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    Ebony's Space/Cosmic Magic

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    Post by Leapflight 31st December 2012, 4:49 pm

     Space Magic
    Primary Magic: Space/Cosmic Magic
    Secondary Magic: Light Dragon Lacrima
    Caster or Holder: Caster

    Description:
    Space magic allows the user to use/manipulate objects or elements from the depths of space for both defensive and offensive purposes. It allows the user to the create replicas of certain space objects such as galaxies, comets, cosmic beams, stars etc. While it also allows the user to manipulate Space Objects such as the light from stars and certain astronomical features. Space magic also allows Ebony to breathe in the airless climates of space. 'Stargazing' is an extra ability that Space mage Ebony acquires. It allows Ebony to look up at the stars and know her exact location without looking at a map or compass. This is handy when travelling to different places.

    Strengths
    ~Uses replicas of planets/space objects
    ~Uses certain elements of Space for battle (eg/Light from Stars)
    ~Lets the user breathe in space
    ~Know their exact location by looking at the stars
    ~Extra knowledge about the stars/space ect.

    Weaknesses
    ~Earth mages/magic due to the Celestial Bodies and the Earth being opposites of each other.
    ~Heavenly Body Users as they are almost the same magics. If a Heavenly Body attack meets with one of Ebony attacks and they are the same rank they will not overpower each other but instead cause an explosion upwards.
    ~Users of Space Magic are mostly used for Long Ranged attacks and are more at risk of their own body than most other mages.
    ~Gravity Users are also a problem for Ebony as her magic involves Gravity. Even though she is immune to Gravity attacks the Gravity Users may manipulate her own Gravity attacks.

    Abilities/Powers
    ~"Stargazing" and ability to let the User know exactly where she is and know where other things are as long as she has been there by looking at the stars.
    ~"Space Breath" Lets the User breathe in Space in 'no air' environments.
    ~Extra knowledge about the planets and space objects
    ~Can manipulate the stars and other astronomical objects to adapt to the user's needs.
    ~"Gravity Immunity" Can withstand any Gravity due to the Space atmosphere.
    ~"Space Levitation" Allows Ebony to Levitate in the air at any given moment of time for as long as she wants. She can not exceed the height of 1 meter while levitating. 

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    Post by Guest 31st December 2012, 10:13 pm

    After the events stated in the chatbox, I assume you shall be remaking this. So no one post on it. XD
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    Post by Leapflight 1st January 2013, 2:24 am

    I edited :)
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    Post by Guest 1st January 2013, 6:36 pm

    I see they all have their passives, your first spell the fireball thing needs to be stated to be D-rank fireballs and can shoot them twice per turn.

    You are missing techniques for each one, they all get their own sub-spell which is just another spell app attached tho them. Things like a big fireball would be what you'd put there.
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    Post by Leapflight 1st January 2013, 7:20 pm

    Edited =)


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    Post by Guest 1st January 2013, 7:47 pm

    You can make two shields max btw. Excluding the technique shield. Approved
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    Post by Soleice-kun 8th March 2013, 3:21 am

    Approved


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    Post by Leapflight 12th June 2013, 7:24 am

    Upgrade and added some new spells, I think they are alright ^^


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    Post by Soleice-kun 13th June 2013, 8:03 pm

    Leapflight wrote:
    Space Magic

    Primary Magic: Space/Cosmic Magic
    Secondary Magic:N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: Space magic allows the user to use/manipulate objects or elements from the depths of space for both defensive and offensive purposes. It allows the user to the create replicas of certain space objects such as galaxies, comets, cosmic beams, stars ect. while it also allows the user to manipulate Space Objects such as the Light fron stars and certain astronomical features. Space magic also allows Ebony to breathe in the airless climates of space. 'Stargazing' is an extra abillty that Space mage Ebony accuires. It allows Ebony to look up at the stars and know her exact location without looking at a map or compass. This is handy when travelling to different places.

    Strengths:
    -Uses replicas of planets/space objects


      -Uses certain elements of Space for battle (eg/Light from Stars)

      -Lets the user breathe in space

      -Know their exact location by looking at the stars

      -Extra knowledge about the stars/space ect.


      Weaknesses:


      -Earth mages/magic due to the Celestial Bodies and the Earth being opposites of each other.

      -Heavenly Body mages may control the elemental bodies that Ebony uses, not the ones that she created as they are not 'true' Heavenly Bodies.

      -Users of Space Magic are mostly used for Long Range attacks and are more at risk of their own body than most other mages.



