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    Atracrema & Lillian

    Lexa Grimoire
    Lexa Grimoire

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    First Magic: True Circuit
    Second Magic: Lillian Grimoire
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    Post by Lexa Grimoire on 10th October 2015, 9:04 pm

    Lillian:

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    Name: 
    Lillian

    Rank: 
    Strong

    Species: 
    Human

    Type: 
    Combat

    Height:
    4' 4" (131.04cm)

    Details:
    Lillian is an extremely shy, but polite child. She
    enjoys listening to music, playing board games,
    cooking, baking, reading, and eating sweets. She
    absolutely hates having to kill people, but refuses
    to let her fear of murder stop her from learning the
    ways of the assailant. Her crimson eyes lead other to
    believe she's not human, even though the rest
    of her looks completely human.


    In combat Lillian utilizes a variety of Fire Demon 
    style attacks despite her being a full blooded human.
    As her attacks are partly Unholy, no Demon slayer is
    able to consume them. This is due to Demon magic
    being partly holy, which allows them to slay demons.
    Dragon slayers are also unable to consume her attacks
    due to them being multi-elemental; Primarily fire and
    partly Unholy. The effect is that her spells are all made
    of a type of Black Fire. Naturally, her spells may be
    consumed only by Fire God Slayers. Lillian typically
    doesn't get into the fight unless Lexa's in deep trouble.

    Demonic Eruption:


    Demonic Eruption
    Equal to Pet Rank
    Instant
    4 Posts CD
    Summary: 
    Lillian's hands and any weapon she's using will be engulfed in a black flame from the moment she enters combat to the moment she uses this ability. This ability is activated by Lillian slamming the ground while standing in front of a single enemy. After that, a 6 foot wide pillar of black fire will erupt from under that opponent and hit anyone within the boundaries of that 6 foot diameter pillar. This flame pillar will deal full damage to Lillian's enemies, and heal her allies for 5% of the damage dealt through this. Lillian may also lose 25% of her max HP in order to increase the damage of this spell to deal 2x ability ranked damage, and increase the max range by 10 meters. She may lose 25% more of her max HP to deal 3x damage to non-player controlled NPCs, and increase the max range by 10 meters more. This second increase of damage cannot injure players.

    Strengths:

     Deals very heavy damage if both enhancements are used
     Has a very wide range

    Weaknesses: 
     Requires HP loss to make both enhancements
     Can be dodged by getting out of area, standing even 1mm out of the range will be sufficient to evade
     Doesn't heal Lillian
    Demon's Flame Circle:


    Demon's Flame Circle 
    1 Rank Below Pet Rank 
    5 Posts
    6 Post CD
    Summary:
    Usable regardless of which form Lillian decides to take; a 30 meter magic circle appears on the ground with Lillian at its center and moves with her. The circle appears to be lit on fire, except the flames are all pure black. All allies within the magic circle will have their magic imbued with Unholy element, as well as have the damage of all attacks increased by +30%. Their attacks will also light enemies on fire during jobs, but not during PvP.

    Optionally, Lillian may cut her current HP in half to have the magic circle heal all allies within the Demon's Flame Circle for however much HP she sacrificed, multiplied by 1.25. This does not heal Lillian, and will also not heal any Demon Slayers or Gods; but it will heal a God Slayer. The heal is done over the course of the duration of the magic circle, meaning the HP gain per post is the total heal divided by 5. This counts towards HP regen and cannot exceed 15% of the player's max HP during combat, or 25% of the player's max HP out of combat.

    Strengths:
    Optional healing effect
     Increases damage

    Weaknesses:
    Healing effect cuts Lillian's HP in half
     The damage increase is only within the confines of the magic circle
    Healing effect doesn't work for Lillian, Gods or Demon Slayers
    Item(s):

    Lillian's Locket (Weapon):


    Lillian's Locket
    Legendary(+) 
    Magical Weapon 
    Description: 
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    A small locket she took from her mother's corpse, it contains
    mysterious powers to the user based on who that person is, or
    what that person is. For Lillian; the locket taps into her deepest
    and most latent power, bringing forth the demon within when
    the time is right.

