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    Takumi Yoshino
    Guardian of Storms
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    Character Name: Takumi Yoshino
    Primary Magic: God of the Sun
    Secondary Magic: Song of the Heart (Tertiary)

    Lightning Dragon Slayer

    Post by Takumi Yoshino on 19th April 2017, 8:25 am

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Lightning Dragon Slayer[1st Gen]
    Secondary Magic: Vessel of the Gods(WIP)
    Caster or Holder: Caster, Lost
    Description: Dragon Slayer Magic was a magic specifically made to kill dragons. This is a rare magic, one that few people have. Takumi is the the Lightning Dragon Slayer. He has learnt most of what he knows on his own, though the dragon gave him this magic in the form of a lightning bolt, which struck Takumi, filling him with the powers of the lightning dragon himself.

    Takumi uses this magic, along with his necromancy lineage, to overwhelm an opponent with strength and speed generated by the lightning. This magic is powerful, but not very subtle, so Takumi prefers to use it for head-on combat. In a contest of strength this magic would more like than not win. Takumi's Lightning DS magic is different from most, because his lightning is blue rather than the typical gold.
    Strengths:
    -Multiple targeting(dealng damage to multiple enemies at once.
    -+25% damage against water magic, as water is a great conductor of electricity (impure water is anyhow. If it's distilled there is no extra damage done)

    Weaknesses:
    -can be neutralized by any electrical charge of greater power(so any lightning magic of a higher rank)
    -subtlety. this is a very loud and bright magic, so it is only really effective in direct confrontation, it is completely useless at stealth for the most part.
    -defense. most spells of this magic are useless at defending.
    Lineage: Necromancer's Passion, located in The Fallen
    Unique Abilities:
    Lightning Storm
    Lightning Storm creates a temporary lightning storm. This storm lasts for 2 posts. The storm created will have lightning coming down from the clouds, within a range of 15 meters, a couple seconds apart each and at least 2 meters away from each other. The storm does damage, any lightning bolt that hits an enemy does about 50% rank damage.

    Electrical current
    This ua allows Takumi to radiate an electrical current across his body, causing 50% rank damage to anyone who touches him while in this state over two posts. The eletrical current is one of this magic's few forms of defense. This ability can be used as many times per thread as the users desires, though it lasts for 2 posts and has a 4 post cooldown.

    Bioelectric Manipulation
    This ua allows Takumi to manipulate the bioelectrical signals in a person's body and absorb that energy, or to cut it off completely. This ability does have a weakness though: the user's own energy could potentially be absorbed instead and cause paralysis or even death. With Bioelectric Manipulation a user can essentially control the movements of another, and sense their presence by their Bioelectricity. When Takumi absorbs a person's bioelectricity, it gives him an additional boost of about 10% to both speed and power.

    Flash Step
    This ua gives Takumi a passive speed bonus of 20%, though he shoots off sparks of blue lightning while using this ability. It is the telltale way to see he's using this ability.

    Tech Control
    This Ua gives Takumi the ability to control technology, essentially anything that runs on electricity. This cannot be used offensively, but it can be used to open locks guarded by a password, or short circuit a lighting system, etc.

    Spells:

    D rank spells, purchased and lineage:

    Name: Necromancy Summon: Perthro The Empty Cup
    Rank: D
    Type: Necromancy Summon
    Duration: 3 posts
    Cooldown: 5 posts
    Description: Perthro is and undead summon that Takumi gained from his ancestry. This undead creature must be summoned only as a "hail mary" of sorts. Perthro is special, he can only be summoned by those who choose a life of pain and struggle over safety and security. Perthro, when summoned, appears as a regular skeleton, though a black one holding a sword as dark as night(made of obsidian). Perthro has about half the hp of the user, and dissappears after his hp have been reduced to 0 or the three post limit has been used up. When he is summoned, a bolt of lightning strikes the ground and a rune appears, followed by Perthro himself. Perthro has one main attack, in which electricity envelops his sword and a single bolt shots from it to target the enemy. The range of his active is about 10 meters, and does 50% rank damage.

    His passive ability gives him 25% resistance to all spells the same element as him (lightning,undead/death) of the same rank, higher ranks do full damage.
    Strengths:
    -gives the user a new ally to watch their back for awhile
    -countering other lightning/death magic, thanks to his passive
    Weaknesses:
    -Perthro can be neutralized by any spell using lightning of one rank higher than the user
    -uneven ground, he dosent do well on uneven ground. One wrong move and he could literally fall apart.
    -holy things. As the undead, Perthro is as unholy as you can get, so he cannot come into contact with items such as crosses or holy water.

