use this to instantly grow fruits for any of her allies if they happen to be hungry.
Name: Gate
Description: Not only does Melon's power allow her to control nature, it also gives her the chance to cast generic spells. One such spell is the Gate, a simply warping spell that allows the wolf to enter or leave the thread as she pleases. However, the Gate cannot be used to flee from pvp fights unless the permission from all players present is given.
Name: Growth
Description: While Melon is but a cub, she can use her magic to make her body temporarily grow to just about any size she desires. While this can be useful in many ways, it mostly allows Leila and anyone else to ride on the wolf's back if she allows them to do so. Better watch out to not damage her fur though!
Last edited by Leila Vergious on 30th November 2017, 5:14 am; edited 2 times in total - Very versatile, as attack for any range can be formed as long as the maximal range is not exceeded
Lilium
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First Skill: αєgιѕ - тнє мιи∂
Second Skill: муѕтι¢ - тнє вσ∂у
Third Skill: ραиα¢єα - тнє ѕσυℓ
Hi Leila! I'm Hikari as you know from my avatar addiction but I'll be the mod looking at your cute pet today! My comments will be in this colour and without further ado, let's get started.
- Spoiler:
- Leila Vergious wrote:Melon
Rank:
Ethereal
Species:
Wolf
Type:
Combat pet
Proof of ownership:
Obtained in this job, approved here
Description & Appearance:
Melon is a young female wolf who was found by Leila on the Floating Continent. When she was found, the cub was gravely injured and required immediate medical attention. Ever since being helped, the wolf cub seemed to have become emotionally attached to Leila and followed her back into the camp, refusing to leave no matter what was said or done. From that point onward, this creature became the witch's loyal companion who does not think ill of her master no matter her actions.
Just like all other creatures from the floating continent, Melon's body naturally gathers ethernano in a very similar way to that of a regular mage, meaning she is perfectly capable of using magic. Growing attuned to Leila's own element and being connected to the nature around her allows Melon to cast nature-based spells that can be even more powerful than abilities of the more seasoned mages.Abilities- Combat:
- Name: Free-forming
Rank: S
Duration: Passive
Cooldown: Passive
Please add a cooldown and duration to this ability because it doesn't really fit as a passive due to the amount of damage it could potentially deal.
Description: An ability that allows Melon to free-form the element of nature, creating trees, roots and all other flora in order to deal damage to the enemy in combat. The range of what the wolf can actually do in terms of creation is not restricted as long as the maximal spell range and speed are not exceeded. These are the range of 200 m and speed of 150 m/s. All opponents affected by this ability will receive S-ranked (100) damage.
Name: Flower field
Rank: A
Duration: 4 posts
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: Melon can howl to activate a special spell of hers, making a number of beautiful flowers instantly grow in the area of 150 meters all around her. These melon-colored flowers will start eminating a pleasant reddish dust that can be absorbed through skin in order to invoke certain healing properties. Those in range of this spell will be instantly healed for 50% of A-ranked (40) damage and will continue getting healed by another 50% of that same damage for the entire spell duration.
Strengths:- Powerful gradual healing that affects everyone who is in the required range
Weaknesses:- The initial heal is not as powerful and cannot save an ally who is on the verge of death
- If an enemy gets close enough, they can absorb the dust themselves for the healing effect
- Plot:
- Name: Soar
Description: For greater mobility, especially during long-distance travels, Melon can use her magic to grow wings on top of her back that have a very similar shape to two giant rose petals. These do not add any speed to her movement when flying and can be instantly destroyed in combat.
Name: Flourish
Description: As a creature greatly connected to the nature itself,
Melong constantly generates a pleasant and warm aura of magic. This aura makes it so that flowers and general greenery grows everywhere the wolf goes. She can even use this to instantly grow fruits for any of her allies if they happen to be hungry.
Name: Gate
Description: Not only does Melon's power allow her to control nature, it also gives her the chance to cast generic spells. One such spell is the Gate, a simply warping spell that allows the wolf to enter or leave the thread as she pleases. However, the Gate cannot be used to flee from pvp fights unless the permission from all players present is given.
Name: Growth
Description: While Melon is but a cub, she can use her magic to make her body temporarily grow to just about any size she desires. While this can be useful in many ways, it mostly allows Leila and anyone else to ride on the wolf's back if she allows them to do so. Better watch out to not damage her fur though!
- Powerful gradual healing that affects everyone who is in the required range
When finished editing please bump the thread for evaluation! Thank you!
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Bump, adjusted the damage value so it's more fitting for a passive ability. Also, could I please request the next grading, if you do find it still not good enough, to be in a spoiler to avoid having too long of posts here for the sake of the app looking a bit more clean?
Lilium-
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First Skill: αєgιѕ - тнє мιи∂
Second Skill: муѕтι¢ - тнє вσ∂у
Third Skill: ραиα¢єα - тнє ѕσυℓ
- Spoiler:
- Leila Vergious wrote:Melon
Rank:
Ethereal
Species:
Wolf
Type:
Combat pet
Proof of ownership:
Obtained in this job, approved here
Description & Appearance:
Melon is a young female wolf who was found by Leila on the Floating Continent. When she was found, the cub was gravely injured and required immediate medical attention. Ever since being helped, the wolf cub seemed to have become emotionally attached to Leila and followed her back into the camp, refusing to leave no matter what was said or done. From that point onward, this creature became the witch's loyal companion who does not think ill of her master no matter her actions.