    Strengths:
     Easily concealed weapon

    Weaknesses:
     Can't be used for melee
     The locket is normally hanging around Lillian's heart, so if the opponent attacks the locket and misses; Lillian gets impaled
    Demonic Shots:

    Demonflame Shots 
    Legendary(+) 
    Summary 
    Lillian is able to attack by firing Black, Fire Balls at her opponents. The fireballs are 5 inches wide, and can travel a maximum range of 15(+15 per rank above D) meters before fizzling out. They deal normal armed melee damage, as oppose to magic damage. These fire balls do not cause a burn upon impact. They travel at a speed of 13.5(+10 per rank above D) meters per second. As this is a passive ability, Lillian may do this as often as she likes. During PvP Lillian may fire a maximum of 4x of these per post.

    Optionally; Lillian may have another person add some of her magic power to the balls as a type of on-the-fly fusion raid, to enhance the damage of the Demonflame shot. The damage of the attack then becomes Armed Melee damage with the damage from Lexa's the other spell added in.

    These fireballs cannot be consumed by Dragon or Demon Slayers as it's mixed with Fire AND Unholy (demon) magic. Demon Slayers magic is infused with Holy Properties, making their digestive system unable to process Unholy magic due to it conflicting with their natural secondary element. Fire God Slayers however, have their magic infused with Unholy properties as is, and therefore will have no problems digesting the unholy fire.

    Strengths:
     Long distance attack that can also be combined with magic from outside sources

    Weaknesses:
     Combining with another party's spell doesn't negate the use of MP
     This spell can be consumed by Fire God Slayers
    Unbridled Wrath:

    Unbridled Wrath
    Legendary(+)
    5 Posts
    6 Post CD
    Summary
    Lillian places a curse on all opponents within 15(+15 per rank above D) meters of her. This curse is manifested by a mark that looks exactly like her pendent, is the same color as the opponent's skin aside from a very very thin outline that's exactly 1 shade lighter. It can be destroyed by the opponent literally cutting the curse mark off, doing so causes them to lose HP equal to 1x Ability Ranked base magic damage. All enemies lose HP equal to 50% of the base magic damage equal to the rank of all spells they cast. However, this only applies to spells and not Weapon/Armour/Pet/Unique abilities. The HP lost is in the form of the opponent spitting up blood. During PvP, this can effect a maximum of 4x people; and will effect +1 more persons per rank above D Rank.

    This ability is non-elemental; therefore cannot be consumed by any slayer. However, if in the future a "Curse" slayer is born; that individual may consume this.

    Strengths:
     Provides enemies with incentive to not use their magic

    Weaknesses:
     Doesn't negate any spells, or force the opponent not to use magic
     While the price is hefty, the curse can be literally cut out
    Atracrema:

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    Name: 
    Atracrema

    Rank: 
    Weak

    Species: 
    Fallen God

    Type: 
    Non-Combat

    Height:
    2' (60.48cm)

    Details:
    Atracrema is a former fire god who detested how his comrades
    looked down on mortals because they weren't as powerful. He
    eventually left the realm of the gods and lived with the humans
    and at one point, attempted to train humans to kill gods. This
    however landed him being forced into an animal form, and his
    soul being bound to a single human.

    Atracrema is a very intelligent, and crafty individual. He is able
    to talk his way out of most any situation, but hold no problems
    in fighting through it either. He has a deep voice that sounds a
    bit wise, but playful at the same time. He often enjoys spending
    time out in the sunlight, or in the snow when he can blend in and
    scare people passing by for kicks. But most times will be a decent
    fellow.


    Last edited by Lexa Grimoire on 24th December 2015, 4:07 am; edited 24 times in total


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    Akryn
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    Post by Akryn on 27th November 2015, 8:30 pm

    @Lexa Grimoire wrote:
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    Name:
    Atracrema

    Rank:
    Strong

    Species:
    Fallen God

    Type:
    Combat

    Height:
    Inari Form - 9' (272.16cm)
    God Form - 5' 9" (173.88cm)

    Details:
    Atracrema is a former fire god who detested how his comrades
    looked down on mortals because they weren't as powerful. He
    eventually left the realm of the gods and lived with the humans
    and at one point, attempted to train humans to kill gods. This
    however landed him being forced into an animal form, and his
    soul being bound to a single human.

    Atracrema is a very intelligent, and crafty individual. He is able
    to talk his way out of most any situation, but hold no problems
    in fighting through it either. He has a deep voice that sounds a
    bit wise, but playful at the same time. He often enjoys spending
    time out in the sunlight, or in the snow when he can blend in and
    scare people passing by for kicks. He's strong enough to carry
    Lexa across great expanses, and can run at blazing speeds out
    of combat. Atracrema swears himself to protecting Lexa at all
    costs, and one day freeing himself from the curse put on him
    so many centuries ago.


