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    Albafica Temero

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    Heaven's Chosen

    Post by Albafica Temero on Sun 26 Nov - 17:24



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    Primary Magic: Heaven’s Chosen
    Secondary Magic: ???
    Caster or Holder: Caster || Lost
    Description: The origins of this magic lay within the lore of a war, a war between two gods about the fate of Earthland. These gods, remaining unnamed, each wished for the opposite end; the female Goddess of War and Wisdom sought to protect Earthland and nurture it, while the male God of Death wished to destroy and recreate it. Each backed by their own armies they fought; the Goddess of War and Wisdom bestowed power upon humanity, allowing a select few to harness the power of the stars if they managed to awaken to their sixth sense and fuel their attacks and bodies with the energy of the cosmos. The God of Death called forth an army of former sinners, immortals at first, but later merely immortal souls within human vessels. Each wielding the power of the stars, but one side held the light, the other darkness. Whereas the God of Death’s army rose at full power and was endless, the Goddess of War and Wisdom’s army had to be trained up, generation after generation passing down their armors reflecting their guardian constellation. Each had their rank, with those guarding the Zodiac being the pinnacle, wielding armors of gold neigh-penetrable by even their enhanced fists, which could otherwise shatter mountains with a single punch. The first war ended in a draw; the Goddess of War and Wisdom doomed to reincarnate as a human every 200 years, whereas the God of Death, whom’s body had been mortally wounded, locked it back into the underworld and every 200 years took the purest and innocent human child as his vessel to destroy Earthland. This Holy War happens every 200-ish years, sometimes in plain sight, sometimes without the world realising what’s at stake, unknowing of the battle being waged for its fate.

    Albafica, having been laid in the vicinity of their headquarters after fate had left him orphaned, was taken in by one of the masters of the Zodiac, whom call themselves Gold Saints, and raised as his own and next successor. He grew up learning the Way of Pisces, which was an awfully poisonous and cruel one, yet having become one of the last young saints-in-training, received training from all other Gold Saints in order to preserve their power were they to perish. Through it he learnt to harness the light of the stars, its fire, water, the winds, its solid earthen core, and the actual energy that made up all these elements. He was capable of wielding all said elements, using them as if they were the real deal, yet not holding their true core. He could erect barriers of flames burning his opponents, yet they would not have any burns upon their body, despite having felt like being on fire. Attacking their nervous systems their bodies believed it to be as such, where it actually wasn’t. On non-magical objects he could manipulate the energy as such to make it act like the real deal; using the particles within the energy to combust a tree, liquidize the ethernano to make the energy like water,... . Through this, he was hailed a prodigy, yet he never got to ascend to become a true Saint. The headquarters of the Saints were attacked by the God of Death’s troops, called Spectres, and nearly all were eradicated. Albafica survived, having been forced to hide by his masters while they combatted the Spectres to the death. The youth could do only one thing, paralyzed by fear; observe. His mind unconsciously learnt the basics and elements the spectres used, allowing the young Saint to wield that one element he was never supposed to wield; darkness. Through it his body couldn’t uphold the mastery of all those elements; only after strengthening his body will he be able to use all of them freely again.

    A year passed, and Albafica decided to leave the ruined Sanctuary behind, carrying the hopes, dreams and will of his masters and fallen comrades. Growing stronger within a world he did not know. His body adapted to the dents in his magical power, and overtime started channeling his masters’s Will into their spells and techniques; even going as far as to have them manifest into his own body, transforming temporarily to properly harness the magic taught by their respective Saint.

    Strengths:
    ✹ Has a variety of elements at its disposal, making it a very versatile magic.
    ✹ Due to being able to use a variety of elements, this magic has forgone any advantages on other magic they would be weak or strong against. (Eg.: if a fire spell were to be used against a plant spell it wouldn’t have any advantage to it, as it would not have any disadvantage against a water spell).
    ✹ Albafica can tap into the power left by the predecessors who wielded this magic, giving them all sorts of benefits.
    Weaknesses:
    ✹ Due to being able to use a variety of elements, this magic has forgone any advantages/disadvantages on other magic they would be weak or strong against. (Eg.: if a fire spell were to be used against a plant spell it wouldn’t have any advantage to it, as it would not have any disadvantage against a water spell)
    ✹ Several spells within this magic desire a part of Albafica’s life-force in order to be successful, making it a dangerous magic to hold for one so young.
    ✹ When tapping into the power of his predecessors he also temporarily inherits their flaws and personal weaknesses, some of which may prove lethal.
    ✹ Each zodiac type of this magic has its own weaknesses, making it very hard to form a clear strategy without messing things up.

