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    Post by Musicalbunny on 22nd December 2017, 5:53 pm

    Magic

    Primary Magic: water magic

    Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)

    Caster or Holder: Caster

    Description:
    My character uses water magic but in a different way than most others. He uses the water vapor and droplets to attack and support. This means he can use the moisture in the air or the vapor/droplets from his body (he is made of water) to his advantage.
    My character uses this vapor to become a veil to hide your allies or make a spear of vapor to strike the enemy. His emotions also change his water form (such as steam, boiling, cool, etc) which lets him use his body to his advantage. He can become steam to move quickly from one point to the other as well as healing/cleansing his teammates. He is mostly a supportive character which means he doesn’t have many full of attacks. This form of magic is completely unique to Lirix Marano due to his unique split personality and watery body.

    Strengths:
    -Can be used very supportively with allies
    -Can use split personalities to control his abilities (adaptable)
    -If needed his vapor could be used as a single target ability but mostly is aoe
    -multiple spells can be used at the same time

    Weaknesses:
    -If there is no form of water around or in the air he drains life force
    -he cannot heal himself with his abilities
    -The elements affect his form as well as emotions
    -He has to destroy a body of water to bring back the health wasted in battle
    -Not many damaging moves
    -can only change moods by himself every 3 post

    Lineage:
    Chimera Blood
    Description: A long time an ago, a hero slew a Chimera invading a small town. The great hero drank some of the Chimera’s blood to show dominance over the mythical creature. But it changed him greatly, giving the hero the ability the strength of a lion, flight of an eagle, and scales of a snake. The hero’s descendants were given the exact same traits as he did.
    Ability: A transformation that allows the user to use one of the chimera’s ability, flight of an eagle from wings and a sight increase(flying ability and enhanced perception enough to detect the movement of a mouse in tall grass from a hundred meters away), strength of a lion(double strength), or scales of a snake(30% damage resistance). Causing great carnage if used correctly.
    Usage: Each of the three transformations last 4 posts. 5 post cooldown that is shared by using a form which prevents the user from just flipping between forms too quickly.

    unique abilities:

    positive activity:

    form his body into different types
    compassion and love-steam is coming off of him and can use the steam to attack without using health
    calmness-he becomes cold water and his attacks form into the very cold water, making enemies feel extreme amounts of cold(if he gets attacked by ice he gets into this form]

    Negative activity:

    form his body into different types
    timid/scared-he becomes vapor himself and make physical blows do 25% less damage
    anger-he becomes boiling hot and his attacks form into the very hot water, making enemies feel extreme amounts of heat(if he gets attacked by fire he gets into this form)
    sadness-drips everywhere(no combat use)

    Warped body:

    Lirix has the ability to change his appearance at will. He can either change his head or body. The duration is endless but once he returns to his original form the cooldown is 4 post

    Body of water:

    Since his body is made of water he can use it for his abilities whenever there is no moisture in the air, which drains his health. To perform a spell on his body you need to spend 3-5 health depending on the radius(1-50,51-100,100+) He can drink water to restore it or drain a large body of water. Drinking a mug/bottle of water is 5 health while something like a quarter of a river is 20. He dissipates water into vapor or droplets to use it for the mist. He can do this every other post.

    signature spells:

    Form Change:

    Rank: D
    Type: Water
    Duration: 3
    Cooldown: 4
    Description: This spell allows Lirix to change his form to any of his negative or positive forms. After the duration is over he goes back to his calm form
    Strengths:
    -allows him to use spells that require certain forms
    Weaknesses:
    -does no damage
    -Only last 3 turns before going back to calm
    clashing waves:

    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Duration: 1
    Cooldown: 3
    Description: Lirix sends out 2 water scythes at one opponent. This does 120% of character rank damage, but it uses up 10% health
    Strengths:
    -over 100% rank damage
    Weaknesses:
    -only hits one person
    -uses up Lirix's health


    D rank spells:

    Mist of the ages:


    Rank: D

    Type: Water;supportive

    Duration: 3

    Cooldown: 4

    Description: My character makes the water in the air thicker turning it into a mist that the enemies cant sees through but allies the same/below this spell's rank can see through it a tiny bit, while players of higher level can see completely through it. The range is 30 meters. It is an aoe that does no damage unless someone uses ice magic to make the vapor colder turning it unbearable for enemies, or using fire magic to make it boil burning the enemies' skin.