    Abilities/Powers:

      -Stargazing and ability to let the User know exactly where she is and know where other things are as long as she has been there by looking at the stars.


      -Can create replicas of actual space objects


      -Lets the User breathe in Space in 'no air' environments


      -Extra knowledge about the planets and space objects


      -Can manipulate the stars and other atronimical objects to adapt to the user's needs




    D rank Spells:

    C rank Spells:


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    Post by Leapflight 14th June 2013, 2:08 am

    I think I edited it xD


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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 14th June 2013, 6:05 am

    Leapflight wrote:
    Space Magic

    Primary Magic: Space/Cosmic Magic 

    Secondary Magic:N/A

    Caster or Holder: Caster

    Description: Space magic allows the user to use/manipulate objects or elements from the depths of space for both defensive and offensive purposes. It allows the user to the create replicas of certain space objects such as galaxies, comets, cosmic beams, stars ect. while it also allows the user to manipulate Space Objects such as the Light fron stars and certain astronomical features. Space magic also allows Ebony to breathe in the airless climates of space. 'Stargazing' is an extra abillty that Space mage Ebony accuires. It allows Ebony to look up at the stars and know her exact location without looking at a map or compass. This is handy when travelling to different places. 



    Strengths:

    • -Uses replicas of planets/space objects
    • -Uses certain elements of Space for battle (eg/Light from Stars)
    • -Lets the user breathe in space
    • -Know their exact location by looking at the stars
    • -Extra knowledge about the stars/space ect.


      Weaknesses:
    • Earth mages/magic due to the Celestial Bodies and the Earth being opposites of each other. 
    • Heavenly Body mages may control the elemental bodies that Ebony uses, not the ones that she created as they are not 'true' Heavenly Bodies.
    • Users of Space Magic are mostly used for Long Range attacks and are more at risk of their own body than most other mages.

    Abilities/Powers:

    • Stargazing and ability to let the User know exactly where she is and know where other things are as long as she has been there by looking at the stars.
    • Can create replicas of actual space objects
    • Lets the User breathe in Space in 'no air' environments
    • Extra knowledge about the planets and space objects
    • Can manipulate the stars and other atronimical objects to adapt to the user's needs


    D rank Spells:
    C rank Spells:
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    Comments are in teal though there is very little for me to comment on :)


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    Post by Leapflight 14th June 2013, 6:33 am

    Edited ^-^


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    Post by Soleice-kun 15th June 2013, 3:32 am

    Approved


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    Post by Alye 22nd June 2013, 9:00 pm

    Unlocked for spell addition.


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    Post by Leapflight 2nd July 2013, 2:23 am

    Upgraded some spells and added new ones ^^


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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 2nd July 2013, 7:38 am

    Leapflight wrote:
    Space Magic
     
    Primary Magic: Space/Cosmic Magic 
    Secondary Magic:N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
     
    Description:
    Space magic allows the user to use/manipulate objects or elements from the depths of space for both defensive and offensive purposes. It allows the user to the create replicas of certain space objects such as galaxies, comets, cosmic beams, stars ect. While it also allows the user to manipulate Space Objects such as the light from stars and certain astronomical features. Space magic also allows Ebony to breathe in the airless climates of space. 'Stargazing' is an extra abillty that Space mage Ebony accuires. It allows Ebony to look up at the stars and know her exact location without looking at a map or compass. This is handy when travelling to different places.
     
    Strengths:      
    ~Uses replicas of planets/space objects
     
    ~Uses certain elements of Space for battle (eg/Light from Stars)
     
    ~Lets the user breathe in space
     
    ~Know their exact location by looking at the stars
     
    ~Extra knowledge about the stars/space ect.
     
     
    Weaknesses:
    ~Earth mages/magic due to the Celestial Bodies and the Earth being opposites of each other.
     
    ~Heavenly Body mages may control the elemental bodies that Ebony uses (if ranked lower than the user), not the ones that she created as they are not 'true' Heavenly Bodies.
     
    ~Users of Space Magic are mostly used for Long Ranged attacks and are more at risk of their own body than most other mages.
     
     
    Abilities/Powers:
    ~Stargazing and ability to let the User know exactly where she is and know where other things are as long as she has been there by looking at the stars.
     
    ~Can create replicas of actual space objects
     
    ~Lets the User breathe in Space in 'no air' environments
     
    ~Extra knowledge about the planets and space objects
     
    ~Can manipulate the stars and other astronomical objects to adapt to the user's needs.
     