Just like all other creatures from the floating continent, Melon's body naturally gathers ethernano in a very similar way to that of a regular mage, meaning she is perfectly capable of using magic. Growing attuned to Leila's own element and being connected to the nature around her allows Melon to cast nature-based spells that can be even more powerful than abilities of the more seasoned mages.Abilities- Combat:
- Name: Free-forming
Rank: S
Duration: Passive
Cooldown: Passive
[color=#ff765E]This still does not fall under a passive due to it dealing too much damage. Please add a cooldown to this ability, since as it is right now, it deals 100 damage per post against a single target.
Description: An ability that allows Melon to free-form the element of nature, creating trees, roots and all other flora in order to deal damage to the enemy in combat. The range of what the wolf can actually do in terms of creation is not restricted as long as the maximal spell range and speed are not exceeded. These are the range of 200 m and speed of 150 m/s. The total of damage that can be dealt by this ability is on par with regular S-ranked (100) spell and this value is divided between all targets hit. If two enemies are hit in a single post, then each receives half, if three are hit then each receives third and so on.
Name: Flower field
Rank: A
Duration: 4 posts
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: Melon can howl to activate a special spell of hers, making a number of beautiful flowers instantly grow in the area of 150 meters all around her. These melon-colored flowers will start eminating a pleasant reddish dust that can be absorbed through skin in order to invoke certain healing properties. Those in range of this spell will be instantly healed for 50% of A-ranked (40) damage and will continue getting healed by another 50% of that same damage for the entire spell duration.
Strengths:- Powerful gradual healing that affects everyone who is in the required range
Weaknesses:- The initial heal is not as powerful and cannot save an ally who is on the verge of death
- If an enemy gets close enough, they can absorb the dust themselves for the healing effect
- Powerful gradual healing that affects everyone who is in the required range
- Plot:
- Name: Soar
Description: For greater mobility, especially during long-distance travels, Melon can use her magic to grow wings on top of her back that have a very similar shape to two giant rose petals. These do not add any speed to her movement when flying and can be instantly destroyed in combat.
Name: Flourish
Description: As a creature greatly connected to the nature itself,
Melong constantly generates a pleasant and warm aura of magic. This aura makes it so that flowers and general greenery grows everywhere the wolf goes. She can even use this to instantly grow fruits for any of her allies if they happen to be hungry.[/center]
Name: Gate
Description: Not only does Melon's power allow her to control nature, it also gives her the chance to cast generic spells. One such spell is the Gate, a simply warping spell that allows the wolf to enter or leave the thread as she pleases. However, the Gate cannot be used to flee from pvp fights unless the permission from all players present is given.
Name: Growth
Description: While Melon is but a cub, she can use her magic to make her body temporarily grow to just about any size she desires. While this can be useful in many ways, it mostly allows Leila and anyone else to ride on the wolf's back if she allows them to do so. Better watch out to not damage her fur though!
Sorry about the non-spoiler the first time. But once ready for grading, please bump the thread and I'll get back to you ASAP_____________________________________________________________________________________
Lilium-
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First Skill: αєgιѕ - тнє мιи∂
Second Skill: муѕтι¢ - тнє вσ∂у
Third Skill: ραиα¢єα - тнє ѕσυℓ
- Spoiler:
- Leila Vergious wrote:Melon
Rank:
Ethereal
Species:
Wolf
Type:
Combat pet
Proof of ownership:
Obtained in this job, approved here
Description & Appearance:
Melon is a young female wolf who was found by Leila on the Floating Continent. When she was found, the cub was gravely injured and required immediate medical attention. Ever since being helped, the wolf cub seemed to have become emotionally attached to Leila and followed her back into the camp, refusing to leave no matter what was said or done. From that point onward, this creature became the witch's loyal companion who does not think ill of her master no matter her actions.
Just like all other creatures from the floating continent, Melon's body naturally gathers ethernano in a very similar way to that of a regular mage, meaning she is perfectly capable of using magic. Growing attuned to Leila's own element and being connected to the nature around her allows Melon to cast nature-based spells that can be even more powerful than abilities of the more seasoned mages.Abilities- Combat:
- Name: Free-forming
Rank: S
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 8 posts
Description: An ability that allows Melon to free-form the element of nature, creating trees, roots and all other flora in order to deal damage to the enemy in combat. The range of what the wolf can actually do in terms of creation is not restricted as long as the maximal spell range and speed are not exceeded. These are the range of 200 m and speed of 150 m/s. All opponents affected by this ability will receive S-ranked (100) damage.