    Strengths:
    -can be used to fake out opponents
    -can be given a status affect that affects/damages the enemy
    -lets enemies attack without being seen
    -gives the team an advantage of sight

    Weaknesses:
    -if someone is still in the mist and someone creates a status affect with it they can get hurt as well(which means allies can be hurt by it too)
    -Just because u can see through it doesn't mean the target still can't sneak up on you
    -Allies can misuse it and apply a status affect to themselves while in the vapor
    -It does not do anything buffing or damage wise unless it is made to do damage
    -The mist cannot be controlled, it can only be created in one place.

    Cleansing vapor:


    Rank: D

    Type: Water;supportive

    Duration: 2

    Cooldown: 3

    Description: My character uses vapor from his body to cleanse all allies and regenerates a 25% amount of d rank damage for each post on the ally. It creates this sort of mist around them. Range 30 meters. It's a multitarget ability that hits allies.

    Strengths:
    -It cleanses  you and your allies
    -It affects all allies
    -It can bring allies back on their feet

    Weaknesses:
    -It isn't a massive range meaning u have to all be in the same area
    -It isn't a heal over time not a single heal meaning u can still die very easily
    -Is only a tiny heal
    -It has a long cd which means an enemy can apply a status effect right after it.
    -doesn't heal you


    Vapor spear:


    Rank: D

    Type: Water;Offensive

    Duration:1

    Cooldown:2

    Description:My character creates a spear made of vapor in their hand and throws it straight into the enemy. If it hits it will deal d ranked damage and will burn if in an angry state or make them feel cold in his calm. range 60 meters. 45 MPs

    Strengths:
    -Can give enemies a status effect
    -Can be used to knock an enemy into something
    -Can be used with Mist of the Ages

    Weaknesses:
    -He has to be angry or calm to add a status effect
    -It has to make direct contact with the enemy
    -My Character will have to be accurate
    -Since my character's mood can be changed easily they can stop the status effect before it applies

    Explosions in the air:


    Rank: D

    Type: Water;Offensive

    Duration:2

    Cooldown:3

    Description: My character when in angry state heats water in the air to the point where they explode. This is an area that deals 5 damage for each post. The aoe itself can be used 20 meters around the character. Its radius is 15 meters though. It does effect all players in the area.

    Strengths:
    -does damage
    -can be used from a distance away
    -can affect multiple people

    Weaknesses:
    -can be used on allies
    -has to be in his bowling form
    -can be stopped by making him feel another emotion
    -not direct dmg but dmg overtime

    C rank magic:

    Droplet Wall:

    Rank: C
    Type: Water; Defensive
    Duration: 3
    Cooldown: 4
    Description: Lirix has to be calm to perform this ability. He freezes the droplets in front of him to create a wall that blocks up to 80 damage. The wall stretches out 30 meters straight across. People who are the same rank or above this spell can use abilities through the wall.
    Strengths:
    -blocks 80 damage
    -Allows users to use spells through the wall
    Weaknesses:
    -Only blocks one direction
    -D rank users cant use magic through the wall
    -Multiple vulnerable areas
    Water Cycle:

    Rank: C
    Type: water
    Duration: 1
    Cooldown: 4
    Description: This spell unleashes a whirlpool/twister beneath the opponent. The spell adapts the form Lirix is in.
    Timid-This ability creates a twister of steam that throws the enemies upward.The damage deals 60% less instead of 50% and knocks the enemy upwards.
    Calm-This ability sends up frigid water and hurts the enemy. Does 50% damage of C rank damage and freezes the opponent for one turn
    Compassionate-heals all allies in the aoe for 40% of C rank damage..
    All the forms of this spell are aoe and deal the 50% of the C rank damage. The radius of this spell is the max radius and range is 60 meters.
    Strengths:
    -aoe
    Weaknesses:
    -have to be a certain form for each one
    -doesnt deal 100% damage
    pulsing geyser:

    Rank: C
    Type: Supportive
    Duration: 3
    Cooldown: 5
    Description: Lirix creates a geyser beneath him that pulses out water to heal his allies. He heals her for 25% C rank damage for every post. The aoe is 45 meters big(aoe).
    Strengths:
    -heals allies
    -aoe
    Weaknesses:
    -deals no damage
    -heal over time
    -heals little health every time it pulses