    Name: Electrical Field
    Rank: D
    Type: lightning, offensive, DoT
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Description: This spell creates and electrical field over a range of 15 meters around the caster. the electrical field does 50% rank damage instantly, with an additional 50% over the following 3 posts of having been in contact with the field.
    Strengths:
    -especially effective against water mages/creatures
    -makes it harder for an enemy to get close
    Weaknesses:
    -can backfire and cause damage to the user as well(up to 50% rank damage)
    -is a powerful offensive spell, but can be neutralized by stronger lightning magic
    -is useless against any non-conductors

    Base D rank spells:


    Name: Lightning Whip
    Rank: D
    Type: Lightning, offensive
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Description:
    A whip made of lightning appears in the user's hand, enabling them to use it like a weapon rather than just a normal burst of lightning energy. This is useful for if the user wishes to strike enemies from close but not point-blank range. Is about 15 feels long.
    Strengths:
    --medium range attack
    Weaknesses:
    - useless against earth magic
    -other lightning magic
    -will do damage to user as well if they user has below 30 Mp


    Name: The Cruel Blossom
    Rank: D
    Type: Lightning, offensive
    Duration: instant
    Cooldown: 2 posts
    Description: This spell creates a huge blossom of lightning energy, which then explodes and deals damage to everyone within a 15 meter radius. The blossom itself is about 3 feet in diameter. Those in the epicenter receive full rank damage, while  those outside of the epicenter receive 75% rank damage
    Strengths:
    -doing damage to multiple targets.(as many as are in range, up to 10)

    Weaknesses:
    -Highly destructive(can destroy the terrain)
    -does damage to any allies within range(the same amount as any enemy would receive) as well as 25% rank damage to the user themself

    Name: Bright Dragon Binding
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive, Lightning
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 5 posts
    Description: This spell creates chains of lightning around a target, that do not restrict movement in any way but do full rank damage over the course of two posts, while also draining 5% mp as well as the starting cost of 5% mp(to the user) over those two posts.
    Strengths:
    -Dealing damage over time
    Weaknesses:
    -drains a full 10% mp, so a large cost to the user.
    -Has a long cooldown.

    Name: Lightning Aura
    Rank: D
    Type: passive, lightning
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 5 posts
    Description: An aura of blue lightning energy surrounds the user, healing them of D rank damage over the course of two posts(50% per post). This spell is one of the few passive abilities of this magic
    Strengths:
    -heals the user over 2 posts rather than one, so if they take damage during these two posts it can be reversed, leaving the user no worse off than before.
    Weaknesses:
    -can only heal the more minor damage, so nothing much bigger than a cut
    -Has a long cooldown



    C rank Spells:


    Name: Chidori Spear
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive, Lightning
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: This spell summons a concentrated burst of raw lightning energy into the user's hand, which they then hit an enemy with for devastating damage to a small target area. This can cause major damage, especially if it hits a major organ, it could even potentially stop the target's heart with its high voltage (2 ranks below, and only if the heart is hit directly) This has a limited range of 20 meters, and when thrown looks like a spear made of lightning, hence the spear part of the spell name.
    Strengths:
    -Dealing large amounts of damage to a concentrated area
    Weaknesses:
    -Limited range
    -Has a large cooldown for an instant spell


    Name: Chidori Field
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive, lightning
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Description:
    This is a blast of lightning, spreading out in all directions, with a radius of 10 meters. This does C rank damage to any within range, with 360° coverage around the user. However, it damages everything in range, ally or enemy.
    Strengths:
    -Dealing damage to multiple targets
    Weaknesses:
    -does not distinguish between allies and enemies, hits everyone in range.
    -more powerful lightning magic.
    -earth magic

    Name: Summoning: Wist
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description:
    Wist the shapeshifter was once Takumi's constant companion, both friend and pet, in a way, though more so servant. Now, his bond with Takumi had reached new heights where Takumi's magic can summon him to his side, for brief periods of time.