    Lineage:
    Rage of the Soul Torn:
    [color:30e7=0033ff]Rage of the Soul Torn
    Description: There was once a man, well not really a man, but a half-human, half hedgehog hybrid by the name of Pulse. Unlike his brother Crest, who possessed the ability to manipulate water and was a doctor who strived to help people, he was a destructive being who only wanted to rule. He became known as Master Pulse, whilst his brother became known as Doctor Crest. Pulse was a master of air manipulation for highly destructive purposes and his descendants, most of them full humans, gained this ability. The ability to make the very air into a destructive weapon.
    Ability: User gains access to a passive and is able to add 3 wind spells in addition to their magic to the spells.The spells gains are one of the user’s rank, one of a rank lower and one of a rank lower than that(max S-rank, Min D-rank). The passive ability is flight where they the wind wraps around them and allows them to fly around at their max speed or less.
    Usage: Passive flight. The 3 spells must be made in addition to the user’s spells in their magic. They cannot have two or more spells of the same rank either meaning that at D-rank they only receive one spell from this, at C-rank they will have a C-rank spell and a D-rank spell from this and at B-rank rank they will have a B-rank spell, a C-rank spell and a D-rank spell from this lineage.


    Unique Abilities:
    Cosmetic Only:

    ✹ Albafica can create the Royal Demon Roses, be they but a few pieces or an entire field in a matter of seconds.

    ✹ Depending on the spell he uses, Albafica’s appearance will change into that of the one who originally wielded and taught him those spells. He will take on part of their personality and acting, and remains in that form until the he uses a spell taught by another master.
    Griffon Minos + Pisces Gold Saint appearance:



    ✹ Chosen Blessing || Albafica, having learnt to wield the power of all zodiac combined, has been given a blessìng by the stars, granting him an extra 25% total MP.
    ✹ Born Under Pisces || Being born under Pisces and having been taught the ways of the Gold Saint guarding it, Albafica’s blood has gained poisonous, even lethal proportions. Anyone trying to intake his blood or poison, even if they are slayer or not, will get 50% user-ranked damage upon every try to intake it.
    ✹ ???


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    Re: Heaven's Chosen

    Post by Albafica Temero on Sun 26 Nov - 17:55


    Rage of the Soul Torn - Spells

    D-rank spell:


    Name: Soul Torn Push
    Rank: D
    Type: Defensive AoE/Pushback
    Duration: 1 post
    Cooldown: 2 posts
    Description: Albafica takes in the enemy, spell or projectile and awaits till the last moment to unleash a sudden surge of wind around him from within his core. The wind wall covers his every angle and as it grows larger goes as far as 30 meters. If the enemies, projectiles or spell is of his rank or lower it will be pushed back up till that range. Meaning that eg. if they were within a 10 meters of Albafica they'd be pushed back 20 meters, and if they were 29 meters away from him just one meter. The pushback itself doesn't harm anyone, but if projectiles were to be pushed back there's a chance that the surrounding people may be hit with them.

    If wanted this spell can also be used to give allies a stepping stone to be blasted off to somewhere within 30 meters. When making contact with magical fire will only make the fire grow stronger rather than extinguishing it. If used for defending against spells, this spell can only throw back up to three spells of D-rank.

    Strengths:
    ✹ Can push back allies, enemies, projectiles or spells of his rank

    Weaknesses:
    ✹ Non-damaging
    ✹ If projectiles are pushed back they can hit allies
    ✹ In case of contacting with magical fire it will only make it burn harder
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    Re: Heaven's Chosen

    Post by Albafica Temero on Thu 7 Dec - 18:02


    D-rank Spells - 4/4

    None - Saint’s Kick:

    Name: Saint’s Kick
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive, close-range, burst
    Element: Non-elemental
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 2 posts
    Description: One of the simplest techniques a Saint is taught when starting its training; after having trained their body to the limit and even beyond, their kicks become so powerful it feels like the opponent is being hit  with concrete rather than a leg of flesh and bone. Albafica’s kicks are as such, he can hit up to two people with this kick; if they are of this spell’s rank or lower they can be knocked back 15 meters. Anyone hit receives 1x D-rank damage.

    Strengths:
    ✹ A strong, solid kick that may send even the strongest opponents crashing through concrete walls.
    ✹ NPC’s are always knocked back

    Weaknesses:
    ✹ May accidently destroy buildings or property in the process.
    ✹ If the opponent is sent flying it can hit his allies, or even use the knock-back in its favor to redirect a long-range attack.
    ✹ Must be in close range to hit the opponent


    Pisces Gold Saint - Blood of Pisces:

    Name: Blood of Pisces
    Rank: D
    Type: Support/Buff
    Element: Venom
    Duration: 3 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: Albafica’s tattoo switches from a crimson red to a vivid purple that seems to glow softly even when light barely touches it. The mark grows further over his arm and neck until it covers a part of his face. Within the duration Albafica is inflicted with the Blood of Pisces; a curse making the blood of its user so poisonous it can kill any type of living being or cause corrosion of non magical items/weapons and whatnot. During these three turns Albafica gets an extra 25% in magical and physical damage that is dealt as poison damage, and makes all spells used during this duration of the “venom" element.

