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    Telekinesis | テレキネシス | Terekineshisu

    Iesha
    Iesha

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    Telekinesis | テレキネシス | Terekineshisu Empty Telekinesis | テレキネシス | Terekineshisu

    Post by Iesha 15th August 2016, 10:55 am

    Telekinesis [テレキネシス] - Terekineshisu

    Telekinesis | テレキネシス | Terekineshisu U0qy2xK
    Primary Magic:
    Telekinesis [テレキネシス] - Terekineshisu

    Secondary Magic:
    N/A

    Caster or Holder:
    Caster

    Description:
    Terekineshisu [テレキネシス] is the traditional Japanese name for Telekinesis. Telekinesis is an ordinary type of magic that allows the user to move and manipulate objects using their mind. However, this magic is not limited to just objects, it also applies to any matter that can move. The user will not be able to move something that they cannot see. The user will not be able to move an object underground without  having to move the layers of sand that covers it, and if the ground is layered with a substance such as concentrate, the user will not be able to do anything about that. This magic can be used very creatively depending on the user's technique and way of using this magic. Telekinesis allows the user to move matter, despite the mass and weight of it but the more the mass of the matter, the more energy it requires. Moving air will be require less energy than moving water. The distance at which the user can move or carry objects depends on the user's rank.

    Vivian has been using telekinesis for as long as she can remember, hence she is rather well equipped and familiar with the various techniques that she can use in order to her attack someone/something or to defend. Using her magic, she also performs day-to-day tasks. Due to Vivian being C-rank, the overall range of her magic is 30 meters. When moving something, a dark purple aura appears around her hands and around the object she's moving.



    Basic level:

    Strengths:
    The user can move matter in a large range, that increases along with the power of the user.
    The user is capable of moving any matter than can move.
    The user can move several objects at a time.

    Weaknesses:
    Although the user can move matter, they cannot determine the speed of the matter.
    Moving several objects at a time requires more energy and more concentration. If concentration is lost, the user can get hurt.
    The user can only move objects that they can see. If an object is not within their view, they cannot move it.

    Lineage:

    Unique Abilities:
    Weapon Control:
    Blood Halt:
    Standstill:
    Body Control:

    Spells:
    D - Rank Spells:

    C - Rank Spells:


    Last edited by Vivian on 16th August 2016, 11:51 am; edited 4 times in total
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    Post by Guest 15th August 2016, 12:23 pm

    Hello Vivian! This magic is looking great so far! I wrote down a few suggested corrections in this lovely color. ^.^ Please edit as needed and bump once you have finished! Thanks!

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    Edit;; It appears some of your coding broke the page. In this quote I removed the template codes. Apologies.
    Edit 2;; I removed the 'div' code from this quoted post, but the page is still broken. Thus, it must be from somewhere in one of your posts. For neatness I suggest you look into that? xD Up to you.
    Iesha
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    Post by Iesha 15th August 2016, 1:03 pm

    Bump. I removed the div code ;~; Those ugly things gave me a hard time anyways.


    Izayuki wrote: Each attack launched deals with 1 C-rank damage If this is the case, you may only shoot once. as it shoots with great intensity due to the fast movement of the wind.


    Also, for this, instead of making it one attack, I changed it to each attack dealing 0.25 D-rank damage, meaning the user can launch up to 8 attacks which is equivalent 1 C-rank damage altogether because the user cannot see when inside the hurricane which makes targeting difficult so one attack will pretty much be useless.
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    Post by Guest 15th August 2016, 4:12 pm

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    I just noted a few things with your Unique Abilities and your Water Clones. Look at those, make edits if needed, and you're good to go! ^.^
    Iesha
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    Post by Iesha 16th August 2016, 4:27 am

    Bump. Added two more unique abilities. Thanks for pointing that out ^^
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    Post by Guest 16th August 2016, 10:03 am

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    Sure thing! ^.^
    Almost there~
    Iesha
    Iesha

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    Post by Iesha 16th August 2016, 11:51 am

    Bumpidy Bump.
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    Post by Guest 16th August 2016, 7:39 pm

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    Approved~!

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