    Abilities:
    demon's flame circle:

    Demon's Flame Circle
    Equal to Pet Rank
    5 Posts
    6 Post CD
    Summary:
    Usable regardless of which form Atracrema decides to take; a 40 meter magic circle appears on the ground with Atracrema at its center. The circle appears to be lit on fire, except the flames are all pure black. All allies within the magic circle will have their magic imbued with Unholy element, as well as have the damage of all attacks increased by +10. Their attack with also light enemies on fire during jobs, but not during PvP.

    Optionally, Atracrema may cut his current HP in half to heal all allies within the Demon's Flame Circle for however much HP he sacrificed, multiplied by 1.25. This does not heal Atracrema, and will also not heal any Demon Slayers or Gods; but it will heal a God Slayer.This looks like a second spell. NICE TRY! This needs to go please.

    Strengths:
    Optional healing effect
    Increases damage[/blur]

    Weaknesses:
    Healing effect cuts Atracrema's HP in half
    The damage increase is only within the confines of the magic circle
    Healing effect doesn't work for Atracrema or Demon Slayers
    demon's fire fang:

    Demon's Fire Fang
    One Rank Below Pet
    Instant
    3 Posts
    Summary:
    While in Inari form, Atracrema's mouth fills with black flames. He then bites down on his opponent, dealing C Rank damage to the target and lighting the opponent on fire. During PvP this inflicts a burn effect that deals 1/4 C Rank damage per post for 4 posts. If Atracrema is in God Form, instead of the black flames being in his mouth it coats his hands which turns this spell into a Demon's Fire Punch instead (the effect is no different). This attack is partly Unholy therefore a Demon Slayer is unable to consume it. Demon Slayer magic is partially Holy which enables them to kill demons, as this magic is unholy it counters the De. Slayer's element which makes it so they can't digest it. However, a Fire De. Slayer can consume this spell perfectly fine due to its Fire element. Dragon slayers cannot consume this because it's multi-elemental.

    Secondary Effect:
    When the opponent dies during a non-PvP fight, 10% of its max HP is transferred to Atracrema who then transfers the HP to Lexa.

    Strengths:

    Deals a lot of damage[/blur]

    Weaknesses:
    Only hits 1 target
    Requires Atracrema to get within punching distance, making dodging incoming attacks much harder
    Item(s):
    Tether:
    Name: Tether
    Rank: Weak Uhm I don't think an item would go with a pet likethis. Sorry.
    Type: Magic Item
    Description: A strange force between Lexa and Atracrema that literally binds his soul to hers. The best way to describe it is like the gravity between two planets... it can be severed, but it would require a much greater force to do it.
    Ability: Release
    Effect: Allows Atracrema to switch between God form and Inari form at will. Switching between the two yields no stat bonuses, or fancy effects; just allows interaction between the two on a more humanesque level.
    god form:

    Atracrema & Lillian MiHU7DO


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    Spoiler:


    Dramatic moments

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    "I came into this world, kicking, screaming, and covered in someone elses blood. I have little issue going out the same way."
    Lexa Grimoire
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    Second Magic: Lillian Grimoire
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    Post by Lexa Grimoire on 27th November 2015, 11:01 pm

    Comment 1: You're cute comment of saying "nice try" is obnoxious, having the magic circle be able to heal those in it doesn't seem like a second spell; it seems like an optional secondary effect. I edited the ability because I worded the secondary effect wrong.

    Comment 2: ALL PETS CAN HAVE ITEMS, DON'T YOU DARE GIVE ME THAT GARBAGE


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    Post by Akryn on 2nd December 2015, 9:29 pm

    Hi, yes, names Akryn, resident asshole. I don't care if I sound obnoxious. The ability allows you to boost damage, or if you want heal instead, two very different abilities. They are far to different to be labeled as the same thing, so, denied.

    Secondly, if you want the item for your pet you have to purchase it, share a link to the purchase, and you lose a weapon slot.

    THANKS!


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    Prayne de crabug ahm keike rinedere be-yogt iglo kes gron!


    Akryns battle theme

    Spoiler:


    Dramatic moments

    Spoiler:



    "I came into this world, kicking, screaming, and covered in someone elses blood. I have little issue going out the same way."
    Lexa Grimoire
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    Post by Lexa Grimoire on 3rd December 2015, 3:40 am

    @Akryn wrote:Hi, yes, names Akryn, resident asshole. I don't care if I sound obnoxious. The ability allows you to boost damage, or if you want heal instead, two very different abilities. They are far to different to be labeled as the same thing, so, denied.

