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    Melon

    Leila Vergious
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    Melon Empty Melon

    Post by Leila Vergious on Sun Nov 26, 2017 12:37 pm


    Melon

    Rank:
    Ethereal

    Species:
    Wolf

    Type:
    Combat pet

    Proof of ownership:
    Obtained in this job, approved here

    Description & Appearance:
    Melon is a young female wolf who was found by Leila on the Floating Continent. When she was found, the cub was gravely injured and required immediate medical attention. Ever since being helped, the wolf cub seemed to have become emotionally attached to Leila and followed her back into the camp, refusing to leave no matter what was said or done. From that point onward, this creature became the witch's loyal companion who does not think ill of her master no matter her actions.

    Just like all other creatures from the floating continent, Melon's body naturally gathers ethernano in a very similar way to that of a regular mage, meaning she is perfectly capable of using magic. Growing attuned to Leila's own element and being connected to the nature around her allows Melon to cast nature-based spells that can be even more powerful than abilities of the more seasoned mages.






    Abilities


    Combat:

    Name: Free-forming
    Rank: S
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 8 posts
    Description: An ability that allows Melon to free-form the element of nature, creating trees, roots and all other flora in order to deal damage to the enemy in combat. The range of what the wolf can actually do in terms of creation is not restricted as long as the maximal spell range and speed are not exceeded. These are the range of 200 m and speed of 150 m/s. All opponents affected by this ability will receive S-ranked (100) damage.
    Strengths:

    • Very versatile, as attack for any range can be formed as long as the maximal range is not exceeded

    Weaknesses:

    • Can not be used for defense in any way
    • Despite the freedom of forming, the spell is still locked to a single element that is generall weak to fire



    Name: Flower field
    Rank: A
    Duration: 4 posts
    Cooldown: 5 posts
    Description: Melon can howl to activate a special spell of hers, making a number of beautiful flowers instantly grow in the area of 150 meters all around her. These melon-colored flowers will start eminating a pleasant reddish dust that can be absorbed through skin in order to invoke certain healing properties. Those in range of this spell will be instantly healed for 50% of A-ranked (40) damage and will continue getting healed by another 50% of that same damage for the entire spell duration.
    Strengths:

    • Powerful gradual healing that affects everyone who is in the required range

    Weaknesses:

    • The initial heal is not as powerful and cannot save an ally who is on the verge of death
    • If an enemy gets close enough, they can absorb the dust themselves for the healing effect


    Plot:

    Name: Soar
    Description: For greater mobility, especially during long-distance travels, Melon can use her magic to grow wings on top of her back that have a very similar shape to two giant rose petals. These do not add any speed to her movement when flying and can be instantly destroyed in combat.


    Name: Flourish
    Description: As a creature greatly connected to the nature itself,
    Melong constantly generates a pleasant and warm aura of magic. This aura makes it so that flowers and general greenery grows everywhere the wolf goes. She can even use this to instantly grow fruits for any of her allies if they happen to be hungry.


    Name: Gate
    Description: Not only does Melon's power allow her to control nature, it also gives her the chance to cast generic spells. One such spell is the Gate, a simply warping spell that allows the wolf to enter or leave the thread as she pleases. However, the Gate cannot be used to flee from pvp fights unless the permission from all players present is given.


    Name: Growth
    Description: While Melon is but a cub, she can use her magic to make her body temporarily grow to just about any size she desires. While this can be useful in many ways, it mostly allows Leila and anyone else to ride on the wolf's back if she allows them to do so. Better watch out to not damage her fur though!


    Last edited by Leila Vergious on Thu Nov 30, 2017 7:14 am; edited 2 times in total


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    Lilium
    Lilium

    Player 
    Posts : 816
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 6

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: αєgιѕ - тнє мιи∂
    Second Magic: муѕтι¢ - тнє вσ∂у
    Third Magic: ραиα¢єα - тнє ѕσυℓ

    Melon Empty Re: Melon

    Post by Lilium on Mon Nov 27, 2017 9:13 pm

    Hi Leila! I'm Hikari as you know from my avatar addiction but I'll be the mod looking at your cute pet today! My comments will be in this colour and without further ado, let's get started.

