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    Slowness Magic

    Post by Sogeki on 25th May 2015, 4:59 pm

    Username: Sogeki
    Secondary Magic Name: Slowness Magic
    Evidence of Accomplishment:
    Description: It is a type of Magic which allows the user to slow down their opponent by employing a time-affecting Magic which affects the opponents' perception of time. With their opponents' delayed reactions, the user can move in and attack freely before the opponent has a chance to counter it. However, the range of the user's Magic is limited, which means that only people and objects within a certain range of the user are affected by this Magic. Anything outside the range is unaffected by the Magic and the people inside of the range, view things outside of it as moving extremely fast. In addition, anything that originated from outside of the user's area-of effect will retain its normal speed even if it enters their area-of-effect afterwards.
    Strengths:
    -Stronger physical abilities than normal.
    -Enhanced Strength.
    -The enemies won't be able to follow the user, not even with their eyes.
    Weaknesses:
    -Outside objects will stay with their original speed.
    -No defensive spells.
    -Limited area of effect in the slowness zone.
    -The user doesn't gain more speed, this means his basic attacks won't deal more damage than normal. But enemy's won't deal less damage either.
    -Slows Allies as well.
    Abilities:

    Slowness:
    In a area of 50 meters radius per rank. But note, this isn't actually a de-buff nor a buff, this only makes the user "move faster" when he is only making the enemy mentally slower. This affects any object inside the area including spells, meaning it looks like actually he was highly buffed, but this will only have a speed difference between Sogeki and mages of equal rank than him. If the enemy is at least one rank higher than Sogeki, they will easily be able to see him and intercept him, but won't be as fast. (In other words this only affects stats slightly, this will just make a real change in the way of rping)


    Z-Dash:
    D-Rank Spell Name: Z-Dash
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Description: The user technically dashes three times in strait lines with a max of 10 meters each. The user will punch or attack once each time he ends a dash (if he gets to someone), but this happens in a blink of an eye, so they won't even see what hit them.
    Strengths:
    -The user can attack up to 3 targets.
    -It's incredibly fast, if someone isn't in his best conditions, he will have some trouble evading this.
    Weaknesses:
    -If the enemy is higher tier than this spell, they are actually able to dodge it.
    -Each dash has a max of 10 meters, if sogeki doesn't reach anyone in that time, it won't damage.
    -Cooldown: 3 posts

    Y-Meteor Kick:
    C-Rank Spell Name: Y-Meteor Kick
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Description: Sogeki dashes at a high speed towards the enemy. He then jumps and ends above the enemy's head and lands a kick above them throwing them down. The kick moves downwards. This is fast enough to make it look like a teleport.
    Strengths:
    -Low cooldown.
    -Difficult to evade.
    -Looks like a teleportation.
    Weaknesses:
    -The enemy has to be at least 10 meters near an enemy.
    -Can only attack one enemy.
    -Even if it looks like a teleportation, it's not, it's actually a straight line, which means the user can't evade a incoming spell from his target since he would crash against it.
    -Cooldown is 2 posts.

    X-Hundred hit Blow:
    B-Rank Spell Name: X-Hundred hit Blow
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Description: Sogeki targets only one enemy. He then lands a quick punch at him moving him about 5 meters up. After that, only if he landed the first punch, he will be able to complete the attack by landing 98 punches and kicks at the enemy all around his body. After all those attacks, he will land a final kick or punch towards his upper part of the head or stomach to throw him down to the ground.
    Something like this:
    Strengths:
    -This attack deals 50% more damage if the enemy was already in the air because he gains more height for the final blow.
    -Very difficult to evade.
    -Leaves the enemy highly bruised and may even break bones.
    Weaknesses:
    -No matter what, can only attack one enemy.
    -Has to land the first blow, if he doesn't, this spell will anyway start it's cooldown.
    -The spell can vary, this means the hundred hits can be different and from different places. But there has to be at least a 5 meter height in the area.
    -Cooldown: 4 posts