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    Post by Musicalbunny on 26th December 2017, 7:36 pm

    edited items
    -I added a c to parents last gift
    -added that spells need to roll a dmg dice in lirix's depressed form
    -Added the rank needed to make a dmg dice rolled for the depressed form
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    Hi Musicalbunny, I am Desirée Blooms, and I will be grading your magic today.
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    @Musicalbunny wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: water magic

    Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)

    Caster or Holder: Caster

    Description:
    My character uses water magic but in a different way than most others. He uses the water vapor and droplets to attack and support. This means he can use the moisture in the air or the vapor/droplets from his body (he is made of water) to his advantage.
    My character uses this vapor to become a veil to hide your allies or make a spear of vapor to strike the enemy. His emotions also change his water form (such as steam, boiling, cool, etc) which lets him use his body to his advantage. He can become steam to move quickly from one point to the other as well as healing/cleansing his teammates. He is mostly a supportive character which means he doesn’t have many full on attacks. This form of magic is completely unique to Lirix Marano due to his unique split personality and watery body.

    Strengths:
    -Can be used very supportively with allies
    -Can use split personalities to control his abilities (adaptable)
    -If needed his vapor could be used as a single target ability but mostly is aoe
    -multiple spells can be used at the same time

    Weaknesses:
    -If there is no form of water around or in the air he drains life force
    -he cannot heal himself
    -The elements affect his form as well as emotions
    -He has to destroy a body of water to bring back the health wasted in battle
    -Not many damaging moves
    -can only change moods by himself every 3 post

    Lineage:
    Chimera Blood
    Description: A long time an ago, a hero slew a Chimera invading a small town. The great hero drank some of the Chimera’s blood to show dominance over the mythical creature. But it changed him greatly, giving the hero the ability the strength of a lion, flight of an eagle, and scales of a snake. The hero’s descendants were given the exact same traits as he did.
    Ability: A transformation that allows the user to use one of the chimera’s ability, flight of an eagle from wings and a sight increase(flying ability and enhanced perception enough to detect the movement of a mouse in tall grass from a hundred meters away), strength of a lion(double strength), or scales of a snake(30% damage resistance). Causing great carnage if used correctly.
    Usage: Each of the three transformations last 4 posts. 5 post cooldown that is shared after using a form which prevents the user from just flipping between forms too quickly.

    Unique Abilities:
    Due to his split personalities, a few emotions can change the water form he is in
    compassion-steam is coming off of him and can use the steam to attack without using health
    timid/scared-he becomes vapor himself and make physical blows phase through him
    anger-he becomes boiling hot and scalds enemies
    being calm-he is cold water making enemies feel intense cold
    sad-he drips watery everywhere allowing him to have a chance to dodge spells(roll dmg dice) that are the same rank or the rank below him. This is too much to be going on in one unique ability. I would recommend splitting this into two unique abilities, and we can work from there. This would also mean that you would need to get rid of one if you do. Also, the damage dice system does not work anymore.

    Parents last gift-after his parents disappeared when he was 4 he received an amulet from them which can change his mood whenever he looks at it. Such as compassion for what happened to them and what danger they're in, or despair for why they left. He is only able to change emotions so quickly meaning that this ability does have a cooldown. A cooldown of 3 post. Since you are not using a holder magic, being that your magic is a caster magic around water, could you please rewrite the lore of this ability or perhaps make it something that resonates within your body? The amulet sounds more like an item that one would purchase in the shop.

    Body made of water-Since his body is made of water he can use it for his abilities whenever there is no moisture in the air, which drains his health. To perform a spell with his body you need to spend 3-5 health depending on the radius(1-50,51-100,100+) He can drink water to restore it or drain a large body of water. Drinking a mug/bottle of water is 5 health while something like a quarter of a river is 20. He dissipates water into vapor or droplets to use it for the mist. Please make this to where you can only do it every other post.


    Spells:

    Name: Mist of the ages

    Rank: D

    Type: Water;supportive

    Duration: 3

    Cooldown: 4

    Description: My character makes the water in the air thicker turning it into a mist that the enemies cant see through but allies the same/below this spell's rank can see through it a tiny bit, while players of higher level can see completely through it. The range is 30 meters. It is an aoe that does no damage unless someone uses ice magic to make the vapor colder turning it unbearable for enemies, or using fire magic to make it boil burning the enemies' skin.