    Were he to be made to bleed during the duration he will lose this buff, and instead will do 25% D-rank damage to anyone within a 45 meter radius per turn. He can stop the poisonous effect however by taking 25% D-rank damage himself and absorbing the poison himself.

    Strengths:
    ✹ Becomes a source of poison

    Weaknesses:
    ✹ All elements are overwritten to become the poison element, which can be disadvantageous for Albafica.
    ✹ If Albafica were to get hurt his blood will deal 25% damage to allies and foes alike, and damage himself alike in order to stop it.


    Pisces Gold Saint - Crimson Thorn:

    Name: Crimson Thorn
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive/Burst AoE/Chain
    Element: Blood/Poison
    Duration: 1 post
    Cooldown: 2 posts
    Description: Albafica inhales deeply and forces the dormant poison within his blood to the outside, which envelops him in a red mist. He stretches his arms either in front or above him and uses his magic to form thousands of miniscule needles, which he then releases upon his opponents like a vicious hailstorm. If the opponent is hit they get injected with a part of Albafica’s poisonous blood, which remains in their bloodstream in a dormant state for a short amount of time and can be activated by other spells. This spell itself does full D-rank damage to anyone within up to a 15 meter radius.

    Strengths:
    ✹ A spell perfect for attacking multiple opponents in a chain

    Weaknesses:
    ✹ Overusing the Crimson Thorn (chaining) will deal 5% total health damage to himself, and can effectively kill him
    ✹ Can hit allies if they’re within range


    Pisces Gold Saint - Demon Rose Bloodstream:

    Name: Demon Rose Bloodstream
    Rank: D
    Type: Stun/AoE
    Element: Blood/poison
    Duration: 1 post
    Cooldown: 2 posts
    Description: Albafica exerts pressure as he stares into the eyes of his opponents. Even if they keep their eyes closed they can feel the pair of piercing azure eyes staring back at them as if they were looking at it. A swirl of rose petals seems to blow towards their face as they feel their limbs denying service and a feeling of overpowering pressure overcoming them. For a single post anyone of this spell’s rank, and one rank above it, will be stunned within a 30 meter radius. This spell makes sure opponents cannot move a muscle, but if they can activate spells that don’t need any type of physical movement (this includes speech due to movement of tongue and mouth) they are still capable of casting spells.

    Strengths:
    ✹If a higher-ranked opponent was hit with Crimson Thorn they too will be stunned for one turn.

    Weaknesses:
    ✹ If allies were hit with Crimson Thorn, or have his blood somehow within into their system, they too will be affected by this spell.
    ✹ Opponent can still cast spells if it doesn’t need any type of movement.









    D-rank Purchased Spells - 2/6

    Griffon Minos (spectre) - Cosmic Marionation:

    Name: Cosmic Marrionation
    Rank: D
    Type: Restriction/Offensive/burst multi-target
    Element: Blood
    Duration: 2 post
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Description: Albafica pinpoints the people who’ve been hit by Crimson Thorn prior to this spell within a 15 meter radius and stretches his hand; invisible to the naked eye are small threads of energy that confirm the link. Although these threads can be seen by some, or smelled by blood mages or creatures of blood, they aren’t physically there and are merely cosmetic. Albafica can flick his hand, causing those who have been struck by Crimson Thorn earlier to feel one or multiple of their limbs contort, as if they were being controlled by a puppeteer. Each round Albafica will deal 1x D-rank damage to each person within the 15 meter radius the first round, and 50% D-rank damage the second, but only if they were touched, grazed or hit by Crimson Thorn, otherwise this spell does nothing. During the first post people of this spell’s rank or lower will be stunned, again, only if hit by Crimson Thorn will this be effective.

    This spell can make the caught opponents hit themselves physically, others or even break bones with but the snap of a finger, causing internal damage. This will always be the case for NPCs, but needs OoC permission if used against PCs, their pets, summons, etc.

    Strengths:
    ✹ Can make each person stuck within the spell move separately, and has the capability of breaking any bone in the opponent’s body.

    Weaknesses:
    ✹ Can only be used on those hit by Crimson Thorn.
    ✹ Extremely small radius. Will deal damage to allies if they too were hit with Crimson Thorn.


