Tempest God slayer magic

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Roxas wrote:Name: Storming winds
Rank: D
Type: Storm
Description: The tempest will put his/her hand above their head and will start to form a disc of black winds will lightning traveling in it and then will be thrown at the target. When traveling the disc will move like a tornado at the target sucking them in. What range does this have? What range does the sucking have? What rank in terms of a weapon is this?
Strengths:
-Can brake most shields and stop most attacks At d rank. Errr...NO. You can break D rank and maybe heavily damage C rank. Thats it. Also I don't see how this will stop attacks. Maybe by sucking them in? Put that in your description
Weaknesses:
Takes time for the spell to summon the disc and take form
Cool down: 2 post
Duration: 1 post

Name: Storm Darts
Rank: D
Type: Storm
Description: The tempest will make little darts of storm clouds with a black wind behind it and a lightning needle front. The dart will then be shot at the target it can be used at closed range; the spell can make up 20 darts when the darts are blow up small sparks of static will explode out. How powerful are the explosions? What is the maximum range? How powerful are the darts in terms of weaponry?
Strengths:
Rapid fire: This can be shot rapidly depending on the speed the user needs to them
Weaknesses:
The darts can be destroyed easily with spells above the rank it
Cool down: 2 post
Duration: 1 post

Name: Storm body
Rank: D
Type: Storm
Description: The tempest will put one of their hands in the air and then will form a black cloud that will coat around his or her body that will boost speed and will make hand to hand combat more deadly thus being able to hit their target and sending static on to their magic. How much does this boost your speed? How does it make things more deadly? How much more deadly does it make them
Strengths:
-The spell will boost the Tempest speed
Weaknesses:
When using a spell like this most the tempest defiance will drop because all the spell does is bring power to the speed. Do you mean defence?
Cool down: 3post
Duration: 2 post


Name: Storm Cyclone
Rank: D
Type: Storm
Description: The Tempest will make a Cyclone around their target that will trap them and static will then bind them to the ground. The static will also start to damage them by shocking them. The spell is casted when the user puts his hand in the sky and then forces his magic to shoot up into the sky than rains down around the target. How powerful are the shocks? How does static make them stick to the ground? How long does it take for the spell to actually hit the ground?
Strengths:
Will trap most players or monster 1 rank above the spell I'd say trap those of the rank of the spell and maybe restrict the movements one rank above
Weaknesses:
If the target is able to move out the range of the spell before it touches the ground Finish the sentence
Cool down: 3 post
Duration: 2 post

Roxas wrote:Name: Storming winds
Rank: D
Type: Storm
Description: The tempest will put his/her hand above their head and will start to form a disc of black winds will lightning traveling in it and then will be thrown at the target. When traveling the disc will move like a tornado at the target sucking them in? The spell can reach a 10 meter radius .When sucking people in it has a 5 meter radius chance to.
Strengths:
-Can brake most d rank shields and stop most C rank attacks by sucking the spells into the center of it. I feel slowing down might be better then stops entirely. Slow down a lot perhaps, but not stop entirely
Weaknesses:
Takes time for the spell to summon the disc and take form
Cool down: 2 post
Duration: 1 post

Name: Storm Darts
Rank: D
Type: Storm
Description: The tempest will make little darts of storm clouds with a black wind behind it and a lightning needle front. The dart will then be shot at the target it can be used at closed range; the spell can make up 20 darts when the darts are blow up small sparks of static will explode out. The explosions are the rank of D rank spells the range this move and reach is 13 meters from all around Roxas body. When the spells hit weapons it will weaken them but not brake them. So....this launches 20 D rank spells all at once. Add a weakness that this is exhausting and increase the cooldown to three posts. This even overpowers my needle storm by quite a bit(even though that has more darts) and that has a three post cooldown.
Strengths:
Rapid fire: This can be shot rapidly depending on the speed the user needs to them
Weaknesses:
The darts can be destroyed easily with spells above the rank it
Cool down: 2 post
Duration: 1 post

Name: Storm body
Rank: D
Type: Storm
Description: The tempest will put one of their hands in the air and then will form a black cloud that will coat around his or her body that will boost speed and will make hand to hand combat more deadly thus being able to hit their target and sending static on to their body. The spell will boost the users speed by 25% .The spell will have a chance to leave target numb but the target will recover. The users hands will act like small daggers hitting the target leaving slashes not wounds. For this rank...10%
Strengths:
-The spell will boost the Tempest speed
Weaknesses:
When using a spell like this most the tempest defenses will drop because all the spell does is bring power to the speed.
Cool down: 3post
Duration: 2 post


Name: Storm Cyclone
Rank: D
Type: Storm
Description: The Tempest will make a Cyclone around their target that will trap them and static will then bind them to the ground. The static will also start to damage them by shocking them. The spell is casted when the user puts his hand in the sky and then forces his magic to shoot up into the sky than rains down around the target .The shocks are as powerful as a bee stings numbing a target over a long period of time. The static will travel down the body of the user to the feet trapping them.
Strengths:
Will trap most players or monster When dealing of monster or players the rank of the spell with trap when dealing with players above the spell it will restrict the movements by one rank
Weaknesses:
If the target is able to move out the range of the spell before it touches the ground the static will still try and hit the target but will most likely disperse without doing damage only if the target is with in a 5 meter radius.
Cool down: 3 post
Duration: 2 post