    W-Thousand hit Blow:
    B-Rank Spell Name: W-Thousand hit Blow
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Description: Sogeki targets only one enemy. He then lands a quick punch at him moving him about 5 meters up. After that, only if he landed the first punch, he will be able to complete the attack by landing 998 punches and kicks at the enemy all around his body. After all those attacks, he will land a final kick or punch towards his upper part of the head or stomach to throw him down to the ground.
    Something like this:
    Strengths:
    -This attack deals 50% more damage if the enemy was already in the air because he gains more height for the final blow.
    -Very difficult to evade.
    -Leaves the enemy highly bruised and may even break bones.
    Weaknesses:
    -No matter what, can only attack one enemy.
    -Has to land the first blow, if he doesn't, this spell will anyway start it's cooldown.
    -The spell can vary, this means the thousand hits can be different and from different places. But there has to be at least a 5 meter height in the area.
    -Cooldown: 6 posts

    S-One Man Army:
    S-Rank Spell Name: S-One Man Army
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Description: By moving fast enough, Sogeki is even able to clone himself. At this point, Sogeki attacks about 100 times anyone inside a 25 meter radius area by attacking them at a high speed. It's like all of them receiving a Hundred hit Blow but everyone receives S rank damage.
    Strengths:
    -Anyone inside the area receives full damage.
    -It has no limit of targets, but they have to be in the area.
    -This happens faster than the hundred hit blow spell, it's completely instant.
    Weaknesses:
    -The area is around Sogeki.
    -High cooldown: 10 posts.
    -The spell can vary, this means the thousand hits can be different and from different places. But there has to be at least a 5 meter height in the area.
    -Can still be evaded if the enemies are fast enough, even if it's complicated.


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    Re: Slowness Magic

    Post by Thorn on 26th May 2015, 5:55 am

    @Sogeki wrote:Username: Sogeki
    Secondary Magic Name: Forbidden Art: Mokushiroku (Apocalypse)
    Evidence of Accomplishment:
    Description: This magic is split in three basic parts. The first one is creating a huge dome around a specific area. That dome can be tresspassed by magic other than Sogeki's, but any object or person won't be able to enter or leave. The dome is called "Sekai" Japanese for world. The second part of this magic, is by creating cracks in space and time inside the dome to repeat a single apocalyptic event which happened in another realm or dimension. These event's can vary and can be slightly changed by the user. The third part is based on organic link magic. This part allows the user to gain speed, stamina and strength depending on the destruction inside the dome. Each time anything inside the dome is destroyed, Sogeki gains some sort of green aura which increments his physical strength.
    Strengths:
    -Stronger physical abilities than normal.
    -Strong AoE attacks.
    -The dome can't be passed below ground since it's a complete sphere.
    Weaknesses:
    -Summoning the dome won't cost MP, but has can't be moved and has a cooldown.
    -Higher tier mage's will be able to leave and enter the dome if they wish. They can also crack the dome by attacking it with no magic.
    -Dome can't be used as a barrier against magic.
    -Come is too big to use as a shield against physical attacks.
    -No defensive spells.
    Abilities:

    Sekai:
    By extending his hands, and saying the words Sekai, the user is able to create a dome. At C rank, the dome is 100 meters diameter. At B rank the dome is 500 meters diameter. At A rank the dome is 1 kilometer diamater. At S rank, the dome is able to even surround a town like era or magnolia. The dome will only let magic and higher tier people in and out. If someone is at least 2 tiers higher than the user, he can punch the dome strong enough to make a hole and let other people pas. (Why is the dome so big? This is an ability to close battlefields cause terror in civilians, etc.). The dome has no limited duration, but without it, Sogeki can't cast any of this Magic's spells. The dome has a 5 post cooldown and it can't move. Sogeki can't get out of the dome either. this is more of a spell than an ability. second thing the distance is way to much max for C is about 30 meters and so on!