    Pisces Gold Saint - Royal Demon Rose - Crucifixion:

    Name: Royal Demon Rose - Crucifixion
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Element: Plant/Poison
    Duration: 2 post
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Description: Albafica summons a batch of crimson roses, of a type only he can use due to their lethal proportions. He lets the Royal Demon Roses either levitate before him or holds them inbetween his fingers, and pinpoints his opponent. He then proceeds by throwing them with extreme accuracy towards his opponent stems first, with each stem piercing the target’s body as if they were knives cutting through butter. The opponent can be pinned against any surface if one is nearby with them. It deals full spell-rank damage and poisons the target, which deals an additional 25% per post. Trying to pull the roses out of one’s body prior to the end of the duration will deal 50% spell rank damage. Albafica can hit one single target within 60 meters from him.

    Strengths:
    ✹ The roses are far stronger than regular roses, being able to pierce even concrete.

    Weaknesses:
    ✹ The roses can be burnt with a same-ranked fire spell.
    ✹ Poison slayers can intake the poison damage and get their HP healed equal to 25% D-rank damage per post instead.


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    Re: Heaven's Chosen

    Post by Albafica Temero on Thu 7 Dec - 20:53


    C-rank Spells - ???/???
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    Re: Heaven's Chosen

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    B-rank Spells - ???/???
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    Re: Heaven's Chosen

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    A-rank Spells - ???/???
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    Re: Heaven's Chosen

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    S-rank Spells - ???/???
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    H-rank Spells - ???/???
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    Re: Heaven's Chosen

    Post by Albafica Temero on Thu 7 Dec - 20:55


    Fusions/Unison Raid Spells - ???/???
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    Re: Heaven's Chosen

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    Re: Heaven's Chosen

    Post by Albafica Temero on Thu 7 Dec - 20:55


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    Re: Heaven's Chosen

    Post by Desirée Blooms on Sun 10 Dec - 1:59

    Hi Albafica, I am Des / Desirée and I will be grading your magic today. All edits will be in this shade of pink.

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    @Albafica Temero wrote:

    D-rank Spells - 4/4

    None - Saint’s Kick:

    Name: Saint’s Kick
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive, close-range
    Element: Non-elemental
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 2 posts
    Description: One of the simplest techniques a Saint is taught when starting its training; after having trained their body to the limit and even beyond, their kicks become so powerful it feels like the opponent is being hit  with concrete rather than a leg of flesh and bone. Albafica’s kicks are as such, he can hit up to two people with this kick; if they are of this spell’s rank or lower they can be knocked back 15 meters. Anyone hit receives 1x D-rank damage. Can you please specify this is a burst to reason with the damage increase?

    Strengths:
    ✹ A strong, solid kick that may send even the strongest opponents crashing through concrete walls.
    ✹ NPC’s are always knocked back

    Weaknesses:
    ✹ May accidently destroy buildings or property in the process.
    ✹ If the opponent is sent flying it can hit his allies, or even use the knock-back in its favor to redirect a long-range attack.
    ✹ Must be in close range to hit the opponent


    Pisces Gold Saint - Blood of Pisces:

    Name: Blood of Pisces
    Rank: D
    Type: Support/Buff
    Element: Venom
    Duration: 3 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: Albafica’s tattoo switches from a crimson red to a vivid purple that seems to glow softly even when light barely touches it. The mark grows further over his arm and neck until it covers a part of his face. Within the duration Albafica is inflicted with the Blood of Pisces; a curse making the blood of its user so poisonous it can kill any type of living being or cause corrosion of non magical items/weapons and whatnot. During these three turns Albafica gets an extra 25% in magical and physical damage that is dealt as poison damage, and makes all spells used during this duration of the “venom" element.

    Were he to be made to bleed during the duration he will lose this buff, and instead will do 25% D-rank damage to anyone within a 45 meter radius per turn. He can stop the poisonous effect however by taking 25% D-rank damage himself and absorbing the poison himself.

    Strengths:
    ✹ Becomes a source of poison

    Weaknesses:
    ✹ All elements are overwritten to become the poison element, which can be disadvantageous for Albafica.
    ✹ If Albafica were to get hurt his blood will deal 25% damage to allies and foes alike, and damage himself alike in order to stop it.


    Pisces Gold Saint - Crimson Thorn:

    Name: Crimson Thorn
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive/Instant AoE/Chain
    Element: Blood/Poison
    Duration: 1 post
    Cooldown: 2 posts
    Description: Albafica inhales deeply and forces the dormant poison within his blood to the outside, which envelops him in a red mist. He stretches his arms either in front or above him and uses his magic to form thousands of miniscule needles, which he then releases upon his opponents like a vicious hailstorm. If the opponent is hit they get injected with a part of Albafica’s poisonous blood, which remains in their bloodstream in a dormant state for a short amount of time and can be activated by other spells. This spell itself does full D-rank damage to anyone within up to a 15 meter radius. Same as previous, please specify this being a burst~