    Spoiler:
    @Leila Vergious wrote:

    Melon

    Rank:
    Ethereal

    Species:
    Wolf

    Type:
    Combat pet

    Proof of ownership:
    Obtained in this job, approved here

    Description & Appearance:
    Melon is a young female wolf who was found by Leila on the Floating Continent. When she was found, the cub was gravely injured and required immediate medical attention. Ever since being helped, the wolf cub seemed to have become emotionally attached to Leila and followed her back into the camp, refusing to leave no matter what was said or done. From that point onward, this creature became the witch's loyal companion who does not think ill of her master no matter her actions.

    Just like all other creatures from the floating continent, Melon's body naturally gathers ethernano in a very similar way to that of a regular mage, meaning she is perfectly capable of using magic. Growing attuned to Leila's own element and being connected to the nature around her allows Melon to cast nature-based spells that can be even more powerful than abilities of the more seasoned mages.






    Abilities


    Combat:

    Name: Free-forming
    Rank: S
    Duration: Passive
    Cooldown: Passive

    Please add a cooldown and duration to this ability because it doesn't really fit as a passive due to the amount of damage it could potentially deal.

    Description: An ability that allows Melon to free-form the element of nature, creating trees, roots and all other flora in order to deal damage to the enemy in combat. The range of what the wolf can actually do in terms of creation is not restricted as long as the maximal spell range and speed are not exceeded. These are the range of 200 m and speed of 150 m/s. All opponents affected by this ability will receive S-ranked (100) damage.


    Name: Flower field
    Rank: A
    Duration: 4 posts
    Cooldown: 5 posts
    Description: Melon can howl to activate a special spell of hers, making a number of beautiful flowers instantly grow in the area of 150 meters all around her. These melon-colored flowers will start eminating a pleasant reddish dust that can be absorbed through skin in order to invoke certain healing properties. Those in range of this spell will be instantly healed for 50% of A-ranked (40) damage and will continue getting healed by another 50% of that same damage for the entire spell duration.
    Strengths:

    • Powerful gradual healing that affects everyone who is in the required range

    Weaknesses:

    • The initial heal is not as powerful and cannot save an ally who is on the verge of death
    • If an enemy gets close enough, they can absorb the dust themselves for the healing effect


    Plot:

    Name: Soar
    Description: For greater mobility, especially during long-distance travels, Melon can use her magic to grow wings on top of her back that have a very similar shape to two giant rose petals. These do not add any speed to her movement when flying and can be instantly destroyed in combat.


    Name: Flourish
    Description: As a creature greatly connected to the nature itself,
    Melong constantly generates a pleasant and warm aura of magic. This aura makes it so that flowers and general greenery grows everywhere the wolf goes. She can even use this to instantly grow fruits for any of her allies if they happen to be hungry.


    Name: Gate
    Description: Not only does Melon's power allow her to control nature, it also gives her the chance to cast generic spells. One such spell is the Gate, a simply warping spell that allows the wolf to enter or leave the thread as she pleases. However, the Gate cannot be used to flee from pvp fights unless the permission from all players present is given.


    Name: Growth
    Description: While Melon is but a cub, she can use her magic to make her body temporarily grow to just about any size she desires. While this can be useful in many ways, it mostly allows Leila and anyone else to ride on the wolf's back if she allows them to do so. Better watch out to not damage her fur though!

    When finished editing please bump the thread for evaluation! Thank you!


    Last edited by Hikari on Tue Nov 28, 2017 4:08 pm; edited 1 time in total


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    Melon QOmg1XE


    Leila Vergious
    Leila Vergious
    .
    .