    Strengths:
    -can be used to fake out opponents
    -can be given a status affect that affects/damages the enemy
    -lets enemies attack without being seen
    -gives the team an advantage of sight

    Weaknesses:
    -if someone is still in the mist and someone creates a status affect with it they can get hurt as well(which means allies can be hurt by it too)
    -Just because u can see through it doesn't mean the target still can't sneak up on you
    -Allies can misuse it and apply a status affect to themselves while in the vapor
    -It does not do anything buffing or damage wise unless it is made to do damage
    -The mist cannot be controlled, it can only be created in one place.

    Name: Cleansing vapor

    Rank: D

    Type: Water;supportive

    Duration: 2

    Cooldown: 3

    Description: My character uses vapor from his body to cleanse all allies and regenerates a tiny amount of health each post. It creates this sort of mist around them. Range 30 meters. Its a multitarget ability that hits allies. This spell needs a specific number for the heal, instead of "tiny amount of health." As this is a AoE spell with a duration of 2 posts, please state that it will heal for 25% D Rank damage to all allies within the range.

    Strengths:
    -It cleanses and heals you and your allies
    -It affects all allies
    -It can bring allies back on their feet

    Weaknesses:
    -It isn't a massive range meaning u have to all be in the same area
    -It isn't a heal over time not a single heal meaning u can still die very easily
    -Is only a tiny heal
    -The it has a long cd which means a enemy can apply a status affect right after it.


    Name: Vapor spear
    Rank: D
    Type: Water;Offensive
    Duration:1
    Cooldown:2
    Description:My character creates a spear made of vapor in their hand and throws it straight into the enemy. If it hits it will deal d ranked damage and will burn if in an angry state or make them feel cold in his calm. range 60 meters. 45 mps
    Strengths:
    -Can give enemes a status effect
    -Can be used to knock an enemy into something
    -Can be used with Mist of the Ages
    Weaknesses:
    -He has to be angry or calm to add a status effect
    -It has to make direct contact with the enemy
    -My Character will have to be accurate
    -Since my characters mood can be changed easily they can stop the status effect before it applies

    Name: Explosions in the air
    Rank: D
    Type: Water;Offensive
    Duration:2
    Cooldown:3
    Description: My character when in angry state heats water in the air to the point where they explode. This is an aoe that deals 5-7 damage for each post. Please make this strictly 5 damage per post, as this follows AoE rules. The aoe itself can be used 20 meters around the character. Its radius is 15 meters though. It does effect all players in the area.
    Strengths:
    -does damage
    -can be used from a distance away
    -can effect multiple people
    Weaknesses:
    -can be used on allies
    -has to be in his boiling form
    -can be stopped by making him feel another emotion
    -not direct dmg but dmg overtime


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    Post by Musicalbunny on 1st January 2018, 10:59 pm

    -split the split personality to 2 unique abilities
    -removed the amulet unique ability
    -changed unique ability name "body made of water" to "body of water"
    -added a cool down to the unique ability "body of water"
    -added the amount of healing for "Cleansing vapor"
    -Added that my character can't heal himself with "Cleansing vapor"
    -Made explosions in the air just 5 damage
    -removed the ability to  the sadness form from Lirix
    -added the affects of the elements on his form
    -changed some of the formatting
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    We are almost finished, just a few more edits in regards to your Unique Abilities.
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    @Musicalbunny wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: water magic

    Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)

    Caster or Holder: Caster

    Description:
    My character uses water magic but in a different way than most others. He uses the water vapor and droplets to attack and support. This means he can use the moisture in the air or the vapor/droplets from his body (he is made of water) to his advantage.
    My character uses this vapor to become a veil to hide your allies or make a spear of vapor to strike the enemy. His emotions also change his water form (such as steam, boiling, cool, etc) which lets him use his body to his advantage. He can become steam to move quickly from one point to the other as well as healing/cleansing his teammates. He is mostly a supportive character which means he doesn’t have many full on attacks. This form of magic is completely unique to Lirix Marano due to his unique split personality and watery body.