    Secondly, if you want the item for your pet you have to purchase it, share a link to the purchase, and you lose a weapon slot.

    THANKS!

    The ability is balanced, it heals an insignificant amount of health each post as well as boosts attack; at the most I'll compromise and make it non-PvP. But that ability won't go anywhere unless someone above your paygrade says it's not valid.

    Next, re-read the rules.
    1: Weak items cost nothing
    2: All items on pets don't take up a slot.

    So no, I don't have to link anything. No, it doesn't take up a weapon slot. Even if it did take a slot, it wouldn't take a weapon slot because it's not a weapon.

    And lastly, don't throw curse words on my apps got it? Good.


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    Post by Lexa Grimoire on 3rd December 2015, 3:56 am

    Aiyana on Skype wrote: [5:44:00 AM] Niyol|Lexa|Kateri: "-.- Can I ask your opinion on something?
    [5:47:33 AM] Aiyana: maybe
    [5:48:45 AM] Niyol|Lexa|Kateri: More specifically, your take on an ability
    [5:48:55 AM] Aiyana: ask quick. about to sleep soon
    [5:49:09 AM] Niyol|Lexa|Kateri: Usable regardless of which form Atracrema decides to take; a 40 meter magic circle appears on the ground with Atracrema at its center. The circle appears to be lit on fire, except the flames are all pure black. All allies within the magic circle will have their magic imbued with Unholy element, as well as have the damage of all attacks increased by +10. Their attack with also light enemies on fire during jobs, but not during PvP.

    Optionally, Atracrema may cut his current HP in half to have the magic circle heal all allies within the Demon's Flame Circle for however much HP he sacrificed, multiplied by 1.25. This does not heal Atracrema, and will also not heal any Demon Slayers or Gods; but it will heal a God Slayer. The heal is done over the course of the duration of the magic circle, meaning the HP gain per post is the total heal divided by 5.
    [5:49:29 AM] Niyol|Lexa|Kateri: Atracrema is a Strong rank pet, belonging to a B Rank player
    [5:49:35 AM] Niyol|Lexa|Kateri: so he has 200HP max
    [5:49:58 AM] Aiyana: so half hp would be 100
    [5:50:01 AM] Aiyana: so a 125 hp heal
    [5:50:14 AM] Niyol|Lexa|Kateri: Under ideal circumstances
    [5:50:23 AM] Aiyana: At B rank
    [5:50:27 AM] Aiyana: you have 300 hp
    [5:50:38 AM] Aiyana: so the heal would be ~40%ish heal
    [5:51:01 AM] Niyol|Lexa|Kateri: 25HP per post, but total ~41% give or take some decimals
    [5:51:33 AM] Aiyana: does it count in the max regen per post? the 15% of max hp per person?
    [5:52:18 AM] Niyol|Lexa|Kateri: I can make it so it does, since almost no-one uses HP regen anyways
    [5:52:29 AM] Aiyana: that's the only thing that worries me is all
    [5:52:44 AM] Niyol|Lexa|Kateri: so as an ability it's fine, so long as it counts towards the HP regen
    [5:52:50 AM] Aiyana: yeah
    [5:53:01 AM] Aiyana: from what my tired eyes noticed
    [5:53:02 AM] Niyol|Lexa|Kateri: and the fact that it also boosts damage by +10 is good as well?
    [5:53:15 AM] Aiyana: just for the duration
    [5:53:36 AM] Niyol|Lexa|Kateri: K, can you talk to Akryn about reading the equipment rules?
    [5:53:43 AM] Niyol|Lexa|Kateri: when you wake up/have time
    [5:53:54 AM] Aiyana: he do something?
    [5:54:02 AM] Aiyana: or cause updates?
    [5:54:06 AM] Niyol|Lexa|Kateri: Weak magic item on my pet
    [5:54:07 AM] Niyol|Lexa|Kateri: "if you want the item for your pet you have to purchase it, share a link to the purchase, and you lose a weapon slot. "
    [5:54:23 AM] Aiyana: oh
    [5:54:28 AM] Aiyana: he doesn't know pets get one of each
    [5:54:33 AM] Niyol|Lexa|Kateri: and initial comment "Uhm I don't think an item would go with a pet likethis. Sorry"
    [5:54:39 AM] Aiyana: just copy/paste that from me xD
    [5:54:46 AM] Niyol|Lexa|Kateri: K
    [5:54:59 AM] Aiyana: Pet's can have 1 item of up to legendary+ for armor/weapon/magic item

    Summary: Ability 1 edit, have the heal count towards max HP regen.

