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    Armageddon the Warhorse

    Nessaj the CK
    Nessaj the CK

    The Chaos Knight


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    Completed Armageddon the Warhorse

    Post by Nessaj the CK 20th January 2015, 2:58 pm

    Name: Armageddon
    Rank: Weak
    Species: Spectral Warhorse
    Type: Combat Pet
    Description:
    Picture:

    Armageddon the Warhorse 256px-Cosmetic_icon_Hellstrider
    Abilities:

    • Can be ridden by a rider, but the rider is not needed to act.
    • Is fully trained to not fear combat or magic, she cannot be feared by magic of D-Rank.

    Strengths:

    • She is much faster or just as fast then most mages.
    • She can carry up to 2 people.

    Weaknesses:

    • As a horse she is relatively large and does not do well in small spaces.
    • She is very bad at sneaking around.
    • Requires a lot of training to properly ride in combat for anyone.

    Charge of War:

    Armageddon the Warhorse Stampede_icon
    Name: Charge of War
    Rank: C
    Type: Physical
    Duration: 1 Post
    Cooldown: 6 Posts (3 Posts if the spell was cancelled)
    Speed: 15 m/s
    Description: Armageddon charges at a target running through any terrain obstacles and is immune to any slows during the charge, unless the slow or terrain is from a spell higher Rank then her. When she reaches the target she applies the Spell War Stomp on them if that spell is off cooldown, if War Stomp succeeds it is also goes on cooldown. If the spell is disjointed it only goes onto a 3 post cooldown.
    Visual Description:


    Strengths:

    • Applies War Stomp to her target if she reaches them.
    • Can be used without a rider.

    Weaknesses:

    • The spell is disjointed if she gets Hard CC'd (Crowd Controlled - such as stunned, knocked over, rooted, etc) over during the charge.
    • She runs slower with out a rider to guide her.
    • Has a long cooldown.

    War Stomp:

    Armageddon the Warhorse Hoof_Stomp_icon
    Name: War Stomp
    Rank: D-Rank
    Type: Physical
    Duration: 1 Post
    Cooldown: 4 Posts
    Description: Armageddon stomps the ground with such force she knocks over all enemies in a 1 meter radius around her. Mages of B-rank or higher cannot be knocked over. This does D-Rank damage.
    Visual Description:


    Strengths:

    • Knocks over opponents.
    • Can be used whether there is a rider or not.

    Weaknesses:

    • Requires Armageddon to come within striking distance of the target.
    • Is very easy to dodge if there isn't a rider to guide her.
    • Has a small range.



    Last edited by Nessaj the CK on 14th October 2016, 3:51 am; edited 9 times in total


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    Completed Re: Armageddon the Warhorse

    Post by Yvonne 26th January 2015, 9:43 am

    About the deals more damage if target is wearing armor? why is that possible? Your pet's trample ability can cause D rank damage and that's that o-o Also, you need one more weakness. Bump when done.


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    Nessaj the CK
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    Completed Re: Armageddon the Warhorse

    Post by Nessaj the CK 26th January 2015, 1:20 pm

    Boop


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    Completed Re: Armageddon the Warhorse

    Post by Nessaj the CK 28th January 2015, 10:46 am

    Boop again


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    Completed Re: Armageddon the Warhorse

    Post by Yvonne 29th January 2015, 12:14 am

    Approved!


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    Completed Re: Armageddon the Warhorse

    Post by Cr1tikal 11th October 2016, 10:59 pm

    @Nessaj the CK wrote:Name: Armageddon
    Rank: Weak
    Species: Warhorse
    Type: Combat Pet
    Description:
    Picture:
    Armageddon the Warhorse Dota2_CK_Base02
    Abilities:

    • Can be ridden by a rider
    • Is fully trained to not fear combat or magic

    Armageddon the Warhorse Hoof_Stomp_icon
    Name: Trample
    Rank: D-Rank
    Description: Armageddon runs into and then over an opponent, stomping them with her hooves trampling them.
    Strengths:

    • Knocks over an opponent (B-rank and higher mages cannot be knocked over)
    • Is more likely to knock over an opponent with armor
    • Can be used whether there is a rider or not

    Weaknesses:

    • Requires Armageddon to come within striking distance of the target
    • Is very easy to dodge if there isn't a rider to guide her
    • The attack is rather slow starting up
    • If the enemy is in mid attack then the attack will strike Armageddon instead the initial target


    Moved at users request. Please use the standard approval topic when you are ready for someone to look over it.


