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    Mona the Phantom Thief [W.I.P]

    jtmoney09
    jtmoney09

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    Posts : 327
    Guild : Sabertooth
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    Mentor : Eris Sytry
    Experience : 762.5

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    First Magic: Celestial Angel
    Second Magic: None
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    Post by jtmoney09 on 14th June 2017, 11:54 am

    Mona the Phantom Thief












    Mona the Phantom Thief [W.I.P] EOHgV3U

    Rank: N/A
    Species: Exceed
    Type: Non-Combat Pet
    Description: Mona is a Black and white exceed Liam met on his travels as a child,Mona is a master of the arts of Thievery and has made a nickname for himself "The Phantom Thief".He is very mischievous Exceed,though he is kind to people he cares about including Liams guildmates.Mona loves treasure and will do almost any job to get lots of money.He gets over-excited alot when he finds a job  that pays for alot.You shouldn't call him a cat though,He hates it when people call him a cat since he's an exceed.

    General Appearance:
    Mona the Phantom Thief [W.I.P] A0dhYRk
    Human Appearance:
    Mona the Phantom Thief [W.I.P] AVPvXcK
    Abilities:
    Abilities:

    *Flight
    *Speech
    *Telepathy
    *Invisibility
    *Silent Movements
    *Can pick lock most doors and storage containers
    *Can Change Into A Human Form




    Last edited by jtmoney09 on 1st July 2017, 11:56 am; edited 9 times in total
    Hania
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    Experience : 206,450

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    First Magic: Requiem
    Second Magic:
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    Post by Hania on 15th June 2017, 11:15 am

    Hello jtmoney09, my name is Tamashi and I will be grading your pet this time around. Any alterations or requests I make will be in this wonderful colour. If you have any questions, concerns or worries don't hesitate to send me a pm and I'll get back to you as soon as I am able to.

    With all that being said, lets begin...

    Grading:
    @jtmoney09 wrote:Name: Mei
    Rank: Weak
    Species: Unknown
    Type: Combat Pet
    Description:

    Default Appearance:
    Mona the Phantom Thief [W.I.P] ANvaAzZ

    Default Appearance 2:
    Mona the Phantom Thief [W.I.P] KsUfcsS



    Abilities:
    Combat Abilities:

    Name: Petal Storm/Snow Flurry (Depends on her current Appearance)
    Please choose a singular name, you can state in the description of the ability that it changes ascetically dependant on her form.
    Rank: User Rank (Caps at D-Rank)
    Type: Holy,Offensive
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: Two posts
    Description: After a short delay,Mei summons some Petals/Snow,She gets ready to aim it at a target,She makes a pulling back motion like if she's using a bow,She shoots it towards a target,All the petals/snow shoots towards the target in a Scattered pattern,They shoot at a speed of 10 meters per second,shooting up to 20 meters away.The petals/snow deal about 10% of the spells rank,Not all of the petals/snow may hit the target.
    please specify how long the charge up is. The maximum a D Rank spell can achieve is 15 meters and 7.5m/s so I will ask you to change this. I suggest raising the pets damage to being a full rank of damage

    Strengths:

    ·Deals alot of damage if all petals/snow hit the target

    ·Great spell if you're in a fight where you are close to each other

    Weaknesses:

    ·Demon slayers aligned with the light element can eat the petals/snow without any negative effects happening towards them

    ·Unholy magic or darkness magic is able to negate the spell

    ·Not all of the petals/snow hits the target


    Cosmetic abilities:


    ·Flight
    ·Morphing
    ·Slime magic
    This isn't cosmetic this is a magic type I'm going to ask you remove it
    ·Telepathy with Liam
    This seems more like a passive I am going to ask you remove this
    ·Sensing any unholy beings around Liam and her
    This seems more like a passive I am going to ask you remove this
    ·Sensing and seeing spirits
    This seems more like a passive I am going to ask you remove this

    Once you have altered what I have requested bump the thread and I will come as quickly as I am able to.


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    Mona the Phantom Thief [W.I.P] 59875_s


    True sins are the ones that you cannot atone for.
    Golden Lacrima: Valid until December 8th 2019
    jtmoney09
    jtmoney09

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    Posts : 327
    Guild : Sabertooth
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Eris Sytry
    Experience : 762.5

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Celestial Angel
    Second Magic: None
    Third Magic:

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    Post by jtmoney09 on 15th June 2017, 11:25 am

    !Bump


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    Hania
    Hania

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    Experience : 206,450

    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Requiem
    Second Magic:
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    Post by Hania on 15th June 2017, 1:37 pm

    For Records Sake:
    @jtmoney09 wrote:Name: Mei
    Rank: Weak
    Species: Unknown
    Type: Combat Pet
    Description:

    Default Appearance:
    Mona the Phantom Thief [W.I.P] ANvaAzZ

    Default Appearance 2:
    Mona the Phantom Thief [W.I.P] KsUfcsS



    Abilities:
    Combat Abilities:

