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    The Knight

    Post by Guest on 20th December 2016, 4:27 pm

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    Primary Magic: The Knight
    Secondary Magic: Pict Magic[Not available yet]
    Caster or Holder: Holder Type
    Description: This Magic allows the users to store weapons and armors in pocket dimensions and summon them during battle. This gives the users a high level of offense, defense, flexibility and variety in combat, regarding the type of the armor and/or weapon they Requip. This type of Requip also gives the users the ability to use, and gain resistance to, natural elements through the use of certain armors.

    After increasing mastery over this Magic, the users is able to combine different weapons and armors from different known sets. For example, when battling monsters that utilize water as their primary means for offense, the users can Requip into Sea Empress Armor, while, at the same time, Requiping the staff from the Lightning Empress Armor, increasing their defense against water and increasing the effectiveness of their attacks by making use of electricity's natural conductivity through water.

    Strengths: •This gives the users a high level of ability regarding the type of the armor and/or weapon they Requip.
    •Spell Armour will absorb the full amount of damage before it gets directed to the player

    Weaknesses: •There’s a limit to how much the pocket dimension can store.
    •The armour affects what attackts your week too. EX: Lightning armour is week to earth attacks.
    •(I need an idea for this one, Ilooked at the hp magic and damage rules, but couldnt pinpoint a weakness or an idea.)

    Lineage: Time Keeper’s Curse

    Unique Abilities: The users can also once per thread, completely stop time for 1 post to avoid an attack or something from opponets of equal or lower rank. They cannot affect anything while time is stopped at all and after use they will cannot use spells for 3 posts and they cannot use the speeding up or slowing down time ability of this lineage.

    Spells:

    Armor (Not Valid as of yet)

    Name: Clock Work
    Rank: D
    Type: Lost Magic
    Duration:1 post duration
    Cooldown:5 posts
    Description: The Time Keeper is able to slow down or speed up time. Time speeding or time slowing share a 1 post duration and a cooldown of 5 posts. The users can use their ability to only affect themselves. They can speed up their melee attacks to cause them to deal 50% more damage or slow their attacks down to dodge potential threats.

    Strengths:
    Slowing down time makes the users appear faster, being the equivalent of a 100% speed and reaction boost.

    Weaknesses:
    Speed up time makes the users appear slower by 100% and very slow to react.

    Name: Temporal Looming
    Rank: D
    Type: Lost Magic
    Duration: 1
    Cooldown: 4
    Description: User can trap anyone or anything into reiterating time stream where everything inside the loop is restarted precisely every so often, possibly even backwards. They may be able to force someone to relive the same minute, hour, day, year, etc. for as long as user keeps them there. On some occasions people have been know to retain a small amount of memories or eventually escape weaker temporal loops. You may use this ability in PvE, or with OOC permission from PCs. In PvP, the opponent can only be effected if they are of equal or lower rank.

    Strengths:
    •Memory Erasure
    •Physical Restoration: The user can repair and return any broken or damaged non-living object to its optimal state no matter how long it has been broken or how damaged it was.
    •Temporal Trapping: The user can send and trap anyone in another time. And bring them back.

    Weaknesses:
    •Limited on how many times a user can use it. (Any suggestions?)
    •User may be affected by memory reset each time power is activated.
    •Others may eventually feel déjà vu.
    •Won't affect users of Temporal Protection or Spatial-Temporal Lock.

    Name: Infinate Sphere
    Rank: D
    Type: Lost Magic
    Duration: 1
    Cooldown: 2
    Description: The user hits their target in the stomach with an orb, which is then vastly multiplied, striking the target multiple times from every angle. The damage at a maximum is 20HP. If your orb multiplies, the damage is split in half. All orbs that hit at 'every angle' will deal a total of 20HP, no more.

    Strengths:
    •Multiple hits to target.

    Weaknesses:
    •Takes time to create.
    •Leaves you open to attack.

    Name: Restore
    Rank: D
    Type: Lost Magic
    Duration: 1
    Cooldown: 2
    Description: The user restores inorganic items back to the state they were in before they took damage. This spell seems to be controlled through the user's left eye.

    Strengths:
    •The user can restore an item prom a piece if they knew what the item was.

    Weaknesses:
    •Damages the user’s eye for 2 posts.
    •Takes time.


