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    Blade of Jursidiction; 管轄の刃

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    Pein

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    Completed Blade of Jursidiction; 管轄の刃

    Post by Pein on 22nd August 2015, 4:13 pm

    Look:

    Name:
    Blade of Jursidiction; 管轄の刃
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    Rank: Legendary +
    Type: Katana

    Description: A legendary katana that is rumored to have a soul of its own. Crafted and forged by the guardians of heaven, it is crafted out of golden Adamantium resistant to the devil's flames. It is said to be able to vanquish evil, depending on the user's jurisdiction. It only purpose is to serve justice and create a better world. Long ago, as it was forged, it was used by the ancient deity Yato. Yato lived to protect, vanquishing evil with the strong sword. As Yato perished, he bounded his soul with the Blade of Jurisdiction, where one day it would be used by a justice seeking individual that would acquire it's powerful abilities. Before being unsheathed, the blade is covered in cloth/bandages. To unsheath it, the wrappings go away and only cover the hilt. It is 5 feet in total length, with a hilt of 1 feet.
    Strengths:


    • The sword is Legendary + in rank, giving it a lot of HP.
    • Has abilities to counter spells, especially from dark mages.
    • Is only usable by Nagato, as their souls are bonded.


    Weaknesses:


    • The abilities are only as strong as Nagato's rank.
    • Does not offer a damage boost as Nagato is not A-Rank.
    • Functions as a weak weapon in damage.
    • Damage boost is only against dark mages (explained below.)






    Abilities:


    Yato's Jurisdiction (Passive):

    Name: Yato's Jurisdiction

    Rank: D-Rank Passive

    Description: A passive ability, Yato's Jurisdiction will only be active when in battle against dark mages/opponents. These opponents must be evil, and wish to cause harm not only to innocent people, but the world also. This ability will not be active against allies in PvP battles, making it only usable against illegal mages with maleficent intentions. That being said when activated, the Blade of Jurisdiction glows in a slight blue color, gains a damage boost of 5 hp, and a extra durability of 10 hp.

    Strengths:

    • Offers a damage boost against dark mages or enemies.
    • Offers a durability boost against dark mages or enemies.
    • A Passive Ability


    Weaknesses:

    • Will not work in situations against allies or legal mages.
    • Still does not do as much damage as a Strong ranked weapon.
    • Still does not have the durability as a Strong ranked weapon.
    • Will rank up with Nagato, but as of now it is still weak in terms of it's full potential.



    Yato's Punishment:

    Name: Yato's Punishment
    Rank: D-Rank
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 3 Posts
    Description: Calling on the powers of the god Yato, the blade will seek out and relinquish any evil mage of their sins with extermination. Upon activation, the sword's hilt darken, and gives off a black aura. The sword slice will deal D-Rank damage, and if it is used against a dark mage or enemy, the will suffer .25% more damage.
    size=16]Strengths:

    • Offers a damage boost against dark mages and evil foes
    • If the strike hits it offers D-Rank damage.
    • Could be a battle changing scenario as it increases the swords power momentarily


    Weaknesses:

    • Damage boost does not affect allies or legal mages
    • High cool down in comparison to the instant duration.
    • Only works for one slash, so it must be a hit.
    • Will rank up with Nagato, but as of now it is still weak in terms of its full potential.




    Last edited by Pein on 6th September 2015, 1:16 pm; edited 1 time in total


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    Completed Re: Blade of Jursidiction; 管轄の刃

    Post by Pein on 3rd September 2015, 4:52 pm

    Bump as it is completed ~


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    Completed Re: Blade of Jursidiction; 管轄の刃

    Post by Wolfe on 6th September 2015, 12:58 am

    Pein wrote:size=16]
    Look:

    Name:
    Blade of Jursidiction; 管轄の刃
    [/size]
    Rank: Legendary +
    Type: Katana