    His only ability is that of shape changing, and while in animal forms does full damage of a C rank summon, in human form he does no damage unless given a weapon by Takumi.
    Strengths:
    -Versatility, his shape changing ability allows for many different strategies
    -Is a very clever summon, and thanks to his powers is hard to trap
    Weaknesses:
    -Doesn't do much damage
    -Can only do damage as an animal
    -Earth magic returns him to where he was before he was summoned instantly


    C rank, special:



    Name: Necromancy Summon: Argentum The Silver Bullet
    Rank: C
    Type: offensive, lightning
    Duration: 3 posts
    Cooldown: 5 posts
    Description: This spell summons an undead warrior known as Argentum. As with Perthro, a bolt of lightning strikes the ground and is followed by the undead warrior being summoned, though no rune appears. Argentum means silver, and Argentum was named this for a good reason: the undead is a silver skeleton. Argentum has a passive speed boost, of 15%. Argentum has half the Hp of the user. Argentum dissapears after 3 posts have gone by or his Hp have been reduced to 0. His active ability is the same as Perthro's: lightning shoots from his sword to deal damage to a single target (50% rank damage)

    Strengths:
    -Summons a powerful ally for the user to fight alongside.
    Weaknesses:
    -as with Perthro, if he stumbles on uneven ground he will fall apart.
    -higher ranked lightning magic cancels his out.
    -earth magic

    Name: Aura of the Lightning Dragon
    Rank: C (signature)
    Type: Lightning, Passive
    Duration: instant
    Cooldown: none
    Description: An aura shaped like a dragon forms around the user, giving them increased speed (20%) This aura stays around the user until the post is over.
    Strengths:
    -gives the user an incredible boost
    Weaknesses:
    -has a limited amount of times it can be used before the boost decreases(5 times, boost decreases by 5% for every time used after this)
    - speed is voided against earth mages

    Name: Lightning Aura of Power
    Rank: D (signature)
    Type: Lightning, Passive
    Duration: instant
    Cooldown: none
    Description: An aura shaped like a dragon forms around the user, giving them increased damage (15%) This aura stays around the user until the post is over.
    Strengths:
    -gives the user an incredible boost
    Weaknesses:
    -has a limited amount of times it can be used before the boost decreases(4 times, boost decreases by 5% for every time used after this)
    -strength is instantly voided if up against an earth mage


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    Re: Lightning Dragon Slayer

    Post by Takumi Yoshino on 19th April 2017, 8:26 am

    B Rank Spells


    Base B rank spells:
    Name: Lightning Blade
    Rank: B
    Type: offensive, lightning
    Duration: instant
    Cooldown: 5 posts
    Description: This spell summons a concentrated burst of raw lightning energy into the user's hand, which they then hit an enemy with for devastating damage to a small target area. This can cause major damage, especially if it hits a major organ, it could even potentially stop the target's heart. It has no range, as it is used for hand to hand style combat. The large amounts of damage is doing about B rank damage +20% extra if an additional 5 MP is spent.
    Strengths:
    -Dealing large amounts of damage to a concentrated area
    Weaknesses:
    -requires the user to be able to touch the target.
    -Has a large cooldown for an instant spell



    Name: Lightning Dragon's Roar
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive, lightning
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 5 posts
    Description:
    This is a huge explosion of lightning energy directed at a single target, doing large amounts of damage(deals full rank damage + 5% for every additional 2 MP the user spends, up to 20%), but with a large cost of mp to the user(regular cost plus an additional percent for every additional 5% damage the enemy receives). This spell has a range of 35 meters, and moves at a speed of 30m/s
    Strengths:
    -Dealing large amounts of damage to a single target
    Weaknesses:
    -will destroy the terrain all around
    -more powerful lightning magic.
    -earth magic


    Name: Summoning Cry Of the Lightning Dragon
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive, lightning, summoning
    Duration: 3 posts
    Cooldown: 5 posts
    Description: This spell summons a young dragon about equal in power to the user, but with normal B rank summon HP, to fight alongside them until either the dragon runs out of HP or 3 posts passes. The young dragon will be about 10 meters long. This summon has no active abilities, only passive.

    The first passive ability of this summon is the ability to telepathically speak with its Master at any range out of combat, in combat however the range is limited to 35 meters.

    The second passive ability of this summon is that of flight, able to carry it's master on its back, though of course this ability cannot in fact do anything to harm a person in combat.