    ~Can withstand any Gravity due to the Space atmosphere
     
    D rank Spells:
     
    C rank Spells:
     
    B Rank Spells:
     
    A Rank Spells:
     
    S Rank Spells:
     

    Comments are in teal. I would suggest quoting me and copy and pasting it into your original post as you have an unbelievable amount of font coding


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    Post by Leapflight 5th July 2013, 2:40 am

    Edited ^^


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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 7th July 2013, 4:35 am

    Leapflight wrote:
    Space Magic

    Primary Magic: Space/Cosmic Magic
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
     
    Description:
    Space magic allows the user to use/manipulate objects or elements from the depths of space for both defensive and offensive purposes. It allows the user to the create replicas of certain space objects such as galaxies, comets, cosmic beams, stars etc. While it also allows the user to manipulate Space Objects such as the light from stars and certain astronomical features. Space magic also allows Ebony to breathe in the airless climates of space. 'Stargazing' is an extra ability that Space mage Ebony acquires. It allows Ebony to look up at the stars and know her exact location without looking at a map or compass. This is handy when travelling to different places.
     
    Strengths:
    ~Uses replicas of planets/space objects
     
    ~Uses certain elements of Space for battle (eg/Light from Stars)
     
    ~Lets the user breathe in space
     
    ~Know their exact location by looking at the stars
     
    ~Extra knowledge about the stars/space ect.
     
     
    Weaknesses:
    ~Earth mages/magic due to the Celestial Bodies and the Earth being opposites of each other.
     
    ~Heavenly Body mages may control the elemental bodies that Ebony uses (if ranked lower than the user), not the ones that she created as they are not 'true' Heavenly Bodies.
     
    ~Users of Space Magic are mostly used for Long Ranged attacks and are more at risk of their own body than most other mages.


    Abilities/Powers:
    ~Stargazing and ability to let the User know exactly where she is and know where other things are as long as she has been there by looking at the stars.
     
    ~Can create replicas of actual space objects
     
    ~Lets the User breathe in Space in 'no air' environments
     
    ~Extra knowledge about the planets and space objects
     
    ~Can manipulate the stars and other astronomical objects to adapt to the user's needs.

    ~Can withstand any Gravity due to the Space atmosphere
     

    D rank Spells:
     
    C rank Spells:
     
    B Rank Spells:
     
    A Rank Spells:
     
    S Rank Spells:

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    Post by TacticalFallacy 2nd October 2013, 3:30 am

    Unlocked for a new A-rank spell.


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    Post by Leapflight 18th November 2013, 6:39 am

    ~Upgraded Space Dome from C to A and made a different C rank spell


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    Post by Eris 18th November 2013, 8:32 am

    Leapflight wrote:Name: Catch A Falling Star
    Rank: C
    Type: Space/Cosmic
    Description: Ebony raises both her hands as she sings the words, Catch A Falling Star. A yellow tinkling star can be seen above Ebony's hands. It is about a meter in length as it starts to twirl. The twirling of the Star gives of a bright yellow light that makes people close their eyes but not harm them. One the star has stopped spinning Ebony thrusts her hands down as she can now use 1 spell without having to wait until the cooldown is over.
     
    Strengths:
    ~ Allows Ebony to use a spell without having to wait for a Cooldown
    ~ Great for spells with long cooldowns
     
    Weaknesses:
    ~ No offensive purposes
    ~ Only 1 spell can be used from this spell, after that spell you have to wait normally for cooldowns again
    ~Vulnerable when casting the spell 
     
    Duration/Cooldowns
    Duration: 1 post
    Cooldown: 6 posts

    Add that it "usually" makes people have to cover their eyes,  to keep it more open for people to decide if they should be effected too much or how to react.   For example,  my character will usually be wearing sunglasses.   Shuhei's the light dragon slayer.    And some people just don't react to pain and will probably stare until their eyeballs sizzle.

    Please include one more strength and one more weakness.   I understand many of your other spells don't follow this,  but all magic I approve must have at least three strengths and four weaknesses- one more weakness than strengths.

    I don't believe I can approve the effect of this spell yet however.
    It's problematic as in how it is made,  you could repeat a Guild or H-rank spell and essentially have it only on a 6 post cooldown.

    So instead I want you to make it more complicated.

    Have it reduce a spell's cooldown by this spell's own cooldown,  multiplied by 2 for every rank lower and reduced by 2 (not divided) for every rank higher.
    This wouldn't even scratch the cooldowns of spells that require a thread-based cooldown (Such as said guild or H-rank spells).