    Item is good.


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    Post by Lexa Grimoire on 7th December 2015, 3:18 am

    Edits Made:
    I turned the original pet into a companion(human)
    Demon's Flame Circle is now ability #2. Ability isn't changed, just moved.
    Added a different ability in the first slot.

    Added a Second pet. Second pet is Atracrema, and is non-combat.
    Below is a quote of 2 admins saying it's fine to have a non-combat pet and a combat pet.

    Trial Mod's Chat wrote:[1:58:50 AM] Niyol|Lexa|Kateri: so is it possible to have a NC-pet and a combat pet?
    [1:59:00 AM] Niyol|Lexa|Kateri: since the NC-pet is nearly cosmetic
    [1:59:26 AM] ▴ ʜɪᴋᴀʀɪ | Єƨтнɛя ▴: If it’s weak I think it’s possible
    [1:59:32 AM] ▴ ʜɪᴋᴀʀɪ | Єƨтнɛя ▴: For the NC-pet I mean
    [1:59:42 AM] *** Niyol|Lexa|Kateri looks to Aiyana for double confirmation... ***
    [2:01:06 AM] Aiyana: i see no issue with having a non-combat pet when you have a combat pet. Though not sure why you'd want another mouth to feed o3o


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    Post by Decayuss on 18th December 2015, 6:52 pm

    Alright, so...I guess I'm gonna' handle this. Awesome.

    First thing is that I'd like each of the Pet's abilities be stated which rank they are at, since the rules say that a Strong pet is granted 1 B rank and 1 C rank; specify which is which so I can judge them much more fairly, though there is not much wrong with them.

    And the rules also state that Magic items have only support passives, so the fireballs are probably going to need to be edited.


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    Post by Lexa Grimoire on 18th December 2015, 10:57 pm

    Slight typo with the ranks actually, I labeled them as Equal to; and 1 Rank below with the latter being my recent edit. 

    If you can advise a way to allow the pet to use those fireballs it would be helpful. I'm not saying I won't change them; just askin' for some help with the effect. Perhaps you can ask an admin if the effect is alright, and if they say no as well ask them to tell you what needs changing?


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    Post by Decayuss on 18th December 2015, 11:46 pm

    Alright. The spells and abilities look good to me.

    As for the ability on the locket, the only reason I ask for it to be changed is the fact that it need to be a "Support" kind of spell. And...offensive fireballs don't necessarily fall under that category. So something simple could suffice; a buff, a tiny heal, anything that's supportive.



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    Post by Lexa Grimoire on 19th December 2015, 3:24 am

    I removed the magic item because there's not a single passive I can use.
    Buffs are crap
    Any heals put on it (HP regen) will be worthless
    and I can't have an actual 'spell' on it.

    So I did what I was trying to avoid doing and bought an L+ weapon


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    Post by Decayuss on 19th December 2015, 10:05 am

    Regardless of if rank (weak, legendary, mythical, artifact) ALL Magic Items must have support abilities, and the ones you have on currently easily classify as an offensive.

    I prefer not to make demands as to what you should change them to, as I leave that completely up to the player for freedom, but just know that if it does damage, it's offensive. If it shields you or takes damage, it's defensive, but I can also classify that as supportive with some leeway.


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    Post by Lexa Grimoire on 19th December 2015, 11:53 am

    The Dagger was removed, and I replaced it with the Locket at a magic weapon. As for a debate on what classifies as supportive, defensive, or offensive; I'd rather save that for PM or Skype. My thread's getting messy as is.



    https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t14651p240-the-armory#218660

    ^ L+ weapon purchase, was supposed to be in the original post but the coding got jacked up somehow and it keeps appearing in the 2nd ability instead of the weapon description.


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    Post by Decayuss on 19th December 2015, 12:17 pm

    Alright, good. With that out of the way, I can move on to grading the actual abilities. And I know I said that the first ones were fine, but there are a few things bothering me. So, edits are in this color.
    Original:
    @Lexa Grimoire wrote:
    Lillian:

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    Name: 
    Lillian

    Rank: 
    Strong

    Species: 
    Human

    Type: 
    Combat

    Height:
    4' 4" (131.04cm)

    Details:
    Lillian is an extremely shy, but polite child. She
    enjoys listening to music, playing board games,
    cooking, baking, reading, and eating sweets. She
    absolutely hates having to kill people, but refuses
    to let her fear of murder stop her from learning the
    ways of the assailant. Her crimson eyes lead other to
    believe she's not human, even though the rest
    of her looks completely human.


