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    Kinetic Karma

    Vhesira Lithvir
    Vhesira Lithvir

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Motor City Rush- Player 
    Lineage : Shinokishi: Knight of Death
    Position : None
    Posts : 35
    Guild : Aurora
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Kinetic Karma
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    In Progress Kinetic Karma

    Post by Vhesira Lithvir 12th May 2018, 4:21 pm

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Kinetic Karma
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: Kinetic Karma allows the user to manipulate the kinetic energy of people and objects around them. It was once thought to be a form of Wind magic, but after extensive testing, it was found that it was more akin to something like Gravity magic, manipulating basic laws of physics of the world around the caster by increasing, decreasing, or redirecting the kinetic energy of a target. It has good defensive options, wide support versatility, and decent offensive ability, though is almost completely lacking in any healing options.

    Vhesira's use of it depends on the situation. Offensively, she can use it to increase the kinetic energy of her physical attacks, thus increasing their power. She can also exert her willpower on thrown objects or even the air for a brief moment, forming a sort of 'air bullet'. Defensively, she can remove the kinetic energy of an enemy attack, or send out a wave of force to keep an enemy at bay. For support purposes is where it shines. Allowing herself or others to move faster, jump higher, hit harder, slow a fall, or various other things.

    Strengths:

    • Most spells are near instant, allowing for quick reactions.
    • In most cases, there are little to no visual cues of its use, allowing the caster to surprise opponents.
    • The nature of the magic makes the user very dangerous in close combat.

    Weaknesses:

    • Most spells are single target, with very few AoE options.
    • Magical effects with no physical form are unaffected by kinetic force, thus ignore it's defenses.
    • Very limited ranged options, meaning ranged fighters hold advantage.


    Lineage:
    Shinokishi - Knight of Death:

    Unique Abilities:
    Kinetic Buffer (Passive): A thin field of kinetic energy automatically forms around the body upon entering a dangerous situation. Any attack that makes physical contact will have it's damage reduced by 30%. Magical effects that cannot by physically interacted with (light, darkness, gravity, etc.) ignore this.

    Kinetic Lock (Active): The user completely removes kinetic energy from the target, within single target range, effectively paralyzing them. Inanimate objects, normal animals, non-mages, and Mages 1 rank or more below the user can be held for 2 posts. Mages of equal rank can be held for 1. Mages of 1 rank above cannot be held; only slowed by 50% for 1 post. Mages of 2 or more ranks above are unaffected. Magic that does not require movement on the target's part can still be used by them, and they can still speak. The user cannot use other magic while holding a target unless they are at least 1 rank below, due to the effort to hold them. Has a cooldown of 3 posts.

    Kinetic Boost (Passive): The user passively accelerates their own kinetic energy when in dangerous situations, granting them increased speed and force to their attacks. Their Speed is increased by 30(35)%, and their Strength by 10(13)%. These boosts increase by 5%/3% respectively per rank, maxing out at 50% for Speed and 20% for Strength, at S rank.

    New Ability:

    Spells:
    D Rank Spells (4):
    C Rank Spells (3):

    Advanced Spells:
    D+:
    C+:

    Signature Spells:
    D:
    C:


    Last edited by Vhesira Lithvir on 27th May 2018, 7:43 pm; edited 2 times in total
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    In Progress Re: Kinetic Karma

    Post by Lester Drynedi 13th May 2018, 11:57 pm

    Hey hey Lester here! I'm your grader for this round, comments are in this wonderful color (tell me if you can't read it and I'll change it)
    Feel free to ask any questions or clarefications. Just reply to the thread with a 'bump'when you're finished with the changes!~

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    Vhesira Lithvir
    Vhesira Lithvir

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Motor City Rush- Player 
    Lineage : Shinokishi: Knight of Death
    Position : None
    Posts : 35
    Guild : Aurora
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Kinetic Karma
    Second Magic:
    Third Magic:

    In Progress Re: Kinetic Karma

    Post by Vhesira Lithvir 14th May 2018, 9:45 am

    Bump! Seeing the edits you had to make, I am so sorry. I thought I had a better grasp of how things worked than I actually did, apparently.
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    Post by Lester Drynedi 14th May 2018, 1:26 pm

    ❀Oh no no its okay don't stress! Everyone has a few edits they have to make, its normal to get the odd thing wrong!
    Could you just add to Kinematic lock that the target has to be within single target range, then its all good to approve~


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    Vhesira Lithvir
    Vhesira Lithvir

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Motor City Rush- Player 
    Lineage : Shinokishi: Knight of Death
    Position : None
    Posts : 35
    Guild : Aurora
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Kinetic Karma
    Second Magic:
    Third Magic:

    In Progress Re: Kinetic Karma

    Post by Vhesira Lithvir 14th May 2018, 2:07 pm

    I put "The user completely removes kinetic energy from the target, within single target range, effectively paralyzing them." already, do I need to put it down a different way?


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    Post by Lester Drynedi 14th May 2018, 10:03 pm

    Gosh, sorry about that!
    Kinetic Karma Mq4HN1z

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    Post by Lester Drynedi 27th May 2018, 12:46 am

    Unlocked & Moved at users request

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    Vhesira Lithvir
    Vhesira Lithvir

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Motor City Rush- Player 
    Lineage : Shinokishi: Knight of Death
    Position : None
    Posts : 35
    Guild : Aurora
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Kinetic Karma
    Second Magic:
    Third Magic:

    In Progress Re: Kinetic Karma

    Post by Vhesira Lithvir 24th June 2018, 10:09 pm

    Changelog:


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