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    Ark

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    GFX Torrent God Slayer

    Post by Ark 1st June 2017, 12:54 pm

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Torrent God Slayer
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: God Slayer magic is one that is considered lost, and it is right to say so. Torrent God Slayer Magic is based upon the element of water, however tainted with a dark black color and is also considered unholy. The magic itself was made to take down Gods. Ark learned this magic from the God of Torrents himself, a somewhat close friend of his. Being water, it is highly versatile and flowing which allows it to be used in many situations a like and in different ways.

    Ark uses this magic in every way he can, whether from offense to defense or even support. However Ark focuses more on the offensive and defensive aspects as he likes to be head on in battle, never on the sidelines. Overall Ark is rather balanced, not focusing on one aspect over the other and tends to make the most out of his magic.
    Strengths:
    •Fire- Water is obviously superior to fire, even ask a little kid about that. What do you put out fires with? Water of course. Because of this Ark takes 50% less damage from fire.

    •Earth- Against Earth Ark's offensive spells deal 50% more damage.

    •Ice- Ark can heat his water to boiling temperatures and even beyond that. Because of this he can easily melt ice magic which causes him to deal 50% more damage.

    Weaknesses:
    •Allies- Ark's larger scale water attacks are able to hit allies, which isn't a good thing.

    •Lightning- Lightning based offensive attacks deal 50% more damage.

    •Deserts- Deserts or any other kind of extremely dry places cause Ark's offensive spells to deal 50% less damage

    •Wind- Wind mages deal 50% more damage to Ark

    Lineage: Ice Cold
    Lineage:
    Unique Abilities:

    •Blessed with water- Ark can freely manipulate any body of water due to being blessed by the God of Torrents himself. Ark isn't limited to the kind of water he can control, he can also control the temperature of the water to his liking and even the form. Water in a solid (ice), liquid, or even gas. Ark can also freely change the form the water takes by changing the temperature of it. Ark can even control the temperature of his spells. Because of this Ark can reach out and even control Ice. When in a colder area his magic is 50% more effective but only in temperatures below 40 degrees.

    •Eye of God- Ark's left eye is where most of his godly abilities are. This eye allows him to see what those normally can't. Any invisible or hidden items, high speed movement, farther distances, through fog smoke or other conditions that target the eyesight, even traps. Ark's eye can see through it all. Range is user rank and can't see through illusion magic. However his eye can see through darkness and his eyesight can't be lessened except for illusion magic.

    •Godly Physique- Ark is still that of a God even though stripped of near all his power. However his body is still enhanced compared to normal mortals. Ark can move 25% faster and does 25% more damage.

    •Touch of life- Water is popular for having healing properties and so it is shown here with Ark as well, but passively. Ark gains 5% Health Regeneration every other post. Ark's healing spells also are 20% more effective.

    Spells:
    D Rank:

    C Rank:

    Lineage Spell:

    Signature Spell:


    Last edited by Ark on 18th June 2017, 6:52 am; edited 9 times in total
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    GFX Re: Torrent God Slayer

    Post by Aura 16th June 2017, 11:24 am

    Hello, bonjour, I'm Aura and I'll be grading this watery magic of Torrents~

    All notes and requests will be done in this trippin' color.

    Ark wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Torrent God Slayer
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: God Slayer magic is one that is considered lost, and it is right to say so. Torrent God Slayer Magic is based upon the element of water, however tainted with a dark black color and is also considered unholy. The magic itself was made to take down Gods. Ark learned this magic from the God of Torrents himself, a somewhat close friend of his. Being water, it is highly versatile and flowing which allows it to be used in many situations a like and in different ways.

    Ark uses this magic in every way he can, whether from offense to defense or even support. However Ark focuses more on the offensive and defensive aspects as he likes to be head on in battle, never on the sidelines. Overall Ark is rather balanced, not focusing on one aspect over the other and tends to make the most out of his magic.
    Strengths:
    •Fire- Water is obviously superior to fire, even ask a little kid about that. What do you put out fires with? Water of course. Because of this Ark's magic does 1 rank higher damage and takes 1 rank lower damage from fire mages equal rank or lower.
    This sounds more like an UA, if you ask me. Secondly, it's breaching the rules; a single spell can not do the next's rank in damage just like that. So you'll have to change this. If you decide to use only one of these, 50% is the max you can go. Just one,
    not both, mind you.

    •Earth- Against Earth Ark's offensive spells deal 50% more damage.

    •Metallic/iron- When water and metals mix, it can cause oxidation. Because if this water offensive attacks are 1 rank higher.
    Same as the first strength; no can do. Similarly as the above, you can go up to 50%, but no more.
    Weaknesses:
    •Allies- Ark's larger scale water attacks are able to hit allies, which isn't a good thing.