    Strengths:
    -Summons a powerful ally for the user to fight alongside.
    Weaknesses:
    -Though the dragon is powerful it automatically retreats when facing against earth magic, one of its weaknesses
    -Earth magic
    -Has a soft spot just below the chin

    Lineage and purchased spells:
    Necromancy Summon: Thierry Frost
    Rank: B
    Type: Summoning
    Duration: 4 posts
    Cooldown: 6 posts
    Description: Thierry Frost was once one of Takumi's adoptive fathers, until his untimely death. Now his spirit serves Takumi in death, his final way of protecting the boy who became like his son. Thierry was a healer, not a fighter, and thus this spirit serves only to heal and support Takumi, not to fight.

    The active ability he possesses is a simple healing spell, healing a full rank of damage (user ranked) which when used instantly returns Thierry to the realm of the dead. This is his only ability, which has a cooldown of 6 posts.

    Strengths:
    -Summons a powerful ally for support.
    Weaknesses:
    -holy elemental magic, it instantly returns him to the realm of the dead
    -earth magic, as with all of Takumis summons


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    Re: Lightning Dragon Slayer

    Post by Salrynn on 20th April 2017, 10:55 am

    Please, tell me what you changed and added before I begin, otherwise I will be regrading everything from scratch x)


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    Re: Lightning Dragon Slayer

    Post by Takumi Yoshino on 21st April 2017, 7:47 am

    all D rank spells as well as signatures and c rank lineage spells were untouched, as were all ua's besides the last one.


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    Re: Lightning Dragon Slayer

    Post by Salrynn on 22nd April 2017, 12:17 pm

    Since I remembered about a rule, I will be regrading all of your magic, I forgot that I can pull/regrade magic when bragging is involved, which can make me pull out the nerf guns.

    Anything in this colour will need to be looked at from you, the user x)

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    Primary Magic: Lightning Dragon Slayer[1st Gen]
    Secondary Magic: Vessel of the Gods(WIP)
    Caster or Holder: Caster, Lost
    Description: Dragon Slayer Magic was a magic specifically made to kill dragons. This is a rare magic, one that few people have. Takumi is the the Lightning Dragon Slayer. He has learnt most of what he knows on his own, though the dragon gave him this magic in the form of a lightning bolt, which struck Takumi, filling him with the powers of the lightning dragon himself.

    Takumi uses this magic, along with his necromancy lineage, to overwhelm an opponent with strength and speed generated by the lightning. This magic is powerful, but not very subtle, so Takumi prefers to use it for head-on combat. In a contest of strength this magic would more like than not win. Takumi's Lightning DS magic is different from most, because his lightning is blue rather than the typical gold.
    Strengths:
    -Multiple targeting(dealng damage to multiple enemies at once.
    -+25% damage against water magic, as water is a great conductor of electricity (impure water is anyhow. If it's distilled there is no extra damage done)

    Weaknesses:
    -can be neutralized by any electrical charge of greater power(so any lightning magic of a higher rank)
    -subtlety. this is a very loud and bright magic, so it is only really effective in direct confrontation, it is completely useless at stealth for the most part.
    -defense. most spells of this magic are useless at defending.
    Lineage: Necromancer's Passion, located in The Fallen
    Unique Abilities:
    Lightning Storm
    Lightning Storm creates a temporary lightning storm. This storm lasts for 2 posts. The storm created will have lightning coming down from the clouds, within a range of 15 meters, a couple seconds apart each and at least 2 meters away from each other. The storm does damage, any lightning bolt that hits an enemy does about 50% rank damage.

    Sorry but, we don't even use seconds here. We will also need a specific number of lightning bolts that come out of this storm, I suggest 1 lightning bolt each post until the storm stops, I would also like a 'solid' %, not 'about'.

    I also say this sounds more like a spell than anything, So I would like this to be moved into a spell slot and this UA changed into something else.


    Electrical current
    This ua allows Takumi to radiate an electrical current across his body, causing 50% rank damage to anyone who touches him while in this state over two posts. The eletrical current is one of this magic's few forms of defense. This ability can be used as many times per thread as the users desires, though it lasts for 2 posts and has a 4 post cooldown.

    AS MANY TIMES?! DUDE! NO! 3 times >:T not as many as you want >:T and not 'over 2 posts' just '2 posts'

    Bioelectric Manipulation
    This ua allows Takumi to manipulate the bioelectrical signals in a person's body and absorb that energy, or to cut it off completely. This ability does have a weakness though: the user's own energy could potentially be absorbed instead and cause paralysis or even death. With Bioelectric Manipulation a user can essentially control the movements of another, and sense their presence by their Bioelectricity. When Takumi absorbs a person's bioelectricity, it gives him an additional boost of about 10% to both speed and power.