    In combat Lillian utilizes a variety of Fire Demon 
    style attacks despite her being a full blooded human.
    As her attacks are partly Unholy, no Demon slayer is
    able to consume them. This is due to Demon magic
    being partly holy, which allows them to slay demons.
    Dragon slayers are also unable to consume her attacks
    due to them being multi-elemental; Primarily fire and
    partly Unholy. The effect is that her spells are all made
    of a type of Black Fire. Naturally, her spells may be
    consumed only by Fire God Slayers. Lillian typically
    doesn't get into the fight unless Lexa's in deep trouble.

    Demonic Eruption:


    Demonic Eruption
    Equal to Pet Rank
    Instant
    4 Posts CD
    Summary: 
    A black circle with a crimson aura formed around Lillian's hands, feet, over her chest, and in the pupils of her eyes. She pulls her hands into her body, curling up slightly and then throws them out; sending a massive, spherical wave of Black Fire outward for 40 meters. This flame will deal full damage to Lillian's enemies, and heal her allies for 5% of the damage dealt through this. Lillian may also lose 25% of her current HP in order to increase the damage of this spell to deal 2x ability ranked damage, and increase the max range by 10 meters. The Non player one is fine since they're non players and no one really cares about them, but the first part needs some balancing. I wouldn't mind this so much for the old rules--in fact I still don't mind damage boosts too much--but 2x rank damage for B rank is 120 damage, which is 20 damage away from being H rank damage. Either reduce the damage or increase the health cost, since the maximum health your pet can lose is about 87.5, for the price of dealing 120 damage. Doesn't balance out too well.She may lose 25% more of her current HP to deal 3x damage to non-player controlled NPCs, and increase the max range by 10 meters more. This second increase of damage cannot injure players.

    This ability can be blocked by Spherical barriers, or any barrier that encases a target entirely. As it is fire, a barrier that only covers a portion of the body will be insufficient as the flames would just wrap around it. The exception is if the barrier was 10 meters wide, and 10 meters tall at the minimum in each direction.

    Strengths:

     Deals very heavy damage if both enhancements are used
     Has a very wide range

    Weaknesses: 
     Requires HP loss to make both enhancements
     Can be dodged by getting out of area, standing even 1mm out of the range will be sufficient to evade
     Doesn't heal Lillian
    Demon's Flame Circle:


    Demon's Flame Circle 
    1 Rank Below Pet Rank 
    5 Posts
    6 Post CD
    Summary:
    Usable regardless of which form Lillian decides to take; a 30 meter magic circle appears on the ground with Lillian at its center and moves with her. The circle appears to be lit on fire, except the flames are all pure black. All allies within the magic circle will have their magic imbued with Unholy element, as well as have the damage of all attacks increased by +30%. Their attacks will also light enemies on fire during jobs, but not during PvP.

    Optionally, Lillian may cut her current HP in half to have the magic circle heal all allies within the Demon's Flame Circle for however much HP she sacrificed, multiplied by 1.25. This does not heal Lillian, and will also not heal any Demon Slayers or Gods; but it will heal a God Slayer. The heal is done over the course of the duration of the magic circle, meaning the HP gain per post is the total heal divided by 5. This counts towards HP regen and cannot exceed 15% of the player's max HP during combat, or 25% of the player's max HP out of combat.

    Strengths:
    Optional healing effect
     Increases damage

    Weaknesses:
    Healing effect cuts Lillian's HP in half
     The damage increase is only within the confines of the magic circle
    Healing effect doesn't work for Lillian, Gods or Demon Slayers
    Item(s):

    Lillian's Locket
    Legendary(+) 
    Magical Weapon 
    Description: 
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    A small locket she took from her mother's corpse, it contains
    mysterious powers to the user based on who that person is, or
    what that person is. For Lillian; the locket taps into her deepest
    and most latent power, bringing forth the demon within when
    the time is right.