    Strengths:
    -Can be used very supportively with allies
    -Can use split personalities to control his abilities (adaptable)
    -If needed his vapor could be used as a single target ability but mostly is aoe
    -multiple spells can be used at the same time

    Weaknesses:
    -If there is no form of water around or in the air he drains life force
    -he cannot heal himself with his abilities
    -The elements affect his form as well as emotions
    -He has to destroy a body of water to bring back the health wasted in battle
    -Not many damaging moves
    -can only change moods by himself every 3 post

    Lineage:
    Chimera Blood
    Description: A long time an ago, a hero slew a Chimera invading a small town. The great hero drank some of the Chimera’s blood to show dominance over the mythical creature. But it changed him greatly, giving the hero the ability the strength of a lion, flight of an eagle, and scales of a snake. The hero’s descendants were given the exact same traits as he did.
    Ability: A transformation that allows the user to use one of the chimera’s ability, flight of an eagle from wings and a sight increase(flying ability and enhanced perception enough to detect the movement of a mouse in tall grass from a hundred meters away), strength of a lion(double strength), or scales of a snake(30% damage resistance). Causing great carnage if used correctly.
    Usage: Each of the three transformations last 4 posts. 5 post cooldown that is shared after using a form which prevents the user from just flipping between forms too quickly.

    unique abilities:

    positive activity:


    form his body into different types
    compassion and love-steam is coming off of him and can use the steam to attack without using health
    calmness-he is cold water making enemies feel intense cold(if he gets attacked by ice he gets into this form) With this form, a better way of wording would be that "his attacks form into very cold water, making enemies feel extreme amounts of cold."

    Negative activity:


    form his body into different types
    timid/scared-he becomes vapor himself and make physical blows phase through him Having physical blows pass through him would be considered an immunity, which is not allowed. A suggestion would be that rather than having the physical attacks phase through him, having the damage from physical attacks be reduced by 25%.
    anger-he becomes boiling hot and scalds enemies(if he gets attacked by fire he gets into this form) With this form, a better way of wording would be that "his attacks form into very hot water, making enemies feel extreme amounts of heat."
    sadness-drips everywhere(no combat use)

    Body of water:

    Since his body is made of water he can use it for his abilities whenever there is no moisture in the air, which drains his health. To perform a spell with his body you need to spend 3-5 health depending on the radius(1-50,51-100,100+) He can drink water to restore it or drain a large body of water. Drinking a mug/bottle of water is 5 health while something like a quarter of a river is 20. He dissipates water into vapor or droplets to use it for the mist. He can do this every other post.

    Spells:

    Mist of the ages:


    Rank: D

    Type: Water;supportive

    Duration: 3

    Cooldown: 4

    Description: My character makes the water in the air thicker turning it into a mist that the enemies cant see through but allies the same/below this spell's rank can see through it a tiny bit, while players of higher level can see completely through it. The range is 30 meters. It is an aoe that does no damage unless someone uses ice magic to make the vapor colder turning it unbearable for enemies, or using fire magic to make it boil burning the enemies' skin.

    Strengths:
    -can be used to fake out opponents
    -can be given a status affect that affects/damages the enemy
    -lets enemies attack without being seen
    -gives the team an advantage of sight

    Weaknesses:
    -if someone is still in the mist and someone creates a status affect with it they can get hurt as well(which means allies can be hurt by it too)
    -Just because u can see through it doesn't mean the target still can't sneak up on you
    -Allies can misuse it and apply a status affect to themselves while in the vapor
    -It does not do anything buffing or damage wise unless it is made to do damage
    -The mist cannot be controlled, it can only be created in one place.

    Cleansing vapor:


    Rank: D

    Type: Water;supportive

    Duration: 2

    Cooldown: 3

    Description: My character uses vapor from his body to cleanse all allies and regenerates a 25% amount of d rank damage for each post on the ally. It creates this sort of mist around them. Range 30 meters. Its a multitarget ability that hits allies.

    Strengths:
    -It cleanses  you and your allies
    -It affects all allies
    -It can bring allies back on their feet

    Weaknesses:
    -It isn't a massive range meaning u have to all be in the same area
    -It isn't a heal over time not a single heal meaning u can still die very easily
    -Is only a tiny heal
    -The it has a long cd which means a enemy can apply a status affect right after it.
    -doesn't heal you


    Vapor spear:


    Rank: D

    Type: Water;Offensive

    Duration:1

    Cooldown:2

    Description:My character creates a spear made of vapor in their hand and throws it straight into the enemy. If it hits it will deal d ranked damage and will burn if in an angry state or make them feel cold in his calm. range 60 meters. 45 mps

    Strengths:
    -Can give enemes a status effect
    -Can be used to knock an enemy into something
    -Can be used with Mist of the Ages

    Weaknesses:
    -He has to be angry or calm to add a status effect
    -It has to make direct contact with the enemy
    -My Character will have to be accurate
    -Since my characters mood can be changed easily they can stop the status effect before it applies

    Explosions in the air:


    Rank: D

    Type: Water;Offensive

    Duration:2

    Cooldown:3

    Description: My character when in angry state heats water in the air to the point where they explode. This is an aoe that deals 5 damage for each post. The aoe itself can be used 20 meters around the character. Its radius is 15 meters though. It does effect all players in the area.