    For 2 posts, cd 4 posts

    Flash Step
    This ua gives Takumi a passive speed bonus of 20%, though he shoots off sparks of blue lightning while using this ability. It is the telltale way to see he's using this ability.

    You already get a buff to speed and power from being a DS and from your UA up above, so I want this changed

    Tech Control
    This Ua gives Takumi the ability to control technology, essentially anything that runs on electricity. This cannot be used offensively, but it can be used to open locks guarded by a password, or short circuit a lighting system, etc.

    Spells:

    D rank spells, purchased and lineage:

    Name: Necromancy Summon: Perthro The Empty Cup
    Rank: D
    Type: Necromancy Summon
    Duration: 3 posts
    Cooldown: 5 posts
    Description: Perthro is and undead summon that Takumi gained from his ancestry. This undead creature must be summoned only as a "hail mary" of sorts. Perthro is special, he can only be summoned by those who choose a life of pain and struggle over safety and security. Perthro, when summoned, appears as a regular skeleton, though a black one holding a sword as dark as night(made of obsidian). Perthro has about half the hp of the user, and dissappears after his hp have been reduced to 0 or the three post limit has been used up. When he is summoned, a bolt of lightning strikes the ground and a rune appears, followed by Perthro himself. Perthro has one main attack, in which electricity envelops his sword and a single bolt shots from it to target the enemy. The range of his active is about 10 meters, and does 50% rank damage.

    His passive ability gives him 25% resistance to all spells the same element as him (lightning,undead/death) of the same rank, higher ranks do full damage.


    Pathero cannot have half the HP that the user has because the rules state that D ranked summons can only have 50HP and not half the HP a B rank has. I also hope you know that normal summon damage is 5HP and not 50% damage of your rank, which I would also like changed.

    The bolt that needs to be 15m range with a speed of 7.5m


    Strengths:
    -gives the user a new ally to watch their back for awhile
    -countering other lightning/death magic, thanks to his passive
    Weaknesses:
    -Perthro can be neutralized by any spell using lightning of one rank higher than the user
    -uneven ground, he dosent do well on uneven ground. One wrong move and he could literally fall apart.
    -holy things. As the undead, Perthro is as unholy as you can get, so he cannot come into contact with items such as crosses or holy water.

    Name: Electrical Field
    Rank: D
    Type: lightning, offensive, DoT
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Description: This spell creates and electrical field over a range of 15 meters around the caster. the electrical field does 50% rank damage instantly, with an additional 50% over the following 3 posts of having been in contact with the field.

    Please change the following three posts into two posts instead, as that is the spell duration x)

    Strengths:
    -especially effective against water mages/creatures
    -makes it harder for an enemy to get close
    Weaknesses:
    -can backfire and cause damage to the user as well(up to 50% rank damage)
    -is a powerful offensive spell, but can be neutralized by stronger lightning magic
    -is useless against any non-conductors

    Base D rank spells:


    Name: Lightning Whip
    Rank: D
    Type: Lightning, offensive
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Description:
    A whip made of lightning appears in the user's hand, enabling them to use it like a weapon rather than just a normal burst of lightning energy. This is useful for if the user wishes to strike enemies from close but not point-blank range. Is about 15 feels long.
    Strengths:
    --medium range attack
    Weaknesses:
    - useless against earth magic
    -other lightning magic I would like an explanation on how this is weak to other lightning magic when you're a thunder slayer x)
    -will do damage to user as well if they user has below 30 Mp


    Name: The Cruel Blossom
    Rank: D
    Type: Lightning, offensive
    Duration: instant
    Cooldown: 2 posts
    Description: This spell creates a huge blossom of lightning energy, which then explodes and deals damage to everyone within a 15 meter radius. The blossom itself is about 3 feet in diameter. Those in the epicenter receive full rank damage, while  those outside of the epicenter receive 75% rank damage
    Strengths:
    -doing damage to multiple targets.(as many as are in range, up to 10)

    Weaknesses:
    -Highly destructive(can destroy the terrain)
    -does damage to any allies within range(the same amount as any enemy would receive) as well as 25% rank damage to the user themself

    Name: Bright Dragon Binding
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive, Lightning
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 5 posts
    Description: This spell creates chains of lightning around a target, that do not restrict movement in any way but do full rank damage over the course of two posts, while also draining 5% mp as well as the starting cost of 5% mp(to the user) over those two posts.
    Strengths:
    -Dealing damage over time
    Weaknesses:
    -drains a full 10% mp, so a large cost to the user.
    -Has a long cooldown.

