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    Stormfang

    Quill Scorchwood
    Quill Scorchwood

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    Posts : 329
    Guild : Silver Wolf
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 300

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Elemental equipment
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    Stormfang Empty Stormfang

    Post by Quill Scorchwood 20th March 2018, 6:39 pm

    Name:Stormfang
    Rank: Weak
    Species:Thunder Wolf Drake youngling
    Type:Non combat pet
    Description:
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    Abilities:
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    Last edited by Quill Scorchwood on 4th April 2018, 8:27 pm; edited 4 times in total


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    Stormfang 25mifd

    Quill:Here
    Primary magic:Link
    Bank: Where all companion/pets can be found
    Magic Items:Paradise's Key, Forge Beetle
    Cr1tikal
    Cr1tikal

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    Posts : 1756
    Cosmic Coins : 8
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 33
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: FrostFire Dragon Slayer
    Second Magic: Cosmic Slayer
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    Stormfang Empty Re: Stormfang

    Post by Cr1tikal 20th March 2018, 7:07 pm

    Hey Quill, Cr1tikal here. Just gonna grade this thing so we can move along and go back to the orgy fest that is the discord chat. I see here you got a loli dragon of the thunder furry drake thingo, and I think its pretty cute, but not as cute as my puppy. That has nothing to do with this app, so we'll start now and see how bad it gets from there.

    For the lighting shooto thingo, you need to follow the rules for speed on a spell as these abilities still follow those rules. Arrows can move at many different speeds, which includes incredibly fast if you're not a pansy, so that's a bit too vague and needs to be written down with a solid number that is in line with the rules. As its a stun, I'm to ask that you increase the cooldown, as a stun lasts for 1 post and you have a 2 post cooldown. Bump that up to 4 and we should as golden as my friend's shower. I'm assuming this spell deals a full rank of the abilities damage, but it would be appreciated if you listed that so the damage doesn't change randomly, day to day

    For the twilight vampire wave, the cooldown should be the same as the other one I mentioned because it has a paralyze as well. Same as above for the damage on this one.

    After we fix these, we can diddly dong bang clang our way out of here and then go party it up with the others on site.


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    Quill Scorchwood
    Quill Scorchwood

    Player 
    Lineage : None
    Position : None
    Posts : 329
    Guild : Silver Wolf
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 300

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Elemental equipment
    Second Magic:
    Third Magic:

    Stormfang Empty Re: Stormfang

    Post by Quill Scorchwood 20th March 2018, 7:25 pm

    Fixed


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    Stormfang 25mifd

    Quill:Here
    Primary magic:Link
    Bank: Where all companion/pets can be found
    Magic Items:Paradise's Key, Forge Beetle
    Cr1tikal
    Cr1tikal

    Player 
    Posts : 1756
    Cosmic Coins : 8
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 33
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: FrostFire Dragon Slayer
    Second Magic: Cosmic Slayer
    Third Magic:

    Stormfang Empty Re: Stormfang

    Post by Cr1tikal 20th March 2018, 7:29 pm

    Approved, for now, that way if its abused I can pull it like I pull myself.


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    Fluffy
    Fluffy

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    First Magic: Flames Of The Underworld
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    Stormfang Empty Re: Stormfang

    Post by Fluffy 4th April 2018, 7:52 pm

    Moving.
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    Stormfang Empty Re: Stormfang

    Post by Guest 4th April 2018, 10:41 pm

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