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    Nadarr

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    Coco Winters

    Post by Nadarr on Sun 01 Oct 2017, 2:37 am

    Name:Coco Winters
    Rank: legendary+
    Species:Human
    Type: Combat
    Description:
    Description:
     Clarence's companion is his personal maid who fled his estate with him to  help him with his journey, protect him, and continue to serve him for as long as he requires.  While she follows any order given by him she is very smart and tactful.  Clearance trusts no one more then her.  Aside from just being a maid she is his closest and really only friend despite her quiet tone and demeanor.  She is a very kind person however despite the burden she carries, she trusts Clearance to make the right choices.
    Abilities:

    Wire Lash:
    Name: Wire Lash
    Rank: d rank (up to A)
    Type: offensive,
    Duration:[/b 2 post
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Description: Coco channels her magic power into her wires and she is able to strike an opponent with her razor wire causing them damage,  due to the nature of the weapon she uses each strike tangles to enemy in wire for a short time give her some  control. during this attack she does her rank in damage (up to A rank) and slows them by 10 percent each rank (up to A rank)
    Strengths:
    Slows enemies down
    Weaknesses:
    has to get close to use it
    Attack must connect to slow
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    Spoiler:

    Name: Wire Dance
    Rank: D rank (up to B)
    Type: Offesive
    Duration: 1 post
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: Coco waves around her arms like a dance releasing wire tossing it towards the enemy manipulating it to her whim. as it drapes around the enemy she clenches her hands into fists striking at multiple spots all at once. this attack does a two d ranks worth of damage (up to b rank) and slows them by 5% per rank up to (b rank)
    Strengths:
    slows opponets
    Weaknesses:
    can only hit a single target
    has to be close to use


    cocos weapons:

    Proof of Ownership:


    Last edited by Nadarr on Sat 14 Oct 2017, 6:40 am; edited 3 times in total
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    Salrynn
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    Re: Coco Winters

    Post by Salrynn on Fri 13 Oct 2017, 2:01 pm

    Hey ^^ it's me, Sally you know what I am here for Anything you see in this colour needs reviewed ^^

    Let's get started

    @Nadarr wrote:Name:Coco Winters
    Rank: legendary+ It would be great to see the proof of purchase ^^
    Species:Human
    Type: Combat
    Description:
    Description:
     Clarence's companion is his personal maid who fled his estate with him to  help him with his journey, protect him, and continue to serve him for as long as he requires.  While she follows any order given by him she is very smart and tactful.  Clearance trusts no one more then her.  Aside from just being a maid she is his closest and really only friend despite her quiet tone and demeanor.  She is a very kind person however despite the burden she carries, she trusts Clearance to make the right choices.
    Abilities:
    Abilites:
    Master control: can control the wire she uses with ease being able to move people and objects with ease, Can pull someone or something out of the way of a attack one per fight

    Enhanced strength:  She is also stronger then the average human being able to life double what the average person could.
    Spoiler:

    Wire Lash:
    Name: Wire Lash
    Rank: d rank
    Type: offensive,
    Duration:[/b 2 post
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Description: Coco channels her magic power into her wires and she is able to strike an opponent with her razor wire causing them damage,  due to the nature of the weapon she uses each strike tangles to enemy in wire for a short time give her some  control. during this attack she does her rank in damage (up to A rank) and slows them by 10 percent each rank (up to A rank)
    Strengths:
    Slows enemies down
    Weaknesses:
    has to get close to use it
    Attack must connect to slow
    Spoiler:

    Name: Wire Dance
    Rank: D rank
    Type: Offesive
    Duration: 1 post
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: Coco waves around her arms like a dance releasing wire tossing it towards the enemy manipulating it to her whim. as it drapes around the enemy she clenches her hands into fists striking at multiple spots all at once. this attack does a two d ranks worth of damage (up to b rank) and slows them by 5% per rank up to (b rank)
    Strengths:
    slows opponets
    Weaknesses:
    can only hit a single target
    has to be close to use


    You can only have 2 abilities D= can you pick? ^^ I will continue grading then And to make it easier, list them as A and B rank, but mention they rank up with the user till they cap at that rank

    cocos weapons:


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    Re: Coco Winters

    Post by Desirée Blooms on Sun 19 Nov 2017, 2:48 pm

    Hi Nadaar, I'm Desirée / Des and I will be grading your adorable maid today. All edits will be in this color.

    @Nadarr wrote:Name:Coco Winters
    Rank: legendary+
    Species:Human
    Type: Combat
    Description:
    Description:
     Clarence's companion is his personal maid who fled his estate with him to  help him with his journey, protect him, and continue to serve him for as long as he requires.  While she follows any order given by him she is very smart and tactful.  Clearance trusts no one more then her.  Aside from just being a maid she is his closest and really only friend despite her quiet tone and demeanor.  She is a very kind person however despite the burden she carries, she trusts Clearance to make the right choices.
    Abilities:

    Wire Lash:
    Name: Wire Lash
    Rank: d rank (up to A)
    Type: offensive,
    Duration:[/b 2 post
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Description: Coco channels her magic power into her wires and she is able to strike an opponent with her razor wire causing them damage,  due to the nature of the weapon she uses each strike tangles to enemy in wire for a short time give her some  control. during this attack she does her rank in damage (up to A rank) and slows them by 10 percent each rank (up to A rank). Can you possibly clarify if this hits multiple enemies or just one? If multiple, please change this damage to 50% per round instead of the full amount. If a singular enemy, please change this damage to 75% per round instead of the full amount. Also, please clarify if the wires can hit the same person more than once.
    Strengths:
    Slows enemies down
    Weaknesses:
    has to get close to use it
    Attack must connect to slow
    [/spoiler]
    Spoiler:

    Name: Wire Dance
    Rank: D rank (up to B)
    Type: Offesive
    Duration: 1 post
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: Coco waves around her arms like a dance releasing wire tossing it towards the enemy manipulating it to her whim. as it drapes around the enemy she clenches her hands into fists striking at multiple spots all at once. this attack does a two d ranks worth of damage (up to b rank) and slows them by 5% per rank up to (b rank). If you add a small drawback, I can allow 1.25x rank damage to this ability. If you do not want a drawback, please make it the standard ranked-damage on the second ability’s damage.
    Strengths:
    slows opponets
    Weaknesses:
    can only hit a single target
    has to be close to use


    cocos weapons:

    Proof of Ownership:


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