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    Grand Aria

    Shea Duskhelm
    Shea Duskhelm

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    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Grand Aria
    Second Magic: Advent of the Dragoon
    Third Magic:

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    Post by Shea Duskhelm 13th July 2017, 12:13 am

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Grand Aria Magic
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: Grand Aria magic is very simply spells that you cast using singing and/or dancing. The caster must first think of the lyrics and the meaning behind them, then think of what effect they want the spell to have. An example is a spell about wind would control the air around the singer, doing as the song commands of it. This takes great concentration and skill which is why only single spells tied in with this magic works, not just the songstress singing any song and putting magic behind it. Once invoked the song may produce illusions from the singer mind, what they evasion the song to look/sound like. An example is a song about cherry blossoms may make said flowers appear in the air, with an extra chorus behind the singer singing along with them, and a band. Depending on the spell this can be distracting.

    Shea uses this magic in battle to not only attack, but to also buff and heal herself and her allies. When creating a spell she makes or takes lyrics and adds them to the spell for the song, along with the melody and imagery. She then sings the song, adding magic power, to make it into a spell. Sometimes the song goes on without her for a while depending on the spell, and for more powerful spells she even has to dance.

    Strengths:

    • The magic is incredibly versatile and can do many things as long as the user has the magic for it
    • The user can move at any speed while casting and not be distracted by the action unless they are dancing; then they must keep to the assigned moves
    • Longer the song is, the more powerful the spell
    • Illusions generated during the song can be distracting to those who don’t expect them

    Weaknesses:

    • The caster must finish the entire the user has made for them to sing for the spell to be cast. If interrupted the spell does not take effect
    • When the user needs to dance to cast a spell as well, the same effect as above is in effect for finishing the dance
    • Unless otherwise stated no more than one song may be sung per post
    • This magic often requires another to be protecting the caster since the spells takes a while to cast
    • The magic is not subtle in the least, meaning that while casting it is almost always noticed by those around them
    • If song is not sung at full volume, the effect is halved


    Lineage:
    Light of Luna:

    Unique Abilities:

    Blessing of Song:
    Unflinching Multitasker:
    War Songstress:
    Support Expert:
    Signature Spells

    Ranked:

    D:

    Spells:

    D-Rank Spells:

    C-Rank Spells:

    List of Spell Fusions:(Locked until B rank)


    Last edited by Shea Duskhelm on 12th August 2017, 1:59 am; edited 6 times in total


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    Post by Hania 14th July 2017, 4:58 am

    Hello Shea, my name is Tamashi and I will be your grader this time around. Any requests I make will be made in this wonderful shade of purple. Any concerns, worries or questions you have you may feel free to message me at any time and I'll get back to you as soon as I can.

    With that being said, lets begin...

    The grading:

    I have made a few requests once done you can bump this or send me a message and I'll get back to you as soon as I can.


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    Shea Duskhelm
    Shea Duskhelm

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    Guild : Black Sails
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    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Grand Aria
    Second Magic: Advent of the Dragoon
    Third Magic:

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    Post by Shea Duskhelm 14th July 2017, 4:18 pm

    Bump~

    I hope this fixes things!


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    Post by Hania 14th July 2017, 4:54 pm

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    Post by Leila Vergious 9th August 2017, 1:14 am

    Moved and unlocked at user's request.

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    Post by Leila Vergious 10th August 2017, 2:11 pm

    Hi there, Shea! I'm VindStot / Leila and I'm here to grade your magic. All my requests for changes will be below and done in this color. If you have any questions or have fixed everything, PM me or bump this thread~

    Shea Duskhelm wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Grand Aria Magic
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: Grand Aria magic is very simply spells that you cast using singing and/or dancing. The caster must first think of the lyrics and the meaning behind them, then think of what effect they want the spell to have. An example is a spell about wind would control the air around the singer, doing as the song commands of it. This takes great concentration and skill which is why only single spells tied in with this magic works, not just the songstress singing any song and putting magic behind it. Once invoked the song may produce illusions from the singer mind, what they evasion the song to look/sound like. An example is a song about cherry blossoms may make said flowers appear in the air, with an extra chorus behind the singer singing along with them, and a band. Depending on the spell this can be distracting.

    Shea uses this magic in battle to not only attack, but to also buff and heal herself and her allies. When creating a spell she makes or takes lyrics and adds them to the spell for the song, along with the melody and imagery. She then sings the song, adding magic power, to make it into a spell. Sometimes the song goes on without her for a while depending on the spell, and for more powerful spells she even has to dance.

    Strengths:

    • The magic is incredibly versatile and can do many things as long as the user has the magic for it
    • The user can move at any speed while casting and not be distracted by the action unless they are dancing; then they must keep to the assigned moves
    • Longer the song is, the more powerful the spell
    • Illusions generated during the song can be distracting to those who don’t expect them

    Weaknesses:

    • The caster must finish the entire the user has made for them to sing for the spell to be cast. If interrupted the spell does not take effect
    • When the user needs to dance to cast a spell as well, the same effect as above is in effect for finishing the dance
    • Unless otherwise stated no more than one song may be sung per post
    • This magic often requires another to be protecting the caster since the spells takes a while to cast
    • The magic is not subtle in the least, meaning that while casting it is almost always noticed by those around them
    • If song is not sung at full volume, the effect is halved


    Lineage:
    Light of Luna:

    Unique Abilities:

    Blessing of Song:
    Unflinching Multitasker:
    War Songstress:
    Support Expert:
    Signature Spells

    Ranked:

    D:

    Spells:

    D-Rank Spells:

    C-Rank Spells:

    List of Spell Fusions:(Locked until B rank)


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    Shea Duskhelm
    Shea Duskhelm

    Player 
    Lineage : None
    Position : None
    Posts : 126
    Guild : Black Sails
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Grand Aria
    Second Magic: Advent of the Dragoon
    Third Magic:

    Grand Aria Empty Re: Grand Aria

    Post by Shea Duskhelm 10th August 2017, 8:43 pm

    Bump~


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    Leila Vergious

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    Post by Leila Vergious 11th August 2017, 1:17 pm

    Just couple more things. Your ranked signature spell is still far too powerful for something that does not cost any MP, especially in the later ranks. I can allow buffing a single spell by 10% per rank, up to 50% once you hit S.

    Mist and Shadow should also specify by how much the target is slowed down if they are not stopped completely.

    Once you made the changes, bump the thread or PM me any questions you might have ^.^


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    Shea Duskhelm
    Shea Duskhelm

    Player 
    Lineage : None
    Position : None
    Posts : 126
    Guild : Black Sails
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Grand Aria
    Second Magic: Advent of the Dragoon
    Third Magic:

    Grand Aria Empty Re: Grand Aria

    Post by Shea Duskhelm 12th August 2017, 2:00 am

    Bump~


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    Grand Aria HdUXW6O
    Grand Aria 600px-10

    Leila Vergious
    Leila Vergious

    Eden's Rose


    Eden's Rose

    Developer/GFX Artist- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Guild Master- Zodiac Key- Legal Guild Ace- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Fan Art Contest Participant- Haiku Contest Participant- Lineage Making Contest Participant- Rich- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Join A Faction!- Tertiary Magic- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- 2nd Place Event/Contest Winner- Advertisement Achievement Badge- Hero- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Child of Eden
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    Age : 27
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    Post by Leila Vergious 12th August 2017, 6:27 am

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