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    Shea's Cleansing Bracelet

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    Shea's Cleansing Bracelet

    Post by Shea Duskhelm on 14th July 2017, 4:49 pm

    Name: Cleansing Bracelet
    Rank: Weak
    Type: Bracelet/Armor
    Description:
    The Cleansing Bracelet:


    Strengths:
    - Very small armor makes it easy to move around with

    Weaknesses:
    - Makes rattling sounds at times, making the user more easily noticed
    - Is easier to steal than regular armor



    Last edited by Shea Duskhelm on 18th July 2017, 9:43 pm; edited 2 times in total


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    Re: Shea's Cleansing Bracelet

    Post by Tamashi on 15th July 2017, 3:48 am

    Hello Shea, I'm Tamashi and I will be grading your armour this time around. Anything I request altered, changed or suggest will be made in this wonderful shade of purple. At any point if you have any concerns, worries or questions feel free to send me a message and I will get back to you as soon as I can.

    With that being said lets begin...

    The grading:

    Shea Duskhelm wrote:Name: Cleansing Bracelet
    Rank: Weak
    Type: Bracelet/Armor
    Description:
    The Cleansing Bracelet:


    Strengths:
    - Even though it's small it still works as armor due to its magical effect surrounding the user's body
    - Makes grime and dirt slide off the user

    Weaknesses:
    - User cannot clean themselves of bodily odor until it is taken off
    - User cannot swim, will just float, until bracelet is taken off
    - Is easier to steal than regular armor

    Abilities:

    Cleansing Aura
    - The one wearing this bracelet is always clean with outside sources such as mud, water, and even their own sweat or blood not affecting their state of cleanliness. Oddly enough htis works as amor as well.

    This is more a ua given the layout, you need to use the templates when giving armour/weapon/pets abilities so I am going to ask for this to be redone using the template.

    Once the requested change has been made feel free to message me or bump the thread and I'll get back to you as soon as I can.


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    Re: Shea's Cleansing Bracelet

    Post by Shea Duskhelm on 17th July 2017, 2:17 pm

    bump~


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    Re: Shea's Cleansing Bracelet

    Post by Tamashi on 18th July 2017, 2:43 am

    Hello again Shea, I'm here to continue your grading as stated before anything I ask will be in this shade of purple. Again if you have any concerns, worries or questions don't hesitate to send me a message and I'll get to it as soon as I can.

    With that being said lets begin.

    Grading continued:
    Shea Duskhelm wrote:Name: Cleansing Bracelet
    Rank: Weak
    Type: Bracelet/Armor
    Description:
    The Cleansing Bracelet:


    Strengths:
    - Even though it's small it still works as armor due to its magical effect surrounding the user's body
    - Makes grime and dirt slide off the user

    Weaknesses:
    - User cannot clean themselves of bodily odor until it is taken off
    - User cannot swim, will just float, until bracelet is taken off
    - Is easier to steal than regular armor

    Abilities:

    D Rank:

    Name: Cleansing Aura
    Rank: D
    Type: Passive
    Description: The one wearing this bracelet is always clean with outside sources such as mud, water, and even their own sweat or blood not affecting their state of cleanliness. Oddly enough this works as amour as well.


    This is a weak piece of armour and thus is not allowed abilities I am going to ask that you remove it.

    When what I have asked has been changed give this a small nudge or send me a message and I will come back as soon as I can.


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    Re: Shea's Cleansing Bracelet

    Post by Shea Duskhelm on 18th July 2017, 9:43 pm

    Bump~!


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    Re: Shea's Cleansing Bracelet

    Post by Tamashi on 19th July 2017, 1:18 am



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