    Strengths:
    -does damage
    -can be used from a distance away
    -can effect multiple people

    Weaknesses:
    -can be used on allies
    -has to be in his boiling form
    -can be stopped by making him feel another emotion
    -not direct dmg but dmg overtime


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    In Progress Re: Vapor-Make

    Post by Musicalbunny on 2nd January 2018, 6:39 am

    Bump
    -reworded the forms of calm and anger forms
    -changed the effects of timid form
    ~done
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    In Progress Re: Vapor-Make

    Post by Desirée Blooms on 2nd January 2018, 12:02 pm

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    @Musicalbunny wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: water magic

    Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)

    Caster or Holder: Caster

    Description:
    My character uses water magic but in a different way than most others. He uses the water vapor and droplets to attack and support. This means he can use the moisture in the air or the vapor/droplets from his body (he is made of water) to his advantage.
    My character uses this vapor to become a veil to hide your allies or make a spear of vapor to strike the enemy. His emotions also change his water form (such as steam, boiling, cool, etc) which lets him use his body to his advantage. He can become steam to move quickly from one point to the other as well as healing/cleansing his teammates. He is mostly a supportive character which means he doesn’t have many full on attacks. This form of magic is completely unique to Lirix Marano due to his unique split personality and watery body.

    Strengths:
    -Can be used very supportively with allies
    -Can use split personalities to control his abilities (adaptable)
    -If needed his vapor could be used as a single target ability but mostly is aoe
    -multiple spells can be used at the same time

    Weaknesses:
    -If there is no form of water around or in the air he drains life force
    -he cannot heal himself with his abilities
    -The elements affect his form as well as emotions
    -He has to destroy a body of water to bring back the health wasted in battle
    -Not many damaging moves
    -can only change moods by himself every 3 post

    Lineage:
    Chimera Blood
    Description: A long time an ago, a hero slew a Chimera invading a small town. The great hero drank some of the Chimera’s blood to show dominance over the mythical creature. But it changed him greatly, giving the hero the ability the strength of a lion, flight of an eagle, and scales of a snake. The hero’s descendants were given the exact same traits as he did.
    Ability: A transformation that allows the user to use one of the chimera’s ability, flight of an eagle from wings and a sight increase(flying ability and enhanced perception enough to detect the movement of a mouse in tall grass from a hundred meters away), strength of a lion(double strength), or scales of a snake(30% damage resistance). Causing great carnage if used correctly.
    Usage: Each of the three transformations last 4 posts. 5 post cooldown that is shared after using a form which prevents the user from just flipping between forms too quickly.

    unique abilities:

    positive activity:

    form his body into different types
    compassion and love-steam is coming off of him and can use the steam to attack without using health
    calmness-he becomes cold water and his attacks form into very cold water, making enemies feel extreme amounts of cold(if he gets attacked by ice he gets into this form]

    Negative activity:

    form his body into different types
    timid/scared-he becomes vapor himself and make physical blows do 25% less damage
    anger-he becomes boiling hot and his attacks form into very hot water, making enemies feel extreme amounts of heat(if he gets attacked by fire he gets into this form)
    sadness-drips everywhere(no combat use)

    Body of water:

    Since his body is made of water he can use it for his abilities whenever there is no moisture in the air, which drains his health. To perform a spell with his body you need to spend 3-5 health depending on the radius(1-50,51-100,100+) He can drink water to restore it or drain a large body of water. Drinking a mug/bottle of water is 5 health while something like a quarter of a river is 20. He dissipates water into vapor or droplets to use it for the mist. He can do this every other post.

    Spells:

    Mist of the ages:


    Rank: D

    Type: Water;supportive

    Duration: 3

    Cooldown: 4

    Description: My character makes the water in the air thicker turning it into a mist that the enemies cant see through but allies the same/below this spell's rank can see through it a tiny bit, while players of higher level can see completely through it. The range is 30 meters. It is an aoe that does no damage unless someone uses ice magic to make the vapor colder turning it unbearable for enemies, or using fire magic to make it boil burning the enemies' skin.