    Strengths:
    ✹ A spell perfect for attacking multiple opponents in a chain

    Weaknesses:
    ✹ Overusing the Crimson Thorn (chaining) will deal 5% total health damage to himself, and can effectively kill him
    ✹ Can hit allies if they’re within range


    Pisces Gold Saint - Demon Rose Bloodstream:

    Name: Demon Rose Bloodstream
    Rank: D
    Type: Stun/AoE
    Element: Blood/poison
    Duration: 1 post
    Cooldown: 2 posts
    Description: Albafica exerts pressure as he stares into the eyes of his opponents. Even if they keep their eyes closed they can feel the pair of piercing azure eyes staring back at them as if they were looking at it. A swirl of rose petals seems to blow towards their face as they feel their limbs denying service and a feeling of overpowering pressure overcoming them. For a single post anyone of this spell’s rank, and one rank above it, will be stunned within a 30 meter radius. This spell makes sure opponents cannot move a muscle, but if they can activate spells that don’t need any type of physical movement (this includes speech due to movement of tongue and mouth) they are still capable of casting spells.

    Strengths:
    ✹If a higher-ranked opponent was hit with Crimson Thorn they too will be stunned for one turn.

    Weaknesses:
    ✹ If allies were hit with Crimson Thorn, or have his blood somehow within into their system, they too will be affected by this spell.
    ✹ Opponent can still cast spells if it doesn’t need any type of movement.









    D-rank Purchased Spells - 2/6

    Griffon Minos (spectre) - Cosmic Marionation:

    Name: Cosmic Marrionation
    Rank: D
    Type: Restriction/Offensive multi-target
    Element: Blood
    Duration: 2 post
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Description: Albafica pinpoints the people who’ve been hit by Crimson Thorn prior to this spell within a 15 meter radius and stretches his hand; invisible to the naked eye are small threads of energy that confirm the link. Although these threads can be seen by some, or smelled by blood mages or creatures of blood, they aren’t physically there and are merely cosmetic. Albafica can flick his hand, causing those who have been struck by Crimson Thorn earlier to feel one or multiple of their limbs contort, as if they were being controlled by a puppeteer. Each round Albafica will deal 1x D-rank damage to each person within the 15 meter radius per round, but only if they were touched, grazed or hit by Crimson Thorn, otherwise this spell does nothing. During the first post people of this spell’s rank or lower will be stunned, again, only if hit by Crimson Thorn will this be effective. The same situation as the last two edits, please specify this being a burst to make the damage increase make sense. Also, please have the second round only do 50% D-Rank damage instead of the full amount.

    This spell can make the caught opponents hit themselves physically, others or even break bones with but the snap of a finger, causing internal damage. This will always be the case for NPCs, but needs OoC permission if used against PCs, their pets, summons, etc.

    Strengths:
    ✹ Can make each person stuck within the spell move separately, and has the capability of breaking any bone in the opponent’s body.

    Weaknesses:
    ✹ Can only be used on those hit by Crimson Thorn.
    ✹ Extremely small radius. Will deal damage to allies if they too were hit with Crimson Thorn.


    Pisces Gold Saint - Royal Demon Rose - Crucifixion:

    Name: Royal Demon Rose - Crucifixion
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Element: Plant/Poison
    Duration: 2 post
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Description: Albafica summons a batch of crimson roses, of a type only he can use due to their lethal proportions. He lets the Royal Demon Roses either levitate before him or holds them inbetween his fingers, and pinpoints his opponent. He then proceeds by throwing them with extreme accuracy towards his opponent stems first, with each stem piercing the target’s body as if they were knives cutting through butter. The opponent can be pinned against any surface if one is nearby with them. It deals full spell-rank damage and poisons the target, which deals an additional 25% per post. Trying to pull the roses out of one’s body prior to the end of the duration will deal 50% spell rank damage. Albafica can hit one single target within 60 meters from him.

    Strengths:
    ✹ The roses are far stronger than regular roses, being able to pierce even concrete.

    Weaknesses:
    ✹ The roses can be burnt with a same-ranked fire spell.
    ✹ Poison slayers can intake the poison damage and get their HP healed equal to 25% D-rank damage per post instead.