    Name: Lightning Aura
    Rank: D
    Type: passive, lightning
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 5 posts
    Description: An aura of blue lightning energy surrounds the user, healing them of D rank damage over the course of two posts(50% per post). This spell is one of the few passive abilities of this magic
    Strengths:
    -heals the user over 2 posts rather than one, so if they take damage during these two posts it can be reversed, leaving the user no worse off than before.
    Weaknesses:
    -can only heal the more minor damage, so nothing much bigger than a cut
    -Has a long cooldown



    C rank Spells:


    Name: Chidori Spear
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive, Lightning
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description: This spell summons a concentrated burst of raw lightning energy into the user's hand, which they then hit an enemy with for devastating damage to a small target area. This can cause major damage, especially if it hits a major organ, it could even potentially stop the target's heart with its high voltage (2 ranks below, and only if the heart is hit directly) This has a limited range of 20 meters, and when thrown looks like a spear made of lightning, hence the spear part of the spell name.

    Please remember that it's a C rank spell. So "(2 ranks below, and only if the heart is hit directly)" wouldn't apply here x)

    Please also remember that it can only deal C ranked damage and not 'major damage' x)
    Considering this isn't even a charge up spell.


    Strengths:
    -Dealing large amounts of damage to a concentrated area This isn't a charge-up spell so I would like to see this changed x)
    Weaknesses:
    -Limited range
    -Has a large cooldown for an instant spell Since this isn't a charge-up spell, I don't want this as a weakness


    Name: Chidori Field
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive, lightning
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 3 posts
    Description:
    This is a blast of lightning, spreading out in all directions, with a radius of 10 meters. This does C rank damage to any within range, with 360° coverage around the user. However, it damages everything in range, ally or enemy.
    Strengths:
    -Dealing damage to multiple targets
    Weaknesses:
    -does not distinguish between allies and enemies, hits everyone in range.
    -more powerful lightning magic.
    -earth magic Can you define how this is a weakness? x)

    Name: Summoning: Wist
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 4 posts
    Description:
    Wist the shapeshifter was once Takumi's constant companion, both friend and pet, in a way, though more so servant. Now, his bond with Takumi had reached new heights where Takumi's magic can summon him to his side, for brief periods of time.

    His only ability is that of shape changing, and while in animal forms does full damage of a C rank summon, in human form he does no damage unless given a weapon by Takumi.

    This needs to comply with Summon rules, I hope you understand x) This means it needs a passive, active and needs to deal normal summon damage, if you need more information, please check the summon rules x)

    Strengths:
    -Versatility, his shape changing ability allows for many different strategies
    -Is a very clever summon, and thanks to his powers is hard to trap
    Weaknesses:
    -Doesn't do much damage
    -Can only do damage as an animal
    -Earth magic returns him to where he was before he was summoned instantly


    C rank, special:



    Name: Necromancy Summon: Argentum The Silver Bullet
    Rank: C
    Type: offensive, lightning
    Duration: 3 posts
    Cooldown: 5 posts
    Description: This spell summons an undead warrior known as Argentum. As with Perthro, a bolt of lightning strikes the ground and is followed by the undead warrior being summoned, though no rune appears. Argentum means silver, and Argentum was named this for a good reason: the undead is a silver skeleton. Argentum has a passive speed boost, of 15%. Argentum has half the Hp of the user. Argentum dissapears after 3 posts have gone by or his Hp have been reduced to 0. His active ability is the same as Perthro's: lightning shoots from his sword to deal damage to a single target (50% rank damage)

    This needs to comply with Summon rules, I hope you understand x) This means it needs a passive, active and needs to deal normal summon damage, if you need more information, please check the summon rules x)

    Strengths:
    -Summons a powerful ally for the user to fight alongside.
    Weaknesses:
    -as with Perthro, if he stumbles on uneven ground he will fall apart.
    -higher ranked lightning magic cancels his out.
    -earth magic Define how, pl0x

    Name: Aura of the Lightning Dragon
    Rank: C (signature)
    Type: Lightning, Passive
    Duration: instant
    Cooldown: none
    Description: An aura shaped like a dragon forms around the user, giving them increased speed (20%) This aura stays around the user until the post is over.

