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    Post by Rosemary Ysgarlad on 26th September 2016, 3:37 pm

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    Primary Magic: Take Over: Satan Soul
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:


    • Satan Soul is an incredibly powerful magic which allows its users to utilize the powers of a demon. The user can choose from any polytheistic pantheon. When using their Take Over their appearance changes partly into that of the demon. The user is able to make spells that reflect the abilities of the demon using their spell slots. They can use these spells while they are transformed and laying waste to their enemies upon the battlefield.



    Strengths:


    • A variety of forms that grant her different usages of magic and curses depending on the demon, thus making her very versatile and great to have as an asset.
    • Poison does little to her, and with demon particles surging about her body darkness is nothing more then her friend rather than enemy; although, this does not mean it cannot harm her.
    • Only has to pay the cost of her Take Over whereas the abilities come free.


    Weaknesses:


    • Devil Slayer Magic does great harm to her.
    • Some forms may exhaust her physically during, and after, usage.
    • Due to her personality, she is afraid of her abilities and therefore can never fully access her magical capabilities.


    Lineage: Oblivion's Wrath

    Description: Long ago, an ancient king in search of the ultimate power seized the outer lands of the kingdom, only to fail.  He sent his armies to the ends of the Earth, still, it was not found.  His frustration was sent out to all the lands; armies would kill families, animals, and each other for "crimes" they had done.  The devil took notice of this and one night contacted the king.  He gave the king two choices - the ability to manipulate others, or the ability to turn himself into a malicious demon, giving him the power of Hell's Flames.  The king foolishly picked to turn himself into a demon.  The devil granted him the request, giving the king total and absolute power, however, the price to it was the king's consciousness, making him the devil's slave, sending all into chaos.  The name that was later given to the demon was Oblivion, and those who are his descendants are said to have Oblivion's Might.

    Ability: Oblivion's Might has both a passive and active effect.  The passive ability gives the user the strength of Oblivion (50% strength boost), while as the active form turns the user into a demon, capable of mass destruction.  The user in their "demon state" also have access to 3 fire spells (One of which is user-rank and two of which are a rank lower. S-rank max and D-rank minimum). While transformed the 50% strength increases to 100% and they will attack literally any and everything they can, starting with the living.


    Usages: The user passively gains a 50% strength boost.  The transformation lasts for 3 posts with a 8 post cool-down and increases the user’s strength boost to 100%. While transformed the user gain the use of 3 fire spells (one of the user’s rank and two of a rank lower, S-rank max and D-rank minimum). These spells must be made in addition to the user’s own magic and must be stated that they can only be used while transformed. They cannot have two or more spells of the same rank either meaning that at D-rank they only receive one spell from this, at C-rank they will have a C-rank spell and a D-rank spell from this and at B-rank rank they will have a B-rank spell, a C-rank spell and a D-rank spell from this lineage.

    Unique Abilities:


    • Demonic Acceptance: By accepting herself for whom she is, her abilities, and that this ability is meant to protect those rather than harm. Whenever her HP reaches 0% she, in the most direst of times, is able to grant herself a restoration of 25% within her HP, giving herself one more round to fight before fully being taken out.

    • Take Over: Through the demonic souls she has come into possession of. Each Take Over form that she has grants her an extra 10% boost in physical strength based on the number of forms she possesses.

    • Poison Ingestion: Poison is but a mere "treat" to a demon. Any poison that is of the same rank or below has no mere effect upon her when on the battlefield, granting her an inability to be harmed by such hazardous effect. But for those far above her rank, it may be able to incapacitate her for a short duration.






    ♔KOJIHIME



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    Completed Re: SATAN SOUL, rosemary ysgarlad

    Post by Rosemary Ysgarlad on 26th September 2016, 8:22 pm

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    TAKE OVER: SATAN SOUL FORMS

    Take Over Form: Satan Soul
    Image Reference: - - -
    Take Over Origin:
    Description:





    D–RANK SPELLS





    D-Rank Partial Form: Demonic Arm
    Partial Form: Partial Form
    Type: Physical, Passive
    Duration: Passive
    Cool-Down: - - -
    Description: With her arm bandaged up. Rosemary hides away this demonic arm behind the bandages out of shame for what she is; she has yet to learn to control her Satan Soul ability and therefore,  through the usage of this arm, she is granted ten (20%) of strength than the norm; although, aside from the passive ten percent buff, the arm is also capable of extending fifteen (15) feet.
    Image Reference: [ X ].

    • Strengths

      • Granted twenty percent of strength then the normal melee damage that applies.
      • Can extend fifteen feet.





    • Weaknesses

      •  The strength is reduced back to normal melee when extended.
      • The user doesn't truly know her own strength.