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    Re: Heaven's Chosen

    Post by Desirée Blooms on Sun 10 Dec - 17:43

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    @Albafica Temero wrote:

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    Primary Magic: Heaven’s Chosen
    Secondary Magic: ???
    Caster or Holder: Caster || Lost
    Description: The origins of this magic lay within the lore of a war, a war between two gods about the fate of Earthland. These gods, remaining unnamed, each wished for the opposite end; the female Goddess of War and Wisdom sought to protect Earthland and nurture it, while the male God of Death wished to destroy and recreate it. Each backed by their own armies they fought; the Goddess of War and Wisdom bestowed power upon humanity, allowing a select few to harness the power of the stars if they managed to awaken to their sixth sense and fuel their attacks and bodies with the energy of the cosmos. The God of Death called forth an army of former sinners, immortals at first, but later merely immortal souls within human vessels. Each wielding the power of the stars, but one side held the light, the other darkness. Whereas the God of Death’s army rose at full power and was endless, the Goddess of War and Wisdom’s army had to be trained up, generation after generation passing down their armors reflecting their guardian constellation. Each had their rank, with those guarding the Zodiac being the pinnacle, wielding armors of gold neigh-penetrable by even their enhanced fists, which could otherwise shatter mountains with a single punch. The first war ended in a draw; the Goddess of War and Wisdom doomed to reincarnate as a human every 200 years, whereas the God of Death, whom’s body had been mortally wounded, locked it back into the underworld and every 200 years took the purest and innocent human child as his vessel to destroy Earthland. This Holy War happens every 200-ish years, sometimes in plain sight, sometimes without the world realising what’s at stake, unknowing of the battle being waged for its fate.

    Albafica, having been laid in the vicinity of their headquarters after fate had left him orphaned, was taken in by one of the masters of the Zodiac, whom call themselves Gold Saints, and raised as his own and next successor. He grew up learning the Way of Pisces, which was an awfully poisonous and cruel one, yet having become one of the last young saints-in-training, received training from all other Gold Saints in order to preserve their power were they to perish. Through it he learnt to harness the light of the stars, its fire, water, the winds, its solid earthen core, and the actual energy that made up all these elements. He was capable of wielding all said elements, using them as if they were the real deal, yet not holding their true core. He could erect barriers of flames burning his opponents, yet they would not have any burns upon their body, despite having felt like being on fire. Attacking their nervous systems their bodies believed it to be as such, where it actually wasn’t. On non-magical objects he could manipulate the energy as such to make it act like the real deal; using the particles within the energy to combust a tree, liquidize the ethernano to make the energy like water,... . Through this, he was hailed a prodigy, yet he never got to ascend to become a true Saint. The headquarters of the Saints were attacked by the God of Death’s troops, called Spectres, and nearly all were eradicated. Albafica survived, having been forced to hide by his masters while they combatted the Spectres to the death. The youth could do only one thing, paralyzed by fear; observe. His mind unconsciously learnt the basics and elements the spectres used, allowing the young Saint to wield that one element he was never supposed to wield; darkness. Through it his body couldn’t uphold the mastery of all those elements; only after strengthening his body will he be able to use all of them freely again.

    A year passed, and Albafica decided to leave the ruined Sanctuary behind, carrying the hopes, dreams and will of his masters and fallen comrades. Growing stronger within a world he did not know. His body adapted to the dents in his magical power, and overtime started channeling his masters’s Will into their spells and techniques; even going as far as to have them manifest into his own body, transforming temporarily to properly harness the magic taught by their respective Saint.

    Strengths:
    ✹ Has a variety of elements at its disposal, making it a very versatile magic.
    ✹ Due to being able to use a variety of elements, this magic has forgone any advantages on other magic they would be weak or strong against. (Eg.: if a fire spell were to be used against a plant spell it wouldn’t have any advantage to it, as it would not have any disadvantage against a water spell).
    ✹ Albafica can tap into the power left by the predecessors who wielded this magic, giving them all sorts of benefits.
    Weaknesses:
    ✹ Due to being able to use a variety of elements, this magic has forgone any advantages/disadvantages on other magic they would be weak or strong against. (Eg.: if a fire spell were to be used against a plant spell it wouldn’t have any advantage to it, as it would not have any disadvantage against a water spell)
    ✹ Several spells within this magic desire a part of Albafica’s life-force in order to be successful, making it a dangerous magic to hold for one so young.
    ✹ When tapping into the power of his predecessors he also temporarily inherits their flaws and personal weaknesses, some of which may prove lethal.
    ✹ Each zodiac type of this magic has its own weaknesses, making it very hard to form a clear strategy without messing things up.

    Lineage:
    Rage of the Soul Torn:
    [color:fb8d=0033ff]Rage of the Soul Torn
    Description: There was once a man, well not really a man, but a half-human, half hedgehog hybrid by the name of Pulse. Unlike his brother Crest, who possessed the ability to manipulate water and was a doctor who strived to help people, he was a destructive being who only wanted to rule. He became known as Master Pulse, whilst his brother became known as Doctor Crest. Pulse was a master of air manipulation for highly destructive purposes and his descendants, most of them full humans, gained this ability. The ability to make the very air into a destructive weapon.
    Ability: User gains access to a passive and is able to add 3 wind spells in addition to their magic to the spells.The spells gains are one of the user’s rank, one of a rank lower and one of a rank lower than that(max S-rank, Min D-rank). The passive ability is flight where they the wind wraps around them and allows them to fly around at their max speed or less.
    Usage: Passive flight. The 3 spells must be made in addition to the user’s spells in their magic. They cannot have two or more spells of the same rank either meaning that at D-rank they only receive one spell from this, at C-rank they will have a C-rank spell and a D-rank spell from this and at B-rank rank they will have a B-rank spell, a C-rank spell and a D-rank spell from this lineage.