    Apocalyptic Aura:
    As the fight grows inside the dome, Sogeki get's physically stronger. Each time a spell activates, Sogeki's speed and strength grow in 20%. This buff, can't exceed the 300% (this 300 includes the starting 100), and even if the speed is higher than a higher tier enemy, the enemy can anyway evade and see Sogeki's movement if he's a higher tier. Sogeki's Stamina will also grow. When he reaches 200%, he will be able to keep fighting even if he has broken bones or is severally damaged, and when he gets to the 300%, he will lose his pain and will still be able ti fight at any circumstances (If his health reaches 20% or less, this is canceled). umm no sorry this is denied




    One Man Army:
    D-Rank Spell Name: One Man Army
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Description: By saying the words; "This world will be destroyed by human war." Sogeki gains an incredible speed, and actually looks like he teleports. He attacks once each enemy inside the dome, not dealing D rank damage, instead, he deals instant basic hit damageI am sorry this would be a D rank damage devided between each opponent. This is done by breaking time and space and going towards a dimension where the world was actualyl destroyed by man itself, where war destroyed everything and left nobody in the world.
    you need to put the duration and cooldown here!
    Strengths:
    -Attacks everyone inside the dome.
    -Sogeki ends the attack in any place inside the dome.
    -Cooldown is low: 2 posts. 1 this is to durnerice as a strength and 2 post cooldown is to low!
    Weaknesses:
    -Instead of dealing this makes no sense!!!
    -The attack can only be performed inside the dome.
    -Instead of dealing D rank damage, it only deals a basic attack damage.
    -Higher tier enemies can evade this attack.

    Supernova:
    C-Rank Spell Name: Supernova
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Description: By saying the words; "This world will be destroyed by Hyperion, the sun itself." Sogeki creates a tiny sun inside the dome, the sun will then explode some seconds after dealing damage and burning anyone inside the dome. This is done by breaking time and space and going towards a dimension where the world was actually destroyed by the sun, where a supernova destroyed everything and left nobody in the world. there is no ballence here what are the downsides to this what can it be blocked by?
    you need to put the duration and weekness here
    Strengths:
    -Deals damage to anyone inside the dome.
    -Can't be evaded while inside the dome, can only be blocked.
    you need one more strength
    Weaknesses:
    -Because of it's area, to limit the attack a bit, it does 50% damage instead of normal damage.
    -Causes painful second degree burns all around the enemy's body.
    -Also damages allies.
    -Cooldown is 4 posts.to generic

    Perfect Monarchy:
    B-Rank Spell Name: Perfect Monarchy
    Rank: B
    Type: Support
    Description: By saying the words; "This world will be destroyed by me, my power and my taste for blood." Sogeki instantly gains strength and speed by transforming into some sort of monster. Sogeki gains the ability to fly and gains a dark energy saber in his hand which can cut through any non-magical object. This is done by breaking time and space and going towards a dimension where the world was actually destroyed by himself, where Sogeki (in another body) destroyed everything and left nobody in the world.
    Sogeki:
    Passive:

    Name: Saber
    Description: Sogeki gains a dark energy blade. The energy blade ccan be used to cut through any solid non-magical material. The blade can grow up to 2 meters long in an attack. It can also cut through launched C rank or lower spells.
    Active:

    Name: Black Thunder
    Description: Sogeki lifts his blade pointing up. The blade then launches thousands of black lightning and thunder attacks towards anyone near dealing B rank damage to anyone  inside the dome. 3 post cooldown.
    Strengths:
    -Duration is 7 posts
    -Can be canceled at any time.
    -Black thunder won't damage allies.
    Weaknesses:
    -The spell has a 8 post cooldown.
    -Black thunder can be evaded by higher tier enemies.
    -Sogeki can't use his body mimic magic while in this form.
    -Saber won't cut through B rank or higher spells.
    -Sogeki's stats don't really change.

