Your grammar and spelling seems to be just fine to me. Welcome to FTRP my friend, if you have any questions please feel free to send me a PM on any of my accounts: Niyol, Lexa Grimoire, or Azurius Tade. To be honest, you can ask anyone in the chat box, since most people are fairly knowledgeable about on-site stuff. Anyone with a name that's entirely white is a Moderator, and they can be of great help to you. Black named people are Administrators, and they normally know almost everything about the site; so they're the most helpful.
If you're looking for a guild for your character, I'd like to recommend Lamia Scale. We're trying to get on our feet again after some unfortunate circumstances, but the hand full of people we have are all pretty chill. If you'd rather not join a small guild like ours, I can help you pick a guild best suited to your character; all you gotta do is tell me your character's core values and I can tell you which guild(s) match them ^_^