    Name: Space Dome
    Rank: A
    Type: Space/Cosmic
     
    Description: Ebony lifts her hand in the air and creates a blue/purple aura in the shape of dome that stretches 100 meters radius around her in all directions. Everyone who is caught inside the Dome levitates as all gravity is 0. Everyone's speed is slowed by 75% (S ranks are slowed by 50%). The Dome lasts for 6 Posts. Ebony and her enemies can use magic inside the Dome, but walking is impossible as all Gravity is 0. Ebony is the only one who can walk in this Dome as she is not affected by Gravity of any kind. Gravity Mages are also not affected by this spell whatsoever. The cooldown is 6 posts before it can be used again and it takes 4 A rank spells or equivalent to, to break out of the dome.
     
    Strengths:
    - It's a trapping spell and can only be broken out of if hit by 4 A Rank Spells.
    - Everyone is slowed by 75% apart from Ebony and Gravity Mages
    - Large Scale Spell
    - People who are outside the Dome can go inside but will start floating around and will not be able to go out again unless they break out or Ebony deactivates it.
     
    Weaknesses:
    - Long Cooldown
    - Even her comrades speed will decrease by 75%
    - Doesn't do any damage
    - Doesn't affect Gravity Mages at all.
     
    Duration/Cooldowns
    Duration: 6 posts
    Cooldown: 12 posts

    Add more detail to why they can't leave.  As of now there isn't an explanation besides "Because you're floating".
    Add the weakness "Doesn't effect alternate movement types beyond walking/running",  as I see no reason someone who can fly by any means would be effected.   I recall a study where birds were actually more skilled at flying in zero-G.

    Mention that while people may be floating around,  they can change their directions by pushing off from objects or propelling themselves with magic one way or another.   When they take damage they float in an opposite direction from where they got hit.

    Add the strength that all knockbacks are hugely increased,  due to them not having any resistance without self propulsion.   Doing so will require 1 more weakness.

    And finally,  4 A-ranks is too much.   That's two S-ranks,  or 1 H-rank.   Make it two A-ranks or an S-rank please.
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    Post by Leapflight 22nd November 2013, 7:52 am

    Bump~ I hope I covered it all.


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    Post by Eris 22nd November 2013, 9:05 am

    There are a few more things I would say,  but I shant nitpick too much.

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    Post by Guest 17th November 2016, 7:09 am

    Leapflight wrote:
     Space Magic
    Primary Magic: Space/Cosmic Magic
    Secondary Magic: Light Dragon Lacrima
    Caster or Holder: Caster

    Description:
    Space magic allows the user to use/manipulate objects or elements from the depths of space for both defensive and offensive purposes. It allows the user to the create replicas of certain space objects such as galaxies, comets, cosmic beams, stars etc. While it also allows the user to manipulate Space Objects such as the light from stars and certain astronomical features. Space magic also allows Ebony to breathe in the airless climates of space. 'Stargazing' is an extra ability that Space mage Ebony acquires. It allows Ebony to look up at the stars and know her exact location without looking at a map or compass. This is handy when travelling to different places.

    Strengths
    ~Uses replicas of planets/space objects
    ~Uses certain elements of Space for battle (eg/Light from Stars)
    ~Lets the user breathe in space
    ~Know their exact location by looking at the stars
    ~Extra knowledge about the stars/space ect.

    Weaknesses
    ~Earth mages/magic due to the Celestial Bodies and the Earth being opposites of each other.
    ~Heavenly Body Users as they are almost the same magics. If a Heavenly Body attack meets with one of Ebony attacks and they are the same rank they will not overpower each other but instead cause an explosion upwards.
    ~Users of Space Magic are mostly used for Long Ranged attacks and are more at risk of their own body than most other mages.
    ~Gravity Users are also a problem for Ebony as her magic involves Gravity. Even though she is immune to Gravity attacks the Gravity Users may manipulate her own Gravity attacks.

    Abilities/Powers
    ~"Stargazing" and ability to let the User know exactly where she is and know where other things are as long as she has been there by looking at the stars.
    ~"Space Breath" Lets the User breathe in Space in 'no air' environments.
    ~Extra knowledge about the planets and space objects
    ~Can manipulate the stars and other astronomical objects to adapt to the user's needs.
    ~"Gravity Immunity" Can withstand any Gravity due to the Space atmosphere.
    ~"Space Levitation" Allows Ebony to Levitate in the air at any given moment of time for as long as she wants. She can not exceed the height of 1 meter while levitating. 

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