    Name: Flurry
    Rank: User Rank (Caps at D-Rank)
    Type: Holy,Offensive
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: Two posts
    Description: After a short delay,Mei summons some Petals/Snow,She gets ready to aim it at a target,She makes a pulling back motion like if she's using a bow,She pulls back for a couple of seconds,She shoots it towards a target,All the petals/snow shoots towards the target in a Scattered pattern,They shoot at a speed of 7.5 meters per second,shooting up to 15 meters away.The petals/snow deal full spell rank damage,Not all of the petals/snow may hit the target.The spell changes from snow to petals depending on her  appearance.
    Strengths:

    ·Deals alot of damage if all petals/snow hit the target

    ·Great spell if you're in a fight where you are close to each other

    Weaknesses:

    ·Demon slayers aligned with the light element can eat the petals/snow without any negative effects happening towards them

    ·Unholy magic or darkness magic is able to negate the spell

    ·Not all of the petals/snow hits the target


    Cosmetic abilities:


    ·Flight
    ·Morphing


    Mona the Phantom Thief [W.I.P] ABT_zps5xjxsyen


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    Mona the Phantom Thief [W.I.P] 59875_s


    True sins are the ones that you cannot atone for.
    Golden Lacrima: Valid until December 8th 2019
    Jiyu Kazehime
    Jiyu Kazehime

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    Posts : 1917
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    Character Sheet
    First Magic: Wind Magic
    Second Magic: Demonic Takeover
    Third Magic:

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    Post by Jiyu Kazehime on 20th June 2017, 8:04 pm

    Unlocked and moved at users request.
    Spoiler:
    @jtmoney09 wrote:Name: Mei
    Rank: Weak
    Species: Unknown
    Type: Combat Pet
    Description:

    Default Appearance:
    Mona the Phantom Thief [W.I.P] ANvaAzZ

    Default Appearance 2:
    Mona the Phantom Thief [W.I.P] KsUfcsS



    Abilities:
    Combat Abilities:

    Name: Flurry
    Rank: User Rank (Caps at D-Rank)
    Type: Holy,Offensive
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: Two posts
    Description: After a short delay,Mei summons some Petals/Snow,She gets ready to aim it at a target,She makes a pulling back motion like if she's using a bow,She pulls back for a couple of seconds,She shoots it towards a target,All the petals/snow shoots towards the target in a Scattered pattern,They shoot at a speed of 7.5 meters per second,shooting up to 15 meters away.The petals/snow deal full spell rank damage,Not all of the petals/snow may hit the target.The spell changes from snow to petals depending on her  appearance.
    Strengths:

    ·Deals alot of damage if all petals/snow hit the target

    ·Great spell if you're in a fight where you are close to each other

    Weaknesses:

    ·Demon slayers aligned with the light element can eat the petals/snow without any negative effects happening towards them

    ·Unholy magic or darkness magic is able to negate the spell

    ·Not all of the petals/snow hits the target


    Cosmetic abilities:


    ·Flight
    ·Morphing



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    Aura
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    Post by Aura on 21st June 2017, 7:32 am

    Hi there jtmoney09, I'm Aura and I'll be your grading moderator today~
    Any needed changes will be in this trippin' color.

    @jtmoney09 wrote:

    Mona the Phantom Thief







    Mona the Phantom Thief [W.I.P] EOHgV3U

    Rank: Weak
    Species: Exceed
    Type: Combat Pet
    Description: Mona is a Black and white exceed Liam met on his travels as a child,Mona is a master of the arts of Thievery and has made a nickname for himself "The Phantom Thief".He is very mischievous Exceed,though he is kind to people he cares about including Liams guildmates.Mona loves treasure and will do almost any job to get lots of money.He gets over-excited alot when he finds a job  that pays for alot.You shouldn't call him a cat though,He hates it when people call him a cat since he's an exceed.

    General Appearance:
    Mona the Phantom Thief [W.I.P] A0dhYRk
    Human Appearance:
    Mona the Phantom Thief [W.I.P] AVPvXcK
    Abilities:
    Abilities:

    *Flight
    *Speech
    *Telepathy
    *Invisibility
    *Silent Movements
    *Can pick lock any door
    Change this to most doors, as some future jobs or events may need you to struggle with doors or just keep them locked for the sake of the job.
    *Can Change Into A Human Form
    Healing Touch:

    Name: Healing Touch
    Rank: Healing Touch
    Type: Support/Wind
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 2 posts
    Description: Mona concentrates and magical power goes through his palm and he puts his hand on the targets chest,Healing the target the equivalent of a full D-ranked Damage while also curing any illnesses or ailments,such as motion sickness,they have.
    Strengths:
    ·Able to cure Illnesses and ailments
    Weaknesses:

    ·Does no Damage

    ·Mona must touch the target on their chest to heal them
    Either heal for D-rank damage or cure illnesses and ailments. Not both at the same time; I suggest you reword it so that when this ability is used, Mona will either heal you or cure your ailments.



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    And be she but Small,
    she is Fierce


    Mona the Phantom Thief [W.I.P] GWsGXSQ

    .:} The Road of Desire |Fire Dragon Slayer | Kenna Terrynhain {:.
    .:} The Nightmare in Your Head | Avide - Combat Pet {:.


