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    Nadarr

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    Coco's Gloves

    Post by Nadarr on Sun 1 Oct - 10:12

    Name: Coco's Gloves
    Rank: Legendary +
    Type: Gloves
    Description:
    Gloves:
    Strengths:
    can restrict people
    helps her control the battle
    Weaknesses:
    can tangle allies if not careful
    must reload after 5 posts of use (must say in post he reloads them)
    if when of covered in something they can be seen easier
    Abilities:

    Resrict:
    Name: Resrict
    Rank: D rank (up to A rank)
    Duration: 3 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: Coco is able to restrict her enemies or objects so keep them from moving or at the very least slow them down.  Any enemy hit but this attack is stunned for 1 post then are slowed by 75 percent decreasing every post up to A rank due to being tangled by wires all around there body (At A rank once the stun is done they move at 75% speed the next post, then 50 %, then 25% speed then they are untangled) speed reduction vary upon users rank (d rank its 25,15,5, c rank its 35,25,15, b rank its 50, 40, 30 and a rank it 75,50 25 percent movemnt speed
    Strengths:
    can stun and restrict enemies
    Weaknesses:
    are still mobile after stun
    teleportation or changing to a smaller size will free you instantly
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    Ability 2:

    Name:Wire Lash
    Rank: D (up to S rank)
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: Coco channels her energy into her wires and  subtly for a defensive strike since they are infused with magic he can have them lash out at incoming ranged based attacks, they then wrap around the attack and hurl it back at them with a quarter more of speed,  if it is a line attack (like a dragon slaying roar)  the wires clump up and redirect it back at them.   He can only do this for spells or abilities of his current rank or lower.  
    Strengths:
    Can block range attacks
    Weaknesses:
    only works against ranged based attacks
    only works on spells/abilities of his current rank

    (built for my companion)

    Proof of Ownership:


    Last edited by Nadarr on Sat 14 Oct - 13:41; edited 1 time in total
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    Re: Coco's Gloves

    Post by Salrynn on Fri 13 Oct - 21:05

    Grading session number 2 ^^ you know the drill

    @Nadarr wrote:Name: Coco's Gloves
    Rank: Legendary + Again, proof of purchase necessary ^^
    Type: Gloves
    Description:
    Gloves:
    Strengths:
    can restrict people
    helps her control the battle
    Weaknesses:
    can tangle allies if not careful
    must reload after 5 posts of use (must say in post he reloads them)
    if when of covered in something they can be seen easier
    Abilities:
    Manipulation:  Coco can manipulate his wires up to 10 feet per rank up to s rank (max 50 feet)
    Insulated: The gloves are infused with lighting magic so electricity and magnetic attacks won't work on them
    Ghost Wires:  As the name imply's the wires can't be seen
    Ability:

    Name: Resrict
    Rank: D rank (up to A rank)
    Duration: 3 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: Coco is able to restrict her enemies or objects so keep them from moving or at the very least slow them down.  Any enemy hit but this attack is stunned for 1 post then are slowed by 75 percent decreasing every post up to A rank due to being tangled by wires all around there body (At A rank once the stun is done they move at 75% speed the next post, then 50 %, then 25% speed then they are untangled) speed reduction vary upon users rank (d rank its 25,15,5, c rank its 35,25,15, b rank its 50, 40, 30 and a rank it 75,50 25 percent movemnt speed
    Strengths:
    can stun and restrict enemies
    Weaknesses:
    are still mobile after stun
    teleportation or changing to a smaller size will free you instantly
    Ability 2:

    Name:Wire Lash
    Rank: D (up to S rank)
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: Coco channels her energy into her wires and  subtly for a defensive strike since they are infused with magic he can have them lash out at incoming ranged based attacks, they then wrap around the attack and hurl it back at them with a quarter more of speed,  if it is a line attack (like a dragon slaying roar)  the wires clump up and redirect it back at them.   He can only do this for spells or abilities of his current rank or lower.  
    Strengths:
    Can block range attacks
    Weaknesses:
    only works against ranged based attacks
    only works on spells/abilities of his current rank

    Pick 2 abilities, since its legendary+, max is A and B

    (built for my companion)


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    Re: Coco's Gloves

    Post by Desirée Blooms on Sun 19 Nov - 22:27

    Hi Nadarr, I'm Des, and I will be grading another one of your items. All edits will be in this color.
    @Nadarr wrote:Name: Coco's Gloves
    Rank: Legendary +
    Type: Gloves
    Description:
    Gloves:
    Strengths:
    can restrict people
    helps her control the battle
    Weaknesses:
    can tangle allies if not careful
    must reload after 5 posts of use (must say in post he reloads them)
    if when of covered in something they can be seen easier
    Abilities:

    Resrict:
    Name: Resrict
    Rank: D rank (up to A rank) Being legendary+, your abilities are of 1 A and 1 B. Please change these to the respected ranks~
    Duration: 3 posts By your description, it hints at the ability being a 4 post duration instead of three. This is the Stun-Slow-Slow-Slow. Since you classify this ability as a D rank ability, and the maximum duration of this rank is 3, can you possibly tweak the ability somewhat to fit the three duration maximum?
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: Coco is able to restrict her enemies or objects so keep them from moving or at the very least slow them down.  Any enemy hit but this attack is stunned for 1 post then are slowed by 75 percent decreasing every post up to A rank due to being tangled by wires all around there body (At A rank once the stun is done they move at 75% speed the next post, then 50 %, then 25% speed then they are untangled) speed reduction vary upon users rank (d rank its 25,15,5, c rank its 35,25,15, b rank its 50, 40, 30 and a rank it 75,50 25 percent movement speed. Please add that the debuffs can only work on mages equal or lower rank to your character, as well as the changes I discussed in the duration.
    Strengths:
    can stun and restrict enemies
    Weaknesses:
    are still mobile after stun
    teleportation or changing to a smaller size will free you instantly
    [/spoiler]
    Ability 2:

    Name:Wire Lash
    Rank: D (up to S rank) D rank Being legendary+, your abilities are of 1 A and 1 B. Please change these to the respected ranks~
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: Coco channels her energy into her wires and  subtly for a defensive strike since they are infused with magic he can have them lash out at incoming ranged based attacks, they then wrap around the attack and hurl it back at them with a quarter more of speed,  if it is a line attack (like a dragon slaying roar)  the wires clump up and redirect it back at them.   He can only do this for spells or abilities of his current rank or lower.  
    Strengths:
    Can block range attacks
    Weaknesses:
    only works against ranged based attacks
    only works on spells/abilities of his current rank

    (built for my companion)

    Proof of Ownership:


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