    Strengths:
    -can be used to fake out opponents
    -can be given a status affect that affects/damages the enemy
    -lets enemies attack without being seen
    -gives the team an advantage of sight

    Weaknesses:
    -if someone is still in the mist and someone creates a status affect with it they can get hurt as well(which means allies can be hurt by it too)
    -Just because u can see through it doesn't mean the target still can't sneak up on you
    -Allies can misuse it and apply a status affect to themselves while in the vapor
    -It does not do anything buffing or damage wise unless it is made to do damage
    -The mist cannot be controlled, it can only be created in one place.

    Cleansing vapor:


    Rank: D

    Type: Water;supportive

    Duration: 2

    Cooldown: 3

    Description: My character uses vapor from his body to cleanse all allies and regenerates a 25% amount of d rank damage for each post on the ally. It creates this sort of mist around them. Range 30 meters. Its a multitarget ability that hits allies.

    Strengths:
    -It cleanses  you and your allies
    -It affects all allies
    -It can bring allies back on their feet

    Weaknesses:
    -It isn't a massive range meaning u have to all be in the same area
    -It isn't a heal over time not a single heal meaning u can still die very easily
    -Is only a tiny heal
    -The it has a long cd which means a enemy can apply a status affect right after it.
    -doesn't heal you


    Vapor spear:


    Rank: D

    Type: Water;Offensive

    Duration:1

    Cooldown:2

    Description:My character creates a spear made of vapor in their hand and throws it straight into the enemy. If it hits it will deal d ranked damage and will burn if in an angry state or make them feel cold in his calm. range 60 meters. 45 mps

    Strengths:
    -Can give enemes a status effect
    -Can be used to knock an enemy into something
    -Can be used with Mist of the Ages

    Weaknesses:
    -He has to be angry or calm to add a status effect
    -It has to make direct contact with the enemy
    -My Character will have to be accurate
    -Since my characters mood can be changed easily they can stop the status effect before it applies

    Explosions in the air:


    Rank: D

    Type: Water;Offensive

    Duration:2

    Cooldown:3

    Description: My character when in angry state heats water in the air to the point where they explode. This is an aoe that deals 5 damage for each post. The aoe itself can be used 20 meters around the character. Its radius is 15 meters though. It does effect all players in the area.

    Strengths:
    -does damage
    -can be used from a distance away
    -can effect multiple people

    Weaknesses:
    -can be used on allies
    -has to be in his boiling form
    -can be stopped by making him feel another emotion
    -not direct dmg but dmg overtime



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    In Progress Re: Vapor-Make

    Post by Lester Drynedi on 14th January 2018, 2:02 pm

    Unlocked and moved at users request

    ❀:
    @Musicalbunny wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: water magic

    Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)

    Caster or Holder: Caster

    Description:
    My character uses water magic but in a different way than most others. He uses the water vapor and droplets to attack and support. This means he can use the moisture in the air or the vapor/droplets from his body (he is made of water) to his advantage.
    My character uses this vapor to become a veil to hide your allies or make a spear of vapor to strike the enemy. His emotions also change his water form (such as steam, boiling, cool, etc) which lets him use his body to his advantage. He can become steam to move quickly from one point to the other as well as healing/cleansing his teammates. He is mostly a supportive character which means he doesn’t have many full on attacks. This form of magic is completely unique to Lirix Marano due to his unique split personality and watery body.

    Strengths:
    -Can be used very supportively with allies
    -Can use split personalities to control his abilities (adaptable)
    -If needed his vapor could be used as a single target ability but mostly is aoe
    -multiple spells can be used at the same time

    Weaknesses:
    -If there is no form of water around or in the air he drains life force
    -he cannot heal himself with his abilities
    -The elements affect his form as well as emotions
    -He has to destroy a body of water to bring back the health wasted in battle
    -Not many damaging moves
    -can only change moods by himself every 3 post

    Lineage:
    Chimera Blood
    Description: A long time an ago, a hero slew a Chimera invading a small town. The great hero drank some of the Chimera’s blood to show dominance over the mythical creature. But it changed him greatly, giving the hero the ability the strength of a lion, flight of an eagle, and scales of a snake. The hero’s descendants were given the exact same traits as he did.
    Ability: A transformation that allows the user to use one of the chimera’s ability, flight of an eagle from wings and a sight increase(flying ability and enhanced perception enough to detect the movement of a mouse in tall grass from a hundred meters away), strength of a lion(double strength), or scales of a snake(30% damage resistance). Causing great carnage if used correctly.
    Usage: Each of the three transformations last 4 posts. 5 post cooldown that is shared after using a form which prevents the user from just flipping between forms too quickly.