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    Completed Re: Armageddon the Warhorse

    Post by Nessaj the CK 12th October 2016, 12:38 am

    *slaps the post up with a bump*


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    Completed Re: Armageddon the Warhorse

    Post by Nessaj the CK 13th October 2016, 12:22 pm

    Bumping again


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    Completed Re: Armageddon the Warhorse

    Post by Terith 13th October 2016, 4:21 pm

    Hey there Nessaj. This is Terith and I'll be grading your horse : D. Edits are in this color. Bump when done.

    @Nessaj the CK wrote:Name: Armageddon
    Rank: Weak
    Species: Spectral Warhorse
    Type: Combat Pet
    Description:
    Picture:

    Armageddon the Warhorse 256px-Cosmetic_icon_Hellstrider
    Abilities:

    • Can be ridden by a rider
    • Is fully trained to not fear combat or magic

    Charge of War:

    Armageddon the Warhorse Stampede_icon
    Name: Charge of War
    Rank: C
    Type: Physical
    Duration: 1 Post
    Cooldown: 6 Posts (3 Posts)
    Description: Armageddon charges at a target running through any terrain obstacles and is immune to any slows during the charge, unless the slow or terrain is from a spell higher Rank then her How fast can this baby go? Please specify her maximum speed in m/s and add in a max range, too. Also pure immunity is a little iffy, what with this pet's rank. I'd consider something more of negating slows to some extent. The most I can give you is the opposing spell becoming 25-30% less effective on her provided that it's of the same rank as her. When she reaches the target she applies the Spell War Stomp on them if that spell is off cooldown, if War Stomp succeeds it is also goes on cooldown. If the spell is disjointed it only goes onto a 3 post cooldown.
    Visual Description:


    Strengths:

    • Applies War Stomp to her target if she reaches them
    • Can be used without a rider.

    Weaknesses:

    • The spell is disjointed if she gets Hard CC'd (Crowd Controlled - such as stunned, knocked over, rooted, etc) over during the charge.
    • She runs slower with out a rider to guide her.
    • Has a long cooldown.

    War Stomp:

    Armageddon the Warhorse Hoof_Stomp_icon
    Name: War Stomp
    Rank: D-Rank
    Type: Physical
    Duration: 1 Post
    Cooldown: 4 Posts
    Description: Armageddon stomps the ground with such force she knocks over all enemies in a 1 meter radius around her. Mages of B-rank or higher cannot be knocked over. Okay so....does this even deal damage? If it does, please add it in for convenience.
    Visual Description:


    Strengths:

    • Knocks over opponents.
    • Can be used whether there is a rider or not.

    Weaknesses:

    • Requires Armageddon to come within striking distance of the target.
    • Is very easy to dodge if there isn't a rider to guide her.
    • Has a small range.

    Nessaj the CK
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    Completed Re: Armageddon the Warhorse

    Post by Nessaj the CK 13th October 2016, 4:53 pm

    Fore *uses a golf club to bump*


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    Completed Re: Armageddon the Warhorse

    Post by Terith 13th October 2016, 5:11 pm

    Alright. After talking it out with Marcy, it seems you can keep the immunity, so long as the slow/terrain is C-rank and below. Sorry about that.

    And one more thing, I'll need you to clarify what the (3 posts) in your cool down means. I know you placed it in the description, but this is to avoid confusion for others. Feel free to up the last ability's damage up to one D-rank.

    Once all of this is done, consider yourself approved. ^^

    P.S. I forgot to mention, you're missing the individual weaknesses and strengths for your horse. Please place it above the "Abilities"


    Last edited by Terith on 13th October 2016, 5:14 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : inevitable derping)
    Nessaj the CK
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    The Chaos Knight

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    Completed Re: Armageddon the Warhorse

    Post by Nessaj the CK 14th October 2016, 3:51 am

    Whack!


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    Completed Re: Armageddon the Warhorse

    Post by Terith 14th October 2016, 4:13 am

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