    List of Spell Fusions:(Locked until B rank)(List your Spell Fusions here, name them, category them, have them make sense, and most importantly make them shiny!)
    Name Mix Armor/Wepon Requip
    Rank: A
    Type: Depends on Armor/Wepon
    Fused SpellsArmor and Wepons


    Last edited by SavannahРоманов on 23rd December 2016, 5:40 pm; edited 2 times in total
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    Re: The Knight

    Post by Izayuki on 21st December 2016, 1:22 pm

    Hi there, Savannah! I'm Izayuki; the mod who will be grading your magic. You seem to have a good concept here, but I am afraid that you do not quite understand the ropes of Magic Creation. I added some comments to your magic in this lovely color in the quote in the spoiler below.
    However, I encourage you to read through The Magic Rules here before editing your magic, so you know what to do. You may also glance at some other approved magic for a general idea of how to structure yours.

    Once you have read the magic rules and edited your magic accordingly, please bump this thread so I may return to look. (: Thanks!


    Spoiler:
    SavannahРоманов wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: The Knight
    Secondary Magic: Pict Magic[Not available yet]
    Caster or Holder: Holder Type
    Description: This Magic allows the users to store weapons and armors in pocket dimensions and summon them during battle. This gives the users a high level of offense, defense, flexibility and variety in combat, regarding the type of the armor and/or weapon they Requip. This type of Requip also gives the users the ability to use, and gain resistance to, natural elements through the use of certain armors.

    After increasing mastery over this Magic, the users is able to combine different weapons and armors from different known sets. For example, when battling monsters that utilize water as their primary means for offense, the users can Requip into Sea Empress Armor, while, at the same time, Requiping the staff from the Lightning Empress Armor, increasing their defense against water and increasing the effectiveness of their attacks by making use of electricity's natural conductivity through water.

    Strengths: •This gives the users a high level of offense, defense, flexibility and variety in combat, regarding the type of the armor and/or weapon they Requip.

    Weaknesses: •There’s a limit to how much the pocket dimension can store. You need one more weakness than you have strengths. So if you have one strength? Two weaknesses. Three strengths? Four weaknesses. Etc.

    Lineage: Time Keeper’s Curse

    Unique Abilities: The users can also once per thread, completely stop time for 1 post to avoid an attack or something from opponents of equal or lower rank. They cannot affect anything while time is stopped at all and after use they will cannot use spells for 3 posts and they cannot use the speeding up or slowing down time ability of this lineage.The users once per thread, can stop time completely for 1 post but cannot affect anything and only can move at this time. After stopping time completely the users cannot use spells for 3 posts due to the stress placed on their bodies due to stopping time completely. In addition, they cannot use the speeding up or slowing down time ability of this ability while they cannot use spells. Note that by 'stopping time', you cannot freeze any other players in time, except for 1 post, and only if they are of equal or lower rank.

    You realize that you can have 3 Unique Abilities at D-rank, correct?

    Spells:

    Armor

    Name: Clock Work
    Rank: C
    Type: Lost Magic
    Duration:1 post duration
    Cooldown:5 posts
    Description: The Time Keeper is able to slow down or speed up time. Time speeding or time slowing share a 1 post duration and a cooldown of 5 posts. The users can use their ability to only affect themselves. They can speed up their melee attacks to cause them to deal 50% more damage or slow their attacks down to dodge potential threats. This is your Lineage Ability, if I recall correctly. Might I suggest reading the magic rules and creating your own spells based off of your magic? You may have up to four at D rank.

    Strengths:
    Slowing down time makes the users appear faster, being the equivalent of a 100% speed and reaction boost.

    Weaknesses:
    Speed up time makes the users appear slower by 100% and very slow to react.


    List of Spell Fusions:(Locked until B rank)(List your Spell Fusions here, name them, category them, have them make sense, and most importantly make them shiny!)
    Name Mix Armor/Wepon Requip
    Rank: A
    Type: Depends on Armor/Wepon
    Fused SpellsArmor and Wepons


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    Re: The Knight

    Post by Guest on 21st December 2016, 2:45 pm

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    Re: The Knight

    Post by Izayuki on 23rd December 2016, 2:31 pm

    Nice job so far! There are a few more corrections needed in this color. Please edit and bump! (:

    Spoiler:
    SavannahРоманов wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: The Knight
    Secondary Magic: Pict Magic[Not available yet]
    Caster or Holder: Holder Type
    Description: This Magic allows the users to store weapons and armors in pocket dimensions and summon them during battle. This gives the users a high level of offense, defense, flexibility and variety in combat, regarding the type of the armor and/or weapon they Requip. This type of Requip also gives the users the ability to use, and gain resistance to, natural elements through the use of certain armors.