Strengths:- Very versatile, as attack for any range can be formed as long as the maximal range is not exceeded
Weaknesses:- Can not be used for defense in any way
- Despite the freedom of forming, the spell is still locked to a single element that is generall weak to fire
Name: Flower field
Rank: A
Duration: 4 posts
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: Melon can howl to activate a special spell of hers, making a number of beautiful flowers instantly grow in the area of 150 meters all around her. These melon-colored flowers will start eminating a pleasant reddish dust that can be absorbed through skin in order to invoke certain healing properties. Those in range of this spell will be instantly healed for 50% of A-ranked (40) damage and will continue getting healed by another 50% of that same damage for the entire spell duration.
Strengths:- Powerful gradual healing that affects everyone who is in the required range
Weaknesses:- The initial heal is not as powerful and cannot save an ally who is on the verge of death
- If an enemy gets close enough, they can absorb the dust themselves for the healing effect
- Plot:
- Name: Soar
Description: For greater mobility, especially during long-distance travels, Melon can use her magic to grow wings on top of her back that have a very similar shape to two giant rose petals. These do not add any speed to her movement when flying and can be instantly destroyed in combat.
Name: Flourish
Description: As a creature greatly connected to the nature itself,
Melong constantly generates a pleasant and warm aura of magic. This aura makes it so that flowers and general greenery grows everywhere the wolf goes. She can even use this to instantly grow fruits for any of her allies if they happen to be hungry.
Name: Gate
Description: Not only does Melon's power allow her to control nature, it also gives her the chance to cast generic spells. One such spell is the Gate, a simply warping spell that allows the wolf to enter or leave the thread as she pleases. However, the Gate cannot be used to flee from pvp fights unless the permission from all players present is given.
Name: Growth
Description: While Melon is but a cub, she can use her magic to make her body temporarily grow to just about any size she desires. While this can be useful in many ways, it mostly allows Leila and anyone else to ride on the wolf's back if she allows them to do so. Better watch out to not damage her fur though!
- Very versatile, as attack for any range can be formed as long as the maximal range is not exceeded
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- Spoiler:
- Leila Vergious wrote:Melon
Rank:
Ethereal
Species:
Wolf
Type:
Combat pet
Proof of ownership:
Obtained in this job, approved here
Description & Appearance:
Melon is a young female wolf who was found by Leila on the Floating Continent. When she was found, the cub was gravely injured and required immediate medical attention. Ever since being helped, the wolf cub seemed to have become emotionally attached to Leila and followed her back into the camp, refusing to leave no matter what was said or done. From that point onward, this creature became the witch's loyal companion who does not think ill of her master no matter her actions.
Just like all other creatures from the floating continent, Melon's body naturally gathers ethernano in a very similar way to that of a regular mage, meaning she is perfectly capable of using magic. Growing attuned to Leila's own element and being connected to the nature around her allows Melon to cast nature-based spells that can be even more powerful than abilities of the more seasoned mages.Abilities- Combat:
- Name: Free-forming
Rank: S
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 8 posts
Description: An ability that allows Melon to free-form the element of nature, creating trees, roots and all other flora in order to deal damage to the enemy in combat. The range of what the wolf can actually do in terms of creation is not restricted as long as the maximal spell range and speed are not exceeded. These are the range of 200 m and speed of 150 m/s. All opponents affected by this ability will receive S-ranked (100) damage.
Strengths:- Very versatile, as attack for any range can be formed as long as the maximal range is not exceeded
Weaknesses:- Can not be used for defense in any way
- Despite the freedom of forming, the spell is still locked to a single element that is generall weak to fire
Name: Flower field
Rank: A
Duration: 4 posts
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: Melon can howl to activate a special spell of hers, making a number of beautiful flowers instantly grow in the area of 150 meters all around her. These melon-colored flowers will start eminating a pleasant reddish dust that can be absorbed through skin in order to invoke certain healing properties. Those in range of this spell will be instantly healed for 50% of A-ranked (40) damage and will continue getting healed by another 50% of that same damage for the entire spell duration.
Strengths:- Powerful gradual healing that affects everyone who is in the required range
Weaknesses:- The initial heal is not as powerful and cannot save an ally who is on the verge of death
- If an enemy gets close enough, they can absorb the dust themselves for the healing effect
- Plot:
- Name: Soar
Description: For greater mobility, especially during long-distance travels, Melon can use her magic to grow wings on top of her back that have a very similar shape to two giant rose petals. These do not add any speed to her movement when flying and can be instantly destroyed in combat.
Name: Flourish
Description: As a creature greatly connected to the nature itself,
Melong constantly generates a pleasant and warm aura of magic. This aura makes it so that flowers and general greenery grows everywhere the wolf goes. She can even use this to instantly grow fruits for any of her allies if they happen to be hungry.
Name: Gate
Description: Not only does Melon's power allow her to control nature, it also gives her the chance to cast generic spells. One such spell is the Gate, a simply warping spell that allows the wolf to enter or leave the thread as she pleases. However, the Gate cannot be used to flee from pvp fights unless the permission from all players present is given.
Name: Growth
Description: While Melon is but a cub, she can use her magic to make her body temporarily grow to just about any size she desires. While this can be useful in many ways, it mostly allows Leila and anyone else to ride on the wolf's back if she allows them to do so. Better watch out to not damage her fur though!
- Very versatile, as attack for any range can be formed as long as the maximal range is not exceeded
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