    Unique Abilities:
    Cosmetic Only:

    ✹ Albafica can create the Royal Demon Roses, be they but a few pieces or an entire field in a matter of seconds.

    ✹ Depending on the spell he uses, Albafica’s appearance will change into that of the one who originally wielded and taught him those spells. He will take on part of their personality and acting, and remains in that form until the he uses a spell taught by another master.
    Griffon Minos + Pisces Gold Saint appearance:



    ✹ Chosen Blessing || Albafica, having learnt to wield the power of all zodiac combined, has been given a blessìng by the stars, granting him an extra 25% total MP.
    ✹ Born Under Pisces || Being born under Pisces and having been taught the ways of the Gold Saint guarding it, Albafica’s blood has gained poisonous, even lethal proportions. Anyone trying to intake his blood or poison, even if they are slayer or not, will get 50% user-ranked damage upon every try to intake it.
    ✹ ???

    @Albafica Temero wrote:
    Rage of the Soul Torn - Spells

    D-rank spell:



    Name: Soul Torn Push
    Rank: D
    Type: Defensive AoE/Pushback
    Duration: 1 post
    Cooldown: 2 posts
    Description: Albafica takes in the enemy, spell or projectile and awaits till the last moment to unleash a sudden surge of wind around him from within his core. The wind wall covers his every angle and as it grows larger goes as far as 30 meters. If the enemies, projectiles or spell is of his rank or lower it will be pushed back up till that range. Meaning that eg. if they were within a 10 meters of Albafica they'd be pushed back 20 meters, and if they were 29 meters away from him just one meter. The pushback itself doesn't harm anyone, but if projectiles were to be pushed back there's a chance that the surrounding people may be hit with them.

    If wanted this spell can also be used to give allies a stepping stone to be blasted off to somewhere within 30 meters. When making contact with magical fire will only make the fire grow stronger rather than extinguishing it. If used for defending against spells, this spell can only throw back up to three spells of D-rank.

    Strengths:
    ✹ Can push back allies, enemies, projectiles or spells of his rank

    Weaknesses:
    ✹ Non-damaging
    ✹ If projectiles are pushed back they can hit allies
    ✹ In case of contacting with magical fire it will only make it burn harder

    @Albafica Temero wrote:
    D-rank Spells - 4/4

    None - Saint’s Kick:


    Name: Saint’s Kick
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive, close-range, burst
    Element: Non-elemental
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 2 posts
    Description: One of the simplest techniques a Saint is taught when starting its training; after having trained their body to the limit and even beyond, their kicks become so powerful it feels like the opponent is being hit  with concrete rather than a leg of flesh and bone. Albafica’s kicks are as such, he can hit up to two people with this kick; if they are of this spell’s rank or lower they can be knocked back 15 meters. Anyone hit receives 1x D-rank damage.

    Strengths:
    ✹ A strong, solid kick that may send even the strongest opponents crashing through concrete walls.
    ✹ NPC’s are always knocked back

    Weaknesses:
    ✹ May accidently destroy buildings or property in the process.
    ✹ If the opponent is sent flying it can hit his allies, or even use the knock-back in its favor to redirect a long-range attack.
    ✹ Must be in close range to hit the opponent


    Pisces Gold Saint - Blood of Pisces:


    Name: Blood of Pisces
    Rank: D
    Type: Support/Buff
    Element: Venom
    Duration: 3 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: Albafica’s tattoo switches from a crimson red to a vivid purple that seems to glow softly even when light barely touches it. The mark grows further over his arm and neck until it covers a part of his face. Within the duration Albafica is inflicted with the Blood of Pisces; a curse making the blood of its user so poisonous it can kill any type of living being or cause corrosion of non magical items/weapons and whatnot. During these three turns Albafica gets an extra 25% in magical and physical damage that is dealt as poison damage, and makes all spells used during this duration of the “venom" element.

    Were he to be made to bleed during the duration he will lose this buff, and instead will do 25% D-rank damage to anyone within a 45 meter radius per turn. He can stop the poisonous effect however by taking 25% D-rank damage himself and absorbing the poison himself.

    Strengths:
    ✹ Becomes a source of poison

    Weaknesses:
    ✹ All elements are overwritten to become the poison element, which can be disadvantageous for Albafica.
    ✹ If Albafica were to get hurt his blood will deal 25% damage to allies and foes alike, and damage himself alike in order to stop it.