    D-Rank Partial Form: Demonic Wings
    Form: Partial Form
    Type: Physical
    Duration: 3 posts
    Cool-Down: 2 posts
    Description: Wings shall begin to protrude from the lower-level spinal area of Rosemary's back, extending, she will gain the capability of flight and thus able to sore through the sky for a duration of three post at a speed of thirty (30) miles per hour.

    Image Reference: [ X ]

    • Strengths

      • Able to fly at twenty-five miles per hour.





    • Weaknesses

      • Wings are fragile and can easily dissipate if harmed.



    D-Rank Partial Form:  Sukēringu Shippo no Akuma (スケーリング・ しっぽ ・アクマ , lit. "Scaling Tails of the Devil")
    Form: Partial Form
    Type: Physical
    Duration: 3 posts
    Cool-Down: 2 posts
    Description: With purple colored scales formulating around the coccyx of her spine, Rosemary can manifest four tentacles that sprout from the back of her lower waist. These tentacles are able to be conjured, at max, eighteen feet long, as such the tentacles are durable enough to pierce that of steel. The damage that is dealt unto a person is inflicted with deep bruises and minor cuts, which are normal. This ability is quite flexible and can be used for a numerical amount of physical things in a supplementary or defensive manor, and by "defensive" the user is capable of deflecting spells that are of the same ranking.
    Image Reference: [ x ]

    • Strengths

      • Conjures up to four tails that are to be used for offensive, defensive, and supplementary purposes.
      • Deflect projectiles of the same rank.





    • Weaknesses

      • The tails may be strong, but are also fragile at the same time and can easily be broken by a spell one class above the user.
      • Possesses the same mobility and speed of the user.




    D-Rank Partial Form: Me no Akuma (目上着液悪魔, lit. "Eye of the Devil")
    Form: Partial Form
    Type: Physical
    Duration: 3 Post
    Cool-Down: 2 Post
    Description: The user is able to use this said eye as a way to see the x-ray's of an opponent's body. Allowing the user to view their magical presence and energy to determine as to what exactly the user is going up against or what sort of ailment has befallen a person. But not only does it incorporate such an effect, it also allows one to help see through the illusions, mist, or any other stealth-like spell that is of the same rank. The black coating upon the eyes act as an extra set of night vision goggles that also help the user see as to what's in the dark. No matter be it within caves, night time, these eyes are specifically made for such situations that one can encounter.
    Image Reference: [ X ]

    • Strengths

      • Can see through illusions, mist, darkness or any other stealth-like spell that is of the same rank.





    • Weaknesses

      • Cannot extend sight distance.








    C–RANK SPELLS



    C-Rank Partial Form:
    Partial Form: Partial Form
    Type:
    Image Reference:
    Description:
    Cool-Down:


    • Strengths

      • test





    • Weaknesses

      • test




    C-Rank Partial Form:
    Partial Form: Partial Form
    Type:
    Image Reference:
    Description:
    Cool-Down:


    • Strengths

      • test





    • Weaknesses

      • test




    C-Rank Partial Form:
    Partial Form: Partial Form
    Type:
    Image Reference:
    Description:
    Cool-Down:


    • Strengths

      • test





    • Weaknesses

      • test




    C-Rank Partial Form:
    Partial Form: Partial Form
    Type:
    Image Reference:
    Description:
    Cool-Down:


    • Strengths

      • test





    • Weaknesses

      • test







    ♔KOJIHIME


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    Post by Rosemary Ysgarlad on 26th September 2016, 8:22 pm

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    Post by Anastasia Isayev on 29th September 2016, 10:27 am

    Howdy there. i'll be grading your magic.
    But before I begin, can I ask you to find the break in your coding? The site looks weird. You probably didn't close a tag somewhere.


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    Post by Rosemary Ysgarlad on 29th September 2016, 10:53 am

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    Post by Anastasia Isayev on 1st October 2016, 2:35 pm

    Since I'm having issues quoting your magic without breaking the site.. I'm going to do this uncoded.

    Sorry for taking so long.. was busy IRL.  
    But I'm Anastasia and I'm known as the 'Mean Mod'.  But don't worry, I'm quite friendly.
    Anything you see in this color are things I request you to fix.  
    So, now that that's out of the way, let's get to it!

    Allow me to preface this by saying that TakeOver magic isn't easy to make.  
    But with every partial and full Takeover you make, each portion has 1 Activated ability (Like spells for that part) and 1 Passive Ability.
    When making these spells, please make it easily seen what is the passive ability and what is the activated ability.