    Developer/GFX Artist- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishval- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Guild Master- Zodiac Key- Legal Guild Ace- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Fan Art Contest Participant- Haiku Contest Participant- Lineage Making Contest Participant- Rich- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character Application Approved!- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Complete Your First Job!- Join A Faction!- Tertiary Magic- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- 2nd Place Event/Contest Winner- Advertisement Achievement Badge- Hero- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Child of Eden
    Position : Goddess of Eden
    Posts : 1575
    Guild : Silver Wolf
    Cosmic Coins : 30
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 22
    Experience : 3,518,735

    Melon Empty Re: Melon

    Post by Leila Vergious on Tue Nov 28, 2017 3:50 am

    Bump, adjusted the damage value so it's more fitting for a passive ability. Also, could I please request the next grading, if you do find it still not good enough, to be in a spoiler to avoid having too long of posts here for the sake of the app looking a bit more clean?


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    Lilium
    Lilium

    Player 
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    Dungeon Tokens : 6

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: αєgιѕ - тнє мιи∂
    Second Magic: муѕтι¢ - тнє вσ∂у
    Third Magic: ραиα¢єα - тнє ѕσυℓ

    Melon Empty Re: Melon

    Post by Lilium on Tue Nov 28, 2017 6:34 pm

    Spoiler:
    @Leila Vergious wrote:

    Melon

    Rank:
    Ethereal

    Species:
    Wolf

    Type:
    Combat pet

    Proof of ownership:
    Obtained in this job, approved here

    Description & Appearance:
    Melon is a young female wolf who was found by Leila on the Floating Continent. When she was found, the cub was gravely injured and required immediate medical attention. Ever since being helped, the wolf cub seemed to have become emotionally attached to Leila and followed her back into the camp, refusing to leave no matter what was said or done. From that point onward, this creature became the witch's loyal companion who does not think ill of her master no matter her actions.

    Just like all other creatures from the floating continent, Melon's body naturally gathers ethernano in a very similar way to that of a regular mage, meaning she is perfectly capable of using magic. Growing attuned to Leila's own element and being connected to the nature around her allows Melon to cast nature-based spells that can be even more powerful than abilities of the more seasoned mages.






    Abilities


    Combat:

    Name: Free-forming
    Rank: S
    Duration: Passive
    Cooldown: Passive

    [color=#ff765E]This still does not fall under a passive due to it dealing too much damage. Please add a cooldown to this ability, since as it is right now, it deals 100 damage per post against a single target.

    Description: An ability that allows Melon to free-form the element of nature, creating trees, roots and all other flora in order to deal damage to the enemy in combat. The range of what the wolf can actually do in terms of creation is not restricted as long as the maximal spell range and speed are not exceeded. These are the range of 200 m and speed of 150 m/s. The total of damage that can be dealt by this ability is on par with regular S-ranked (100) spell and this value is divided between all targets hit. If two enemies are hit in a single post, then each receives half, if three are hit then each receives third and so on.


    Name: Flower field
    Rank: A
    Duration: 4 posts
    Cooldown: 5 posts
    Description: Melon can howl to activate a special spell of hers, making a number of beautiful flowers instantly grow in the area of 150 meters all around her. These melon-colored flowers will start eminating a pleasant reddish dust that can be absorbed through skin in order to invoke certain healing properties. Those in range of this spell will be instantly healed for 50% of A-ranked (40) damage and will continue getting healed by another 50% of that same damage for the entire spell duration.
    Strengths:

    • Powerful gradual healing that affects everyone who is in the required range

    Weaknesses:

    • The initial heal is not as powerful and cannot save an ally who is on the verge of death
    • If an enemy gets close enough, they can absorb the dust themselves for the healing effect


    Plot:

    Name: Soar
    Description: For greater mobility, especially during long-distance travels, Melon can use her magic to grow wings on top of her back that have a very similar shape to two giant rose petals. These do not add any speed to her movement when flying and can be instantly destroyed in combat.


    Name: Flourish
    Description: As a creature greatly connected to the nature itself,
    Melong constantly generates a pleasant and warm aura of magic. This aura makes it so that flowers and general greenery grows everywhere the wolf goes. She can even use this to instantly grow fruits for any of her allies if they happen to be hungry.