    Pisces Gold Saint - Crimson Thorn:


    Name: Crimson Thorn
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive/Burst AoE/Chain
    Element: Blood/Poison
    Duration: 1 post
    Cooldown: 2 posts
    Description: Albafica inhales deeply and forces the dormant poison within his blood to the outside, which envelops him in a red mist. He stretches his arms either in front or above him and uses his magic to form thousands of miniscule needles, which he then releases upon his opponents like a vicious hailstorm. If the opponent is hit they get injected with a part of Albafica’s poisonous blood, which remains in their bloodstream in a dormant state for a short amount of time and can be activated by other spells. This spell itself does full D-rank damage to anyone within up to a 15 meter radius.

    Strengths:
    ✹ A spell perfect for attacking multiple opponents in a chain

    Weaknesses:
    ✹ Overusing the Crimson Thorn (chaining) will deal 5% total health damage to himself, and can effectively kill him
    ✹ Can hit allies if they’re within range


    Pisces Gold Saint - Demon Rose Bloodstream:


    Name: Demon Rose Bloodstream
    Rank: D
    Type: Stun/AoE
    Element: Blood/poison
    Duration: 1 post
    Cooldown: 2 posts
    Description: Albafica exerts pressure as he stares into the eyes of his opponents. Even if they keep their eyes closed they can feel the pair of piercing azure eyes staring back at them as if they were looking at it. A swirl of rose petals seems to blow towards their face as they feel their limbs denying service and a feeling of overpowering pressure overcoming them. For a single post anyone of this spell’s rank, and one rank above it, will be stunned within a 30 meter radius. This spell makes sure opponents cannot move a muscle, but if they can activate spells that don’t need any type of physical movement (this includes speech due to movement of tongue and mouth) they are still capable of casting spells.

    Strengths:
    ✹If a higher-ranked opponent was hit with Crimson Thorn they too will be stunned for one turn.

    Weaknesses:
    ✹ If allies were hit with Crimson Thorn, or have his blood somehow within into their system, they too will be affected by this spell.
    ✹ Opponent can still cast spells if it doesn’t need any type of movement.









    D-rank Purchased Spells - 2/6

    Griffon Minos (spectre) - Cosmic Marionation:


    Name: Cosmic Marrionation
    Rank: D
    Type: Restriction/Offensive/burst multi-target
    Element: Blood
    Duration: 2 post
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Description: Albafica pinpoints the people who’ve been hit by Crimson Thorn prior to this spell within a 15 meter radius and stretches his hand; invisible to the naked eye are small threads of energy that confirm the link. Although these threads can be seen by some, or smelled by blood mages or creatures of blood, they aren’t physically there and are merely cosmetic. Albafica can flick his hand, causing those who have been struck by Crimson Thorn earlier to feel one or multiple of their limbs contort, as if they were being controlled by a puppeteer. Each round Albafica will deal 1x D-rank damage to each person within the 15 meter radius the first round, and 50% D-rank damage the second, but only if they were touched, grazed or hit by Crimson Thorn, otherwise this spell does nothing. During the first post people of this spell’s rank or lower will be stunned, again, only if hit by Crimson Thorn will this be effective.

    This spell can make the caught opponents hit themselves physically, others or even break bones with but the snap of a finger, causing internal damage. This will always be the case for NPCs, but needs OoC permission if used against PCs, their pets, summons, etc.

    Strengths:
    ✹ Can make each person stuck within the spell move separately, and has the capability of breaking any bone in the opponent’s body.

    Weaknesses:
    ✹ Can only be used on those hit by Crimson Thorn.
    ✹ Extremely small radius. Will deal damage to allies if they too were hit with Crimson Thorn.


    Pisces Gold Saint - Royal Demon Rose - Crucifixion:


    Name: Royal Demon Rose - Crucifixion
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Element: Plant/Poison
    Duration: 2 post
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Description: Albafica summons a batch of crimson roses, of a type only he can use due to their lethal proportions. He lets the Royal Demon Roses either levitate before him or holds them inbetween his fingers, and pinpoints his opponent. He then proceeds by throwing them with extreme accuracy towards his opponent stems first, with each stem piercing the target’s body as if they were knives cutting through butter. The opponent can be pinned against any surface if one is nearby with them. It deals full spell-rank damage and poisons the target, which deals an additional 25% per post. Trying to pull the roses out of one’s body prior to the end of the duration will deal 50% spell rank damage. Albafica can hit one single target within 60 meters from him.

    Strengths:
    ✹ The roses are far stronger than regular roses, being able to pierce even concrete.

    Weaknesses:
    ✹ The roses can be burnt with a same-ranked fire spell.
    ✹ Poison slayers can intake the poison damage and get their HP healed equal to 25% D-rank damage per post instead.



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