    •Lightning- Lightning based offensive attacks deal damage at 1 rank higher.
    This too is a no; you can't have them do more than 50% extra damage.
    •Deserts- Deserts or any other kind of extremely dry places cause Ark's offensive spells to deal 30% less damage
    30% is good, but 50% is more preferable, depending on the choices you make above in your strengths.
    •Wind- Wind mages deal 30% more damage to Ark
    The same as with your Desert weakness; 30% is good, but 50% would be better.
    Lineage: I assume it carries over from my last character so Arm of Destiny
    If it's a new character altogether then you'll have to reroll your lineage.
    Unique Abilities:
    •Blessed with water- Ark can freely manipulate any body of water due to being blessed by the God of Torrents himself. The water does melee damage.

    •Eye of God- Ark's left eye is where most of his godly abilities are. This eye allows him to see what those normally can't. Any invisible or hidden items, high speed movement, farther distances, through fog smoke or other conditions that target the eyesight, even traps. Ark's eye can see through it all. You'll have to put a distance for how much far it can see per rank. Right now the max distances for each rank are 15m/30m/50m/75m/100m etc. Seeing high speed movements will have to be from the user's rank or lower. Also state that it cannot see through illusion spells, otherwise this UA will need a duration and a cooldown.

    •Godly Physique- Ark is still that of a God even though stripped of near all his power. However his body is still enhanced compared to normal mortals. Ark can move 10% faster, has 10% more strength, and 5% Health Regeneration
    I can allow you to go up to 25% for our speed and strength (provided it is physical strength), but you'll have to lose the 5% health regen.

    •Touch of life- Water is popular for having healing properties and so it is shown here with Ark as well, but passively. Ark gains 5% Health Regeneration
    Add that the health regen is every other post.

    Spells:
    D Rank:


    C Rank:

    Signature Spell:



    Hit me up once the changes have been made, or pm me if you have any questions regarding your magic. ^-^


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    And be she but Small,
    she is Fierce


    Torrent God Slayer GWsGXSQ

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    Ark

    Regular VIP Status- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Arm of Destiny
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    First Magic: Torrent God Slayer
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    GFX Re: Torrent God Slayer

    Post by Ark 17th June 2017, 12:37 pm

    Aura wrote:Hello, bonjour, I'm Aura and I'll be grading this watery magic of Torrents~

    All notes and requests will be done in this trippin' color.

    Ark wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Torrent God Slayer
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: God Slayer magic is one that is considered lost, and it is right to say so. Torrent God Slayer Magic is based upon the element of water, however tainted with a dark black color and is also considered unholy. The magic itself was made to take down Gods. Ark learned this magic from the God of Torrents himself, a somewhat close friend of his. Being water, it is highly versatile and flowing which allows it to be used in many situations a like and in different ways.

    Then for "increased dramatically" it says that because it doesn't more than melee damage (: it says the user punches the target, but t does more damage cause you know, it's a spell, not a basic melee attack.

    Ark uses this magic in every way he can, whether from offense to defense or even support. However Ark focuses more on the offensive and defensive aspects as he likes to be head on in battle, never on the sidelines. Overall Ark is rather balanced, not focusing on one aspect over the other and tends to make the most out of his magic.
    Strengths:
    •Fire- Water is obviously superior to fire, even ask a little kid about that. What do you put out fires with? Water of course. Because of this Ark's magic does 1 rank higher damage and takes 1 rank lower damage from fire mages equal rank or lower.
    This sounds more like an UA, if you ask me. Secondly, it's breaching the rules; a single spell can not do the next's rank in damage just like that. So you'll have to change this. If you decide to use only one of these, 50% is the max you can go. Just one,
    not both, mind you.

    •Earth- Against Earth Ark's offensive spells deal 50% more damage.

    •Metallic/iron- When water and metals mix, it can cause oxidation. Because if this water offensive attacks are 1 rank higher.
    Same as the first strength; no can do. Similarly as the above, you can go up to 50%, but no more.
    Weaknesses:
    •Allies- Ark's larger scale water attacks are able to hit allies, which isn't a good thing.

    •Lightning- Lightning based offensive attacks deal damage at 1 rank higher.
    This too is a no; you can't have them do more than 50% extra damage.
    •Deserts- Deserts or any other kind of extremely dry places cause Ark's offensive spells to deal 30% less damage
    30% is good, but 50% is more preferable, depending on the choices you make above in your strengths.
    •Wind- Wind mages deal 30% more damage to Ark
    The same as with your Desert weakness; 30% is good, but 50% would be better.
    Lineage: I assume it carries over from my last character so Arm of Destiny
    If it's a new character altogether then you'll have to reroll your lineage.
    Unique Abilities:
    •Blessed with water- Ark can freely manipulate any body of water due to being blessed by the God of Torrents himself. The water does melee damage.

    •Eye of God- Ark's left eye is where most of his godly abilities are. This eye allows him to see what those normally can't. Any invisible or hidden items, high speed movement, farther distances, through fog smoke or other conditions that target the eyesight, even traps. Ark's eye can see through it all. You'll have to put a distance for how much far it can see per rank. Right now the max distances for each rank are 15m/30m/50m/75m/100m etc. Seeing high speed movements will have to be from the user's rank or lower. Also state that it cannot see through illusion spells, otherwise this UA will need a duration and a cooldown.