    Strengths:
     Easily concealed weapon

    Weaknesses:
     Can't be used for melee
     The locket is normally hanging around Lillian's heart, so if the opponent attacks the locket and misses; Lillian gets impaled
    Demonic Shots:

    Demonflame Shots 
    Legendary(+) 
    Summary 
    Lillian is able to attack by firing Black, Fire Balls at her opponents. The fireballs are 5 inches wide, and can travel a maximum range of 15(+15 per rank above D) meters before fizzling out. They deal normal armed melee damage, as oppose to magic damage. These fire balls do not cause a burn upon impact. They travel at a speed of 13.5(+10 per rank above D) meters per second. As this is a passive ability, Lillian may do this as often as she likes. The range, speed, and damage are okay with me, I just dislike abilities like this that are passive-offensive. Because despite their small size, without any limit to the number of times you can use this on a person or during a post, you can easily just instant-kill someone just because there is no stated limit. I recommend either putting a limit on how many times you can do it per post, or how many times a person can get hit by it. Either way is up to you.

    Optionally; Lillian may have another person add some of her magic power to the balls as a type of on-the-fly fusion raid, to enhance the damage of the Demonflame shot. The damage of the attack then becomes Armed Melee damage with the damage from Lexa's the other spell added in.

    These fireballs cannot be consumed by Dragon or Demon Slayers as it's mixed with Fire AND Unholy (demon) magic. Demon Slayers magic is infused with Holy Properties, making their digestive system unable to process Unholy magic due to it conflicting with their natural secondary element. Fire God Slayers however, have their magic infused with Unholy properties as is, and therefore will have no problems digesting the unholy fire.

    Strengths:
     Long distance attack that can also be combined with magic from outside sources

    Weaknesses:
     Combining with another party's spell doesn't negate the use of MP
     This spell can be consumed by Fire God Slayers
    Unbridled Wrath:

    Unbridled Wrath
    Legendary(+)
    5 Posts
    6 Post CD
    Summary
    Lillian places a curse on all opponents I don't like all-opponent debuffs. There should probably be a limit as to how many you can put on a person.within 15(+15 per rank above D) meters of her. This curse is manifested by a mark that looks exactly like her pendent, is the same color as the opponent's skin aside from a very very thin outline that's exactly 1 shade lighter. It can be destroyed by the opponent literally cutting the curse mark off, doing so causes them to lose HP equal to 1x Ability Ranked base magic damage. Is this for their ability Magic damage or yours?All enemies lose HP equal to 50% of the base magic damage equal to the rank of all spells they cast. However, this only applies to spells and not Weapon/Armour/Pet/Unique abilities. The HP lost is in the form of the opponent spitting up blood.

    This ability is non-elemental; therefore cannot be consumed by any slayer. However, if in the future a "Curse" slayer is born; that individual may consume this.

    Strengths:
     Provides enemies with incentive to not use their magic

    Weaknesses:
     Doesn't negate any spells, or force the opponent not to use magic
     While the price is hefty, the curse can be literally cut out
    Atracrema:

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    Name: 
    Atracrema

    Rank: 
    Weak

    Species: 
    Fallen God

    Type: 
    Non-Combat

    Height:
    2' (60.48cm)

    Details:
    Atracrema is a former fire god who detested how his comrades
    looked down on mortals because they weren't as powerful. He
    eventually left the realm of the gods and lived with the humans
    and at one point, attempted to train humans to kill gods. This
    however landed him being forced into an animal form, and his
    soul being bound to a single human.

    Atracrema is a very intelligent, and crafty individual. He is able
    to talk his way out of most any situation, but hold no problems
    in fighting through it either. He has a deep voice that sounds a
    bit wise, but playful at the same time. He often enjoys spending
    time out in the sunlight, or in the snow when he can blend in and
    scare people passing by for kicks. But most times will be a decent
    fellow.


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    Post by Lexa Grimoire on 19th December 2015, 3:36 pm

    I think you forget that the ability deals 60 damagel to start, Lillian has 200hp so she loses 50hp to deal 60extra.

    The Demonflame Shot IS the melee attack for that weapon. I won't limit it unless i see a rule limiting non-magic attacks. Guns, bows, crossbows all other ranged melee attacks are unlimited and some can go faster.

    Next, the damage taken from the curse is ability rank; since it doesn't effect the opponent's non-spells, it can only mean the weapon ability. Before that's shot down, losing 60HP to be able to cast spells without hurting yourself is pretty fair.

    Also, the limit is everyone in range. It isn't a debuff, it's a curse. It doesn't stop you fr using magic, it doesn't slow you, it doesn't lock you in place, or anything as extreme as other forms of crowd control. Limiting it to X amount of people is unbalanced because that makes ot weaker than other spells.