    unique abilities:

    positive activity:

    form his body into different types
    compassion and love-steam is coming off of him and can use the steam to attack without using health
    calmness-he becomes cold water and his attacks form into very cold water, making enemies feel extreme amounts of cold(if he gets attacked by ice he gets into this form]

    Negative activity:

    form his body into different types
    timid/scared-he becomes vapor himself and make physical blows do 25% less damage
    anger-he becomes boiling hot and his attacks form into very hot water, making enemies feel extreme amounts of heat(if he gets attacked by fire he gets into this form)
    sadness-drips everywhere(no combat use)

    Body of water:

    Since his body is made of water he can use it for his abilities whenever there is no moisture in the air, which drains his health. To perform a spell with his body you need to spend 3-5 health depending on the radius(1-50,51-100,100+) He can drink water to restore it or drain a large body of water. Drinking a mug/bottle of water is 5 health while something like a quarter of a river is 20. He dissipates water into vapor or droplets to use it for the mist. He can do this every other post.

    Spells:

    Mist of the ages:


    Rank: D

    Type: Water;supportive

    Duration: 3

    Cooldown: 4

    Description: My character makes the water in the air thicker turning it into a mist that the enemies cant see through but allies the same/below this spell's rank can see through it a tiny bit, while players of higher level can see completely through it. The range is 30 meters. It is an aoe that does no damage unless someone uses ice magic to make the vapor colder turning it unbearable for enemies, or using fire magic to make it boil burning the enemies' skin.

    Strengths:
    -can be used to fake out opponents
    -can be given a status affect that affects/damages the enemy
    -lets enemies attack without being seen
    -gives the team an advantage of sight

    Weaknesses:
    -if someone is still in the mist and someone creates a status affect with it they can get hurt as well(which means allies can be hurt by it too)
    -Just because u can see through it doesn't mean the target still can't sneak up on you
    -Allies can misuse it and apply a status affect to themselves while in the vapor
    -It does not do anything buffing or damage wise unless it is made to do damage
    -The mist cannot be controlled, it can only be created in one place.

    Cleansing vapor:


    Rank: D

    Type: Water;supportive

    Duration: 2

    Cooldown: 3

    Description: My character uses vapor from his body to cleanse all allies and regenerates a 25% amount of d rank damage for each post on the ally. It creates this sort of mist around them. Range 30 meters. Its a multitarget ability that hits allies.

    Strengths:
    -It cleanses  you and your allies
    -It affects all allies
    -It can bring allies back on their feet

    Weaknesses:
    -It isn't a massive range meaning u have to all be in the same area
    -It isn't a heal over time not a single heal meaning u can still die very easily
    -Is only a tiny heal
    -The it has a long cd which means a enemy can apply a status affect right after it.
    -doesn't heal you


    Vapor spear:


    Rank: D

    Type: Water;Offensive

    Duration:1

    Cooldown:2

    Description:My character creates a spear made of vapor in their hand and throws it straight into the enemy. If it hits it will deal d ranked damage and will burn if in an angry state or make them feel cold in his calm. range 60 meters. 45 mps

    Strengths:
    -Can give enemes a status effect
    -Can be used to knock an enemy into something
    -Can be used with Mist of the Ages

    Weaknesses:
    -He has to be angry or calm to add a status effect
    -It has to make direct contact with the enemy
    -My Character will have to be accurate
    -Since my characters mood can be changed easily they can stop the status effect before it applies

    Explosions in the air:


    Rank: D

    Type: Water;Offensive

    Duration:2

    Cooldown:3

    Description: My character when in angry state heats water in the air to the point where they explode. This is an aoe that deals 5 damage for each post. The aoe itself can be used 20 meters around the character. Its radius is 15 meters though. It does effect all players in the area.

    Strengths:
    -does damage
    -can be used from a distance away
    -can effect multiple people

    Weaknesses:
    -can be used on allies
    -has to be in his boiling form
    -can be stopped by making him feel another emotion
    -not direct dmg but dmg overtime


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