    How many speed buffs do you want?? ;-; c-can you change this please??
    Strengths:
    -gives the user an incredible boost
    Weaknesses:
    -has a limited amount of times it can be used before the boost decreases(5 times, boost decreases by 5% for every time used after this)
    - speed is voided against earth mages

    Name: Lightning Aura of Power
    Rank: D (signature)
    Type: Lightning, Passive
    Duration: instant
    Cooldown: none
    Description: An aura shaped like a dragon forms around the user, giving them increased damage (15%) This aura stays around the user until the post is over.
    Strengths:
    -gives the user an incredible boost
    Weaknesses:
    -has a limited amount of times it can be used before the boost decreases(4 times, boost decreases by 5% for every time used after this)
    -strength is instantly voided if up against an earth mage

    Takumi Yoshino wrote:
    B Rank Spells


    Base B rank spells:
    Name: Lightning Blade
    Rank: B
    Type: offensive, lightning
    Duration: instant
    Cooldown: 5 posts
    Description: This spell summons a concentrated burst of raw lightning energy into the user's hand, which they then hit an enemy with for devastating damage to a small target area. This can cause major damage, especially if it hits a major organ, it could even potentially stop the target's heart. It has no range, as it is used for hand to hand style combat. The large amounts of damage is doing about B rank damage +20% extra if an additional 5 MP is spent.

    Please remember that it can only deal B ranked damage and not major damage as it isn't a charge spell

    Strengths:
    -Dealing large amounts of damage to a concentrated area
    Weaknesses:
    -requires the user to be able to touch the target.
    -Has a large cooldown for an instant spell Please remember that it isn't a charge spell, I would like this changed x)



    Name: Lightning Dragon's Roar
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive, lightning
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 5 posts
    Description:
    This is a huge explosion of lightning energy directed at a single target, doing large amounts of damage(deals full rank damage + 5% for every additional 2 MP the user spends, up to 20%), but with a large cost of mp to the user(regular cost plus an additional percent for every additional 5% damage the enemy receives). This spell has a range of 35 meters, and moves at a speed of 30m/s

    I don't want you spending mana to make this spell much stronger x) I also don't want the speed to be 30 m/s, im just gonna cut to the chase, the speed needs to be half of 35m x)


    Strengths:
    -Dealing large amounts of damage to a single target
    Weaknesses:
    -will destroy the terrain all around
    -more powerful lightning magic.
    -earth magic


    Name: Summoning Cry Of the Lightning Dragon
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive, lightning, summoning
    Duration: 3 posts
    Cooldown: 5 posts
    Description: This spell summons a young dragon about equal in power to the user, but with normal B rank summon HP, to fight alongside them until either the dragon runs out of HP or 3 posts passes. The young dragon will be about 10 meters long. This summon has no active abilities, only passive.

    The first passive ability of this summon is the ability to telepathically speak with its Master at any range out of combat, in combat however the range is limited to 35 meters.

    The second passive ability of this summon is that of flight, able to carry it's master on its back, though of course this ability cannot in fact do anything to harm a person in combat.

    This needs to comply with Summon rules, I hope you understand x) This means it needs ONE passive, ONE active and needs to deal normal summon damage, if you need more information, please check the summon rules x)

    Strengths:
    -Summons a powerful ally for the user to fight alongside.
    Weaknesses:
    -Though the dragon is powerful it automatically retreats when facing against earth magic, one of its weaknesses
    -Earth magic
    -Has a soft spot just below the chin

    Lineage and purchased spells:
    Necromancy Summon: Thierry Frost
    Rank: B
    Type: Summoning
    Duration: 4 posts
    Cooldown: 6 posts
    Description: Thierry Frost was once one of Takumi's adoptive fathers, until his untimely death. Now his spirit serves Takumi in death, his final way of protecting the boy who became like his son. Thierry was a healer, not a fighter, and thus this spirit serves only to heal and support Takumi, not to fight.

    The active ability he possesses is a simple healing spell, healing a full rank of damage (user ranked) which when used instantly returns Thierry to the realm of the dead. This is his only ability, which has a cooldown of 6 posts.

    This needs to comply with Summon rules, I hope you understand x) This means it needs ONE passive AND ONE active, if you need more information, please check the summon rules x)

    Strengths:
    -Summons a powerful ally for support.
    Weaknesses:
    -holy elemental magic, it instantly returns him to the realm of the dead
    -earth magic, as with all of Takumis summons

    All done!!! Smile If you have any questions, leme know through this thread OOOOR by PM Smile thanks!


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