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    Post by Decayuss on 19th December 2015, 3:47 pm

    I don't really care if she loses that much HP, 60 damage plus 60 damage is a huge amount considering most people can barely get away with 20 extra damage. In fact, just adding 20 increases the damage by a whole rank. 120 is too much for total, regardless of the health loss. Dropping the second instance damage numbers a little bit and I'll accept it.

    That shot isn't the melee attack, it's a passive. Weapons aren't even supposed to have passives anyway. And that's not a non-magic attack seeing as it's a magic item... Guns, crossbows, etc. need to be reloaded from time to time anyway. This does not. If you're going to say it can't have a regular attack, and then argue that a passive ability (which again weapons shouldn't even have) is the regular attack, decide on what you want. It's contradicting itself.


    The damage to get rid of it is fine with me, I guess. I don't mind 60 HP all that much.

    And finally, I'm asking for a limit on this because there is virtually no way that this can miss. Anyone who is within 45 meters from you either takes unavoidable 60 HP damage, or continues to hurt themselves. Ouch. That can result in a lot of people, and a lot of unhappy faces. And unless every single person you're facing is equipped with a long-range sniper or keeps their distance at all times, arguing that there is a range doesn't make it all that more sound. A lot of people can fit in 45 meters, and not a lot of people can fight more than 45 meters away. And again, this damage has no way of being avoided: either damage yourself, or damage yourself.


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    Post by Lexa Grimoire on 19th December 2015, 4:25 pm

    According to the equipment rules, weapons can have passives. That locket is a weapon, it can attack just not with melee, you know... Sword swing, fist punch etc... But that passive allows for a ranged attack. I don't see "reload times" listed on weapon applications. And i also don't see weapon attacks that can be consumed by any sort of slayer, whereas this on can get chomped by F Des. Slayers. Also, this is a non-magic attack. It uses no magic.

    Now onto the curse. Theres mass paralysis spells, mass freeze or bind spells to. With those, you can't block or attack. You sit there and get hammered at fir however long it lasts. With that ability you can simply use you melee attacks. Or your pet, your armour, your weapon abilities without taking damage.

    That first pet ability has a 4 post cooldown. That's 4 posts before the enemy has to even care about getting hit again. In 4 posts, someone can easily kill Lillian or Lexa. Lillian would be easier cause she would have 150hp after 1 use. If it was one of those attacks with a 2 post cd then you could argu it was a spam attack, but it isn't. And if Lillian does use that boost, her heal ability gets weakened cause that ability requires HP as well, and the heal is directly effected by the HP lost.


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    Post by Decayuss on 19th December 2015, 4:32 pm

    "Explanation on passive slots: As a rule of thumb weapon don't get passives, multi part weapons are the exception. making a weapon out of many parts they gain access to passives. This is due to the addition to Magic items"

    This arguing is starting to become really tiresome for me. That "passive" shouldn't exist in the first place since, you know, the above quote I listed which can be found in weapon rules here under weapon substitution at the very bottom states weapons can't have passives. But I'm allowing this to exist under the circumstance that you just add one small layer of balance to it. If this is honestly that uncompromising to you, then I'm giving up this application to someone else if you wish. The fact that they should reload is a given thing. Even if they can fire an unlimited number of times, I seriously doubt that they can be fired an infinite number of times within a second, which is basically what happens if a person states no kind of delay, Cool Down, or limitation on a passive.

    As for the curse, I don't know anyone who has mass stuns or blinds that cannot be missed or countered in any way other than hurting themselves. And I don't need you to provide one. Using my other stuff is all well and good, but people primarily use their Primary Magic. That's why it's called Primary Magic. All I'm asking for is a limitation to the number of people it can affect. If that is also too much to ask for, then I'm giving up on this application entirely.

    I know it has a Cool Down. Everything does. 4 posts is a standard Cool Down, it doesn't help your argument.


    I'm not being biased here, nor am I asking you to remove anything. All I'm asking is to add a small layer of balance to this all that certainly shouldn't ruin the spells. That's what a moderator is supposed to do, but you're giving me a very hard time right now.

    Too much? I'm done.


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    Post by Lexa Grimoire on 24th December 2015, 3:57 pm

    Bump


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    Post by Decayuss on 24th December 2015, 3:59 pm

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    Atracrema & Lillian 3516662-feral_chaos_(2)

    The White Angel:
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    Spirit Merge:
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