    Demonic Acceptance: By accepting herself for whom she is, her abilities, and that this ability is meant to protect those rather than harm. Whenever her HP reaches 0% she, in the most direst of times, is able to grant herself a restoration of 25% within her HP, giving herself one more round to fight before fully being taken out.
    Okidoke, add that this only once once per thread.  25% regen is a bit high, so let's bust that down to 15%

    Take Over: Through the demonic souls she has come into possession of. Each Take Over form that she has grants her an extra 10% boost in physical strength based on the number of forms she possesses.  Gonna need a cap for the strength boost.  I'd say a cap of 50% would be high enough



    D-Rank Partial Form: Demonic Arm
    Partial Form: Partial Form
    Type: Physical, Passive  Takeovers cannot be passive
    Duration: Passive  See above
    Cool-Down: - - -  Cooldowns need to be either minimum or +1 post longer than duration, whichever is longer.  
    Description: With her arm bandaged up. Rosemary hides away this demonic arm behind the bandages out of shame for what she is; she has yet to learn to control her Satan Soul ability and therefore,  through the usage of this arm, she is granted ten (20%) of strength than the norm; although, aside from the passive ten percent buff, the arm is also capable of extending fifteen (15) feet.  Each Partial form has a passive and active ability in it.  I take it that your passive ability is the ten percent (or 20%, I don't really know which.  Please fix that as it isn't consistent) boost to strength and extended range of attack.  

    Now you'll need an activated ability for this arm.  These are basically spells you can use with this arm that have zero MP cost, but must have a cooldown (generally 2 posts if instant).

    Image Reference: [ X ].

    • Strengths

      • Granted twenty percent of strength then the normal melee damage that applies.
      • Can extend fifteen feet.





    • Weaknesses

      •  The strength is reduced back to normal melee when extended.
      • The user doesn't truly know her own strength.
        When creating spells, you need to have at least 1 more weakness than strength



    D-Rank Partial Form: Demonic Wings
    Form: Partial Form
    Type: Physical
    Duration: 3 posts
    Cool-Down: 2 posts Change to 4
    Description: Wings shall begin to protrude from the lower-level spinal area of Rosemary's back, extending, she will gain the capability of flight and thus able to sore through the sky for a duration of three post at a speed of thirty (30) miles per hour.

    Need an activated ability
    Image Reference: [ X ]

    • Strengths

      • Able to fly at twenty-five miles per hour.  Description says 30.





    • Weaknesses

      • Wings are fragile and can easily dissipate if harmed.
        Need a second weakness



    D-Rank Partial Form:  Sukēringu Shippo no Akuma (スケーリング・ しっぽ ・アクマ , lit. "Scaling Tails of the Devil")
    Form: Partial Form
    Type: Physical
    Duration: 3 posts
    Cool-Down: 2 posts Change to 4
    Description: With purple colored scales formulating around the coccyx of her spine, Rosemary can manifest four tentacles that sprout from the back of her lower waist. These tentacles are able to be conjured, at max, eighteen feet long, as such the tentacles are durable enough to pierce that of steel. The damage that is dealt unto a person is inflicted with deep bruises and minor cuts, which are normal. This ability is quite flexible and can be used for a numerical amount of physical things in a supplementary or defensive manor, and by "defensive" the user is capable of deflecting spells that are of the same ranking.   Please explain, in depth, what you mean by deflecting spells and supplementary use of these tails
    Activated ability needed

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    • Strengths

      • Conjures up to four tails that are to be used for offensive, defensive, and supplementary purposes.
      • Deflect projectiles of the same rank.





    • Weaknesses

      • The tails may be strong, but are also fragile at the same time and can easily be broken by a spell one class above the user.
      • Possesses the same mobility and speed of the user.
        Needs 1 more weakness




    D-Rank Partial Form: Me no Akuma (目上着液悪魔, lit. "Eye of the Devil")
    Form: Partial Form
    Type: Physical
    Duration: 3 Post
    Cool-Down: 2 Post Change to 4
    Description: The user is able to use this said eye as a way to see the x-ray's of an opponent's body. Allowing the user to view their magical presence and energy to determine as to what exactly the user is going up against or what sort of ailment has befallen a person. But not only does it incorporate such an effect, it also allows one to help see through the illusions, mist, or any other stealth-like spell that is of the same rank. The black coating upon the eyes act as an extra set of night vision goggles that also help the user see as to what's in the dark. No matter be it within caves, night time, these eyes are specifically made for such situations that one can encounter.

    Activated ability required
    Image Reference: [ X ]

    • Strengths

      • Can see through illusions, mist, darkness or any other stealth-like spell that is of the same rank.





    • Weaknesses

      • Cannot extend sight distance.
        Second weakness required




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    Post by Anastasia Isayev on 17th October 2016, 12:07 am

    Just gonna bump this to say that if any changes are made, please shoot me a PM.


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