    Meteor:
    A-Rank Spell Name: Meteor
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Description: Maybe the strangest of all the apocalypses Sogeki can summon. By saying the words; "This world will be destroyed by himself, his gravity and his own hands." Sogeki makes the forces of nature start as an earthquake. This first part will bring down almost any structure, but it will be helped by a strange gravity force at the top of the dome. The gravity will take all the broken pieces from the ground and gather them forming some sort of meteor. The meteor's diameter is half of the dome's diameter. After the meteor is created, the ground will have almost anything on it, but a strong gravity force will pull down the meteor, quickly dropping it and destroying everything left. This is done by breaking time and space and going towards a dimension where the world was actually destroyed by the forces of nature, where that strange event destroyed everything and left nobody in the world.
    Strengths:
    -Deals damage to anyone inside the dome.
    -Can't be evaded while inside the dome, can only be blocked.
    -Incredible destruction power.
    Weaknesses:
    -Also damages allies.
    -High cooldown: 8 posts.
    -Can also destroy ally buildings and such.
    -Important buildings, such as guilds, can only be destroyed with permission.

    Skyfall:
    S-Rank Spell Name: Skyfall
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Description: By saying the words; "This world will be destroyed by dropping the sky on those below it." Sogeki extends his arms to cause about 100 stars to fall from the dome's top and land on everyone inside. The stars are big enough and powerful enough to destroy everything inside the dome. The destructive power is enough to blow everything inside the dome. This is done by breaking time and space and going towards a dimension where the world was actually destroyed by the stars, where that strange event destroyed everything and left nobody in the world.
    Strengths:
    -Deals damage to anyone inside the dome.
    -Can't be evaded while inside the dome, can only be blocked.
    -Incredible destruction power.
    Weaknesses:
    -Also damages allies.
    -High cooldown: 8 posts.
    -Can also destroy ally buildings and such.
    -Important buildings, such as guilds, can only be destroyed with permission.

    please balence your spells also duration and cooldown is not a strength or weakness!!


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    Re: Slowness Magic

    Post by Sogeki on 30th May 2015, 5:43 pm

    Changed my magic to a simpler magic


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    Re: Slowness Magic

    Post by Thorn on 31st May 2015, 10:20 am

    @Sogeki wrote:Username: Sogeki
    Secondary Magic Name: Slowness Magic
    Evidence of Accomplishment:
    Description: It is a type of Magic which allows the user to slow down their opponent by employing a time-affecting Magic which affects the opponents' perception of time. With their opponents' delayed reactions, the user can move in and attack freely before the opponent has a chance to counter it. However, the range of the user's Magic is limited, which means that only people and objects within a certain range of the user are affected by this Magic. Anything outside the range is unaffected by the Magic and the people inside of the range, view things outside of it as moving extremely fast. In addition, anything that originated from outside of the user's area-of effect will retain its normal speed even if it enters their area-of-effect afterwards.
    Strengths:
    -Stronger physical abilities than normal.
    -Enhanced Strength.
    -The enemies won't be able to follow the user, not even with their eyes.
    Weaknesses:
    -Outside objects will stay with their original speed.
    -No defensive spells.
    -Limited area of effect in the slowness zone.
    -The user doesn't gain more speed, this means his basic attacks won't deal more damage than normal. But enemy's won't deal less damage either.
    -Slows Allies as well.
    Abilities:

    Slowness:
    In a area of 50 meters radius per rank. But note, this isn't actually a de-buff nor a buff, this only makes the user "move faster" when he is only making the enemy mentally slower. This affects any object inside the area including spells, meaning it looks like actually he was highly buffed, but this will only have a speed difference between Sogeki and mages of equal rank than him. If the enemy is at least one rank higher than Sogeki, they will easily be able to see him and intercept him, but won't be as fast. (In other words this only affects stats slightly, this will just make a real change in the way of rping)

    this seems more like a spell to me


    Z-Dash:
    D-Rank Spell Name: Z-Dash
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Description: The user technically dashes three times in strait lines with a max of 10 meters each. The user will punch or attack once each time he ends a dash (if he gets to someone), but this happens in a blink of an eye, so they won't even see what hit them. ok well as a D rank spell anyone higher will see you so at C rank mage has half a chance to see and block anyone higher it just looks like you are running! also the damage would be divided equally between each person hit
    duration and cooldown goes here please
    Strengths:
    -The user can attack up to 3 targets.
    -It's incredibly fast, if someone isn't in his best conditions, he will have some trouble evading this.
    you need one more weakness
    Weaknesses:
    -If the enemy is higher tier than this spell, they are actually able to dodge it.
    -Each dash has a max of 10 meters, if sogeki doesn't reach anyone in that time, it won't damage.
    -Cooldown: 3 posts this is not a weakness think of something else and add a weakness