    D~4 ||C~4 ||B~2 ||A~ ||S~

    Slots: 4/6



    jtmoney09
    jtmoney09

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    First Magic: Celestial Angel
    Second Magic: None
    Third Magic:

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    Post by jtmoney09 on 21st June 2017, 10:06 am

    !Bump


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    Aura
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    Post by Aura on 21st June 2017, 2:50 pm

    The Quota Lisa:
    @jtmoney09 wrote:

    Mona the Phantom Thief












    Mona the Phantom Thief [W.I.P] EOHgV3U

    Rank: Weak
    Species: Exceed
    Type: Combat Pet
    Description: Mona is a Black and white exceed Liam met on his travels as a child,Mona is a master of the arts of Thievery and has made a nickname for himself "The Phantom Thief".He is very mischievous Exceed,though he is kind to people he cares about including Liams guildmates.Mona loves treasure and will do almost any job to get lots of money.He gets over-excited alot when he finds a job  that pays for alot.You shouldn't call him a cat though,He hates it when people call him a cat since he's an exceed.

    General Appearance:
    Mona the Phantom Thief [W.I.P] A0dhYRk
    Human Appearance:
    Mona the Phantom Thief [W.I.P] AVPvXcK
    Abilities:
    Abilities:

    *Flight
    *Speech
    *Telepathy
    *Invisibility
    *Silent Movements
    *Can pick lock most doors and storage containers
    *Can Change Into A Human Form
    Healing Touch:

    Name: Healing Touch
    Rank: Healing Touch
    Type: Support/Wind
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 2 posts
    Description: Mona concentrates and magical power goes through his palm and he puts his hand on the targets chest,Healing the target the equivalent of a full D-ranked Damage.
    Strengths:
    ·Decent Healing
    Weaknesses:

    ·Does no Damage

    ·Mona must touch the target on their chest to heal them









    Mona the Phantom Thief [W.I.P] NUWp39U


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    And be she but Small,
    she is Fierce


    Mona the Phantom Thief [W.I.P] GWsGXSQ

    .:} The Road of Desire |Fire Dragon Slayer | Kenna Terrynhain {:.
    .:} The Nightmare in Your Head | Avide - Combat Pet {:.


    D~4 ||C~4 ||B~2 ||A~ ||S~

    Slots: 4/6



    Hania
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    Second Magic:
    Third Magic:

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    Post by Hania on 1st July 2017, 3:22 am

    For the records:

    @jtmoney09 wrote:

    Mona the Phantom Thief













    Mona the Phantom Thief [W.I.P] EOHgV3U

    Rank: Weak
    Species: Exceed
    Type: Combat Pet
    Description: Mona is a Black and white exceed Liam met on his travels as a child,Mona is a master of the arts of Thievery and has made a nickname for himself "The Phantom Thief".He is very mischievous Exceed,though he is kind to people he cares about including Liams guildmates.Mona loves treasure and will do almost any job to get lots of money.He gets over-excited alot when he finds a job  that pays for alot.You shouldn't call him a cat though,He hates it when people call him a cat since he's an exceed.

    General Appearance:
    Mona the Phantom Thief [W.I.P] A0dhYRk
    Human Appearance:
    Mona the Phantom Thief [W.I.P] AVPvXcK
    Abilities:
    Abilities:

    *Flight
    *Speech
    *Telepathy
    *Invisibility
    *Silent Movements
    *Can pick lock most doors and storage containers
    *Can Change Into A Human Form
    Healing Touch:

    Name: Healing Touch
    Rank: Healing Touch
    Type: Support/Wind
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 2 posts
    Description: Mona concentrates and magical power goes through his palm and he puts his hand on the targets chest,Healing the target the equivalent of a full D-ranked Damage.
    Strengths:
    ·Decent Healing
    Weaknesses:

    ·Does no Damage

    ·Mona must touch the target on their chest to heal them








    Opened at the request of the user~


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    Post by Guest on 3rd July 2017, 9:50 pm

    Approved.

    Spoiler:

    @jtmoney09 wrote:

    Mona the Phantom Thief














    Mona the Phantom Thief [W.I.P] EOHgV3U

    Rank: N/A
    Species: Exceed
    Type: Non-Combat Pet
    Description: Mona is a Black and white exceed Liam met on his travels as a child,Mona is a master of the arts of Thievery and has made a nickname for himself "The Phantom Thief".He is very mischievous Exceed,though he is kind to people he cares about including Liams guildmates.Mona loves treasure and will do almost any job to get lots of money.He gets over-excited alot when he finds a job  that pays for alot.You shouldn't call him a cat though,He hates it when people call him a cat since he's an exceed.

    General Appearance:
    Mona the Phantom Thief [W.I.P] A0dhYRk
    Human Appearance:
    Mona the Phantom Thief [W.I.P] AVPvXcK
    Abilities:
    Abilities:

    *Flight
    *Speech
    *Telepathy
    *Invisibility
    *Silent Movements
    *Can pick lock most doors and storage containers
    *Can Change Into A Human Form



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