    Description: A legendary katana that is rumored to have a soul of its own. Crafted and forged by the guardians of heaven, it is crafted out of golden Adamantium resistant to the devil's flames. It is said to be able to vanquish evil, depending on the user's jurisdiction. It only purpose is to serve justice and create a better world. Long ago, as it was forged, it was used by the ancient deity Yato. Yato lived to protect, vanquishing evil with the strong sword. As Yato perished, he bounded his soul with the Blade of Jurisdiction, where one day it would be used by a justice seeking individual that would acquire it's powerful abilities. Before being unsheathed, the blade is covered in cloth/bandages. To unsheath it, the wrappings go away and only cover the hilt. It is 5 feet in total length, with a hilt of 1 feet.
    Strengths:


    • The sword is Legendary + in rank, giving it a lot of HP.
    • Has abilities to counter spells, especially from dark mages.
    • Is only usable by Nagato, as their souls are bonded.


    Weaknesses:


    • The abilities are only as strong as Nagato's rank. Refer to below comment
    • Does not offer a damage boost as Nagato is not A-Rank. Refer to below comment
    • Functions as a weak weapon in damage. This as well at the two weaknesses above it are not considered usable weaknesses. As they are not weaknesses, but rather stated points from the weapons rules. Weaknesses need to be unique to the Weapon/Item/ Armor/etc..., not copied rules.
    • Damage boost is only against dark mages (explained below.)








    Abilities:


    Yato's Jurisdiction (Passive):

    Name: Yato's Jurisdiction

    Rank: D-Rank Passive

    Description: A passive ability, Yato's Jurisdiction will only be active when in battle against dark mages/opponents. These opponents must be evil, and wish to cause harm not only to innocent people, but the world also. This ability will not be active against allies in PvP battles, making it only usable against illegal mages with maleficent intentions. That being said when activated, the Blade of Jurisdiction glows in a slight blue color, gains a damage boost of 5 hp, and a extra durability of 10 hp.
    This is fine as a passive. However, i would convert this to a % rather then a base number, as it will alter when you rank up and you wont have to change the %. Also the base number is a tad high as 5 plus the weak base of 2 equals 7 is more than triple the base melee damage for the rank. A weak weapon adds 2 damage base to the 2 base for a char. So if you put it at +50% bonus of the bonus a weapon adds, it should be fine all the way up through the ranks.

    Strengths:

    • Offers a damage boost against dark mages or enemies.
    • Offers a durability boost against dark mages or enemies.
    • A Passive Ability


    Weaknesses:

    • Will not work in situations against allies or legal mages.
    • Still does not do as much damage as a Strong ranked weapon. Refer to below comment
    • Still does not have the durability as a Strong ranked weapon. Refer to below comment
    • Will rank up with Nagato, but as of now it is still weak in terms of it's full potential. This as well at the two weaknesses above it are not considered usable weaknesses. As they are not weaknesses, but rather stated points from the weapons rules. Weaknesses need to be unique to the Weapon/Item/ Armor/etc..., not copied rules.



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    Yato's Punishment:

    Name: Yato's Punishment
    Rank: D-Rank
    Duration: Instant
    Cooldown: 3 Posts
    Description: Calling on the powers of the god Yato, the blade will seek out and relinquish any evil mage of their sins with extermination. Upon activation, the sword's hilt darken, and gives off a black aura. The sword slice will deal D-Rank damage, and if it is used against a dark mage or enemy, the will suffer .25% more damage.
    size=16]Strengths:

    • Offers a damage boost against dark mages and evil foes
    • If the strike hits it offers D-Rank damage.
    • Could be a battle changing scenario as it increases the swords power momentarily


    Weaknesses:

    • Damage boost does not affect allies or legal mages
    • High cool down in comparison to the instant duration. This is not a usable weakness, as 3-4 post is an average cool-down for D rank effect/spell. You will need to come up with a new weakness please
    • Only works for one slash, so it must be a hit.
    • Will rank up with Nagato, but as of now it is still weak in terms of its full potential. This weakness doesn't count as it is another weakness like the ones before that is just a repeat of the of the base rules for a weak, and not a unique weakness as is needed



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