    Name: Gate
    Description: Not only does Melon's power allow her to control nature, it also gives her the chance to cast generic spells. One such spell is the Gate, a simply warping spell that allows the wolf to enter or leave the thread as she pleases. However, the Gate cannot be used to flee from pvp fights unless the permission from all players present is given.


    Name: Growth
    Description: While Melon is but a cub, she can use her magic to make her body temporarily grow to just about any size she desires. While this can be useful in many ways, it mostly allows Leila and anyone else to ride on the wolf's back if she allows them to do so. Better watch out to not damage her fur though!
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    Sorry about the non-spoiler the first time. But once ready for grading, please bump the thread and I'll get back to you ASAP


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    Melon QOmg1XE


    Lilium
    Lilium

    Player 
    Posts : 816
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 6

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: αєgιѕ - тнє мιи∂
    Second Magic: муѕтι¢ - тнє вσ∂у
    Third Magic: ραиα¢єα - тнє ѕσυℓ

    Melon Empty Re: Melon

    Post by Lilium on Fri Dec 01, 2017 4:51 pm

    Spoiler:

    @Leila Vergious wrote:

    Melon

    Rank:
    Ethereal

    Species:
    Wolf

    Type:
    Combat pet

    Proof of ownership:
    Obtained in this job, approved here

    Description & Appearance:
    Melon is a young female wolf who was found by Leila on the Floating Continent. When she was found, the cub was gravely injured and required immediate medical attention. Ever since being helped, the wolf cub seemed to have become emotionally attached to Leila and followed her back into the camp, refusing to leave no matter what was said or done. From that point onward, this creature became the witch's loyal companion who does not think ill of her master no matter her actions.

    Just like all other creatures from the floating continent, Melon's body naturally gathers ethernano in a very similar way to that of a regular mage, meaning she is perfectly capable of using magic. Growing attuned to Leila's own element and being connected to the nature around her allows Melon to cast nature-based spells that can be even more powerful than abilities of the more seasoned mages.






    Abilities


    Combat:

    Name: Free-forming
    Rank: S
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 8 posts
    Description: An ability that allows Melon to free-form the element of nature, creating trees, roots and all other flora in order to deal damage to the enemy in combat. The range of what the wolf can actually do in terms of creation is not restricted as long as the maximal spell range and speed are not exceeded. These are the range of 200 m and speed of 150 m/s. All opponents affected by this ability will receive S-ranked (100) damage.
    Strengths:

    • Very versatile, as attack for any range can be formed as long as the maximal range is not exceeded

    Weaknesses:

    • Can not be used for defense in any way
    • Despite the freedom of forming, the spell is still locked to a single element that is generall weak to fire



    Name: Flower field
    Rank: A
    Duration: 4 posts
    Cooldown: 5 posts
    Description: Melon can howl to activate a special spell of hers, making a number of beautiful flowers instantly grow in the area of 150 meters all around her. These melon-colored flowers will start eminating a pleasant reddish dust that can be absorbed through skin in order to invoke certain healing properties. Those in range of this spell will be instantly healed for 50% of A-ranked (40) damage and will continue getting healed by another 50% of that same damage for the entire spell duration.
    Strengths:

    • Powerful gradual healing that affects everyone who is in the required range

    Weaknesses:

    • The initial heal is not as powerful and cannot save an ally who is on the verge of death
    • If an enemy gets close enough, they can absorb the dust themselves for the healing effect


    Plot:

    Name: Soar
    Description: For greater mobility, especially during long-distance travels, Melon can use her magic to grow wings on top of her back that have a very similar shape to two giant rose petals. These do not add any speed to her movement when flying and can be instantly destroyed in combat.


    Name: Flourish
    Description: As a creature greatly connected to the nature itself,
    Melong constantly generates a pleasant and warm aura of magic. This aura makes it so that flowers and general greenery grows everywhere the wolf goes. She can even use this to instantly grow fruits for any of her allies if they happen to be hungry.