    •Godly Physique- Ark is still that of a God even though stripped of near all his power. However his body is still enhanced compared to normal mortals. Ark can move 10% faster, has 10% more strength, and 5% Health Regeneration
    I can allow you to go up to 25% for our speed and strength (provided it is physical strength), but you'll have to lose the 5% health regen.

    •Touch of life- Water is popular for having healing properties and so it is shown here with Ark as well, but passively. Ark gains 5% Health Regeneration
    Add that the health regen is every other post.

    Spells:
    D Rank:


    C Rank:

    Signature Spell:



    Hit me up once the changes have been made, or pm me if you have any questions regarding your magic. ^-^

    So here she the problem, is the 50% thing a new rule? I looked at previous Torrent God Slayer magic she and they got accepted with 1 rank instead of just 50% so I feel I should be able to do the same. But by the time you ready this the other changes should be done.

    Also, before posting the user rank sig spell, I confirmed it with admin Izayuki who confirmed it was alright.
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    GFX Re: Torrent God Slayer

    Post by Aura 19th June 2017, 4:34 am

    Changes will be in this trippin' color.

    Ark wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Torrent God Slayer
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: God Slayer magic is one that is considered lost, and it is right to say so. Torrent God Slayer Magic is based upon the element of water, however tainted with a dark black color and is also considered unholy. The magic itself was made to take down Gods. Ark learned this magic from the God of Torrents himself, a somewhat close friend of his. Being water, it is highly versatile and flowing which allows it to be used in many situations a like and in different ways.

    Ark uses this magic in every way he can, whether from offense to defense or even support. However Ark focuses more on the offensive and defensive aspects as he likes to be head on in battle, never on the sidelines. Overall Ark is rather balanced, not focusing on one aspect over the other and tends to make the most out of his magic.
    Strengths:
    •Fire- Water is obviously superior to fire, even ask a little kid about that. What do you put out fires with? Water of course. Because of this Ark takes 50% less damage from fire.

    •Earth- Against Earth Ark's offensive spells deal 50% more damage.

    •Ice- Ark can heat his water to boiling temperatures and even beyond that. Because of this he can easily melt ice magic which causes him to deal 50% more damage.
    This is a no-go; you will either have to change this back to your original strength, or find another strength altogether. Torrent Slayers can manipulate the water, but not their temperature.

    Weaknesses:
    •Allies- Ark's larger scale water attacks are able to hit allies, which isn't a good thing.

    •Lightning- Lightning based offensive attacks deal 50% more damage.

    •Deserts- Deserts or any other kind of extremely dry places cause Ark's offensive spells to deal 50% less damage

    •Wind- Wind mages deal 50% more damage to Ark

    Lineage: Ice Cold
    Lineage:
    Unique Abilities:

    •Blessed with water- Ark can freely manipulate any body of water due to being blessed by the God of Torrents himself. Ark isn't limited to the kind of water he can control, he can also control the temperature of the water to his liking and even the form. Water in a solid (ice), liquid, or even gas. Ark can also freely change the form the water takes by changing the temperature of it. Ark can even control the temperature of his spells. Because of this Ark can reach out and even control Ice. When in a colder area his magic is 50% more effective but only in temperatures below 40 degrees.

    After discussing this with fellow mods, this UA will be a no-go. Torrent Slayer cannot manipulate the water's temperature, only the bodies of water in liquid state. What I can suggest to you is allowing the manipulation of liquid bodies or other liquids that, and having your spells do 25% extra damage when near larger bodies of water.

    •Eye of God- Ark's left eye is where most of his godly abilities are. This eye allows him to see what those normally can't. Any invisible or hidden items, high speed movement, farther distances, through fog smoke or other conditions that target the eyesight, even traps. Ark's eye can see through it all. Range is user rank and can't see through illusion magic. However his eye can see through darkness and his eyesight can't be lessened except for illusion magic.

    •Godly Physique- Ark is still that of a God even though stripped of near all his power. However his body is still enhanced compared to normal mortals. Ark can move 25% faster and does 25% more damage.
    The 25% damage, is this physical (melee) or magical damage, please state this.

    •Touch of life- Water is popular for having healing properties and so it is shown here with Ark as well, but passively. Ark gains 5% Health Regeneration every other post. Ark's healing spells also are 20% more effective.

    Spells:
    D Rank:

    C Rank:

    Lineage Spell:

    Signature Spell:


    _____________________________________________________________________________________




    And be she but Small,
    she is Fierce


    Torrent God Slayer GWsGXSQ

    .:} The Road of Desire |Fire Dragon Slayer | Kenna Terrynhain {:.
    .:} The Nightmare in Your Head | Avide - Combat Pet {:.


    D~4 ||C~4 ||B~2 ||A~ ||S~

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    Ark

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    GFX Re: Torrent God Slayer

    Post by Ark 19th June 2017, 6:28 am

    Not sure if you've read it or not, but this "more damage" is self explainstory. The description says you throw a punch at somebody, which would deal melee damage. But since it is a spell, its does "more damage" than your regular old "simple punch". So it does D rank spell damage as it is a spell and not a simple punch.
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    GFX Re: Torrent God Slayer

    Post by desirée 16th December 2017, 6:43 pm

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