    After increasing mastery over this Magic, the users is able to combine different weapons and armors from different known sets. For example, when battling monsters that utilize water as their primary means for offense, the users can Requip into Sea Empress Armor, while, at the same time, Requiping the staff from the Lightning Empress Armor, increasing their defense against water and increasing the effectiveness of their attacks by making use of electricity's natural conductivity through water.

    Strengths: •This gives the users a high level of ability regarding the type of the armor and/or weapon they Requip.
    •Spell Armour will absorb the full amount of damage before it gets directed to the player

    Weaknesses: •There’s a limit to how much the pocket dimension can store.
    •The armour affects what attackts your week too. EX: Lightning armour is week to earth attacks.
    •(I need an idea for this one, Ilooked at the hp magic and damage rules, but couldnt pinpoint a weakness or an idea.)

    Lineage: Time Keeper’s Curse

    Unique Abilities: The users can also once per thread, completely stop time for 1 post to avoid an attack or something from opponets of equal or lower rank. They cannot affect anything while time is stopped at all and after use they will cannot use spells for 3 posts and they cannot use the speeding up or slowing down time ability of this lineage.

    Spells:

    Armor Please note that none of this 'armor' is valid until you have received approval from a moderator.

    Name: Clock Work
    Rank: D
    Type: Lost Magic
    Duration:1 post duration
    Cooldown:5 posts
    Description: The Time Keeper is able to slow down or speed up time. Time speeding or time slowing share a 1 post duration and a cooldown of 5 posts. The users can use their ability to only affect themselves. They can speed up their melee attacks to cause them to deal 50% more damage or slow their attacks down to dodge potential threats.

    Strengths:
    Slowing down time makes the users appear faster, being the equivalent of a 100% speed and reaction boost.

    Weaknesses:
    Speed up time makes the users appear slower by 100% and very slow to react.

    Name: Temporal Looming
    Rank: D
    Type: Lost Magic
    Duration: 3
    Cooldown: 4
    Description: User can trap anyone or anything into reiterating time stream where everything inside the loop is restarted precisely every so often, possibly even backwards. They may be able to force someone to relive the same minute, hour, day, year, etc. for as long as user keeps them there. On some occasions people have been know to retain a small amount of memories or eventually escape weaker temporal loops. This seems to be more like a cosmetic/plot ability to me, and thus not usable for you in PvP. Please state that you may use this ability in PvE, or with OOC permission from PCs. If you want to use this in PvP, the opponent can only be effected if they are of equal or lower rank, and only for 1 post at that. The former sentence is more recommended.

    Strengths:
    •Memory Erasure
    •Physical Restoration: The user can repair and return any broken or damaged non-living object to its optimal state no matter how long it has been broken or how damaged it was.
    •Temporal Trapping: The user can send and trap anyone in another time. And bring them back.

    Weaknesses:
    •Limited on how many times a user can use it. (Any suggestions?)
    •User may be affected by memory reset each time power is activated.
    •Others may eventually feel déjà vu.
    •Won't affect users of Temporal Protection or Spatial-Temporal Lock.

    Name: Infinate Sphere
    Rank: D
    Type: Lost Magic
    Duration: 1
    Cooldown: 2
    Description: The user hits their target in the stomach with an orb, which is then vastly multiplied, striking the target multiple times from every angle. D rank damage at a maximum is 20HP. If your orb multiplies, the damage is split in half. All orbs that hit at 'every angle' will deal a total of 20HP, no more.
    Strengths:
    •Multiple hits to target.

    Weaknesses:
    •Takes time to create.
    •Leaves you open to attack.

    Name: Restore
    Rank: D
    Type: Lost Magic
    Duration: 1
    Cooldown: 2
    Description: The user restores inorganic items back to the state they were in before they took damage. This spell seems to be controlled through the user's left eye.

    Strengths:
    •The user can restore an item prom a piece if they knew what the item was.

    Weaknesses:
    •Damages the user’s eye for 2 posts.
    •Takes time.


    List of Spell Fusions:(Locked until B rank)(List your Spell Fusions here, name them, category them, have them make sense, and most importantly make them shiny!)
    Name Mix Armor/Wepon Requip
    Rank: A
    Type: Depends on Armor/Wepon
    Fused SpellsArmor and Wepons


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    Re: The Knight

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