    Name: Gate
    Description: Not only does Melon's power allow her to control nature, it also gives her the chance to cast generic spells. One such spell is the Gate, a simply warping spell that allows the wolf to enter or leave the thread as she pleases. However, the Gate cannot be used to flee from pvp fights unless the permission from all players present is given.


    Name: Growth
    Description: While Melon is but a cub, she can use her magic to make her body temporarily grow to just about any size she desires. While this can be useful in many ways, it mostly allows Leila and anyone else to ride on the wolf's back if she allows them to do so. Better watch out to not damage her fur though!

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    kittykool75
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    Melon Empty Re: Melon

    Post by kittykool75 on Mon May 21, 2018 3:44 pm

    Spoiler:
    @Leila Vergious wrote:

    Melon

    Rank:
    Ethereal

    Species:
    Wolf

    Type:
    Combat pet

    Proof of ownership:
    Obtained in this job, approved here

    Description & Appearance:
    Melon is a young female wolf who was found by Leila on the Floating Continent. When she was found, the cub was gravely injured and required immediate medical attention. Ever since being helped, the wolf cub seemed to have become emotionally attached to Leila and followed her back into the camp, refusing to leave no matter what was said or done. From that point onward, this creature became the witch's loyal companion who does not think ill of her master no matter her actions.

    Just like all other creatures from the floating continent, Melon's body naturally gathers ethernano in a very similar way to that of a regular mage, meaning she is perfectly capable of using magic. Growing attuned to Leila's own element and being connected to the nature around her allows Melon to cast nature-based spells that can be even more powerful than abilities of the more seasoned mages.






    Abilities


    Combat:

    Name: Free-forming
    Rank: S
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 8 posts
    Description: An ability that allows Melon to free-form the element of nature, creating trees, roots and all other flora in order to deal damage to the enemy in combat. The range of what the wolf can actually do in terms of creation is not restricted as long as the maximal spell range and speed are not exceeded. These are the range of 200 m and speed of 150 m/s. All opponents affected by this ability will receive S-ranked (100) damage.
    Strengths:

    • Very versatile, as attack for any range can be formed as long as the maximal range is not exceeded

    Weaknesses:

    • Can not be used for defense in any way
    • Despite the freedom of forming, the spell is still locked to a single element that is generall weak to fire



    Name: Flower field
    Rank: A
    Duration: 4 posts
    Cooldown: 5 posts
    Description: Melon can howl to activate a special spell of hers, making a number of beautiful flowers instantly grow in the area of 150 meters all around her. These melon-colored flowers will start eminating a pleasant reddish dust that can be absorbed through skin in order to invoke certain healing properties. Those in range of this spell will be instantly healed for 50% of A-ranked (40) damage and will continue getting healed by another 50% of that same damage for the entire spell duration.
    Strengths:

    • Powerful gradual healing that affects everyone who is in the required range

    Weaknesses:

    • The initial heal is not as powerful and cannot save an ally who is on the verge of death
    • If an enemy gets close enough, they can absorb the dust themselves for the healing effect


    Plot:

    Name: Soar
    Description: For greater mobility, especially during long-distance travels, Melon can use her magic to grow wings on top of her back that have a very similar shape to two giant rose petals. These do not add any speed to her movement when flying and can be instantly destroyed in combat.


    Name: Flourish
    Description: As a creature greatly connected to the nature itself,
    Melong constantly generates a pleasant and warm aura of magic. This aura makes it so that flowers and general greenery grows everywhere the wolf goes. She can even use this to instantly grow fruits for any of her allies if they happen to be hungry.


    Name: Gate
    Description: Not only does Melon's power allow her to control nature, it also gives her the chance to cast generic spells. One such spell is the Gate, a simply warping spell that allows the wolf to enter or leave the thread as she pleases. However, the Gate cannot be used to flee from pvp fights unless the permission from all players present is given.


    Name: Growth
    Description: While Melon is but a cub, she can use her magic to make her body temporarily grow to just about any size she desires. While this can be useful in many ways, it mostly allows Leila and anyone else to ride on the wolf's back if she allows them to do so. Better watch out to not damage her fur though!

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