    Y-Meteor Kick:
    C-Rank Spell Name: Y-Meteor Kick
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Description: Sogeki dashes at a high speed towards the enemy. He then jumps and ends above the enemy's head and lands a kick above them throwing them down. The kick moves downwards. This is fast enough to make it look like a teleport.
    duration and cooldown here please
    Strengths:
    -Low cooldown.this is not a strength think of something else
    -Difficult to evade.
    -Looks like a teleportation.
    Weaknesses:
    -The enemy has to be at least 10 meters near an enemy.
    -Can only attack one enemy.
    -Even if it looks like a teleportation, it's not, it's actually a straight line, which means the user can't evade a incoming spell from his target since he would crash against it.
    -Cooldown is 2 posts. this is not a weakness think of something else also two posts is to low

    X-Hundred hit Blow:
    B-Rank Spell Name: X-Hundred hit Blow
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Description: Sogeki targets only one enemy. He then lands a quick punch at him moving him about 5 meters up. After that, only if he landed the first punch, he will be able to complete the attack by landing 98 punches and kicks at the enemy all around his body. After all those attacks, he will land a final kick or punch towards his upper part of the head or stomach to throw him down to the ground. this would only dear 1 B ranks worth of damage in total
    duration and weaknesses need to be put here please
    Something like this:
    Strengths:
    -This attack deals 50%half this please more damage if the enemy was already in the air because he gains more height for the final blow.
    -Very difficult to evade.
    -Leaves the enemy highly bruised and may even break bones.
    Weaknesses:
    -No matter what, can only attack one enemy.
    -Has to land the first blow, if he doesn't, this spell will anyway start it's cooldown.
    -The spell can vary, this means the hundred hits can be different and from different places. But there has to be at least a 5 meter height in the area.
    -Cooldown: 4 poststhis looks like a cooldown here so think of something else

    W-Thousand hit Blow:
    B-Rank Spell Name: W-Thousand hit Blow
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Description: Sogeki targets only one enemy. He then lands a quick punch at him moving him about 5 meters up. After that, only if he landed the first punch, he will be able to complete the attack by landing 998 punches and kicks at the enemy all around his body. After all those attacks, he will land a final kick or punch towards his upper part of the head or stomach to throw him down to the ground. these would have the A rank divided between the hits
    please put the duration and cooldown here
    Something like this:
    Strengths:
    -This attack deals 50% half this pleasemore damage if the enemy was already in the air because he gains more height for the final blow.
    -Very difficult to evade.
    -Leaves the enemy highly bruised and may even break bones.
    Weaknesses:
    -No matter what, can only attack one enemy.
    -Has to land the first blow, if he doesn't, this spell will anyway start it's cooldown.
    -The spell can vary, this means the thousand hits can be different and from different places. But there has to be at least a 5 meter height in the area.
    -Cooldown: 6 posts[color=red]t=with it here it looks like a weakness move it and put a nother weakness[color]

    S-One Man Army:
    S-Rank Spell Name: S-One Man Army
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Description: By moving fast enough, Sogeki is even able to clone himself. At this point, Sogeki attacks about 100 times anyone inside a 25 meter radius area by attacking them at a high speed. It's like all of them receiving a Hundred hit Blow but everyone receives S rank damage.ok the people that get it the S rank damage would be divided between the amount of people hit
    please put duration and cooldown
    Strengths:
    -Anyone inside the area receives full damage.
    -It has no limit of targets, but they have to be in the area.
    -This happens faster than the hundred hit blow spell, it's completely instant.
    Weaknesses:
    -The area is around Sogeki.
    -High cooldown: 10 posts.cooldown is not a weakness please think of something else
    -The spell can vary, this means the thousand hits can be different and from different places. But there has to be at least a 5 meter height in the area.
    -Can still be evaded if the enemies are fast enough, even if it's complicated.


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